2023年中考英语作文讲解与预测（含热点话题与范文）.docx

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1、2023年中考英语作文讲解与预测书面表达明确评分原则要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2.短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥, 不要逐句翻译。3.词数80左右。评分意见：考生应根据题目要求，采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准 确地表达。所给参考词汇仅供选用。共分六档评分，满分15分。如果有单词拼 写、大小写或标点错误，每4个扣1分。此项扣分最多不超过2分。评分标准：第一档：（13-15分）包含全部要点，句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚，用词准 确，语言没有或基本没有错误，具有较强语言表达能力，能围绕内容适当发挥， 完全达到了预期的写作目的。第二档：（10-12分）包含全部要点，句子较通顺，行

2、文基本连贯，表达较清楚, 语言有少量错误，达到了预期的写作目的。第三档：（7-9分）包含部分要点或者只是简单说明要点，语言虽有错误，尚能 达意，字数较少。第四档：（4-6分）包含少部分要点，语言错误较多，不能准确表达意思。语言 不规范。第五档：（1-3分）使用了提示词，有少量表达，但错误百出。第六档：（0分）白卷或文不对题。必备写作秘诀：一、结构：三段式：观点-要点-总结二、要点：全，围绕中心三、逻辑：逻辑词递进：first/first of all, second, third, finally/at last, in addition/whats more/ moreover/beside

3、s（都是另外的意思），in a word/all in all（表示总结）；last but not least（最后但同样重要的是）转折：but, however 等因果：because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to, so, thus,Everyone has only one life,we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some suggestions.On the one hand,we sh

4、ould realize the importance of safety and know what to do.First,when we go out, we must obey traffic rules.If we walk, we must use sidewalks and mustnt run a red light ； If we ride bikes,we must ride along the right side and shouldnt carry others； Second, we should develop a healthy eating habits. E

5、at regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less.When food smells bad,dont eat it.Third,when we play sports or games,be careful not to hurt ourselves.Fourth, we mustnt swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around.On the other hand, we should learn to protect ourselves

6、,which is one of the most important living skills.We must be careful when making friends especially online. Some person online are not honest. They are dangerous,so we must keep away from them.If we happen to have trouble,we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents, teachers or police for he

7、lp so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt.In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives. Thats all. Thank you !6.环境 话题热度：范文一、假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Eli对中国正在推广的垃圾分类政策很感 兴趣，他想了解一下相关情况，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1.上海率先实行；2.垃圾须分四类（干、湿、可循环、有害）；3.公众反应。 参考i司汇：rash sortingwaste sor

8、ting （垃圾分类），recyclables, kitchen waste, harmful waste and other waste, dustbin注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear 日i,Having learned that you are interested in the trash-sorting program promoted recently in China, I am here writing to give you a brief introduction.As far as I know, Shanghai has becom

9、e the pioneer of our countrys waste sorting policy. As of July 1st this year, the residents in Shanghai have not been able to dump their waste bags in whichever bin was closest. On the contrary, domestic waste is required to be classified into four categories: dry refuse, wet trash, recyclable waste

10、 and hazardous(dangerous) waste.Faced with the new rule, many citizens in Shanghai are finding it a little too complicated, with every item of waste now under careful scrutiny(examination) and classification. Still, there are more people who warmly support the policy because it helps people to culti

11、vate greener lifestyle habits and helps China to become a more beautiful country.Yours,Li Hua 范文2：塑料袋的广泛使用给人们的生活带来很多便利，同时也造成了严 重的环境污染-俗称白色污染。假如你是李华，正在参加学校组织的“环 境保护，从我做起的征稿活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语小短文。1.概述白色污染现状2.分析“白色污染的后果3.发出倡议:减少塑料袋使用量，提高公众的环保意识；提倡重拎布袋子，重提菜篮子。 参考词汇：塑料袋：plastic bag禁令ban意识awareness提倡advocate

12、The problem of “white pollution caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role. While plastic bags bring us much convenience in our daily life, they also lead to a kind of serious environmental pollution. They can be found everywhere, f

13、rom lands to rivers, and even in the sky, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution.Luckily, The government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags. The rule

14、will undoubtedly reduce the use of plastic bags and enhance the awareness of environmental protection.As students, we should do our part to cut back on the use of plastic bags. For example, we had better have meals in our canteen instead of bringing food back with plastic bags. It is also highly adv

15、ocated that we should turn to cloth bags or shopping baskets from now on. We must act now before it is too late!范文3:水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，请 以此为话题写一篇100字左右的短文。As we know, water is very important to man, we cant live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and les

16、s. But some people dont care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think its a great shame to waste

17、while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It/s also a good idea to encourage my friends and fa

