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1、人物介绍人物介绍晨晨 读读 背背 诵诵相关短语相关短语 1.出生于贫穷家庭出生于贫穷家庭2.中国国籍中国国籍3.上学上学4.在在岁时岁时5.在他童年时在他童年时6.幽默感幽默感7.总是乐于总是乐于be born in a poor family(of)Chinese nationalityattend schoolat the age ofduring/in his childhoodsense of humourbe always ready to7.谦虚诚实谦虚诚实8.被认为是被认为是9.在在方面有天赋方面有天赋10.在在上下苦功夫上下苦功夫11.致力于致力于12.从从毕业毕业modest

2、 and honestbe regarded ashave a gift forwork hard atdevote ones life tograduate from13.积极参加积极参加14.乐观开朗乐观开朗15.被被录取录取;考入考入16.出国深造出国深造17.因因而受到尊敬而受到尊敬18.因因著名著名19.梦想成为作家梦想成为作家take an active part inopen-minded and optimistic be admitted togo abroad for further studies be honored for be famous/well-known f

3、or dream of being a writer20.对对做出贡献做出贡献21.对对有浓厚兴趣有浓厚兴趣22.对对产生兴趣产生兴趣23.在某人三十多岁时在某人三十多岁时24.通过网络学习通过网络学习25.设法做成某事设法做成某事 make contributions to have a strong interest in develop an interest in in ones thirties by network/online learning manage to do sth.succeed in doing26.安排学习时间安排学习时间27.创造一项世界记录创造一项世界记录2

4、8.获得第一个学位获得第一个学位29.获得博士学位获得博士学位30.受到老师表扬受到老师表扬31.获得奖学金获得奖学金32.因因而授予诺贝尔奖而授予诺贝尔奖 arrange ones study time set a world record got ones first degree get/obtain a masters degree get/win praise from ones teacher gain a scholarship be awarded the Nobel Prize for 1.他小时候就对数学非常感兴趣。他小时候就对数学非常感兴趣。When he was a b

5、oy,he showed/developed a great interest in maths.2.查尔斯查尔斯狄更斯于狄更斯于1812年出生在一个小年出生在一个小镇镇,由于家里穷由于家里穷,只上了两年的学。只上了两年的学。Born in a small town in 1812,Charles Dickens was able to attend school for only two years owing to his poor family.Practice 3.作为一名教师作为一名教师,她善良、助人而有耐她善良、助人而有耐心心,因此我们都喜欢她。因此我们都喜欢她。As a teac

6、her,she is so kind,helpful and patient that all of us like her.4.王萍王萍,来自高三三班的一个十八岁女来自高三三班的一个十八岁女孩孩,热爱读书。热爱读书。Wang Ping,an 18-year-old girl from Class 3,Senior 3,loves reading books.5.她总是乐于帮助同学提高他们的阅读。她总是乐于帮助同学提高他们的阅读。She is always ready to help her fellow classmates improve their reading.6.她为科研献出了一切

7、她为科研献出了一切,对国家作出了巨对国家作出了巨大贡献。大贡献。She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country.7.他被认为是中国最伟大的科学家之一。他被认为是中国最伟大的科学家之一。He is considered to be one of the greatest scientists in China.(is regarded as)8.她因在化学方面的科研成就被授予了诺她因在化学方面的科研成就被授予了诺贝尔奖。贝尔奖。She was awarded the No

8、bel prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement.1.1.介绍人物的文中一般会用到一般过去时、一般现在介绍人物的文中一般会用到一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时。若描述其出生和具体的过去行为时和现在完成时。若描述其出生和具体的过去行为过去时过去时,对现在的影响成就对现在的影响成就现在完成时，世人的评现在完成时，世人的评价以及他的地位价以及他的地位-一般现在时。一般现在时。2.2.介绍人物的基础写作一般都是以人物的出生家庭时介绍人物的基础写作一般都是以人物的出生家庭时间地点开头，以人物的最大成就或世人对他的评价结间地点开头，以人物的最大成

9、就或世人对他的评价结束束3.3.动笔之前把相关信息按动笔之前把相关信息按5 5个句子合理均与的分配好。个句子合理均与的分配好。4.4.积累常用的人物外貌、性格和成就描写的语汇，熟积累常用的人物外貌、性格和成就描写的语汇，熟练一些常用的句型和高级语言结构。练一些常用的句型和高级语言结构。技技 巧巧 点点 拨拨(1)“so+adj./adv.+that”Mary is so diligent that she always comes first in her study.(2)adj.+enough to do sth.Bob was confident enough to solve all

10、the problems by himself.(3)“a person with+n.”John,a person with imagination,is able to make up many new stories.(4).使用副词或使用副词或“with+n.”的状语结构描写的状语结构描写人物行为动作。人物行为动作。David carefully positioned the cup on the edge of the shelf.=David positioned the cup on the edge of the shelf with care.(5).使用同位语、定语从句、非

