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1、会计学1英语学习英语高分作文高分结构英语学习英语高分作文高分结构高分句型高分句型n nIf I become famous,I neednIf I become famous,I needn t to worry about my life problems.I may t to worry about my life problems.I may have a lot of money,so I can buy a car and give my father and my mother.have a lot of money,so I can buy a car and give my f

2、ather and my mother.And I also can do what I like.I may run a little company,and use some And I also can do what I like.I may run a little company,and use some money to help the poor children in rural areas.And I can establish some money to help the poor children in rural areas.And I can establish s

3、ome Hope Primary School.Hope Primary School.第1页/共29页n nIf If I I become famous,become famous,I I neednneedn t to worry about my t to worry about my life problems.life problems.I I may have a lot of money.Then may have a lot of money.Then I I can buy a car and give my father and my mother.can buy a c

4、ar and give my father and my mother.And And I I also can do what I like.also can do what I like.I I may run a little may run a little company,and use some money to help the poor company,and use some money to help the poor children in rural areas.And children in rural areas.And I I can establish some

5、 can establish some Hope Primary School.Hope Primary School.1.句子开头单调：I2.短句过多，无长句3.句型简单：主+谓+宾口语口语化！化！第2页/共29页高分句型高分句型n n 基本要求：n n开头多样化开头多样化n n写长句写长句n n句式复杂化句式复杂化第3页/共29页开头多样化开头多样化n n分词开头分词开头n nExhaustedExhausted,I slumped into a chair.,I slumped into a chair.n nNot knowingNot knowing what should be d

6、one next,I consult what should be done next,I consult many of my friends.many of my friends.n nRunningRunning to raise funds for a charity gives you a to raise funds for a charity gives you a sense of unselfishness.sense of unselfishness.n nTo beTo be a better students,I determined to never to a bet

7、ter students,I determined to never to underachieve again.underachieve again.第4页/共29页短语开头短语开头n nAfraid of being cheatedAfraid of being cheated,I turned my back on that,I turned my back on that stranger.stranger.n nRegardless of Regardless of any kind ofany kind of difficulties,keeping a good difficul

8、ties,keeping a good mood helps you keep cool and find solutions in a mood helps you keep cool and find solutions in a sensible way.sensible way.n nCompared withCompared with hanging out with the friends in a real hanging out with the friends in a real life,meeting net friends could be risk-taking.li

9、fe,meeting net friends could be risk-taking.n nApart fromApart from the benefits of building up your the benefits of building up your confidence,you could find other benefits in your confidence,you could find other benefits in your volunteering work.volunteering work.Owing to,as a result of,so as to

10、,in spite of,in terms of,in light of,on the contrary;as we all know,so far as I know,short of,at the risk of第5页/共29页状语从句开头状语从句开头n nMuch asMuch as the internet provide a wealth of the internet provide a wealth of information,people cannot trust every piece of it.information,people cannot trust every

11、piece of it.n nAssuming Assuming everyone associate with friends through everyone associate with friends through the unfeeling screen of computer,how does the the unfeeling screen of computer,how does the world look like?world look like?n nIn as much as In as much as we are living in the real world,

12、we are living in the real world,indulging in the virtual world is misleading even indulging in the virtual world is misleading even dangerous.dangerous.第6页/共29页使用稀有连接词使用稀有连接词使用稀有连接词使用稀有连接词 !n nBecause n nIn as much as,in that,consideringn nAlthoughn nMuch as,in spite of the fact that,granted/grantin

13、g,for all(that)n nIfn nprovided that,on condition that,supposing/assuming第7页/共29页With/Without开头开头n nWith the popularity ofWith the popularity of personal computers and personal computers and the the advancement ofadvancement of internet technology,young generation are internet technology,young gener

14、ation are eager to embrace every new experience in the virtual world.eager to embrace every new experience in the virtual world.n nWith the rapid development ofWith the rapid development of economy,economy,n nWith the remarkable improvement ofWith the remarkable improvement of people people s living

15、 s living standards,standards,n nWith the steady growth ofWith the steady growth ofn nWithout Without the teachersthe teachers help,I could not overcome my help,I could not overcome my weakness .weakness .n nWithout Without the press,students cannot have enough impetus to the press,students cannot h

16、ave enough impetus to work harder.work harder.第8页/共29页主语从句开头主语从句开头n nWhoWho you meet in the virtual world cannot be totally you meet in the virtual world cannot be totally trusted.trusted.n nWhat What they said may be quite different from the truth.they said may be quite different from the truth.n n

17、HowHow you get a new friend is not as important as you get a new friend is not as important as what kind of person he or she is.what kind of person he or she is.n nThatThat I was able to help others gave me senses of I was able to help others gave me senses of self-worth and achievement.self-worth a

