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1、如何写建议信howtowritelettersofadvice第1页/共40页写作三步曲说明写信目的提出建议以及改进措施，忠告表达希望采纳建议，或者期盼回复。注意！语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。在提出缺点之前，最好先肯定其优点。第2页/共40页建议信三段式：第一段：点明主题第二段：陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由 （是什么，为什么，怎么样）第三段：总结全文，表明希望第3页/共40页适当运用模板第4页/共40页 Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem.In your letter,you said+你碰

2、到的问题.My suggestions are as follows.Firstly,_,because_.Secondly,you should_,because_.Thirdly,youd better _.Only in this way can you _.Whats more,_.I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes.Yours,xxx 第5页/共40页建议信重点第二段：第二段：说明说明建议的内容建议的内容；（是什么）；（是什么）提出具体建议的提出具体建议的原因原因；（为什么）；（为什么）指出采纳建议的指出

3、采纳建议的益处益处。（怎么样）。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。对方感受。第6页/共40页Openingsentences开头句1.I am very glad to hear from you.2.Thank you for your letter.3.You have asked me for my advice with regard to and I will try to make some suggestions.4.I am writing in reply to 5.I am sorry to hear that第7页/共40

4、页表示建议的句子You should/must Dont What/How about trying a new method?Why not find a new way?Youd better change your former plan.Id like to suggest you make a new plan.If I were you,I would Id like to suggest I strongly recommend You might as well 第8页/共40页学会用not only but also表示并列含义 亲爱的朋友们，去参加课外活动吧，这不但会使你的

5、校园生活变得丰富多彩，还会改善你的学习。Dear friends,please take part in after-class activities,which will not only make your school like colorful,but also improve your learning.第9页/共40页Closingsentences结束语1.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful.2.At last,I hope I will be your best friends forever!Go

6、od luck to you!3.Lets keep in touch.I do hope to hear good news from you.第10页/共40页Read Xiao Dongs letter on page 7 and answer:What is Xiao Dongs problem?Read the instructions at the top of page 7 and find out what you are required to do.Hesnotgoodatcommunicatingwithpeople.Hefindsithardtomakefriendsw

7、ithhisclassmates.I Lead in第11页/共40页ToaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikesTojoinindiscussionsToshowinterestinothersideasTosharehisfeelingswithothersII BrainstormingYour advice for Xiao Dong第12页/共40页HowtowritealetterofadviceStepWhat should be writtenPart IPart IIPart IIIPresentingtheproblemProposingthesolut

8、ionConclusion第13页/共40页DearXiaodong,Imsorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou:First,whynot?Ifyoudothis,Secondly,youshould/canThen/Thatway,Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaifBydoingthis,Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,MissWan

9、gOutlining第14页/共40页建议信重点第二段：第二段：说明说明建议的内容建议的内容；（是什么）；（是什么）提出具体建议的提出具体建议的原因原因；（为什么）；（为什么）指出采纳建议的指出采纳建议的益处益处。（怎么样）。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。对方感受。第15页/共40页 Firstly,why not go and talk to people standing alone.I agree that this is difficult but that student may be lonely too,If you do t

10、his,Im sure you will soon have new friends.Secondly,you should begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,That way,you will soon find people with the same interests,because that is a good way to find new friends.Thirdly,it would be a goos idea if you try to join in a discussion.

11、You may feel that is right.By doing this,you are letting people know how friendly you are.So there should be no problem.It should provide you with some new friends.第16页/共40页即时训练你是我们学校一名很热心的学生，得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。1.娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。2.最好在学生的课余时间开放。3.尽量不要收费。4.第17页

12、/共40页写作分析：第一段：引出话题，得知要建娱乐中心，想提建议。第二段：建议建乒乓球室和羽毛球场。第三段：建议课余时间开放，能使其得到充分利用。第四段：免费开放，有些学生经济困难。第五段：简单总结。第18页/共40页DearMr.President,Itscometomyattentionthatourschoolisgoingtobuildanewleisurecenter.Imwritingtoaskyoutoconsiderthefollowingsuggestions.Firstly,Idliketosuggestthatthereshouldbeatable-tennisrooma

13、swellasabadmintoncourt.Ithinkitwoulddogreatgoodifyoucouldbuildthecenterwithaneyetothosestudentswhoareinterestedinplayingtable-tennisorbadminton.Secondly,couldthecenteropeninoursparetime?Ifso,wewillhaveenoughtimetomakefulluseofit.Thirdly,wewillbemorethanhappyifthecenterisfree.Asweallknow,noteverystud

14、entcanaffordtheextraexpense.Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.Ifthecenterisbuilt,itwillgreatlyenhancestudentlifehereoncampus.Yourssincerely,LiHua范文第19页/共40页建议信模版Dear_,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto(关于)_,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductive(建设性的)suggestionshere.Inmyopinio

15、n,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_(建议的内容).Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouforfurtherdetails.GoodLuckwithyour_(祝愿)Yourssincerely签名English/exams第20页/共40页 假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议内容：1

