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1、高三英语第一学月测试 写作专讲作文是英语学习中的重点，也是难点。要想写出流畅的作作文是英语学习中的重点，也是难点。要想写出流畅的作文，必须多欣赏优秀范文，熟悉文章体裁，了解文章框架，文，必须多欣赏优秀范文，熟悉文章体裁，了解文章框架，形成写作套路，积累精美语言。只有记诵一定量的优秀范形成写作套路，积累精美语言。只有记诵一定量的优秀范文，才能保证写作的流畅输出！文，才能保证写作的流畅输出！同学们要注重错句改正及同学们要注重错句改正及优秀句子的积累，注重优秀范文的背诵和写作，大家一定优秀句子的积累，注重优秀范文的背诵和写作，大家一定要积极参与其中，不断提高自身对英语的感悟能力和使用要积极参与其中，

2、不断提高自身对英语的感悟能力和使用能力！要写出好的作文，平时必须多看范文，多分析范文。能力！要写出好的作文，平时必须多看范文，多分析范文。积累有用的词汇、词组和句型。积累有用的词汇、词组和句型。每次作文评改后发回来，每次作文评改后发回来，要及时改正所犯的错误，以后不要再犯同样的错误。好的要及时改正所犯的错误，以后不要再犯同样的错误。好的作文必须经过千锤百炼，多练习多归纳多进步！作文必须经过千锤百炼，多练习多归纳多进步！基础写作基础写作【参考范文1】Richard Avis,a British,was born on December 1st,1974.In order to understan

3、d the meaning of successful life in different cultures,Richard,from 2011,began to seek time twins around the world.With the help of the local media,he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries,of whom there are 17 males and 15 females.Their positions include government officials,athletes,dri

4、vers,teachers,artists and so on.Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his 40th birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.【参考范文2】Richard Avis,a British who was born on December 1st,1974,has started to look for time twins in the world since 2011 in order to know about di

5、fferent meanings of successful life in different culture.He uses the local media to help himself.So far,he has found 32 people,including 17 men and 15 women from 13 countries.They are government officials,athletes,drivers,teachers and artists.He plans to find 40 time twins before his fortieth birthd

6、ay and then he intends to write a book according to this experience.“读写任务读写任务”的写作过程：的写作过程：1）把握阅读材料的结构、思路、观点与意）把握阅读材料的结构、思路、观点与意图；图；2）概括阅读材料的观点（论证过程）概括阅读材料的观点（论证过程）3）在）在“写作内容写作内容”的引导下写作。的引导下写作。在写概括的时候，不能添加自己的见解，但是要用在写概括的时候，不能添加自己的见解，但是要用自己的语言概括。要做到开门见山，语言简洁自己的语言概括。要做到开门见山，语言简洁.如果给的阅读材料是一个如果给的阅读材料是一个故

7、事故事，应该用最简练的，应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么，不能拖泥带水，而语言来说明故事讲述了什么，不能拖泥带水，而且要看原文是否有讲述该故事给你的启示或其中且要看原文是否有讲述该故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理。的一个道理。如果是如果是说明性或描述性短文说明性或描述性短文,你就必须用概括的文你就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象。字来说明某种现象。如果是议论文的阅读短文如果是议论文的阅读短文,则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点。则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点。第一段开头语：1)Accordingtothepassage,weknow2)Thisarticleismainlyabo

8、ut3)Thewriterstatesthat4）Thepassagetellsusthat第二段:过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-理由开头用语：IdoagreewiththeauthorInsomeway,Iagreewith,butThisopinionsoundsrightbutishardlypractical.Itisdefinitelynotlikethat.Asamatteroffact,FrommypersonalanglealoneInmyopinion,FrommypersonalpointofviewAsfarasImconcerned最后一段:总结句开头用语：Inconc

9、lusion,Inshort,Tomakealongstoryshort,Ingeneral,Inaword,Inbrief,Onthewhole,Allinall,读写任务读写任务【参考范文1】OseolaMcCarty,anordinaryworkerwithathriftylifestyle,donatedagreatdealofmoneytoauniversity,whicharousedpublicattentionandearnedherwidespreadsocialrecognition.Inreturn,shereceivedasenseofsatisfactionandfu

10、lfillment.Virtuousandwarm-hearted,theladyconcernedhasdonatedaconsiderableamountofsavingtohelpcollegestudentsstrugglingwithfinancialdifficulties,therebymotivatingpeopleatanyothercomeroftheworldtoparticipateinthisaffectionateactivity.FromwhereIstand,notonlywilltheladysgenerositypaintaverybrilliantblue

11、printforthefutureofthosestudentsinwantofmoney,butalsoitwillrekindletheirfaithinlifebyconvincingthemthattheirlifegoaliselevatingandworthtrying.Giventhechoice,Iwouldmakedonationstothosewhostillliveunderthebuttonlineofthemodernlivingcondition.Convincingargumentasfollowscanbemadetosupportmystance.Forone

12、thing,generousandselflessdedicationmaytakeIdispensableassistancetothem,especiallyforthetimewhentheyareconfrontedwithpainandsorrow,twistsandturns.Foranother,justasanIndianoldsayinggoes,rosesinherhand,flavorinmine.Thatistosay.Greatsatisfactionwouldstepslowlyandgracefullyintothemercy-producerssoulsaswe

13、ll.Tobringadmanyangel-likesmilesaspossibletooursociety,weshouldpracticemorebeneficialperformancebyleadingathriftylife.【参考范文2】OseolaMcCartywasalaundrywomanformorethan75years.Sheearnedafewdollarseachtime.Butshedonated$150,000whichwasherlifesavingstohelpthestudentswhoneededfinancialhelp.Ithinkherbehavi

14、orisworthpraisingandveryunselfish.Everyoneshouldhelpothersinneed.Buthowmuchtodonateshouldbebasedonouractualsituation.The$150,000isveryhelpfultothestudentswhohavefinancialproblems.Theycanbuymanythingstheyneedasotherstudents.Andtheymaybemoregratefulandkinder.Therefore,itsmorelikelyforthemtohelpothersi

15、nthefuture.IfIamgoingtogivedonations,Iwillchoosestudentstoo.Theyareinthemostimportantperiodintheirlife.Theyneedtogetalongeducation.Theyhavetobuyalotofbooks,pencil-cases,pens,erasersandsoon,whichwillcertainlycostalot.Theyaregrowinguprapidly,whichneedsalotofnutrition.Iftheydonthaveenoughmoney,theycanteatenoughfoodandtakeinenoughenergy.Inaword,moneyisveryimportanttostudents.