2023年高考英语热点话题写作 05 意见和建议（含范文）.docx

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1、2023年高考英语热点话题写作-意见和建议11. （2022.天津市双菱中学高三阶段练习）假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的韩国笔友Moon-hee在给 你邮件中提到她最近在准备IELTS考试（国际语言考试），感觉压力很大，很担心考不好，希望得到你 的帮助。请你给她回信，内容包括：1 .对Moon-hee进行安慰并给予鼓励；.分析心理压力的不良后果；2 .给出合理建议并给出解释（如做瑜伽，听轻音乐等）。注意：（1）词数不少于100;可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Moon-hee,Yours,Li Jin22.你校的微信公众号最近在征求改进意见,请你给微信公众号负责人写一封英文信，提出你的

2、建议，信的内容包括：L增加校园生活图片；2 .及时更新新闻；3.增加读书沙龙（Reading Salon）栏目。注意：1 .词数80左右，信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,Im writing to offer my suggestions on the improvement of our schooPs WeChat public account.Sincerely yours,Li Hua33.（2022江西省乐平中学高三开学考试）假定你校校报的英语版面正在征集同学们的意见，请你写封邮件说出你的建议和想法。内容包括：1

3、.写信目的；.提出建议；2 .希望采纳。注意：L写作词数应为100左右；.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear editor,Vm Li Hua, a student from Senior 3.Yours sincerely,Li Hua44. （2022广东汕头市达濠华侨中学高三阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter来信，说他 每次大型考试来临，都会感到十分焦虑，为此写信向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Peter 写一封建议信。内容包括：1 .表示理解；2.具体建议；3.表达祝愿。注意：L写作词数应为80左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,Your

4、s,Li Hua【5】5. （2022.云南.腾冲市文星高级中学有限责任公司高一期末）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Leslie最 近来中国某中学交换学习，她来信告诉你她不知道如何跟新同学相处，请你给她回一封信，内容包括：1 .写信的目的；.具体建议及理由；2 .表达个人期待。参考答案：1 . Im so sorry to hear that you have been under great pressure fbr preparing for the IELTS test recently, which has led to your bad mood. Excessive pressure

5、will not only affect our physical health, but also influence our performance in the exam. Its my great honour to give you some advice on how to relieve stress. First of all, you should have a correct understanding of this exam and not take it as the only opportunity. Even if you fail, you can take t

6、he exam again. Secondly, when you feel stressed, you can relieve the pressure by doing sports or reading. Finally, you can communicate with your parents and friends, which can help you eliminate the pressure in time. I sincerely hope that you can get rid of the current predicament. Looking forward t

7、o hearing from you.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给韩国笔友写一封信，对因准备考试而压力大的笔友 表示安慰和鼓励。【详解】1.词汇积累诚挚地：sincerelygenuinely建议：advice一suggestion影响：affectinfluence压力：stress一pressure.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Its my great honour to give you some advice on how to relieve stress.拓展句： Ifs my great honour to give you some advice on how w

8、e can relieve stress.【点睛】【高分句型 1 Im so sorry to hear that you have been under great pressure fbr preparing fbr the IELTS test recently, which has led to your bad mood.（使用 了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型 2 Excessive pressure will not only affect our physical health, but also influence our performance in th

9、e exam.（使用 了 not only.but also连接句子）Dear Sir/Madam,Im writing to offer my suggestions on the improvement of our schools WeChat public account. As our schooPs WeChat public account is a window open to the outside world, I think it is advisable that more photos about our campus life be offered to make

10、it more appealing and a tractive. Besides, I hope the WeChat public account can be updated more often to keep the public informed of whats going on in our school. Finally, a new Reading Salon will be welcomed which can provide a platform where people can read educational information and communicate

11、with each other.1 would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校的微信公众号最近在征求改进意见，请你给微信公众号负 责人写一封英文信，提出你的建议。【详解】1 .词汇积累建议：suggestion一advice提供：provide/o他r一supply明智的：advisablewise 此外:besides一in addition2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Im writing to offe

