读后续写写作练习：善意的行为--2023届高三英语二轮复习.docx

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1、读后续写写作练习：善意的行为读后续写原题Anna Morrison was a single mother raising three little children, Joseph, Katherine, and Tom alone after her husband passed away. And Anna didnt have much Money as A cleaner.Before Toms 6th birthday, Anna saved some money. She knew it wasnt much, but she could at least treat her c

2、hildren to one proper meal on the special day. So on Tom/s birthday, Anna took her children to a local cafe. After reading the menu, she realized she could only afford one dish. The waitress had already brought them water and was waiting for their order, and Anna was too shy to leave. So she decided

3、 to buy something within her budget.Finally, she settled on a plate of noodles and meatballs. When the dinner arrived, Tom cried, “Mom, one dish isnt enough fo r the four of us. And I want a drink with my food. Yes, Mommy!” Catherine and Joseph cried together.Tm sorry/7 Anna apologized. For the time

4、 being, lets have this. I promise to do better on your next birthday/7 She then divided the foods among her children. As the kids finished their food, Catherine said, “Mommy, Im still hungry. Can we get something else? Tom added, “How about a cake? We cant celebrate a birthday without a cake! Please

5、, Mom! Ill wash my hands and be right back! Then we can order it! With that, Tom rushed to the washroom;Catherine and Joseph followed.As the children left, Anna whispered in tears, “How do I tell them I dont have any money on me? Suddenly, she felt a warm hand on her shoulder. She looked up to see a

6、n old lady before her. This woman was dining nearby. She had heard Anna talking to her kids.This woman was Sandra. Her adult son lived abroad, so she lived alone. The plants in her garden were withered （枯萎的）,and her house needed cleaning. But her knee was painful; she couldnt manage her house. Altho

7、ugh she didnt have an easy life herself, Sandra wanted to show kindness to Anna.Its all right/7 she told Anna, Youre trying hard to provide the best for your child re n.,zParagraph 1:Sandra comforted Anna and then put a $100 bill under her platParagraph 2:Then, Anna decided to help Sandra clean her

8、house and manage her garden.写作思路分析第一段：A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.第一句衔接段首句，这时人物的反应，心理语言动作。人物为了解 决这一问题所做出的努力（辣椒喷雾or给蒜蓉面包）。这一努力 取得的成效如何。本段最后一句与第二段首句的自然衔接。第二段：At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.第一句衔 接段首句，人物的反应，心理语言动作。直升机开展的营救。安全 登上直升机。俯瞰北极熊拍照片。（首尾呼应：第一段 第一句话 A single

9、goal: to photograph polar bears 续写部分应该写拍到北极 熊照片）文章升华，野生动物的处境，也许是人类活动使野生动物 的生存更加艰难。参考范文Sandra comforted Anna and then put a $100 bill under her plate. Order some extra food,“ said Sandra. These sweet little things are just too young to understand what responsibility is. Don,t feel bad about yourself.

10、 You/re already an amazing mother. Anna thanked her a lot. As Annas kids returned, Anna ordered a cake as she watched the children eat happily. Later, Anna paid the bill and asked for Sandras address. That weekend, when Anna reached Sandras house, she was shocked by Sandra/s house, she was shocked b

11、y Sandras house condition. And she learned more about Sandra after chatting wither her later.Then, Anna decided to help Sandra clean her house and manage her garden. The old lady refused, but Anna insisted. Anna cleaned Sandras house and spent time in her garden, mowing the grass and removing withered plants. The next weekend, she returned to Sandras home and planted fresh flowers in her garden. With time, Sandra and Anna became close, and Anna and her kids often dropped by the old ladys house to help her. The two families cheered each other up by showing friendliness to each other.