专题五短文改错---备战2023年高考英语考点专项突破（原卷版）.docx

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2、00101连词1111211复合句1 （定语从 句）1 （状语从 句）0001 （定语从 句）1 （定语从 句）特殊句型001 （祈使句）0000短语0212023情态动词0000100镯题一、高考英语改错题的常见错误类型I、谓语动词的时态和语态2、句子结构和句子完整性注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第II处起）不计分。My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good he

3、alth, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad dont like the soup and I dont enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if were forced eat things, we may become ill.But he insists on us eating healthy food. Und

4、erstanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.一、记叙文1、（2022云南二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：L每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不

5、计分。I was jogging in a park yesterday while I caught sight of a handbag on a bench. Obviously, someone had left it there careless. I opened the handbag to see what was inside. I found a wallet, some keys and a notebook in it. Luckily, there was a telephone number in notebook. I immediately dial the n

6、umber and a lady answered the call. On hearing （hat I said, she told me she would come back at once. Ten minute later, she arrived by taxi. Having been confirmed she was the owner, I gave （he handbag back fbr her. The owner expressed his gratitude to me repeatedly. I felt very delighting.2. （2022河南洛

7、阳模拟预测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文。文中共有1。处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：I.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第II处起）不计分。While traveling in England, my friend and I met a nice and young man calling Alain. In the days be

8、fore the Internet and social media, it was coininon to exchange address upon departing and say, “Come and visit if youre in an area/ So, two days later, we actual accepted his oft er. We knocked on his door, just thinking about wed have a cup of tea and a nice chat. And to our surprise, his lovely m

9、um cooked a delicious dinner for ourselves! Then, we invited to stay the night! Wc had fun trying to speak French with his wife, which couldnt speak English. It was an interested evening.3. （2022吉林吉林模拟预测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并

10、在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Zhang Jie, a 45-year-old volunteer, had picked up rubbish on the Great Wall since 2014. It is his eight year protecting the historic wall. For Zhang, born and was raised in a village near the Great Wall

11、, the Wall is not just a treasure left by （he ancestors, and a childhood paradise （乐园）.However, with more tourists coming, more rubbish needs collected. Sometimes, rubbish bags are piled up to one meter higher. Zhang came up with an idea and formed a group 20 volunteers. Zhangs story has inspired mi

12、llion of Wei bo users, many of who express their appreciation to him. Today, Zhang is still protecting the Great Wall in her own way.4. （2022全国模拟预测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注

13、意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Many senior high school students have childrens books that they no longer need. However, my school organized a book drive, with the purpose donating books to disadvantaged families with young children. The activity lasts fbr a week and students in my school

14、 were encouraging to collect gently used childrens books from family members, friends and neighbors. I, along with other volunteers, were responsible tor checking （he donated books and packing it. In order to perform the task well, I had learned how to packing things from my father in the advance. T

15、hough I was tiring at the end of the week, I was happy what I got involved in doing something that could make a difference to the community.5. （2022江西临川一中模拟预测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的 以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词

16、下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I would like to talk about my favorite sport, running. I only take it up a few months ago thanks to my colleagues whom are professional runners. I spend more than two hours run eveiy afternoon. There are several reasons why I am fond this sport.

17、First, it is the pretty cheap and easy sport to try. All I need is a pair of running shoes. Second, this is a sport that can bring us some new friends. Third, since I started this sport I have hardly caught any more common health issue like fever, flu, or cold. Whats more, I can show higher producti

18、vity than before and work for longer hours without feeling tiring. All in all, I recommend that everyone tries this sport.6. （2022河南洛宁县第一高级中学三模）假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同 桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加I、删除或 修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意

19、：I.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。While in my first year of high school, I live in the dormitory and could only go home at weekends. Therefore, I learned to be independently. Once, I couldn,t bear the dirtiness of my shoe after playing basketball. I decided to wash them of my own ibr the fir

20、st time. In a fact, i even hadnt seen iny mother do the job. What should I get it done? 1 borrowed a brush and some washed powder from one of my roommates, and with his help I managed to make my shoes as clean a new pair. I was about to chccr himself when I heard him say, “ Maybe you should use more

21、 water next time. Youve wasted too much. ”（2022安徽安庆一中三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：L每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第II处起）不计分。This was my first time to participate the summer

22、camp in Beijing University. In the morning, we took part in the opening ceremony. There were more than four hundred of students attending this summer camp. I feel very happy because I knew I could make more friends with sharing interest in this beautiful city. Then we began our first exam, that turn

23、ed out very challenging.Our headteacher was an exchanged student from Australia. He would be our teacher ibr twenty days. I （houghl we would be on good （erm with him since he was very friendly and humorously. And he was handsome, too. In her class, he told us what we were expected to do and each of

24、us were invited to make a self-introduction.二、说明文1. （2022陕西宝鸡二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掠。修改：在错的词卜划一横线，并在该词卜面写出修改后的词。注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：2 .只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Diana,As for the trouble you mention