11、谓语丰富人物信使用同位语、定语从句、非谓语丰富人物信息息Mr.Smiths,an experienced professor,is willing to help and therefore is thought highly of by all his students.Einstein,of American nationality,was a Jewish born in Germany.陈明，曾是一位英语演讲比赛的冠军，愿意同我陈明，曾是一位英语演讲比赛的冠军，愿意同我们分享他的学习方法们分享他的学习方法Chen Ming,who was once the champion of th

12、e English Speech Contest,is glad to share his learning methods with us.张明，正在剑桥大学进修，做兼职赚外快张明，正在剑桥大学进修，做兼职赚外快 Zhang Ming,furthering his study at Cambridge University,does a part-time job to earn extra money.还可根据信息量的多少，同时使用还可根据信息量的多少，同时使用同位语、分词同位语、分词或定语从句或定语从句，从而完成，从而完成2个、个、3个或多个信息个或多个信息(姓名，姓名，出生家庭出生家庭

13、/时间时间/地点，职业地点，职业/身份，毕业学校身份，毕业学校)Born in a poor family on April,18,1976,in Lianhua,a mountain village in the northeast of Hebei Province,Li Jing,a well-known writer,whose pen name is Jing Yan,graduated from Beijing University阿尔伯特阿尔伯特爱因斯坦：爱因斯坦：20世纪最伟大的物理学家世纪最伟大的物理学家出生地点出生地点:德国西南的乌耳姆城德国西南的乌耳姆城家庭背景：家庭背景

14、：父母犹太人父母犹太人出生日期出生日期:1879年年3月月14日日Born in a Jewish family on March,14,1879,in Uhm,a city in the southwest of Germany,Albert Einstein,who was of American nationality,is the greatest scientist in physics in the 20th century.典典 型型 例例 题题请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物姓姓 名：名：Allan Stewart国国 籍：澳大利亚籍：澳大利亚出

15、生日期：出生日期：1915年年3月月7日日世界纪录：世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大年获硕士学位时年龄最大学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：第一个学位：1936年获得年获得第二个学位：医学博士第二个学位：医学博士第三个学位：第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。年获得硕士学位。第四个学位：第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。间，受到老师表扬。(2012广东高考广东高考)你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报你接受了一项写作任务

16、，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。写一篇人物介绍。写作内容：写作内容：*硕士学位：硕士学位：masters degree;*博士：博士：doctor1.1.认真审题，弄清写作要求认真审题，弄清写作要求:本文要求介绍一位本文要求介绍一位传奇人物，共含姓名、国籍等传奇人物，共含姓名、国籍等9 9个信息点。所介个信息点。所介绍的事迹都是已经发生过的，主体时态要用一般绍的事迹都是已经发生过的，主体时态要用一般过去时，但在运用过去时，但在运用“学习永不为晚学习永不为晚”这句谚语时，这句谚语时，谚语要用一般现在时。谚语要用一般现在时。2.2.信息分组，便于五句表达信息分组，便于五句表达:我们按事情发生的我们按

17、事情发生的先后顺序，可以分成以下五组，以便各用一个英先后顺序，可以分成以下五组，以便各用一个英文句子来表达。文句子来表达。例题导写：例题导写：(1)(1)姓名、国籍、出生日期；姓名、国籍、出生日期；(2)(2)获得第一个学位，第二个学位。获得第一个学位，第二个学位。(3)(3)学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。(4)(4)第三个学位：第三个学位：8080多岁时决定学习法律，多岁时决定学习法律，20062006年获得年获得硕士学位；硕士学位；(世界纪录：世界纪录：20062006年获硕士学位时年龄最大。年获硕士学位时年龄最大。20062006年获得年获得硕士学位

18、时硕士学位时,年龄创世界纪录年龄创世界纪录,是同一件事是同一件事,因此放在一起因此放在一起,作为一个要点作为一个要点)(5)(5)第四个学位：第四个学位：20122012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。第一句：我们也可以将获得博士学位时年龄破世第一句：我们也可以将获得博士学位时年龄破世 界纪录，跟姓名、出生日期、国籍等放在第一句，界纪录，跟姓名、出生日期、国籍等放在第一句，以突出其传奇色彩以突出其传奇色彩第二句：介绍其学习态度。然后按获得学位的先后第二句：介绍其学习态度。然后按获得学位的先后顺序写。顺序写。第三句：

19、写他获得第一个学位和第二个学位。第三句：写他获得第一个学位和第二个学位。第四句：写他获得第三个学位。第四句：写他获得第三个学位。第五句：写他获得第四个学位。第五句：写他获得第四个学位。(1)澳大利亚国籍澳大利亚国籍 _ (2)出生于出生于3月月7日日_3.推敲词句，翻译五个句子推敲词句，翻译五个句子:翻译以下短语，为写作扫清障碍：翻译以下短语，为写作扫清障碍：be born on March 7 a citizen of Australia/an Australian(3)获得第一个学位获得第一个学位 _ get/obtain/receive his first degree(4)医学博士学位