12、r my suggestions on the improvement of our schooPs WeChat public account. 拓展句：Im writing to offer my suggestions which is about the improvement of our schoofs WeChat public account.【点睛】高分句型 1 As our schoofs WeChat public account is a window open to the outside world, I think it is advisable that mor

13、e photos about our campus life be offered to make it more appealing and a tractive. （运用了 as引导原因状语从句）高分句型 2 Besides, I hope the WeChat public account can be updated more often to keep the public informed of whafs going on in our school.（运用 了 what 弓| 导宾语从句）3 . One possible version:Dear editor,Im Li Hu

14、a, a student from Senior 3. Im writing to share my suggestions on our English column with you.Actually, while I think our columns are very good, from which we can learn a lot, I still have some advice. For example, the names of some columns can be changed to help attract readers9 attention. Whats mo

15、re, it cant be better if a column about some idioms can be included, which will add to our knowledge and let us know more about English culture. In this way, we can avoid some misunderstanding when reading or communicating with others. Last but not least, your newspaper should pay attention to some

16、spelling mistakes, which in fact is very easy to avoid as long as you are careful enough.ril be grateful if you can consider my advice and hope it will be helpful.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校校报的英语版面编辑写封信，说出建议和想法。内容包括：L写信目的；2.提出建议；3.希望采纳。【详解】1 .词汇积累建议：suggestion一advice事实上：actually一a

17、s a matter of fact 感激的：gratefulthankful 另夕卜： whats more一in addition2 .句式拓展 同义句转化 原句：In this way, we can avoid some misunderstanding when reading or communicating with others. 拓展句： Only in this way,can we avoid some misunderstanding when reading or communicating with others.【点睛】【高分句型 11 Actually, whi

18、le I think our columns are very good, from which we can learn a lot, I still have some advice.（运用了 while引导的让步状语从句和“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2 Whats more, it cant be better if a column about some idioms can be included, which will add to our knowledge and let us know more about English culture.（运用 了

19、 which 引导的非限制性定语从 句）4 . Dear Peter,Many of us feel somehow nervous whenever we are taking an important exam. Nervousness not only does harm to students5 health but also disturbs our studies. So its necessary fbr us students to learn to relax, rd like to share my advice with you.I think its very impo

20、rtant to have a right attitude towards exams. Exams are only a means of checking what we have learned. Therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results of the exams. Before an exam, making a scientific study plan and keeping a peaceful mind can help to reduce the pressure from the exa

21、m. We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music. Besides, enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well.Hopefully, my advice will be of some use for you.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向美国朋友Peter写一封建议信，帮助他缓解考试前的 o【详解】1.词汇积累焦虑 的：nervous/anxious必要的，必然的：necessary/essential/in

22、evitable平静的：peaceful/placid起作用：work/play a role2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music.拓展句： We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music, through which we can get much energy to give us confidence.【点睛】高分句型 lSo its necessary for us st

23、udents to learn to relax.（运用 了 it 作形式主语）高分句型 2Before an exam , making a scientific study plan and keeping a peaceful mind can help to reduce the pressure from the exam.（运用 了 动名词作主语）5. Dear Leslie,Im glad to know that you have come to study in China. As for the problem of how to get along with new cl

24、assmates, here is my advice.First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively. I think the cultural difference is a good topic. Second, you should care about your classmates and offer help to those in need. After all, being friendly is always a good way to make friends. Finally, you

25、 should take an active part in different kinds of class activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.Wish you a good time in your new school.Yours,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Leslie写一封信，针对如何跟新同学相处 的问题给她一些建议。【详解】1 .词汇积

26、累高兴的：gladpleased与某人和睦相处：get along with sb.get on well with sb.参力口 ： take part inparticipate in 有帮助的：helpftiluseful2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively.拓展句：First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively, which can help you understand each other better.【点睛】【高分句型 1 Finally, you should take an active part in different kinds of class activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates.（运用了 so that 引导的目的状语从句）【高分句型2 I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.（运用了 that引导的宾语从句作hope的宾 语，省略了 that）