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1、Argumentative Essay(议论文议论文)?WritingHow to write a A summary is a short passage giving the main points of an original article.一、进行概括一、进行概括Whats the most important thing in an argumentative essay?The view of the author.How to get the main ideas of an argumentative essay?+首段首段/尾段尾段topic sentences of ea

2、ch paragraph论点论点论据论据Steps for writing a summary(步骤步骤)ReadFindRewriteJoinRead the passage for overall content(通读全文领略大意通读全文领略大意).Reread carefully,find out the topic sentences.Write in our own words.In our final draft,insert transitional words and phrases where necessary.(用连词连接用连词连接各部分各部分)n概括文章要点，要语言要精

3、炼，概括要全面，行文连贯，表达准确。议论文则用自己的话表达论点、论据和结论。n概括时常用的开头语有：n1.Thisarticlediscusses/analyzes/stronglyemphasizessuchas(观点:什么的什么+例证)n2.Thisarticlenotonlydescribesbutalsosuggestsn3.Thisarticleshows/tellsusthatn4.Theauthorholdstheideathat,givingitanexampleofsb.who(观点+例证)Task 1:Write a summary of Passage1Lets have

4、 a try!Read Passage 1&find out the topic sentence in each paragraph It goes without saying that everyone has his own interest.For instance,some people are interested in stamp collecting,while others are fond of fishing.Some people prefer shopping.Others,on the other hand,have a liking for sports.To

5、develop your interest will help you make way in the world.If you have a strong taste for something,you will find it enjoyable to have it done.For example,if you like to become a teacher and work hard toward this purpose,you will certainly make yourself a successful one.If you cultivate your various

6、kinds of interest properly,you will probably find it easier to find a job or a profession.Sometimes,however,you have to give up your interest for one thing or another.If your interest seriously interferes(干扰干扰)your work or study,you have to think of giving it up;if you have a family and still have t

7、oo much interest in watching TV,you have to stop doing so,so that you can help with housework or spend sometime taking care of your lovely child.Para.1.Para.2.Para3.Is it OK for us to combine these topic sentences to form the summary of the passage?No.We should write in our own words.Everyone has hi

8、s own interest.you have to give up your interest for one thing or another.Task 2：Step1 Find out the topic sentences of Passage 1To develop your interest will help you make way in the world.Step2:Rewrite the sentence in your own words.(用同义词、用同义词、同源词或转换句式同源词或转换句式)Para.1.everyone has his own interest.e

9、veryone has an interest of his ownsucceed替换替换make wayPara3.you have to give up your interest for one thing or another.for some reason替换替换for one thing or another”把把主动主动语态语态you have to give up your interest改为改为被动被动语态。语态。Para2.To develop your interest will help you make way in the world.The author poi

10、nts out that everyone has an interest of his own and developing an interest properly will help you succeed.But on some occasions,your interest has to be given up for some reason.(35 words)A Possible Version:Step3:Add some conjunctional words(衔接词衔接词)二、自然过渡二、自然过渡n写完概括后，用句恰当的过渡语引出自己的观点（反对或赞成）。过渡语起承上启下的

11、作用，使文章显得自然、连贯。n常用的过渡句式有：n1.Idoagreewiththeauthorn2.Insomeway,Iagreewith,butn3.Thispointsoundsright,butn4.However,Ithinkn5.Idefinitelybelieven6.Inmyopinion,n7.Personally,Ifeelthatn8.AsfarasImconcerned,n9.Whilesomeonemightthinkitiswrong/right,Ibelievethat三、列举例证三、列举例证n提出自己的观点后就要用具体的事例来论证自己的观点。n常用的句式有：n

12、1.First,Second,Lastn2.Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,n3.Foronethingandforanothern4.Furthermore/Besides/Inaddition,n5.Somethink,whileothersmay.四、总结点题四、总结点题n总结句约30词，.进一步总结作者的观点，提出具体做法或号召，升华文章的主题。可以用套语配名言来点题，并注意文章前后呼应。n常用的句式有：n1.Inconclusion,n2.Inshort,n3.Inaword,n4.Ingeneral,n5.Allinall,n6.Tosumup,阅读下面短文

13、，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。nThegenerationgapbetweenstudentsandtheirteachersisbecomingmoresignificantwithonly3.3percentoutofasurveygroupof1,000studentsfrom30keymiddleschoolsinthecitysayingtheywouldbewillingtotelltheirteachersoftheirinnerthoughts.nIntodayseducationalenvironment,teachersarepositionedtobethe

14、authorityfigureforlearninginsteadofalsobecomingagoodfriendinthelivesofstudents.nAsonlystudentswithgoodmarksinexamsareconsideredthe“applesintheeyes”oftheteachers,moststudentsthinktheirteacherstobepartial(偏心).n“Ifeelsadtohearsuchremarks,”saidYuYi,awell-knownspecial-classteacher.nSherecalledthatinthepa

