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1、授课主题作文写作教学目的保证英语句子书写美观、没有明显病句重、难点书写规范；句型把控英文写作指导一、做题步骤一审”即审题。主要是看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么， 准备写作的人称和时态：如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现 在时态。故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般 用现在时，举例时可用过去时。“二写唧列纲。主要是列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语 水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替, 不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的

2、情景、场合，语言要地道。“三连”即连句成文。根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节 发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意 句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。“四改”即修改润色全文。主要是看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点; 语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、 冠词等。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇一短语一句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡

3、型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面 最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。二、常用连接词：连词：1）表层次：first, firstly, second, secondly, third,thirdly, to begin with, to start with, what is more, last, also, and then ,next, besides, at first; at last; in the end.whcn/whilc/as soon as/not. until.in addition , finally ,on one hand .on the

4、 other hand, each/one coin has two sides,2）表转折；but, however, though, although, after all, in spite of, fortunately, unfortunately, at the same time.3）表递近：in addition, besides, moreover, whats more4）因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, due to ,for, since, owing to, as a result（of）, hence, thus5）例证

5、for example, for instance, such as6）表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmfill to sb.; do harm to sb.; .have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy.; be fbnd of.; be interested in.; show great interest in.; lose oneself in

6、.; put ones heart into.;7）总结 As I see, As for me , As we all know, in general, generally speaking, I think., in fact, in a word, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up. As far as I know, In my opinion三、常见的插入语有形容词（词组）、副词、不定式、现在分词短语、介词短语、从句以及固定短语。1 .常见的形容词（词组）、副词作插入语的有:sure enough（果然

7、）;strange; worse slill（更糟糕的是）; most imporlant（最重要的是）；honestly; obviously; however; otherwise; luckily; unfortunately; besides; first; second; especially; surprisingly 等。例如： Worse still, the lion could even carry off the baby in its mouth.We must do the experiment carefully; otherwise youll get anoth

8、er result.Honestly, I dont need it at the moment. He likes the country, especially in spring.常见的不定式有:to tell the truth; to be short（简单地）;to begin with（首先）;to besure（自然、当然、果然）;to be honest/frank; to make things worse; to make a long story short; to speak of（值得一提的是）,to be fair ,to sum up（概括地说）等。这些插入语表

9、示说话人的态度，在 句子中作独立成份。2 .常见的介词短语有:in fact; in addition; in a word; on the other hand; in other words; in ones opinion; in that case; by the way; of course; as a rule（通常）;to ones surprise; for example; on the contrary（相反）;in a way（在某点上、在某种程度上）;for one thing; for another （thing）等。例如:In a way, I think we

10、both won in the game四、文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。1 宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.2 状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful o3、动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyesoit 做形式主语：Its bad fbr

11、 our eyes to read books in the sun。4、常用状语从句句型：1）时间 when, not.until, as soon as2）目的 so that.； to do（为了）3）结果so.that., tooto（太以至于）4）条件 if, unless（除非）,as long as（只要）5）让步 though, although, even though, even if no matter what/when/where/who/which/how6）比较 asas，not so.as., than附：掌握常用句型：下面只列举比较常用的。Lin order

12、to 为了实现他的梦想，他学习非常努力。He worked very hard in order tor realize his dream.2.so.that 他们太累了，除了伸懒腰什么都做不了。They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.3.would rather.than他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。He would rather listen to others than talk himself.4,not only.but also在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程，而且还获得了博士学位。In just

13、 three years, she had not only finished all the lessons , but also received her doctors degree.5 .either.or如果考试过关，你可以买一个MP3或去云南玩一趟。You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam.6 .neither.nor他是一个无聊的人，既不爱娱乐，也不爱读书。He is a boring man. He likes neither entertainment nor re

14、ading.7 .as well as他善良又乐于助人。He was kind as well as helpful.8.as well这个小孩活泼又可爱。The child is active and funny as well.9.One.the other你看见桌子上有两只笔吗？ 一支是红色的，另一支是黑色的。Have you seen two pens on the desk? One is red, the other is black.lO.Some.others 每个人都很忙，有些在读书，有些在写作。Everyone is busy in classroom. Some are

