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1、初中英语写作马鞍山二中 闫 明初中英语写作初中英语写作v一、句子的写作（简单句类型）v二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）v三、段落的写作：主题与拓展v四、文章的结构：开头、主体和结尾v五、应用文：书信、电子邮件v六、应用文：发言稿、通知v七、记叙文：写人、叙事v八、说明文：介绍人物、事物的说明文 v九、议论文v十、图表、图画作文 v十一、提示性作文 v十二、（半）开放式作文v十三、体验中考高分写作（1）v十四、体验中考高分写作（2）前前 言言v发展学生的英语语言技能，培养学生良好的英语交际能力。v听、说、读、写密切联系，相互渗透，互为基础。中考英语书面表达综述中考英语书面表达综述v1、题型目的测

2、试考生的笔头运用，即语法知识、词汇知识掌握的程度及遣词造句和用英语进行思维的能力。v2、新课标要求：能根据写作要求，收集准备素材；能独立起草短文短信等；能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；能简单描述人物或事件；能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。中考英语书面表达综述中考英语书面表达综述v3、题型特点（1）指导性/辅助性写作(guided writing)v有必要的说明,对写作的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等情景给予简要的提示（2）足够的发挥余地 v4、教学现状布置写作任务学生个人写作教师批改背诵范文 词汇贫乏、搭配不当、句型误用、语法不通、信息不全、条理紊乱、谋篇布局不合理 201

3、2年安徽省中考英语试题中的书面表达年安徽省中考英语试题中的书面表达 v英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开讨论。请根据以下你所在的小组讨论结果，以“How to get on well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。Suggestions：Learn to share Respect(尊重)others Communicate with each other My suggestion注意：1、词数 80 100 v2、可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；v3、文中请勿提及你真实的姓名和学校One possible version How to get on well wit

4、h othersv As we know,students should learn to get on well with others.But in what ways?First of all,we should respect others.Everyone has their own ways to do things,so we should understand each other.Besides,its important for us to communicate with each other and share happiness and sadness.Whats m

5、ore,we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.v In my opinion,we should treat others in an honest way.Only in this way can we get along well.中考英语书面表达综述中考英语书面表达综述v5、中考书面表达答题步骤 步骤1:认真审题。内容包括：v文字信息v表格、图标信息步骤2:巧妙构思。v利用列提纲确定写作中心、组织/筛检材料。步骤3:信息转换v以词及点：v连词成句：v连句成文：步骤4

6、:检查修改。步骤5:规范抄写。中考英语书面表达综述中考英语书面表达综述v6、案例分析 例题：你班进行了一次综合实践活动。通过活动，同学们收获很大，尤其是李华同学进步最快。请你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文。词数80个左右。过去的表现 现在的表现 经常与别人吵架 与别人相处融洽 乱扔垃圾 爱护环境 沉溺于电脑游戏 积极参加各种活动 中考英语书面表达综述中考英语书面表达综述v参考作文对比，注意划线部分。三类一般作文 一类优秀作文 We are very glad that Li Hua has made great progress.Before the activity,he often qu

7、arreled with other students,and never said sorry to others.He always threw trash in the classroom.Sometimes,he played computer games for a very long time.But now,he can make good friends with others.Also,he is very active in taking part in a lot of activities,such as playing basketball,visiting the

8、museums,go swimming.We all like him very much.We are very glad that Li Hua has made great progress.But he used to be impolite and even often quarreled with others.He threw litter about and made our classroom dirty.After class,he usually lost himself in playing computer games.After this activity,Li H

9、ua has changed a lot.He gets on well with others and is ready to help them.He also takes good care of the environment.He takes an active part in all kinds of activities,too.We are all glad of his progress.中考英语书面表达综述中考英语书面表达综述v练习题：通过讨论、分析以下例题，找出写作题材、要点、人称和时态。例题：下面六幅图描述了某日星期三早晨你所经历的一件事。请根据这些图画，用英语写一篇日

10、记。注意：1.日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使其连贯。2.词数：100 左右。一、句子的写作（简单句类型）一、句子的写作（简单句类型）v1.写作指导-五种基本句型（1）主语+谓语 vMy father smokes a lot.Some are dancing,some are singing.（2）主语+连系动词+表语vShe is an English teacher.The one in red shirt is my uncle.（3）主语+谓语+宾语vHe likes learning Chinese.We all donated our pocket money.（4