15、st,teachersandstudentswouldplaybasketballtogetherorcommentonnovelswhilesittingonthegrassduringabreak.Buttoday,studyandgoodmarksaretheonlytopicsofconversationbetweenstudentsandteachers.n“Schoolsarenotonlytheplacewhereknowledgeisimparted(传授)butalsowherestudentsaretaughthowtobeanuprightperson,”Yusaid.“

16、Thesuccessofapersonisnotmerelydeterminedbyintelligencebutalsobyemotionalstate.”nYangXiong,directoroftheJuvenileResearchInstitute,saidtheeducationalsystemwhichfocusesonexaminationsshouldbeheldtobesubstantiallyresponsible.n写作内容写作内容n1.以约以约30个词概括学生不愿告诉老师内心想法的原因；个词概括学生不愿告诉老师内心想法的原因；n2.然后以约然后以约120个词就个词就“现

17、代师生关系现代师生关系”这个主题发表你的看法，并这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：包括如下要点：n(1)你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法？为什么？你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法？为什么？n(2)你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的？如何才能建立这种关你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的？如何才能建立这种关系？系？n写作要求写作要求n(1)可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；n(2)标题自定；标题自定；n(3)文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称

18、文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称n评分标准评分标准n概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。n阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。nThegenerationgapbetweenstudentsandtheirteachersisbecomingmoresignificantwithonly3.3percentoutofasurveygroupof1,000studentsfrom30keymiddleschoolsinthecitysayingtheywouldbewillingtotelltheirteachersoftheir

19、innerthoughts.nIntodayseducationalenvironment,teachersarepositionedtobetheauthorityfigureforlearninginsteadofalsobecomingagoodfriendinthelivesofstudents.nAsonlystudentswithgoodmarksinexamsareconsideredthe“applesintheeyes”oftheteachers,moststudentsthinktheirteacherstobepartial(偏心).n“Ifeelsadtohearsuc

20、hremarks,”saidYuYi,awell-knownspecial-classteacher.Sherecalledthatinthepast,teachersandstudentswouldplaybasketballtogetherorcommentonnovelswhilesittingonthegrassduringabreak.Buttoday,studyandgoodmarksaretheonlytopicsofconversationbetweenstudentsandteachers.“Schoolsarenotonlytheplacewhereknowledgeisi

21、mparted(传授)butalsowherestudentsaretaughthowtobeanuprightperson,”Yusaid.“Thesuccessofapersonisnotmerelydeterminedbyintelligencebutalsobyemotionalstate.”nYangXiong,directoroftheJuvenileResearchInstitute,saidtheeducationalsystemwhichfocusesonexaminationsshouldbeheldtobesubstantiallyresponsible.套用写作模板进行

22、写作：1.进行概括：Studentsarebecomingunwillingtotelltheirteachersoftheirinnerthoughtsbecausetheyarenotequalinpositionandteacherslaytoomuchemphasisontheacademicperformancesofthestudents.n2.自然过渡。回答“你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法”，给出观点（愿意或不愿意），直截了当，一语概之。如“我愿意告诉老师我的内心想法”。nWhilesomestudentsmighthavedoubts,Iamwillingtosharemyin

23、nerthoughtswithmyteachers.n3.列举例证。回答“为什么”，给出一两个理由。nTheyshowloveandconcernfortheirstudentsandtheyarealsogoodlisteners.Ialwaysfinditeasytoseeksupportandadvicefromthem,fromwhichIbenefitandlearnalot.n5.回答回答“你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的”，可以是，可以是“重要的，重要的，和谐的，和谐的，朋友式的朋友式的”等等。等等。nIn this case,an ide

24、al relationship between teachers and students is very important.In my opinion,this relationship should be one filled with love,care and understanding,in which teachers and students show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely.n6.回答回答“如何才能建立这种关系如何才能建立这种关系”，即师生双方应该，即师生双方应该如何做。如何做。nTo build a

25、relationship of this kind,teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their feelings frankly.n7.总结。如可以说总结。如可以说“只有这样，我们才能只有这样，我们才能拥有和谐的师生关系。拥有和谐的师生关系。”nOnly in this way can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and st

26、udents.Studentsarebecomingunwillingtotelltheirteachersoftheirinnerthoughtsbecausetheyarenotequalinpositionandteacherslaytoomuchemphasisontheacademicperformancesofthestudents.nWhilesomestudentsmighthavedoubts,Iamwillingtosharemyinnerthoughtswithmyteachers.Theyshowloveandconcernfortheirstudentsandareg