18、mily members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.7 .中国元素 话题热度：倡议学生重视汉字书写：近年来，随着科技发展，电子产品越来越多， 学生的汉字书写能力大大降低。假定你是李是校书法协会的会长,为了让 同学们重视书写，写一封倡议

19、书，内容包括:1.减少对电子产品的依赖， 多动手记笔记;2.养成练书法和写日记的习惯。With the development of technology, more and more students prefer to use electric products for taking notes and sending messages, rather than write on the paper. Thus, our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. Facing the problem, we should do as

20、 follows.First, we should use less electric products when learning. If so , we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides,we must form the habit of practising calligraphy every day. Whats more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand instead of sending

21、 e-mails.Beautiful and neat handwriting, is of great benefit to us students.So lets take action right now! Im sure our efforts will pay off!Calligraphy Association.健康生活话题热度：范文1.给意大利笔友关于防止新冠病毒感染的建议:假设你是李华，你的 意大利笔友Nicola 了解到中国的新冠肺炎疫情防控已经取得了积极的成 效，于是特地给你发来了一封电子邮件。他在邮件中对目前意大利的新冠 肺炎疫情形势表达了担忧，并向你征求防止病毒感染的

22、建议。请你就此给 他回一封邮件，内容包括：1.表达关切，并强调加强疫情防控的重要性；2.介绍防止病毒感染的具体 举措；3.表达祝愿。参考词汇：novel coronavirus新型冠状病毒；C0VID- 19 2019新冠肺炎； epidemic prevention and control 疫情防控Dear Nicola,Hows everything going? Im sorry to hear that the novel coronavirus is hitting Italy. It is a horrible virus that has caused many deaths,

23、so you must take it seriously. But please dont be panic, if you do as the follows, you can protect yourself from the infection of the virus and protect your family and other people around as well.Firstly, never go to the crowded places, but stay indoors as much as possible. When you go out, you must

24、 wear a surgical mask. Secondly, wash your hands often and correctly with soap and running water for at least 15 seconds before eating, using the toilet or returning home from the outside, and keep the shared places always having fresh air. Last but not least, exercise regularly while staying at hom

25、e, for exercise helps you strengthen your immune system and stay away from any infection.I do hope these suggestions can be helpful for you, and I believe with the efforts of the whole Italian people, you/re sure to win the battle of epidemicprevention and control.Best wishes!Li Hua 范文二、2020-2021年全民

26、一起取得了抗击新冠肺炎疫情的阶段性胜利。这次的疫情同时也给我们敲响了健康安全、卫生安全等方面的警钟，人们 越来越希望拥有一种安全健康的生活方式。就如何才能保持健康，班内发 起了演讲征文活动，请就该主题写一篇演讲稿阐述你自己的建议和看法。Dear friends,Its nice to be able to speak to all of you. Id like to give you some suggestions on how to stay healthy.First, you must arrange your time properly. Go to bed early and g

27、et up early. It/s important to get eight hours of sleep each day. Thats what gives us energy during the day. Dont spend too much time on your computer, phone or TV. Second, you should get some exercise. Running and swimming are good choices. Regular exercise is an important way to stay healthy. More

28、over, we should also have better eating habits. Try to eat more vegetables or fruit. Theyll keep you healthy. Avoid eating too much fast food or foods with lots of sugar. Its also a good idea to make friends who can cheer you up when you feel down. Friends can help you face the difficulties of life.

29、Lets work together to stay healthy and enjoy life together. Thanks for listening to my speech.8:粮食浪费话题热度：范文2：袁隆平爷爷一生致力于让世界远离饥饿，我们对他最好的缅怀方式之一 就是珍惜粮食。一粥一饭，当念来之不易是我们不该忘记的格言警句。学校校 报英语专栏邀请你写一篇关于爰惜粮食的文章。内容包括：（1）写一个你或身边的人浪费粮食的事例，并作出评论。（2）向 同学们提至少两点爱惜粮食的建议。作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真 实姓名。(2)语句连贯，词数8

30、0个左右，作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必 抄写在答题卡上。Food is important to us. Its our duty to save food. Today food waste is a big problem. Once, while I was eating lunch at the school dining hall, I suddenly found that the student beside me threw his meal away without saying a word. He didnt even finish half of it.In

31、 my opinion, it is so wasteful to do that, because it is not easy for farmers to grow food nowadays. Besides, many people in the world die of hunger every day, and they dont have enough food to eat.In order to stop food waste, I have some ideas to share with you. First, do not order the food more th

32、an you can eat while eating outside. It is necessary to save food. Second, try your best to save food at home as much as possible so that many people in the world can be helped. Whats more, if you cant finish eating what you order in the restaurant, you can take it away instead of wasting it.All in

