中考英语作文评分细则课件.pptx

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1、Its _to study geography at school1.确定你的观点；确定你的观点；2.围绕观点进行论述围绕观点进行论述3.要有具体事例（一至两点即要有具体事例（一至两点即可），并说明其原因可），并说明其原因 2011中考英语作文评分细则中考英语作文评分细则A节：每个信息点1分，共5分。错写、漏写均不得分，大小写忽略。B节：先看其内容表达是否切题，然后根据内容和语言确定其所属档次并按该档次的要求来衡量，确定并调整档次：各档次给分要求如下：第四档第四档 优秀（19-15分）写出全部要点（四个要点）：补全标题；围绕观点进行叙述；举出具体事例12点；说明原因；语言优美且准确无误，行文连

2、贯，表达清楚，文中使用一些高级词汇、从句、关联词语等可得满分。第三档第三档 好（14-11分）写出四个要点中的三个，语言基本准确，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第二档第二档 一般（10-5分）1.写出四个要点中的二个，语言有些错误，尚能表意，定为本档中的上线。2.只写出一个要点，语言错误较多，个别句子可读，或只写出内容要点有关的几个单词，定为本档中的下线。第一档第一档 差（4-0分）无标题，语言错误较多，个别句子可读，或只写出内容要点有关的几个单词。要点给分说明：要点给分说明：确定你的观点确定你的观点(即补全标题即补全标题)得得4 4分分围绕观点进行叙述围绕观点进行叙述 （In my idea,

3、In my idea,）几句不限，得）几句不限，得4 4分分举出具体事例无论一点还是两点均得举出具体事例无论一点还是两点均得6 6分分说明原因无论一点还是两点可得说明原因无论一点还是两点可得2 2分（只要有语言表达有分（只要有语言表达有所体现即可，无论是所体现即可，无论是“围绕观点叙述围绕观点叙述”还是还是“对具体事例对具体事例”所给出的原因均可）。所给出的原因均可）。卷面整洁，字迹工整可加卷面整洁，字迹工整可加1 1分。分。文中使用一些高级词汇、从句、关联词语等可加文中使用一些高级词汇、从句、关联词语等可加1 1分。分。：扣分说明：扣分说明：满分卷纸如书写不工整且涂抹现象严重，可扣卷面分满分

4、卷纸如书写不工整且涂抹现象严重，可扣卷面分1 1分。分。卷面词数没有达到卷面词数没有达到6060词，根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或词，根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）下线）如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的上线。题则降为下一档的上线。如出现文字错误如出现文字错误1-21-2点在所属档内不扣分，累加三处错误扣一分。点在所属档内不扣分，累加三处错误扣一分。如出现语法错误如出现语法错误

5、:短文时态用错扣除短文时态用错扣除1 1分，句型结构错误分，句型结构错误2 2处扣处扣1 1分。分。满分卷纸如书写不工整且涂抹现象严重，可扣卷面分满分卷纸如书写不工整且涂抹现象严重，可扣卷面分1 1分。分。卷面词数没有达到卷面词数没有达到6060词，根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）词，根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的上线。如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的上线

6、。如出现文字错误如出现文字错误1-21-2点在所属档内不扣分，累加三处错误扣一分。点在所属档内不扣分，累加三处错误扣一分。如出现语法错误如出现语法错误:短文时态用错扣除短文时态用错扣除1 1分，句型结构错误分，句型结构错误2 2处扣处扣1 1分。分。Its interesting to study geography at school4 Its interesting to study geography at school.Geography is one of the subjects in middle schools.In my idea,Its interesting to stu

7、dy geography at school6Its boring to study geography at school lots of people think in middle school our be happy but I dont think so in middle school my favourite subject is PE.and the geography I want to beat it.Its so boring to study geography.I can see the map.I think its ok but teacher teach me

8、 you must study geograph oh my god I really dont like it.it really boring.I think geography is bad and bad.But my teacher asked me its important very important.So I learned it now I know the geography is helpful for us but it really boring 13 Interesting I think its interesting to study geography at

9、 school.Do you know why I think its interesting to study geography at school.Now Ill tell you.Because if we learn geography well its useful and interesting.One day my teacher asked me do you know where is the Channel Tunnel.I said No.That day my teacher told me”everywhere is in the world.Since that

10、day I know its interesting to study geography at school.That night,I went home and told my mother where is the Channel Tunnel.My mother was very happy and said you are wonderful.That night I was very happy.its interesting to study geography.Because we can know which country is beautiful famous .what

11、 is the weather like in the place that we want to know.So I think it is interesting to study geography at school.16 Interesting Studying geography is interesting.Its for many reasons.Firstly as everyone know geography is a subject that we must study.So studying geography is my duty and we should be

12、interested in it.Secondly geography is helpful when I lost my way on a trip.It usually help me to find the correct route.Whats more.Its also teaches me how to plan a trip.so its very helpful.Finally it brings me news from all over the world,and I can know a lot of local manners.Such as how to say he