27、oodlisteners.Ialwaysfinditeasytoseeksupportandadvicefromthem,fromwhichIbenefitandlearnalot.nInthiscase,anidealrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsisveryimportant.Inmyopinion,thisrelationshipshouldbeonefilledwithlove,careandunderstanding,inwhichteachersandstudentsshowrespectforeachotherandexchangei

28、deasfreely.nTobuildarelationshipofthiskind,teachersshouldbecomefriendsofstudentswhilestudentsoughttoplacemoretrustintheirteachersandgivevoicetotheirfeelingsfrankly.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyawarmrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudents.Deareditor,Lastweek,ourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhetherornotuniversity

29、studentsshouldbefinanciallyindependent.Ouropinionsaredivided.HereImwritingtotellyousomethingaboutthediscussion.55%ofthestudentsthinkthatuniversitystudentsdonthavetomakemoneyfinanciallyindependent,becauseifstudentswanttomakemoney,theywillspendalotoftimeontheirwork.,soitwillsurelyaffecttheirstudies.Ab

30、out30%ofthestudentsholdtheviewthatdoingpart-timejobswillhelponegainworkexperienceandlearnmoreaboutsociety,六、六、Homework Homework 阅读短文然后按照要求写一篇阅读短文然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。whichwillhelpthemalotintheirfuturejobapplication.Inaddition,whentheyfindtimeislimitedforthemtodopart-timejobs,theymaystopatan

31、ytime.Asforme,justlike15%ofthestudents,Ipartlyagreewiththeopinionsabove.Personally,asgrow-ups,weshouldnotdependonourparentsanymore.However,ifourparentscanaffordtopaythetuitionforus,weshouldputourstudyinthefirstplace;ifourparentscantaffordtopayourtuition,wemayfindapart-timejobtoearnsomemoneyforoursel

32、ves.Whatsyouropinion?Thankyouforreadingmyletter.YoursZhangHai写作内容写作内容1.1.以约以约30 个词概括这篇短文的内容个词概括这篇短文的内容2.2.然后以然后以“大学生是否需要经济独立大学生是否需要经济独立”为话题，为话题，写一写一篇篇120词左右的短文。内容包括：词左右的短文。内容包括：（1）中国孩子过多地依赖家长；中国孩子过多地依赖家长；（2）在力所能及的情况下，）在力所能及的情况下，大学生可以找一份兼职的大学生可以找一份兼职的工作，一方面减轻家长的经济压力，另一方面可以锻炼工作，一方面减轻家长的经济压力，另一方面可以锻炼自己

33、的能力；自己的能力；（3）无论怎样，）无论怎样，学习仍是大学生的首要任务学习仍是大学生的首要任务写作要求写作要求 在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构地故事，也可在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构地故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。套用写作模板进行写作：1.进行概括：The passage above mainly tells us a discussion on whether or not university students should be financially independent as well

34、as different opinions among the students.n2.自然过渡。说到中国孩子怎样过多地依赖中国孩子怎样过多地依赖家长家长。nAs we all know,we Chinese children are all dependent on our parents,including most university students.n3.列举例证，证明中国孩子怎样过多地依赖中国孩子怎样过多地依赖家长家长。nMy sister,a university students,doesnt know how to cook because her mother prepa

35、re everything well for her.n5.引出话题引出话题“在力所能及的情况下，在力所能及的情况下，大学生可以找大学生可以找一份兼职的工作一份兼职的工作”。nIn my opinion,university students should try to find a part-time job if possible.n6.说明说明大学生找一份兼职的工作的好处大学生找一份兼职的工作的好处:一方面减轻一方面减轻家长的经济压力，另一方面可以锻炼自己的能力家长的经济压力，另一方面可以锻炼自己的能力。nBy doing so,they can not only help their

36、parents to reduce the financial pressure,but also cultivate all kinds of abilities.Besides,many companies pay special attention to working experience of the job application.n7.总结。总结。“无论怎样，无论怎样，学习仍是大学生的首要任务学习仍是大学生的首要任务”。In general,although I think university students should take part-time jobs to be

37、financially independent from their parents,I agree that studying is their main task at university.Earning money is just a thing they may do in their spare time.Only by studying well can they repay their parents better in the future.参考例文：参考例文：The passage above mainly tells us a discussion on whether

38、or not university students should be financially independent as well as different opinions among the students.As we all know,we Chinese children are all Dependent on our parents,including most university students.In my opinion,university students should try to find a part-time job if possible.By doi

39、ng so,they can not only help their parents to reduce the financial pressure,but also cultivate all kinds of abilities.Besides,many companies pay special attention to working experience of the job application.In general,although I think universitystudents should take part-time jobs to be financially independent from their parents,I agree that studying is their main task at university.Earning money is just a thing they may do in their spare time.Only by studying well can they repay their parents better in the future.Thank YouGood luck&Successs ahead!