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1、专题01生活态度兴趣爱好精神品格（人与自我） 2023年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句【读后续写】. （2023春广东江门高三校联考开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之 构成一篇完整的短文。When I was a child, my mother told my sister, who had a 10-inch very obvious scar （伤疤）on her arm, “Nancy, if you ignore the scar, other people will ignore it. It docs not mean they will n

2、ot notice it, but it means it will not matter to them if it doesnt matter to you.It never occurred to me that something like this would happen to my son years later. Sending a child off to college can certainly be stressful for concerned parents. It was 2018 that my son went off to college. He rarel

3、y contacted us. I couldnt help asking about other aspects, which sometimes made him complain that I didnt treat him as an adult.To be honest, my son is excellent. Some of my friends always tell me that they admire my sons characters and they hope their sons could have some of them.Unexpectedly, it w

4、as 4 oclock in the morning in 2020, when I received the phone call. lkThis is the emergency room calling and your son was just brought in with severe burns on his face, neck and arms. We have called for an aircraft and are going to fly him to the burn unit in Seattle. Seattle was 350 miles from his

5、college, so we knew immediately this was serious.The doctor described the reason, which caused （he burns. Al 6 am, my son and his friends decided to barbecue hamburgers in the courtyard of their apartment. When they lit the charcoal, it burst into flames because （hey had sprayed too much gasoline. T

6、he flames caught my sons shirt tail and shot from his waist to well over his head.Fortunately, one of the boys who was quick-minded grasped my son and rolled him on the grass. While it saved his life, it was not in shape to save him from severe burns and the terrible scars.After he recovered from th

7、e treatments, the doctors told him they would not do plastic surgery for 6 months because it takes that long fbr the skin to stop shrinking and wrinkling. what they had done. Although Mortys father was disappointed, he said, “You still have time to correct your wrongdoings?, Hearing this, they nodde

8、d immediately.They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week. Ben suggested to use the money earned to prepare enough lemons first and then reduce the price. They all agreed. When they restarted their business, they even stood a sign, saying, 4We send a cup of lemonade to customers who bought i

9、t last Saturday afternoon fbr free. They made over 50 cups of lemonade fbr a constant stream of customers with a low price and over 20 cups were for free. As you can imagine, they didnt get enough money fbr the camp. But they learned a valuable lesson that one should always be honest.【导语】本文以故事情节发展为线

10、索，讲述了 Morty, Ben和Fred三个孩子因为想去参加夏令营，在路边 摆摊卖柠檬水赚报名费。随着柠檬越来越少，他们打起了歪主意：往柠檬汁里兑水并提价。后来，Morty的 家人开心地来照顾生意。他的爸爸喝出了柠檬水的问题，不禁发出疑问。几个孩子沉默片刻，还是承认了 错误。在Morty爸爸的鼓励下，他们决定第二周弥补错误。随后，他们用赚到的钱购买了足量的柠檬，降 价，并主动声明给上周周六下午购买柠檬水的顾客免费送一杯柠檬水。可想而知，他们最终没有钱参加夏 令营，但是他们懂得了珍贵的一课：做人要保持诚信。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“Morly的父亲喝了一口柠檬水，皱起了眉头”可知

11、，第一段可描写Morty的爸爸发现了 柠檬水的问题后，几个孩子很尴尬地承认错误的场景，以及Morty爸爸建议他们怎么做。由第二段首句内容“他们决定下周改正他们的错误“可知，第二段可描写他们如何改正自己的错误。1 .续写线索：发现夏令营传单想参加摆柠檬水摊赚报名费柠檬水兑水被发现承认错误一 纠正错误感悟.词汇激活 行为类 纠正：correcl/rectify 建议：suggest/recommend 情绪类疑惑：Overwhelmed with confusion/fillcd with confusion尴尬地：awkwardly/cnibarrasscdly【点睛】高分句型 1 The mo

12、ment Morty heard his fathers doubt, he stood awkwardly, not sure what to say.（由 连词the moment引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 2We send a cup of lemonade to customers who bought it last Saturday afternoon for free.（由关系代词 who引导限制性定语从句）5. （2022吉林长春统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。Magen double-checked the words

13、on her spelling test. If she got 100 percent today, shed win her class First-Quarter Spelling Challenge and a brand-new dictionary that came with videos and other cool sluff. Plus, Ms. McCormack had promised to do a handstand （手像J 士）if anyone got a perfect score.Three more words to go. N-i-c-e-l-y.