11、）主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语vMr.Wang teaches us English.I lent her my book.（5）主语+谓语+宾语+宾补vI often ask him to help me with my homework.vWe chose him our monitor.一、句子的写作（简单句类型）一、句子的写作（简单句类型）v练习题 （一）请将下列词连成句子。（1）walk,supper,shall,we,have,after,a?（2）I,him,my,considered,friend,best.（3）has,homework,he,not,done,his.（4

12、）to,work,finish,we,difficult,the,it,found.Shall we have a walk after supper?I considered him my best friend.He has not done his homework.We found it difficult to finish the work.一、句子的写作（简单句类型）一、句子的写作（简单句类型）v练习题 （二）分析句子并改错。（1）There was no people to take care of the children.（2）There are a desk and tw

13、o chairs in the room.（3）Mr.Wang went to bed until 12 last night.（4）When one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do.（5）When I get to the station the train leave.（6）Could you tell me where shall we meet tomorrow?（7）Watch TV too much is bad for our eyes.（8）Though we were very tired,but we felt ver

14、y happy.were isdidnt gohaswantsgothad leftwe shallWatching一、句子的写作（简单句类型）一、句子的写作（简单句类型）v2、优秀作文 用优美的语言描写你的学校。要求：请你用英语写一篇短文，词数80左右。短文要求达意、正确、连贯。My School At the foot of the mountain there is a river.By the river there is a small school.The school has no tall building.It has only four old houses.Though

15、old,it is funny and interesting.Before the houses there is a wooden yard.Students can play freely there after classes.Behind the houses there is a nut garden.When autumn comes,the nuts are in harvest.They are delicious.On the top of a house there stands a big iron bowl.Do you know what it is?It is u

16、sed to receive TV programs.With its help students can know the world far away.Its amazing,isnt it?This is my school.Please come and see it.一、句子的写作（简单句类型）一、句子的写作（简单句类型）v3、必备（背）词句。仿例造句。be crazy about 发狂的喜欢发狂的喜欢例句：I am really crazy about Michael Jacksons rocknroll.造句give sb.a hand /give a hand to sb.帮助

17、某人帮助某人翻译：向危难之人伸出援助之手。the 比较级比较级 the 比较级比较级 越越越越翻译：你越努力，你进步越大。make(full)use of （充分）利用（充分）利用翻译：我们应该充分利用水。Theres no point in doing sth.做某事无意义、没必要做某事无意义、没必要翻译：等待毫无意义。would rather do sth.than do sth.宁愿（可）做宁愿（可）做 不愿做不愿做翻译：我宁愿在家看电视也不愿去看电影。Give a hand to those(who are)in trouble.The harder you work,the grea

18、ter progress you will make.We should make full use of water.There is no point in waiting.I would rather stay at home than go to the cinema.一、句子的写作（简单句类型）一、句子的写作（简单句类型）v4、实战演练：佳句仿写、实战演练：佳句仿写（1）To tell you the truth,all of us were born in the year of goat.实话告诉你吧，我们都是羊年出生的。实话告诉你吧，她是我们班学习最好的。（2）Helen is

19、 the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海伦是我见过最美丽的女孩。张老师是我遇到的最仁慈的老师。（3）Reading is good for our mind.读书对我们的心智有益。做早操对我们有好处。（4）Nothing is difficult to do as long as you want to have a try.只要肯尝试，任何事情都不难！只要你需要我，我就愿意伸出援助之手。To tell you the truth,she is the top student in our class.Mr.Zhang is the mo

20、st merciful teacher that I have ever seen.Doing morning exercise is good for our health.Id like to give a hand as long as you need me.一、句子的写作（简单句类型）一、句子的写作（简单句类型）v5、家庭作业：(1)根据中、英文提示，将下列要点连成一个小段落 Tom Appearance 又高又壮 Personalities 随和；有创新精神(creative)Shortcomings(缺点)花钱太多 Your opinion(s)一、句子的写作（简单句类型）一、句

21、子的写作（简单句类型）v5、家庭作业：(2)根据中、英文提示，将下列要点连成一个小段落 根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给英语提示词语供选用。v 目前洋快餐在中国非常流行，许多中学生都很喜欢。洋快餐餐厅不仅拥有较好的环境，而且能够提供方便快捷的服务。但是请结合你自己的经历，谈谈你对洋快餐的看法。v 提示词语：vforeign fast food,popular,like,clean,service,fast and convenient（方便的）,too much 一、句子的写作（简单句类型）一、句子的写作（简单句类型）v5、家庭作业（参考答案）：Foreign f

