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1、高考英语写作训练五月：写作、模拟题2021年福建质检续写When my daughters reached the third and fourth grades, I occasionally allowed them to walk to and from school alone if the weather permitted. One warmfront of me.I asked the woman to come in and she quickly bent over and hugged Molly tightly. The dog hesitated for a secon

2、d, then it started wagging its tail and barking excitedly as if it had recognized someone familiar. My heart sank. It was just like my worst nightmare coming into reality that Molly did belong to that woman. She offered to give me some cash as a reward, but I refused. Actually I would very much like

3、 to pay a good sum of money to keep Molly instead. The woman appreciated once again and took Molly away, leaving me alone in this empty and unfamiliar house.作者不想还一必须还一有R闷 把人不能解决的问题交给狗去解决：是否合理?女人把狗送给我们了：是否合理？A girl was sitting under the tree.人物状态 who was reading a book.人物动作A girl who was reading a bo

4、ok was sitting under the tree.Sitting under the tree was a girl who was reading a book.Our library is in front of the playground.Students search for some useful information in the library.In front of the playground is our library, where students search for some useful information.spring day, a littl

5、e dog followed them home after school. It had short legs and long lovely ears, with a fawn-colored coat. It was the cutest dog I had ever seen and the girls begged me to keep it.作者的女儿捡到了一条可爱的小狗The dog was barely twelve weeks old. It had no collar or identifying marks of any sort. I didnt knowwhat to

6、 do. I thought about running an advertisement in the lost-and-found but I really didn5t want to. It would break the kids hearts if someone should show up. Besides, its owners should have watched it more closely.作者心理活动：不想把狗还回去By the end of the week the dog was part of our family. It was very intellig

7、ent and good with the girls.The following week something told me to check the lost-and-found section in the local paper. One particular advertisement jumped out at me and my heart pounded with fear at what I read. Someone was begging for the return of a lost dog in the neighborhood of our grade scho

8、ol. They sounded desperate. My hand shook. I couldnt bring myself to pick up the phone.作者心理活动：内心不安，看到找狗，更加不安Instead, I pretended I hadnt seen the advertisement. I quickly put the paper away in the drawer and continued with my dusting. I never said a word about it to the kids or my husband.作者心理活动：掩饰B

9、y now we had named the dog. It looked like a Molly, so that was what we called it. It followed the girls everywhere they went. When they went outside, it was one step behind them. When they did housework, it was there to lend a hand.狗和家人关系融洽（反衬）描述心理活动的写法1直接使用情感词汇I am happy.2使用表述情感的短语或句型My face lit u

10、p like a Christmas tree. Joy danced all the way to my heart.3如实写出内心的真实想法4通过周围环境或人物动作进行反衬There was only one problem with this otherwise perfect picture: my conscience （良心）was bothering me. I knew in my heart I had to call that number and see if our Molly was the dog they were desperately seeking. It

11、was the most difficult thing Ive ever done. 作者心理活动：良心煎熬、抉择With mixed feelings, I finally picked up the phone. How I wish there would be no one to answer, or someone would just say the dog had already been found. But none of these happened. On the other end was a voice of a middle-aged woman, who lis

12、tened to my description of the dog and immediately offered to come over. During the conversation, Molly sat quietly at my side, rubbing my waist with its tiny warm body. It was only less than 30 minutes before the doorbell rang, but to me it seemed to last a century. I opened the door and my worry was standing right in