18、nd achievement.第9页/共29页There,It 开头开头n nThere There are few things more satisfying than helping people in need.are few things more satisfying than helping people in need.n nThere There are potential dangers to making friends online.are potential dangers to making friends online.n nThereThere has been

19、 a good deal of controversy as to has been a good deal of controversy as to whether PC whether PC games should be prohibited.games should be prohibited.n nIt It is especially beneficial for people to keep a good mood.is especially beneficial for people to keep a good mood.n nIt It does harm in sever

20、al ways if we make friends online.does harm in several ways if we make friends online.n nIt It is reported now China has 4.5 million registered volunteers is reported now China has 4.5 million registered volunteers having provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work.having provided more th

21、an 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work.第10页/共29页数字开头数字开头n nSeveralSeveral factors should be taken into account when factors should be taken into account when it comes to staying healthy.it comes to staying healthy.n nFew Few people would feel unhappy when providing people would feel unhappy when pro

22、viding timely help to the needy person.timely help to the needy person.n nThe 21The 21 century has witnessed the rapid century has witnessed the rapid development in China.development in China.n n4.5 million4.5 million registered volunteers are reported to registered volunteers are reported to provi

23、de more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer provide more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work in China.work in China.第11页/共29页练习（练习（1）Some people disagree to make friends on the net.Some people disagree to make friends on the net.前加前加/改：改：n nHavingHaving been cheated on the net before,been cheat

24、ed on the net before,n nAfraid ofAfraid of been cheated,been cheated,n nIn as much asIn as much as some people are afraid of being cheated,they some people are afraid of being cheated,theyn nWhat they disagreeWhat they disagree is to make friends on the net.is to make friends on the net.n nThereTher

25、e are some people against making friends on the net.are some people against making friends on the net.n nIt It is undeniable that there do exist some people against making is undeniable that there do exist some people against making friends on the net.friends on the net.n n2/32/3 of parents disagree

26、 to make friends on the net.of parents disagree to make friends on the net.第12页/共29页写长句写长句n n向前、向后n n向前：句前加从句、分词、介从句、分词、介词短语词短语n n从句：状语从句从句：状语从句n n向后向后：句后加从句、分词、介从句、分词、介词短语、词短语、并列句并列句n n从句：状语从句、从句：状语从句、定语从句定语从句、同位语从句同位语从句第13页/共29页加并列句加并列句使用稀有连接词（使用稀有连接词（2 2）n n,andandn n while,while,whereaswhereasn

27、n,butbut however,still,however,still,neverthelessneverthelessn n,oror otherwiseotherwisen n,soso therefore,therefore,thusthus,hencehence,yetyet Making friends online is a matter of excitement and curiosity,nevertheless it may involve deceits and traps.Making friends online may involve deceits and tr

28、aps,hence everyone has to be cautious.Everyone has to be cautious of making friends online,otherwise you may be at risk of being treated.第14页/共29页加状语从句加状语从句The world will become cold and dull providing everyone associate with friends through the unfeeling screen of computer.One of my friends was add

29、icted to the net games and failed almost every examination,so that he was kicked out of school.He turned on the computer the moment he arrived back from school.He played truant in as much as he wanted to play internet games with virtual mates.第15页/共29页n nParty animals spend many of their nights in P

30、arty animals spend many of their nights in different parties.They had adifferent parties.They had a great time both with great time both with friends and strangers there.friends and strangers there.n nParty animals spend many of their nights in Party animals spend many of their nights in different p

31、arties,different parties,havinghaving great time both with great time both with friends and strangers there.friends and strangers there.n nWorking people normally sleep at night.Party Working people normally sleep at night.Party animals sleep during the dayanimals sleep during the day.n nWorking peo

32、ple normally sleep at night,Working people normally sleep at night,party party animals sleepinganimals sleeping during the day.during the day.n n同一主语：同一主语：-ing-ing；不同主语：独立主格结构；不同主语：独立主格结构-ing分词表并列分词表并列第16页/共29页n nwho,whose,which,(that)who,whose,which,(that)n nwhere,when,whywhere,when,whyn n,非限定性定于从句

33、非限定性定于从句非限定性定于从句非限定性定于从句-最安全最安全最安全最安全n nParty animals sleep during the day.Party animals sleep during the day.n nParty animalsParty animals sleep during the day sleep during the day,who,who spend many spend many of their nights in different parties.of their nights in different parties.n nParty anima

34、ls sleep Party animals sleep during the dayduring the day,when,when othersothers work or study hard.work or study hard.n n同一主语，同一宾语；有时间状语，有地点状同一主语，同一宾语；有时间状语，有地点状语语加定语从句加定语从句第17页/共29页n nParty animals spend many of their nights in different parties.They had lots of friends talking and playing there.n

35、 nParty animals spend many of their nights in different parties,with lots of friends talking and playing there.n nLibrary is an ideal place for study,without any voices I do not want to hear.加加with结构，表结构，表having第18页/共29页n nHe wrote 5 books in his life.One of them were He wrote 5 books in his life.On

