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1、专题六书面表达拉开得分差距的题型，获得高分的关键f全国卷考情导向试卷类型体裁题材与话题命题形式词数试题特点全国卷I应用文告知下次上课的计划;提纲式100左右1 .体簌以书信类为主。没有给出开头或 结尾.要求考生注意书信的格式,2 .话题贴近考生的生活c话题涉及中学全国卷U应用文邀请外教参加艺术展半开放式100左右生的学习、生活以及他们所熟悉和关 注的话题，具有“生活化”的气息，如 全国卷I选材与学习活动有关、全国 卷01选材与业余爱好有关。全国卷m应用文邀请朋友加入乒乓球队半开放式100左右3.写作形式主要是提纲类和半开放类。 无论哪种形式，考生都不能照搬提纲 翻译,也不能漫无边际地增加细节，

2、研考题技法分述I 七大技法分述全面清障备考（对应学生用书第63页）技法综述的全国三套卷都是书信，虽然有文字提示，但开放性很大。此类作文既像作 文，又不完全是作文，因为考生不能高开情景和要求自行立意、选材，随意发挥； 它类似于翻译，但又不同于翻译，因为考生必须根据需要进行适当的发挥，因而 有较大的灵活性。1 .审体裁，避免格式错误的全国三套卷都没有给出书信的格式，然而有些考生往往会按照汉语的格式 来写英语作文，给人的第一印象就是水平差。书信的一般格式如下： Dear XXX,Yours,Li Hua2 .审时间，避免时态错误动笔之前，一定要正确判断谓语动词的时态，这是句子的核心，不可小觑。 例如

3、全国卷II “邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展”，主体时态应是一般将来时和一 般现在时。3 .审内容，避免要点缺失遗漏要点是写作大忌。一篇作文如果要点不全，即使语言正确，结构合理, 连贯通顺，也不可能得高分。书信类作文最容易遗漏的应是文章结尾处的希望对 方回复等。二、如何拟点1 .拟全要点2 .适当补充由于高考作文的提纲比较简单，为了行文连贯和满足词数要求，必须适当补 充细节。要注意的是在增加细节时一定要适当，切忌任意发挥、画蛇添足。阅卷现场(全国卷H)假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry 一起参观中国剪纸 (paper-culting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1 .展览时间、地点；.展览内

4、容。注意：1 .词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。考生作文点评与优化作文提升Mr. Henry,Im writing to imite you to see the Chinese paper-cutting exhibition. It is a Chinese folk art with a long history.The exhibition will be holded in the City Museum, locating in the north of our city. It will start from June 16th and last for mor

5、e than a week. Ifs said many paper-cut works by experts throughout China will on show, some of them are made by famous artists. Through the exhibition. we can not only enjoy the folk art works, but also learn a lot.If you are interested in the exhibition, please e-mail me. Ve can make it any day to

6、visit the exhibition.Li Hua,Your student.总体来说,此篇作文人称、时态、字 数都符合要求.现在就审题、拟点等存 :在的问题点评如下：1 .格式欠妥:书信有其固有的格式，此 笥作文无论是开头还是结尾,其格式都 不符合要求,遗漏了文章结尾处的希 :望对方回双。2 .要点不全:此篇作文在结尾处应是希 :望对方回复;3 .此筒作文还存在着几处错误,holded 和locating应用错误,on show前缺少了 动询be；ifs said后缺少了从句引导询， stwne of them应用错误：4 .作文有两处可以进行进一步提升.第 ；一段可以用which引导的

7、定语从句把 两个句子合成一个复合句;not only .but also.的句式最好用倒装句式。 尝试优化Dear Henry,Im writing to imite you to see the Chinese paper-cutting exhibition. which is a Chinese folk art with a long history.The exhibition will be held in the City Museum, located in the north of our city. It will start from June 16th and last

8、 for more than a week. Its said that many paper-cut works by experts throughout China will be on show. some of which are made by famous artists. Through the exhibition, not only can we enjoy the folk art works, but also learn a lot.If you are interested in the exhibition, please e-mail me. We can ma

9、ke it any day to visit the exhibition.Looking forward to your early reply-Yours,Li Hua随堂训练I .结合下列写作要求，完成谋篇及拟点任务假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习，你计划寒假期间在当地旅行，请写一封 e-mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。内容应包括：1 .旅行信息（如景点等）；.当地特色（如食品等）；2 .注意事项。注意：1.词数100左右;.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;2 .开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua, a Chinese student,

10、 studying in New Zealand. Im writing to Sincerely yours,Li Hua.本文为信件，属于应用文，格式已给出。1 .时态以一般现在时为主。2 .人称以第人称为主。二、拟全要点.我想询问你们新西兰旅行社与寒假相关的旅行信息。1 .我和朋友打算在新西兰当地旅行。2 .你能告诉我出发时间和旅游路线吗？3 .新西兰有很多著名的景点，我想更具体地了解一下。4 .我对当地的特色小吃感兴趣。5 .我去新西兰还有什么需要注意的吗？三、范文填充Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in

11、 New Zealand. Im writing to ask for information about your agencys New Zealands travel for the winter vacation.7. My friend and 1 plan to travel in the country. 8.Could you tell ma the departure time and traveling 】outes? As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of inte

12、rest and 9.1 want to know mo】e details about these. Besides, 10.1 am also interested in (he local food there. How much do I have to pay for the travel? At length, are there other things I should be aware of?I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours,Li Hua n.

13、书面表达(邀请信)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David作为交换生曾在你家居住。近期你校要 举办以“Foreigners Tell Chinese Stories”为主题的英语征文活动。请给David写一 封邮件向他约稿。内容包括：1 .截稿时间12月1日；.稿件词数500左右;2 .投稿邮箱 chinesestory 。注意：1.词数1()()左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear David,Yours,Li Hua 【参考范文】Dear David,It has been half a year since you left China.Hows everything goin

14、g?Recently, an activity themed Foreigners Tell Chinese Storieswill be held in our school.Any foreign student who is enthusiastic about China can take part in it.I think you are suitable for the activity, for you used to live here and learned so much about the country. You can write about your understanding of Chinese culture as well as your personal experiences in China.You are expected to write an article about 500 words in English.Id appreciate it if you could mail your arlicle to chinesestory before Dec. 1st,.Im looking forward to your participation.Yours,Li Hua