13、llo to Japanese what to say first in the USA.For these reasons.I prefer geography.In a word,geography teaches me a lot.And I think Its interesting to study geography at school.18 Necessary Its necessary to study geography well.As the world is developing faster and faster.Many of us would rather choo

14、se to travel abroad instead of studying at home.Let us suppose that if we know nothing about geography how can we enjoy the good time？I can still remember the terrible experience when I was in France with mom.Because we didnt know much about geography knowledge.we almost lost our ways.The last but n

15、ot least geography really plays an important role in our lives its helpful to our own development.As a result.its obvious that studying geography is necessary.So we must try our best at school.20 First of all,.In addition.Whats more,.The last but not least.In a word,.First of all,studying geography

16、makes great different to us.we can know more about our earth,so that we can lead a better life.In addition,studying geograph brings us a lot of fun,as a result its good for us all.Whats more,we can understand the climate better and we can choose a better place to live in.If we study geograph well,it

17、 will be difficult for us to get lost.That is to say we will be safer than before.The last but not least in order to be a good student,we are supposed to be good at any subject.In a word,Its important to study geography at school.2012 中考书面表达中考书面表达人生就像上面的漫画，充满喜怒哀乐，时而人生就像上面的漫画，充满喜怒哀乐，时而恐慌，时而陷入沉思，请你以恐慌

18、，时而陷入沉思，请你以 I like to be _为题，写篇短文，叙述与上面漫画表情有为题，写篇短文，叙述与上面漫画表情有关的一段故事或经历（词数关的一段故事或经历（词数80-100）。步骤）。步骤与要点如下：与要点如下：1.确定主题，并在文中说明原因；确定主题，并在文中说明原因；2.围绕主题，进行叙述；围绕主题，进行叙述；3.讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。要求：要求：1补全标题（可选择补全标题（可选择A节方框中节方框中的词汇，也可选用其它词汇的词汇，也可选用其它词汇);2 字迹工整，语言规范；字迹工整，语言规范；3 鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣鼓励写出真情实感

19、，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分；主题的适当发挥不予扣分；要点给分说明：要点给分说明：确定你的观点确定你的观点(即补全标题即补全标题)得得5 5分分围绕观点进行叙述或举出具体事例为四档围绕观点进行叙述或举出具体事例为四档作文。（即作文。（即1515分起）分起）：扣分说明：扣分说明：如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的上线。上线。累加三处以内错误扣一分。累加三处以内错误扣一分。满分

20、卷纸如书写不工整且涂抹现象严重，可扣卷面分满分卷纸如书写不工整且涂抹现象严重，可扣卷面分1 1分。分。卷面词数没有达到卷面词数没有达到6060词，根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）词，根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的上线。如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的上线。如出现文字错误如出现文字错误1-21-2点在所属档内不扣分，累加三处错误扣一分。点在所属档内不扣分，累

21、加三处错误扣一分。如出现语法错误如出现语法错误:短文时态用错扣除短文时态用错扣除1 1分，句型结构错误分，句型结构错误2 2处扣处扣1 1分。分。I like to be happy5I like to be a doctor4 I like to be happy So I like to be happy。6-8Smile or laugh by opening the mouth and showing the teeth.this is happy.I like to be happy.Because this is good and makes me relax.One day,we

22、 had a exam.but I failed,I was sad.My parents were angry to me and shouted at me,I was very sad.I hope that my parents can understand me.I told my teacher.My teacher is kind and encourages me,I was very happy.I always happy.The next time,I passed the exam.My parents was happy.They gave me many cloth

23、es.I like to be happy.15.Its common knowledge that happiness plays an important part in the world.It can make us do some things better.It can also make us confident.So I would like to be happy.One day,there was an exam.It was very important.So many students were afraid to face it.They felt very nerv

24、ous.And they were afraid to fail the exam.But I was very happy to get a chance to prove myself.And I reviewed the lessons carefully.In the end I passed the exam successfully as well as got high marks.I have learned about the importance of happiness.So lets be happy together.202010 If I enter my favo

25、urite high school,Ill _1.确定主题;2.围绕主题（学习，生活，个人成长等）进行叙述 3.要有具体事例（1-2点即可）并说明其原因。2009 Ill tell the good news to_ 1当时的心情；2 告知师长，亲人或朋友的原因；3.临行前做哪些准备 4.回国后有哪些打算 2008Ill use the Students cards to buy_ 1所购物品的名称；2 购买该物品的原因 3.想用该物品做哪些事情 给学生的话：1作文要打草稿，尽量不要勾抹 2.找好点，分段写让批卷老师一目了然，只要不少点，基本就是四档作文。教学反思：1重视1600词教会中等及中下等生抓点，和分段关注好学生作文中的细节问题，（名词单复数，单三，动名词作主语，宾语重句语序，时态，等）。给作文教学足够的时间 5 总结出能百搭的句子和短语教研员的话：不是考学生地理知识。英语作文不能与语文作文等同看待。鼓励学生写出真情实感，背的作文不 给满分。作文的包装很重要。此次作文毕业考试题里有渗透。