36、e of them were published.published.n nHe wrote 5 books in his life,He wrote 5 books in his life,withwith only one only one publishedpublished.n nThe teacher has talked with 20 students.She has 5 more The teacher has talked with 20 students.She has 5 more students to communicate with.students to comm

37、unicate with.n nThe teacher has talked with 20 students,The teacher has talked with 20 students,withwith 5 more 5 more to to communicatecommunicate with.with.n nI published 2 articles last week.I am about to publish I published 2 articles last week.I am about to publish other 3 this week.other 3 thi

38、s week.n nI published 2 articles last week,I published 2 articles last week,withwith 3 more 3 more to be to be publishedpublished this week.this week.加加with结构，表结构，表having（2）第19页/共29页练习（练习（2）Children spend much time on the net.Children spend much time on the net.后加：后加：n n,andand they get addicted to

39、it.they get addicted to it.n n,hencehence they spend less time on study.they spend less time on study.n n,in as much asin as much as they are too young to control themselves.they are too young to control themselves.n n,regardless ofregardless of parents parents warnings.warnings.n n,chattingchatting

40、 with people they do not know.with people they do not know.n n,withwith abundant energy and time abundant energy and time wastedwasted.n n,which is abundant in unhealthy information and tempting which is abundant in unhealthy information and tempting online gamesonline games.第20页/共29页句式复杂化句式复杂化句式复杂化

41、句式复杂化特殊句式特殊句式特殊句式特殊句式n n强调强调句型（句型（It It s s thatthat）（）（sosothatthat）n n伴随伴随句型（句型（the morethe more the more the more;the more;the more the the lessless）n n倒装倒装句型（句型（Young as he is;OnlyYoung as he is;Only;No sooner had I;No sooner had I offeredoffered,than,than）n n比喻比喻句型（都肯定句型（都肯定Just asJust as so so

42、,Just like,Just like；都否定；都否定nonomore thanmore than）n n对比对比句型句型 not so muchnot so muchas/not more than as/not more than n n虚拟虚拟语气（语气（if if）n n插入插入语语 （同位语，定从，连词（同位语，定从，连词however/thereforehowever/therefore）n n多样否定多样否定多样否定多样否定第21页/共29页n nIt is talking and playing with the friends in the real world that

43、can actually improve your interpersonal skills.n nThe internet is so tempting that the more you are exposed to it,the more you cannot resist it.n nNo sooner had I stepped into the orphanage,than I felt the childrens curiosity and excitement.n nIf the net addicts spent more time in the real world,the

44、ir lives would be more colorful and healthy.n nJust as motor is to car,so press is to students.（比喻比喻！）第22页/共29页n nNoNobody can totally trust net friends body can totally trust net friends more thanmore than the the dieters believe advertisements of the diet pill.dieters believe advertisements of the

45、 diet pill.（都都都都否定否定否定否定，强调前者。，强调前者。，强调前者。，强调前者。比喻比喻比喻比喻！）n nNet addicts do Net addicts do notnot really want to make friends really want to make friends more more thanthan just just evade from the realityevade from the reality.n n（否定前者否定前者否定前者否定前者，肯定后者。，肯定后者。，肯定后者。，肯定后者。比较比较比较比较！rather thanrather t

46、han）n nNet addicts do Net addicts do not so muchnot so much want to make more friends want to make more friends asas just evade from the reality.just evade from the reality.n nTo Play worldTo Play world,however,however,can actually improve your with can actually improve your with friends in the real

47、 interpersonal skills,especially your friends in the real interpersonal skills,especially your facial expressions and gestures.facial expressions and gestures.n nA net friendA net friend,who you do not know very well,who you do not know very well,may may deceive you without the fear of being discove

48、red.deceive you without the fear of being discovered.第23页/共29页多样否定多样否定n nNo,notNo,notn n否定副词否定副词否定副词否定副词 Never,hardly Never,hardly n n否定动词否定动词否定动词否定动词 fail,lack,have yet to,fail,lack,have yet to,比较级比较级 +thanthan（should know better thanshould know better than）,deprive,deprive of of n n否定主语否定主语否定主语否定主

49、语 Nobody,none of you;few,littleNobody,none of you;few,littlen n否定表语否定表语否定表语否定表语 /作状语作状语作状语作状语 Short/absent/devoid of Short/absent/devoid of n nfree from,far from,beyond,ignorant of,reluctant to,free from,far from,beyond,ignorant of,reluctant to,but for,withoutbut for,without第24页/共29页n nWe do We do n

50、otnot have any evidence.have any evidence.n nWe never have any evidence.n nWe have yet to get any evidence.n nWe fail to get any evidence.n nWe lack enough evidence.n nNone of us have any evidence.n nLittle evidence has been found.n nWe are devoid of evidence.n nShort of evidence,第25页/共29页n nYou You