14、Q-u-i-c-k-l-y. H-o-n-e-s-t-y. Wait! Shed spelled honesty, not honestly! She erased f and wrote 心before handing in her paper. Ms. McCormack graded the papers while the students were at rest.After a break, Magen hurried into the classroom, sitting in her seat nervouslyMs. McCormack walked to the front

15、 of the room and cleared her throat. Congratulations, Magen! You did it!” Then, as if she were an Olympic gymnast, Ms. McCormacks feet flipped into the air. The whole class erupted!Ms. McCormack presented Magen with her prize. A big smile spread across Magens face as she read the label on the box: T

16、o Magen Carter, for her perfect first-quarter score in spelling.“Everything OK?” Mom asked as Magen burst through the front door after school.“Everythings perfectMagen shouted, showing Mom her spelling test and prize.Mom hugged her. uWcll done, Magen”Magen scooped up （抱起）her cat. Can you spell nicel

17、y, Casper? And quickly and honestly, and. It suddenly occurred to her that she had misspelled the word. Rooted to the spot. Magen reflected on how she could tell the whole class she shouldnt have earned the prize at all. She dashed into her room and pulled out the test papei If I put the missing bac

18、k in, no one would ever know,“ she thought. Recalling the joyful moment, a mixture of guilt and unwillingness overwhelmed her.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式作答。Aware that there was something wrong with Magen, Mom knocked on the door and entered her room.The next day, arriving early at school, Magen pushed

19、 open the door of Ms. McCormacks office.【答案】 Aware that there was something wrong with Magen, Mom knocked on the door and entered her room. “Wheres your spelling test paper, sweetheart? Mom asked, gazing at her eagerly. Magen took out the paper and handed it unwillingly to her mom. When Mom spotted

20、“honesly”, Mom frowned, Probably you dont deserve the prize.After thinking for a while, she soon understood what she should do.The next day, arriving early at school, Magen pushed open the door of Ms. McCormacks office. Hands slightly trembling, Magen gave Ms. McCormack her test paper and the dictio

21、nary. Magen confessed her spelling mistake in the test, a pink flush spreading over her checks. see. Even though Ms. McCormack tried to contain her emotions, surprise registered on her face. Then she picked up a pen, crossed out the word “perfect“ and wrote “honest” instead before handing the prize

22、back to Magen. Magens jaw dropped. Ms. McCormack grinned. For honesty ”【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Magen在拼写测试中得了 100分，赢得班级第一季度的拼写挑战， 以及一本附有视频和其他很酷东西的全新词典。她的老师麦科马克还为她表演了倒立，她开心的回到家， 却发现自己试卷上的诚实的单词拼写错误，思考该怎么办。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“妈妈意识到Magen有点不对劲，便敲了敲门，走进了她的房间。”可知，第一段可描 写妈妈发现了 Magen的拼写错误，并告诉Magen不应该得到这个奖品。由第二段首句内

23、容“第二天，Magen早早来到学校，推开麦科马克办公室的门。”可知，第二段Magen向 她的老师承认拼写错误，归还词典，麦科马克因为Magen的诚实又把词典给了 Magen。2 .续写线索：妈妈发现拼写错误觉得Magen不应该得到奖品回应妈妈诚实的表现向老师承认 错误老师因为Magen诚实奖励词典.词汇激活 行为类.凝视：gaze at/peer at/stare at.拿出：take out/felch out.承认：confess/admit 情绪类.感到羞愧的：a pink flush spreading over her cheeks/feel shamefaced.惊 讶：surpr

24、ise/amazement【点睛】高分句型1. She soon understood what she should do.（由连接词what引导的宾语从句作understood 的宾语）高分句型 2. Even though Ms. McCormack tried to contain her emotions, surprise registered on her face.（由 even though引导让步状语从句）6. （2021秋山东德州高三校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。Mary waited anxiously for