33、all, we need to form a good habit of eating food and make our world a better place.Yours,Li Hua9保护野生动物话题热度：2020年,一种新型冠状病毒(novel coronavirus )在全球蔓延。据传，这种 病毒是从野生动物传染给人类。假定你是李华，今天你班召开了敬畏自然，保 护野生动物的主题班会，此次活动让你认识到保护野生动物的重要性。班会后, 你打算写一份英文倡议书投给你校英文校报，以此号召全校同学行动起来，为保 护野生动物而努力。Wild animals are our friends. W

34、e live on the same earth. So protecting them is protecting ourselves.Howeverzmany wild animals have already died out and hundreds of others are becoming endangered. So it is necessary to protect wild animals. If nothing is done, we may find ourselves alone on the earth.Wild animals are endangered fo

35、r many reasons. Firstly, the forests where wild animals live are being destroyed. As a result, a lot of animals are losing their habitats.Secondly, many animals are dying out because of pollution. Besides, too much hunting also causes the disappearance of certain species of wild animals.In my opinio

36、n, the government should keep people from destroying forests and shut down the factories which pollute rivers and air. And more wildlife centers should also be set up.Lets take action from now on.10 .手机与网络话题热度：随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。网 购成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格 的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。优点：1.足不

37、出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、 劳累。2.价格通常比较便宜。3.可供选择的范围广，品种多。缺点：1.只能看 到图片，看不到商品本身。2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click

38、of the mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its dis

39、advantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. Thats a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.当前，许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手

40、机(smart phones)。针对这一现象，学 校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活的演讲活动。请你根据下面的 提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。活动内容L花大量时间玩游戏，上课睡觉，不按时完成作业。2.伤害眼睛，不利健康。建议1.远离智能手机，认真学习。2.多花时间与家人、朋友交流。3.积极参加各种活动，如打篮球、唱歌Girls and boys,With the development of the Internet, many students have smart phones. The students often spend so much time in playing game

41、s with them that they feel very tired. Someone doesnt finish their homework on time. Someone even sleeps in class. Besides, smart phones do harm to our health, some students eyesight is becoming poorer and poorer.To avoid these disadvantages, I think we should make some changes.First, we should keep

42、 away from smart phones and work hard.Second, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life, feelings and so on.Third, take an active part in all kinds of activities, such as playing basketball, singing songs.Thats all. Thank you!11 .身心健康 话题热度：近年来，青少年因为心理压力及心

43、态问题选择走向极端的事件层 出不穷，青年一代的身心健康问题也引起了社会的广泛关注和讨 论。范文1:在学习和生活中，每个人都会有苦恼的事。假设你 叫Mandy,你的好朋友 Nancy 遇到了一些烦恼的事。请根据下面的提示，给她写一封90词左右的邮件，并提出自己的建 议。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。1. shy： dont have many friends at school; 2.math ： difficult; often get poor grades;3.difficult to talk to her parentsDear Nancy,Im sorry that you hav

44、e so many problems. Here is my advice for you. Firstly, you say you are so shy that you dont have many friends at school. I think you should join some clubs and make new friends there. Secondly, you find math is difficult and often get poor grades in exams. You should ask the teacher or your classma

45、tes for help and do more exercises. Then youll be good at it. Finally, you think its not easy to talk with your parents. Why not open your heart to them and tell them how you feel? Im sure theyll understand you.I hope you will feel happy again.Yours,Mandy 范文2：微笑是一种态度。请你根据以下表格内容，以Learn to smile为题，为你校

46、英语园地写一篇作文。要求：80词左右 （开头已给出，不计入总词数）,可适当发挥。写作本篇文章可能用 到的词汇：confidence, health, language, smile at, learn to ,what s more, be good for, We should . , believe .方式除因学会对门而笑1 .重拾白信2.仃利J才体他康学会对他人微笑1 .帮助拉近。别人的关系2 .微笑是帝谓舍你的倡议Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life. We should face everything with a smile.In o

47、ur life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, you may fail the exam, or your friends may not understand you. These things may make you feel bad, but you need to learn to smile. Smiling at yourself can bring back your confidence. Whats more, smiling is good for your health. We should also

48、learn to smile at others, and it will help us get closer to other people. Smile is the best language in the modern world.Lets learn to smile. I believe our world will be more and more wonderful. 临近考试，大家的压力也与日俱增。长期处于巨大的压力之下，对学习和生活都 会造成许多不利影响，如何调节压力是考生的必修课，同学们需要重点了解。 范文：许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们 中存在的心理压力问题你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life”为主 题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学 分享，内容包括：同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；（2）我的压力是什么；我是如何成功缓解 我的压力的。Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students i