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1、Book1.Module3.Writing-How to write a good paragraph&describe a trip 深圳外国语学校What is a paragraph?nA paragraph is a unit of writing which lies between the sentence and the essay.It usually consists of a group of related sentences,including a topic sentence,a number of supporting sentences and a conclud

2、ing sentence.PracticeRead the following passage and point out the topic sentence,the supporting sentences and the concluding sentence:(1)Traveling can do us a lot of good,which can be listed as follows.(2)First of all,it helps us know the world better，and it can broaden our horizons as well(3)In add

3、ition,it makes it possible for us to make friends with people in different areas.(4)To sum up，traveling is of great benefit to us I.Topic Sentence Definition(main idea)Location(1st sentence)75%topic sentences at the beginning10%topic sentences in the middle10%topic sentences at the end5%topic senten

4、ces hidden in the paragraph People have different tastes in food.Some feel that they havent eaten a meal unless they have had steak.Some prefer chicken or fish and eat one or the other at every meal.Others prefer vegetables and fruits or grains and would enjoy a meal of eggplant,and fresh fruit.Othe

5、rs could live on what was called fast-foods:a hamburger or hot dog,French fries and a soft drink.Controlling wordsPeople have tastes.Some feel Some preferOthers prefer Others could live ondifferentin foodUnderline the Controlling Words1.In ancient times,3 kinds calendars were used.2.One of the busie

6、st seasons for travel agents is the summer.3.Some people see computers as a threat to modern man.4.Good study habits are helpful to a student.5.In 1930 scientists made a strange discovery off the coast of African.II.How to Write a Topic SentenceNot too broad or general.Not too bigGolden Rule:as smal

7、l as possible 1.Big cities have traffic problems.Big cities have three main traffic problems 2.Music is enjoyable.Music arouses two main emotions in listeners.3.Cheating in exams is bad.Cheating in exams exerts a negative effect on school students study habit.III.Two Standards of a Good Paragraphcoh

8、erenceunityUnityStructure of a Paragraph Topic Sentence _Supporting Sentence 1 _ Supporting Sentence 2 _Supporting Sentence 3 _ Supporting Sentence 4Pearls(珍珠）are gathered by men known as pearl divers.（潜水者）Actually,these men do not dive.They are lowered by a rope to the bottom of the sea.Many touris

9、ts to Japan enjoy shopping for cultured pearls.Pearl gatherers work in pairs,with one remaining at the surface to help the other return from his dive.An experienced pearl diver can stay down about a minute and a half and can often make as many as thirty dives in one day.For hundreds of years,man has

10、 made use of the talents of monkeys.Egyptian paintings of 2000B.C.show baboons(狒狒）gathering fruit for their masters.Even in 1879,monkeys were still being used as torchbearers（火炬手）during dinners.The monkeys would sit in a row on a chair and hold the lights until the guests went home.Then the monkeys

11、would eat.Most of the worlds zoos contain a variety of monkeys for people to watch.Coherence(Sticking Together)1.Arrange details in the order of time,space and importance.2.Use various transitions(linking words).Some Transitions for Timeat first,next,meanwhile,after a while,and then,in addition,at l

12、ast 过渡词 Simon decided to improve his body language.He sat up and smiled at people.This seems to work.A very beautiful girl entered.She looked at Debbie and then Simon.Without hesitation she went to Simon and gave him a big smile.She left,still smiling.After thatMinutes later,A few moments later,Task

13、:Write a paragraph about one of these topics.p My first family holidayp My first train ridep The most unusual journey Ive madep The best journey of my lifeExample:The first family holiday I can remember was when I was five.At six oclock in the morning,we went to the bus station and Try to use some transitionS to form the paragraph.(at first,next,after a while,in addition,at last.