25、ed it in your e-mail, I totally understand you. When i did good on my first math test, 1 told my parents about it, but they didnt praise me, which made me feeling sad. Therefore, I tried to understand them. I know they love me. They want to strict with me and help me become better.Not only can prais

26、e helps you become more confident, but it will encourage you to work harder too. I think you could sit down or talk with your parents. In the same time, always doing your best because you are the best!Hope my advices will be beneficial to you.Liu Jiawei2. （2022安徽省舒城中学模拟预测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同

27、桌写的 以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（a）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词卜面写出修改后的词。.注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Friendship mean being friendly to each other or making friends to one another. Human beings are social animals. They need each othe

28、r both physical and emotionally.However, some people twist friendship by forming small group that are harmful to others, or even to the whole community.True and last friendship is based on the more solid foundation. Real friends share with the same ideals. While marching toward his common objective,

29、 they help each other. If one makes a mistake, his friend will not hesitate point it out for him, because he knows the frank criticism will help him. How we need is this type of genuine friendship.3. （2022陕西渭南二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个

30、漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：L每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Summer was my favorite season among the four seasons in a year, which makes me free, excited but energetic. When summer vacation comes every year, I can do all that I cant do it during my school

31、 time, including going shopping with friends, swim in warm water and even hiking or camping in the deep valleys. These activities lead me enjoy full freedom. We can find us in an excited world every day, with the sun shining brightly, trees growing well and flowers coming out with both kinds of colo

32、rs. Summer gives me the strength to do the most difficulty things in my life and makes me filled to energy. I like summer best, and I wonder how your favorite season is.4. （2022陕西渭南二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用

33、斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词卜.划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：I.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。One of the big reasons why people drop an exercise program are lack of interest. If that you5 re doing isnl fun, its hardly to keep it up. When picked the right type of exercise, consider your workout personality. For the

34、 example, do you like to work out alone? If so, solo sports like running or biking could be for me. Or do you like the shared motivation that comes for being part of a team? Then school sports and club teams arc great ways to stay active with other.Do remember the great thing is that its never too l

35、ate start.5. （2022山西运城模拟预测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下 作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）画掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Why should students wear school uniforms? In my opinion, school uniforms comf

36、ortable （o wear. Here are several reasons what were once given by my classmates. Firstly, school uniforms promote safety. When children with school uniforms are walking on the roads, they can clear be seen by vehicle drivers. Wearing uniforms also save time fbr students as they dont need to waste th

37、eir valuable time decide what to wear every morning. Besides, school uniforms are a lot cheap compared with branded clothes. That saves a plenty of money for their parents. When students do not have clothes to show his creativity, they show it in other things, which increases their knowledge but con

38、fidence.三、议论文（2022吉林吉林三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Hours after a dance performance, some netizens began posting our own videos of co

39、py the shows specific move - bending backward at a 90-degree angle. The program, what aired on Jan 31 during the annual Chinese New Year gala（春晚），was inspired by one of the best-known classical Chinese paintingA Panorama of Rivers andMountains. It was painted by Wang Ximcng, young artist who lived d

40、uring the Song Dynasty. The bend was meaning to copy the shape of blue and green mountains in the painting. Netizens soon create a term for the move - “blue-green waist”. Though the pose is graceful, but it is skillfill and challenging. Experts has warned that without years of training, the move may

41、 cause severely injuries.1. （2022河南模拟预测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以卜作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：L每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Last week, our class holds a discussion about that a family should

42、own a car or not. Here are the results. Many students think its necessary fbr a family to owning a car because its convenient, fast or comfortable. With a car, family member can go to many places together at any time. A car is especially important when a family faces emergencies. On contrary, some s

43、tudents think that buying a car is unnecessary for a family. A family has to pay a lot of to keep a car in good condition. Beside, parking cars can be really annoyed. In my opinion, a family should think careful before buying a car.2. （2022江西景德镇模拟预测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中

44、最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：L每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。In college life, recreational activities can by no means ignored. Il is numerous activities, such as spoken English competitions, sports events, and clubs o

45、f different interests, which help make campus life colorfully and diversified.Face so many interesting extracurricular activities, wc college students have a trouble choosing the proper ones. As freshmen, wc arc confused by all kinds of posters designed to recruit new members. There were two opposit

46、e views about recreational activities. One says they have positive influence in a students physical and mental development, fbr they can explore a students talent, but develop a students ability in communication.Therefore, opposite voices can also be heard, claiming that recreational activities wast

47、e too many time, and therefore may keep students from focusing on his or her study.3. （2022陕西渭南二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：I.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Parents

48、 are the people whom love us most in our daily life. Therefore, its necessary to keep a good relationship with them. Here were my ideas on how to make it easier communicate with parents.First, we should respect and trust our parent. Dont be rude to them even if they have done something wrongly. They have experi