22、ast food is so popular in China that many students like eating it.They like eating in fast food restaurants because most of them are clean and the service is fast and convenient.But fast food has too much salt,sugar and fat,and eating it too much is bad for peoples health.Although the fast food is n

23、ot very healthy to us,I like it because it is quite different from Chinese food and it tastes good.When we hold a party,we usually choose eating there.But I dont think its all right to eat foreign fast food very often.If we eat it only once a month,we neednt worry about anything.二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）二、句子

24、的写作（简单句和复合句）v（一）简单句1.写作指导-精彩的简单句v（1）连词词组、介词短语和动词固定搭配的使用：连词词组：bothand,neithernor,eitheror,as well as等介词短语：fromto，till/until,by means of,in favor of等动词固定搭配：make progress,have fun,take time,keep a promise等v（2）感叹句的使用：What+(a/an)+adj.+n.+主语(it)+谓语(is)!How+adj.(adv.)+主语(it)+谓语(is)!二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）二、句子的写作（

25、简单句和复合句）v（一）简单句1.写作指导-精彩的简单句v（3）强调句：do(does/did)+动词原形It引导的强调句：It is(was)+被强调部分+that(who)+句子其他部分v（4）倒装句：Only+状语+助动词(情态动词)+主语+谓语So(Neither/Nor)+助动词(系动词/情态动词)+主语(so表示肯定意义、neither/nor表示否定意义)二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）v（一）简单句2.练习：用以下词组填空by means of keep promise in favor ofas well as neithernor take

26、time(1)_ I _ she is a teacher.我和她都不是老师。(2)Fei Junlong _ Yang Liwei are the national heroes.费俊龙和杨利伟一样也成为了人民英雄。(3)She tried to explain _body language.她试着通过肢体语言来解释。(4)Im _his opinion.我同意他的观点。(5)English studying_.学英语很花费时间。(6)I must _my _.我得遵守诺言/我不能食言。Neither noras well asby means ofin favor oftakes much

27、 timekeep promise二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）v（二）复合句1.写作指导v（1）熟悉各种从句的结构。）熟悉各种从句的结构。复合句是中考考察的重点。熟练掌握常用复合句的构成、先行词/引导词、主句和从句的时态等。v（2）掌握句型转换技巧。）掌握句型转换技巧。提高训练自己用多种方式表达相同意思的能力。二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）v（二）复合句2.练习v将下列含宾语从句的复合句转换为简单句将下列含宾语从句的复合句转换为简单句v1)We cant decide what we should do.(用不定式替换)v2

28、)I remember that I once met her at a party.(用动词固定搭配替换)v将下列含状语从句的复合句转化为简单句将下列含状语从句的复合句转化为简单句v1)He studied hard in order that he could pass the exam.(用介词短语替换)v2）Turn off the light before you leave the classroom.(用v-ing结构替换)v用两种方法表达同样的意思用两种方法表达同样的意思v1）他们玩得很开心。(提示：have a good time;enjoy oneself)v2）我六点才到

29、家。(提示：when;notuntil)We can decide what to do.I remember meeting her at a party.He studied hard in order to pass the exam.Turn off the light before leaving the classroom.They had a good time/enjoyed themselves.It was six oclock when I got home.I didnt get home until six oclock.二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）二、句子的写作

30、（简单句和复合句）v（三）优秀作文快餐在中国很流行，但快餐对人体却没什么好处。请根据下面中文提示，以“Fast Food”为题，写一篇80词左右得英语短文。提示：（1）快餐十分流行，尤其是儿童很喜欢；（2）快餐受欢迎的原因：方便(convenient)、省时；既可在快餐店吃可以带家吃；（3）从营养角度讲快餐食品不利于健康；（4）建议：如时间来不及可吃快餐，但儿童应尽量少吃。要求：句子通顺，语言表达正确，可适当增加细节使内容连贯。Fast Food Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China,especially among chil

31、dren.There are several reasons for the fast food.First,it is very convenient and save time.Second,you can either eat it in the restaurant or take it home.Third,the service is quite good.However,eating fast food too much will do harm to our health.I think fast food is only a good choice when you are