20、医学博士学位 _(5)获得硕士学位获得硕士学位_(6)创造世界纪录创造世界纪录_doctors degree of Medicineobtain a masters degree set a world record(7)挑战自我挑战自我 _(8)学习永远为时不晚学习永远为时不晚 _(9)在他在他80多岁多岁_ in his eighties challenge oneselfone is never too late to learn(10)通过网络学习通过网络学习 _(11)安排学习时间安排学习时间 _(12)受到老师表扬受到老师表扬 _get/win praise from his te

21、acherby online learning/by network learningarrange his study time4.连句成篇：连句成篇：Version 1：Allan Stewart,of Australian nationality,was born on March 7,1915.He got his first degree in 1936 and then his second degree of Doctor of Medicine.He believed that one is never too old to challenge oneself.Therefor

22、e,in his eighties,he decided to study law,and in 2006 he set a world record for becoming the oldest person to get a masters degree.Because he was so good at arranging his study time,he got praise from his teacher,and in 2012 he managed to get his fourth degree by network learning.Version 2：Born on M

23、arch 7,1915,Allan Stewart,(who is)an Australian,become the oldest man to obtain a masters degree over the world in 2006.He believed that one is never too old to challenge oneself.He got his first degree in 1936 and then his doctors degree of medicine.In his eighties,he decided to study law,after whi

24、ch he obtained his third degree in 2006.In 2012,he managed to get his fourth degree by online learning and won praise from his teacher for his good time management in study.中文名中文名:管谟言管谟言 笔名笔名:莫言莫言 出生背景出生背景:山东省北部高密市一个农民家庭山东省北部高密市一个农民家庭 出生日期出生日期:1955年年2月月17日日 毕业时间及院校毕业时间及院校:1986年毕业于解放军艺术学院年毕业于解放军艺术学院B

25、orn in a farmers family on February,17,1955,in Gaomi,a city in the northeast of Shandong province,Guan Moye,whose pen name is Moyan,graduated from Peoples Liberation Army Academy of Arts in 1986.2.请使用不同的表达完成句子。请使用不同的表达完成句子。(1)他是个既聪明又友好的人。他是个既聪明又友好的人。He is _.(2)他是如此的诚信他是如此的诚信,以致所有认识他的人都称赞以致所有认识他的人都称赞

26、他。他。He is _those who know him all _him.He is _those who know him all _ him.both smart and friendly/clever as well as friendly/intelligent and nice(as well)such an honest person thatthink highly ofso honest thatpraise(3)他的谦虚他的谦虚,给我们留下了很深刻的印象。给我们留下了很深刻的印象。His _left us a deep _.We were all _.(4)每当我们向他求

27、助时每当我们向他求助时,他总是很耐心地帮他总是很耐心地帮助我们。助我们。Whenever we _,he will always help us _.Every time we _,he will always _.modesty impression deeply impressed by his modestyask him for help patientlygive us a helping hand with patienceturn to him for help Mr Li Qiang,our English teacher,has taught English for 14 y

28、ears,during which he has been awarded the title of a model teacher for many times and once won the first prize in the teachers speech contest of the city.With a sense of humor and a good command of English,he can always make every lesson lively and interesting.In fact,he is not only our good teacher

29、 but also our good friend because he is kind to us and is always ready to help us.即时练习即时练习A volunteer teacherMr Li,who shows great enthusiasm for his work and is willing to meet the challenges,will set off for Xinjiang next month and work there as a volunteer teacher for two years.He sets such a goo

30、d example to us that we all respect and love him.亮点点击：亮点点击：本文的写作难度不大，介绍一本文的写作难度不大，介绍一位老师，贴近考生生活，基本按照内容提位老师，贴近考生生活，基本按照内容提示的顺序来写。范文里有人物介绍的常用示的顺序来写。范文里有人物介绍的常用短语短语:be awarded,win the first prize,set a good example 等等；用等等；用not onlybut also 和和suchthat 表示并列与因果关系；还穿表示并列与因果关系；还穿插使用同位语、定语从句、插使用同位语、定语从句、with

31、的用法的用法,这这些都是本文的亮点所在。些都是本文的亮点所在。Mo Yan,whose real name is Guan Moye,was born into a peasant family,in Gaomi County,Shandong Province,on February 17th,1955.Since 1981,he has written many novels,including Red Sorghum,Frog,and so on.He won the 2012 Nobel Prize for Literature on October 11th for what is

32、called“hallucinatory realism”,combining folk stories,history and modern events in his works.课外作业课外作业 Mo,who was once so poor that he ate tree bark and weeds to survive,is the first Chinese-language writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature and received his Nobel diploma,a medal and the 1.1 millio

33、n dollars at a ceremony in December.Minutes after the award was announced,millions of Chinese expressed pleasure and pride for Mo Yan on social media websites.亮点点击：亮点点击：热点人物介绍，描述具体的热点人物介绍，描述具体的过去行为，则使用一般过去时。本文内过去行为，则使用一般过去时。本文内容较多，应注重信息点整合和句子的连容较多，应注重信息点整合和句子的连接。范文运用了接。范文运用了whose和和who引导的定语引导的定语从句从句,非谓语动词非谓语动词,以及以及sothat,after 引导的状语从句等，把内容有效地整合引导的状语从句等，把内容有效地整合在一起。在一起。