25、 her turn in the empty dressing room. Never had she been so nervous before. This competition was of vital importance to her comeback. If I can win today,n she said to herself “I can dance on the national stage next month. Three months ago, her left arm was seriously injured in a car accident. After

26、the medical treatment, she began to recover slowly. She practiced over and over again in order to regain her dancing skills.“Hi, Mary,“ in rushed her friend Jessica. uHov is your arm? Is it going to influence your performance?”“I guess it can be tolerated ibr I am to win the match. said Mary with a

27、determined look.“Admirable! But I hear that a girl called Linda is really gifted and strong. She can be your real well-matched competitor. Come on!After Jessica left, Mary decided to practice her most difficult spin （旋转）.“If 1 dont try harder, I wont grasp this chance? She thought. But her arm began

28、 to hurt, making her worried. t4Mary, what makes you think you have a chance tonight? she said to herself. After the pain was gone, she continued to warm up.A slim girl hurried in and put down an equipment bag on the chair. Then, she took out her dance dress quickly and put it on skillfiiliy. Seeing

29、 Mary, she smiled politely and said Hi, Im Linda. I am the next one to you! Mary nodded in reply but felt uncomfortable. uThis is just my competitor. Because of her, I may lose tonight. Her mind was wandering when Linda let out a scream, “Oh, God, I cant find my music tape!” Linda searched her bag b

30、ut in vain. It may be missing on the way. With these words, she then rushed out.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda pul her bag.Paragraph 2:Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beati

31、ng faster and faster.答案Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag. She went over and then opened the box to find Lindas tape was just inside. At that time, she was in a dilemma, a voice inside her saying “If【hide it, I will win the competition/ But on a second

32、 thought, she changed her mind. She placed it on the chair carefully, leaving a note reading “Take it easy. Wc arc the best!”Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster. She kept reminding herself UI have been practicing fbr so long, and I will certainl

33、y make it.” But the serious pain in her arm came again when she was performing the most difficult spin. She fell down on the stage. At that moment, Linda came back in low spirits. To her surprise and relief she saw the tape and Marys note. With Marys kindness and encouragement, Linda finished her pe

34、rformance calmly and skillfully. Though Mary lost the match, she won the dignity and walked away a true hero.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了舞蹈表演参赛者Mary在赛前发生的故事，Mary赛前左臂受伤， 刚刚康复，很想赢得比赛，正在她紧张准备参赛的时候，竞争对手却找不到音乐磁带。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“突然，Mary看到Linda放包的椅子下面有一个黑盒子。”可知，第一段可描写Mary陷 入告不告诉Linda的两难境地，经过内心抉择，最后她选择告诉Linda。由第二

35、段首句内容“听到她的名字，Mary走上舞台，心跳得越来越快。”可知，第二段可描写Mary虽然 之前努力练习，但手臂上的伤让她比赛失利，Linda看到了 Mary的便条，赢得比赛，Mary虽败犹荣。2 .续写线索：Mary内心抉择告知Linda音乐磁带被找到Mary紧张参加比赛Mary因伤痛败北Linda胜出Mary虽败犹荣.词汇激活行为类打开：open/unfold看见：see/spot完成：finish/complctc情绪类心情低落：in low spirits/feel down惊讶：surprise/amazement点睛）高分句型 1. She went over and then

36、opened the box to find Lindas tape was just inside.（运用 T 省略 that的宾语从句）高分句型 2. Though Mary lost the match, she won （he dignity and walked away a true hero.（运用 T Though 引导 的让步状语从句）7. （2020春全国高三假期作业）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“Daily Star, sir“，called a thin boy with a bundle of papers under his arm.