32、in a hurry.Its good for people,especially children,to eat fast food as little as possible.二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）v（四）.必备（背）词句必备（背）词句vboth and 和和都都v例句：Both you and I are good students.你和我都是好学生。veither or 不是不是就是就是/或或v例句：v你可以在早晨或在临睡前记单词。vnot until 直到直到才才v例句：v直到中午我们才赶到目的地（destination）。（尝试用倒装句表达

33、）vmake progress 取得进步取得进步v例句：We are eager to make progress.v我们很渴望取得进步。vnot only but also 不但不但而且而且v例句：v我不但喜欢音乐，而且还喜欢体育。(尝试用倒装句表达)vtoo to 太太以至于不以至于不v例句：I was too excited to go to sleep.v我太兴奋了以至于无法入睡。You may memorize words either in the morning or before going to bed.Not until noon did we reach the dest

34、ination.Not only do I like music,but also PE.二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）v（五）实战演练：用另外一种方法表达实战演练：用另外一种方法表达1、年龄 She is 8 years old.2、外貌 She has a round face and big eyes.3、性格 She is kind and easy to get along with.4、爱好 She likes reading and music.5、体重 She weighs 32 kilos.She is at the age of 8./sh

35、e is a girl aged 8(years).She is a girl with a round face and big eyes.She is so kind and easy as to get on with.She is crazy about not only reading but also music.She is 32 kilos in weight.二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）v（六）翻译下列句子翻译下列句子1、只有努力我们才能取得最后的成功。（强调句）2、是我父亲昨天晚上在实验室做实验。（强调句）3、千万保重！（强调句）4、那时

36、我才意识到英语的重要性。（强调句）5、约翰从没迟到过，我也从来没有过。（倒装句）It is through hard work that we can succeed in the end.It was my father that/who did the experiment in the lab.Do take care!It was then that I realized the importance of English.Never has John been late,nor have I.二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）二、句子的写作（简单句和复合句）v短文短文：根据下列中文提示

37、，写一篇词数在80左右的短文.v提示：1.昨天在上学的路上，你 看见一个盲人在过马路，你给予帮助；v知道她要去第一人民医院买药，你一直把他送到医院才去上学；v你的老师了解情况后，说你做的对，你感到很高兴。三、段落的写作三、段落的写作v段落的构成：由一组共同表示一个中心思想的许多句子组合而成的。v思想内容的一致思想内容的一致和句子的前后连贯性句子的前后连贯性。三、段落的写作三、段落的写作v（一）写作指导1、概括性的主题句主题句的功能：v（1）提供紧紧围绕写作目标的方法；v（2）为读者提供理解作者想表述内容的工具。2、层次分明的事例和细节事例和细节的选择应注意：v（1）每个事例/细节都应“服务/从

38、属”于主题句的主旨；v（2）相关事例/细节必须充分且有序排列；v（3）巧妙运用关联词将事例与事例、细节与细节有机连接。3、简洁明确、与主题句呼应的总结句三、段落的写作三、段落的写作v练习一 分析对比以下两段文字，并根据要求完成任务 Sample Passage One Sample Passage Two Title:Title:I had a wonderful summer.First,I started sleeping in every day.I would then go swimming with my friends.I stayed up late watching TV a

39、 lot,and I went to camp for a week.I wished my summer would never end!I like our English teacher.He is thirty-three years old.He is very strict with us,but very kind.He likes playing basketball.His class is very interesting and lively.He works hard.I like him and my Math teacher.任务：任务：用下划线标出以上两段文字的主

40、题句。分别列出例文一和例文二中支持主题句的事例/细节。如果你是评分老师，你会给哪段文字打高分？为什么？请给每段文字加一个标题。三、段落的写作三、段落的写作v练习二 认真阅读下列主题句。(1)找出以下每句的中心词(2)给出2-3个支持事例或细节(3)以一句话做总结vThis weekend I helped my parents with chores.中心词：_支持事例/细节：_总结句：_vThere are some advantages to taking additional classes after school.中心词：_支持事例/细节：_总结句：v _三、段落的写作三、段落的写作

41、v（二）优秀作文 根据下列内容提示，写一篇80词左右日记。内容要点：v2月8日（星期六，晴天）上午8：30；v两支足球队：老年队（the Aged Team）和少年队（the Teenagers Team），最大的队员91岁，最小的队员9岁；v上半场老年队以3-2获胜，第二场老年队体力欠佳，最后少年队5-4赢得球赛。vSaturday February 8th Fine v There was a special football game today.It attracted many people.The game was between the Aged Team and the Tee