15、reading, others are writing.11.not.until直到他告诉我发生的事，我才了解真相。1 didnt know the truth until she told me what happened.12 .find it adj. to do.我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记。I find it necessary to take notes while listening.五、认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、 单词拼写是否准确等。检查后，将草稿誉写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：1 .W

16、e live more and more comfortableo改正：comfortably（副词修饰动词）2 .we can get many informations by reading newspaperso改正：much information（不可数名词由much修饰）3 .There has many programs in TV。改正：There are many programs on TV。（There be句型和介词短语）4.1 think ride a bike can keep our healtho改正：I think riding a bike can keep

17、 us healthyo （动名词作主语）建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章，特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达 方法，适当运用于自己的文章中。写作技巧专题复习一.句型变化扩张扩张原则1：表达观点要“自我”In my opinion, vc should pay much more attention on the weak subjects!扩张原则2：两句之间要过渡I left my pen at home. What was worse, the drug store was closed that day.变形原则3：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型！普通级句型 The environm

18、ent is bad.比较级句型 The environment is getting much worse than before.The environment is getting worse and worse最高级句型 I have never seen the worse environment.变形原则5：表达作用多用it句式.is a .way to.阅读能帮助我放松自己。Reading is a good way to relax myself.看电影能帮助我们学习英语。Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English.变

19、形原则6：增强情感转感叹阅读对我们很有益.How beneficial it is for us to read!作运动对学生很重要.How important it is for students to do sports.变形原则7：事情到感情句型It makes sb. feel . that.I was very happy that I got an A in English last term.It makes me feel happy that I got an A in English last term.变形原则8：形容词句型升级：it is one of the most

20、It was an unusual experience in my life.It was one of the most unusual experience in my life.变形原则12：活用there be结合定从：Many reasons made me like reading.There are many reasons why I enjoy reading列举式结构:first of all, secondly, besides, whats more, last but not least, For one thing, For another,二.词汇变化变化原则1

21、 ： make更有feelAfter doing sports, I feel relaxed.It makes me feel relaxed to do sports.I made a progress in English. I feel proud.It makes me feel proud to make a progress in English.变化原则2：连词不再用and增补 not only.but also., as well as.进 B介 whats morc/worsc , furthermore转折 while, however变化原则 3：喜欢不再 like一用

22、 be fond of, enjoy, be crazy aboutI am fond of reading books.变化原则4：凡是提出措施咱尽量不用should!用“suppose、had better，“have no choice but , its our duty to ”三、如何开篇：1、主旨设问更给力I think its very important fbr us to do sports. Why? Because its good for our health and study.I think its very important fbr us to protect

23、 environment. Why? Because its good fbr living.1 think its very important fbr us to learn English. Why? Because its the most-widely used language in the world.2、头文字D-从D开始，从我们到我Different people have different, but/and I have/prefer3、议论文结构开头方式： In my opinion, we, students, are supposed to take more af

24、ter-class activities!议点阐述：There are many reasons why I support it!（列举式）总结陈述：Above all, it is so obvious that we .（强调主题!）开头方式：In my opinion, we, students, are supposed to take more after-class activities!议点阐述：There are many reasons why I support it!（列举式）总结陈述：Above all, it is so obvious that we （强调主题！

25、）4、英语书信的常见写作模板开头部分：How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity. Tm glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.Im pleased to hear that youre coming to China for a visit.Im writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America四、如何结尾1 .各种号召一事不宜迟Dont put it off

26、.2 .各种越-多多益善the+比较级+主谓，lhe+比较级+主谓 越就越The better we take care of the environment, the more beautiful the world will be.3 .名言警句学习类 Practice makes perfect.运动类 Rome was not built in a day.环保类 Nothing is impossible to a willing mind .爱好类 Interest is the best teacher.四，省受松湖My summer holiday plans提示词： summer, grandparentsrelax oneself; housework; visit old friends and relatives五,森堂总辖自、家定作业优秀范文欣赏假设你将代表学校参加市这些事英语演讲比赛，题目是How to Have a Meaningful School Life,请你就学习，体育活动，兴趣爱好方面展开演讲，鼓励大家充实愉快的度过初中生活。 要求：80词左右