16、.1.不要灰心，保持良好心态；2.2.掌握学习方法；3.3.培养对英语的兴趣爱好。第21页/共40页第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？(时态时态)(when)第一人称一封信对英语学习给出建议说理的逻辑性一般现在时第22页/共40页 假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到

17、读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生，在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议：1.1.保持良好心态；2.2.掌握学习方法：如坚持每天记单词，读英语课文；多 练、多问等。3.3.培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。develop an interest in learning English 坚持每天记单词：insist on/persist in doing insist on/persist in remembering words every day 第23页/共40页Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to

18、 hear that you have such a difficult problem.In your letter,you said you have some difficulties in learning English.This is a normal problem that every student could suffer,so I think I can give you some useful suggestions.My suggestions/advice are as follows.Firstly,you should listen to the teacher

19、s carefully in the class.Secondly,the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it.Thirdly,you can speak English with your classmates and teachers,which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.Whats more,the most important advice is reading English books befo

20、re the class and after the class.第24页/共40页 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。Dear Peter,Im glad to hear that you can ask for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Li HuaHomework:第25页/共40页Dear Peter,Im glad to receiv

21、e your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chine

22、se whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese

23、 next time.Best wishes,Li Hua第26页/共40页 第二篇建议信：对于我的朋友花大量时间上网，耽误学习的建议信建议内容：1）和他面对面地交流、沟通；2）给她发邮件或短信；3）告诉他学习的重要性。Homework:第27页/共40页 Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem.In your letter,you said your friend spends most of his time chatting on the Internet and often goes to

24、the Internet cafe instead of attending classes.You really want to help him out but you dont know what to do with it/how to help him.Well.I would like to give my advice for you.My advice are as follows.Firstly,I think you should have a talk with him sincerely.Because if your friend skips classes,he i

25、s not going to do well at school.第28页/共40页 Secondly,you can e-mail him or leave a message.Thirdly,you should tell him the importance of study.Because every one of us just has one chance to go to high school,he should study hard and not waste time in indulging on the Internet.In a word,I hope my sugg

26、estions will be helpful for you./Best wishes.Yours,Editor 第29页/共40页Homework假定你是某中学的学生李华，请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，主要内容包括：优点：1.话题广泛 :2.图片丰富 3.有助于提高学习兴趣 建议：适当降低词汇难度Dear Editor,As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house._第30页/共40页常用关联词1.表示并列的过渡词或

27、短语 as well;or;too;also;as well as;and;not onlybut also.;both and.either or;neithernor First；Second;Third For one thing;For another(thing)2.表示递进的过渡词或短语 Moreover;Whats more;Besides;Whats worse,第31页/共40页3.表转折对比的过渡词:instead of,but,however,on the contrary,although,different from,despite in spite of,Some;

28、Others On the one hand,;On the other hand,4.表原因的过渡词:because,because of,since,as,for,now that,thanks to,due to（由于）第32页/共40页5.表结果的过渡词:so,thus,therefore,as a result,so that,then,6.表条件的过渡词:if,unless,as long as7.表时间的过渡词:recently,finally,at the same time,at last,from now on,8.表特定的顺序关系的过渡词:first,firstly,se

29、cond,secondly,third,thirdly,above all,first of all,then,next,finally,in the end,at last第33页/共40页9.表换一种方式表达的过渡词:in other words,that is to say10.表进行举例说明的过渡词:for instance,for example,such as11.表陈述事实的过渡词:In fact,To tell you the truth12.表目的的过渡词：for this reason,for this purpose,so that,in order to,so as t

30、o13.表总结的过渡词:In a word(总之，简言之),in short(总之),generally speaking,finally,in conclusion,at last,in summary第34页/共40页常用句型1.对于某人来说，做某事很It is adj/adv(for sb to do sth)学英语对于我们来说不简单 It is not easy for us to learn English2.不明白/想知道I wonder+疑问词/if 我想知道怎么能减肥 I wonder how to lose weight.第35页/共40页3.做某事的最好的办法就是1)The

31、 best way to do sth is to do 2)There is no better way to do sth than to do sth 学好英语的最佳途径就是阅读浅显的英语书籍 1)The best way to learn English well is to read many easy English book.2)There is no better way to learn English than to read many easy English book.第36页/共40页4.学会用定语从句拓展句意教材当中有许多好看的图片，这些图片能够帮助我们更好的理解英

32、语。There are many beautiful and colorful pictures,which can help us understand English better.一些教材当中有些生词或表达、表情（expressions），这些对于我们来说很难。Some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us.第37页/共40页5.用举例子的方式拓宽句意 这些书有许多优点，其中之一就是我们可以发现大量的话题，比如说科学，文化和历史。These books have many advantages,one of them is that we can find a variety of topics,such as science,culture and history.第38页/共40页Thank you!Goodbye!第39页/共40页感谢您的观看！第40页/共40页