37、 He was ragged, tired and hungry.Passing a well-dressed officer, he called again holding a paper up with his right hand, “Daily Star, sir. Only eight taka, sir. sir . sir but the officer went on without saying a word. Little Rafia had been up and down the street crying, lfcDaily Star until his voice

38、 was almost gone. There were still twenty papers under his arm. An unlucky day!” sighed Rafiq. The shops would soon close, and all the people would go home. He would have to go home too, carrying the papers instead of money. It was a hard job. He had hoped to sell more papers tonight than usual. He

39、had longed to have more money tonight to buy a cake for his mother and some seed for his favourite bird Bulbul which his father had given him shortly before he died. He knew his mother had worked hard all day cooking, washing and cleaning for Mrs. Zaman. He broke down as he thought of his failure (o

40、 sell his papers. He had spent all the money that both he and his mother had to buy them. It was much more (han he could bear.“Hello, Rafiq. Havent you sold your papers yet? I sold mine two hours ago.”Rafiq looked up. It was Sardul, another newsboy.How many do you have left, Rafiq?”“Twenty.”“Why? Th

41、ats more than a hundred sixty!”Yes”, said Rafiq, “And I cant sell them. Nobody wants papers tonight.Tears began to flow from his deep black eyes.“Rafiq,“ said Sardul as he drew nearer to him so that no one would hear what he was going to say.Til tell you how I did it.”“How? Do tell me.”“You must run

42、 quickly up the street and shout, kHot news, hot news. Bomb bursting in Rangpur. Many died?a trick of the tradc.Rafiq was astonished, 4lBut Sardul, that its not in the paper at all! Thats a“No, you softy, nobody will catch you. Just run away quickly before they have time to see, and you will sell ou

43、t and get your money. 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用卜.划线标出你所使用的关键词。Paragraph 1:Rafiq looked down; it was a new idea to him.Paragraph 2:That afternoon as usual Rafiq went to (he office for his papers.答案Rafiq looked down; it was a new idea to him. There was

44、a severe struggle to feed his mother, his bird and something nice to eat in one side; and on the other side a lie. He looked up and thought: Tell a lie fbr this? Never!” With tired legs, but true heart, he carried his papers home. His mother was waiting for him. who said nothing about (he money she

45、so much needed. Rafiq told her all about Sardufs tricks. She (old him how his father had always tried, even when it was hard to do the right.That afternoon as usual Rafiq went to the office fbr his papers. The boys were crowding round Sardul, who was boasting that he sold six dozen the day before. S

46、ardul added that Rafiq lost money because he would not tell a lie. While they were pushing Rafiq and laughing at him, a gentleman heard it, and that was enough for him. Mr. Iskandar, a businessman who valued honesty most, said to Rafiq: Yes, youre just the boy I am looking fbr.” Rafiq took his new j

47、ob! He lost the sale of twenty papers but he got a well-paid job instead.【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。【详解】1.核心内容文本主要内容为：一个衣衫褴褛的小男孩Rafiq用家里有限的钱买了报纸沿街叫卖，想帮妈妈贴补家用。尽 管他卖力地吆喝却生意惨谈。与之相反，同行Sardul每次都能很快把报纸销售一空。Sardul告诉他卖光报 纸的窍门是编造一些骇人的新闻吸引路人。2.写作思路故事总体的发展应该是Rafiq得知Sardul的销售秘诀后，内心的激烈斗争，并最终作出了正确的选择。他坚 守诚信为他带来了积极的影响，很可能因此得到

48、好的回报，比如他人的赏识。续写第一段：Rafiq得知通过 编造惊人的谎言来快速卖光报纸的诀窍之后内心进行了激烈的斗争，最后他决定坚守自己的诚信。回家后, 妈妈支持他的选择。续写第二段。第二天，Rafiq又去报馆买报纸上街售卖。Sardul正和其他报童吹嘘自己 的业绩，并嘲笑Rafiq不懂变通，连说谎都不会。这番话让一个看重诚信的商人听到了，因此为诚实的Rafiq 提供了工作等。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当 的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用 的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【范文解析】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：severe struggle, wail for, laugh al等高级 词汇；Sardul added that Rafiq lost money because he would not tell a lie 原因状语从句；Mr. Iskandar, a businessman who valued honesty most, said to Rafiq: Yes, youre just the boy 1 am looking fbr.”定语从句等高级