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1、.第第 1818 讲讲 写作改错写作改错假如你是李华,学校正在进行优秀教师的选举活动,你想选举你的英语老师 Daniel 为本学期优秀教师,请你给组委会写一封推荐信讲明你选他的理由。要求：1.词数 50 左右；2.叙事清楚,语句通顺,语意连贯；3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名；4.文章开头已给,不计入总词数。Dear Sir,Thanks for reading my letter.I want torecommend my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year.SampleSampleDear Sir,Thanks

2、 for reading my letter.I want torecommend my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year.Im very like Daniel.He look very young.Hes about thirty years old.He favouritecolor is black.Because he is always wear black T-shirt.He can plays basketball very good.He is very good at it.He is fu

3、nny,he also veystrict.He wantswe study hard.We all likeher.Yours sincerely.Li Hua题一：语法填空语法填空Im very like Daniel.He look very young.Hesabout thirty years old.He favourite color isblack.Because he is always wear black T-shirt.He can plays basketball very good.He is verygood at it.He is funny,he also v

4、ery strict.Hewants we study hard.We all like her.内容提升内容提升话题范畴：描写人目的：推荐当选 the Best Teacher of the year要点：谈理由选材：详写性格特征,教学特点结构：总分总结构,有始有终拓展词汇拓展词汇helpful,kind,caring,patient,smartbe strict with sb.in sth.encourage sb.to dohelp sb.with/doget along well with sb.treat sb.asWe can get/enjoy/improve改进之后改进之后D

5、ear Sir,.Thanks for reading my letter.I want to recommend my English teacher Daniel tobe the Best Teacher of the year.I like Daniel very much.He looks young and handsome.He is good at playing basketball.He is very kind and he treats us as friends.But he is also strict with us in study.Heoften encour

6、ages us to speak English aloud and helps us to speak English well.We can reallyenjoy ourselves and improve our listening and speaking skills in his class.All my classmates feel lucky to be his students.So I hope Daniel can be the Best Teacherof the year.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua.第第 1818 讲讲

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