42、nagers Team.The oldest player was 91 years old while the youngest was only 9.The game started at 8:30 in the morning.The Aged Team won the first half.The score was 3 to 2.But in the second half,they felt a bit tired.The teens were still fully of energy.The audience cheered for both teams.In the end,

43、the Teenagers Team won,and the score was 5 to 4.How wonderful the game was!三、段落的写作三、段落的写作v（三）必备（背）词句1.as soon as v例句：v一看到见她我就知道出事了/有事不对了。2.as+adj.+as possible/as many(much)+可数(不可数)名词+as possiblev例句：v他问了尽可能多的问题。3.be famous forv例句：v我们学校以篮球著称。4.had better(not)do sth.v例句：v你最好不要吃太多快餐。I knew something was

44、 wrong as soon as I saw her.He asked as many questions as possible.Our school is famous for basketball.Youd better not eat too much fast food.三、段落的写作三、段落的写作v（三）必备（背）词句5.It takes sb.some time to do sth.v例句：v我花了2个月完成了这项调查。6.Its time for sth./Its time for sb.to do sth.v例句：v我们该休息休息了。7.prefer to do sth./

45、prefer doing A to doing B.v例句：I prefer to listen to some in my spare time.v空闲时间，我更愿意听听音乐。v比起游泳，我更喜欢钓鱼。8.used to do sth.v例句：v以前他每天上课都迟到。It took me two months to finish the investigation.Its time for us to have a rest.I prefer fishing to swimming.He used to come late for class every day.三、段落的写作三、段落的写作

46、v（四）实战演练根据提示，写一段介绍中国各地饮食的段落。v提示（1）我国饮食种类繁多，如粤菜、川菜等各有地方特色；v（2）广东菜口味清淡、四川菜以辣著称、上海菜比较油腻；v（3）北方人多吃面条和饺子；v（4）南方人多吃米饭和海鲜；v（5）总之，中国菜色香味俱佳。三、段落的写作三、段落的写作v（五）家庭作业 丰富多彩的课外活动可以减轻学习压力、充实校园生活；同学们还可以在活动中强身健体、在合作中增进友谊。但是一些学生认为参加课外活动会浪费时间、经历；特别是活动后容易感到疲劳，从而影响学习 请围绕九年级学生在复习期间该不该参加课外活动(after-class activity)这一话题，展开思路谈

47、谈你的感想。要求：1.请根据提供的信息材料和话题（不要逐字翻译），写出结构完整，语言丰富又没，表达合理、语法准确、符合逻辑、可读性强的短文；2.80词以上；3.不得使用真实姓名、地名、学校名；4.题目自拟。四、文章的结构（开头、主体和结尾）四、文章的结构（开头、主体和结尾）v（一）写作指导1.“开门见山”式的开头2.“条理清楚”的主体3.“点明主题”的自然结尾四、文章的结构（开头、主体和结尾）四、文章的结构（开头、主体和结尾）v练习一、根据背景提示编写出文章的开头。背景1：为了保护环境，节约能源，中国政府出台了一条禁令：从2008年6月1日起，禁止超市和商店使用超薄塑料袋。如客户有需要，需付费

48、。请针对此禁令发表你的看法。提示词汇：ban(禁令)，stopfrom doing sth.provide,free(免费),protect,cause.你的开头：_背景2：蜡烛、蛋糕一定让你想起了一个个难忘的生日。下一个生日你打算怎么过？请以My Dream Birthday为题，发挥想象，写一篇作文。你的开头：_四、文章的结构（开头、主体和结尾）四、文章的结构（开头、主体和结尾）v练习二、为以上两篇文章各编写一个的合理的结尾背景1：你的结尾：_ _ _背景2：你的结尾：_ _ _四、文章的结构（开头、主体和结尾）四、文章的结构（开头、主体和结尾）v（二）优秀作文After three ye

49、ars of staying together,you will say goodbye to your teachers soon.You must have much to say to your teachers.We want to know:What you want to say to your English teacher most.Why you want to say soWhat you want to tell her about your future planv要求：1、词数：60-80；2、不要出现真实的人名和校名v 敬爱的老师，我想对你说：Dear Mrs.Gu

50、o,I want to say Thank you most at the moment when I have to say goodbye to you.I really appreciate what you have done for me.I used to be too shy to speak English in front of the class.You found my problem and helped me out.I can still remember your smile on the day when I won the first prize in the