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1、专题04个人经历与成长（人与自我）2023年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句【读后续写】1.（2023福建漳州统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇字数 的短文。On a Friday evening in December, two weeks before Christinas, I lost my job. I hadnt seen it coming. I was excited for the weekend, when my daughter, Kristil, then 12, and I planned to get our Christ

2、mas tree. Then I listened to my voicemail. 4Were sorry, but your work assignment has ended as of today. My heart sank.My paycheck was survival, I did everything I could to give Kristil a good life, but there were some things my love couldnt fix, The next day as we searched for our tree, I struggled

3、to be cheerful as I eyed the Christmas tree prices. Kristil noticed I was worried and I told her I had lost my job. She wanted to give me （he $100 that Grandma gave her, but I refused.Monday morning, I dropped Kristil at school and set off on my money-making pursuits. I headed to the pawnshop （当铺）wi

4、th a gold ring my mother had given me, and they gave me $70. Next was the antiques store. I sold six Precious Moments statuettes for $150.1 ended the day $220 richer.Over the next week, I furiously （猛烈地）applied for jobs as my bank account grew smaller. I felt as if the world was closing in on me. On

5、 a weekend afternoon, I dropped Kristil in a wealthy gated community for a birthday party. I drove home defeated.Back at home, I glanced out the window. It had been snowing all morning. I noticed a small woman struggling to open her car door against the wind. As she got out, I realized it was my old

6、 professor, Sister Esther. I hadnt seen her since wed met for lunch three months ago. Td first met Sister Esther 1（） years earlier, when I was her student at Edgewood College. After I graduated, Sister Esther kept in touch, meeting me for lunch every few months. I had grown to love her like family.

7、I rushed to the front of my building. 4tWhat arc you doing out in this weather? 1 asked as wc hugged.注意：（1）续写词数应为150左右;注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One day my teacher had me stay after school to have a talk with her.That was the motivation that I needed to improve my grades.【答案 J One possibl

8、e version:One day my teacher had me stay after school to have a talk with her. As I stepped up to her huge wooden desk, I could feel myself getting more and more nen-ous, surely knowing that she would have a talk with me about getting my grades up. Looking up, smiling, Ms. Zazoski started speaking e

9、mpathetically. This isnt the end of the world. I know what you are going through at home, and if you need any support, I am here fbr you, always. she said, in the most kind tone. t4Thank you so much. I said as she hugged me, warmth and love like my mother melting in my whole body.That was the motiva

10、tion that / needed to improve tny grades. Walking out of her office, I was extremely relieved, as though a 1(X)0 pound weight was lifted off my shoulders. It wanned my heart to know that even with obstacles in my way, there is always support nearby to help you through. I talked to all of my teachers

11、 and got all the missing work. By far, my 7th grade English teacher was the sweetest and most understanding woman that I had ever met; and now I am no longer afraid to ask for help or support.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在上七年级的时候，妈妈得了乳腺癌，受到了打击，但是在 家人，朋友和老师的帮助下顺利度过难关。然而，就在作者决定按时完成作业和学习时，照顾妈妈和帮助 奶奶做饭等让作者分心，作者成

12、绩开始下降，作者自知在学校表现不好，幸亏有老师们的帮助，尤其是遇 到了最支持自己的英语老师。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容一天放学后，老师让我留下来和她谈谈。”可知，第一段可描写作者的英语老师找作者 谈话，开导作者，作者很感激。由第二段首句内容“这就是我提高成绩所需要的动力。”可知，第二段可描写作者找到了提高成绩的动力， 如释重负，并且找回所有丢失的作业。2 .续写线索：走向老师老师开导感谢如释重负重新振作找回作业感悟.词汇激活行为类.走近:step up to/walk up to .谈话：have a talk with / have a conversation with.拥抱：

13、hug/ embrace情绪类.感谢：thank sb/show ones gratitude to sb./bc grateful to sb. .善解人意的：understanding /considerate点睛高分句型 1. As I stepped up to her huge wooden desk, I could feel myself getting more and more nervous, surely knowing that she would have a talk with me about getting my grades up.（由从属连词 as 弓I 导

14、的时 间状语从句和that引导的宾语从句）高分句型 2. I know what you are going through at home, and if you need any support, I am here for you, always. she said, in the most kind （one.（由连接代词what引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）高分句型 3|. By far, my 7th grade English teacher was the sweetest and most understanding woman that I had ever me

15、t; and now I am no longer afraid to ask for help or support.（由关系代词 that 引导的限制性定语从句）5.（2023春湖北高三校联考开学考试）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。When Aiden asked me to accompany him on a camping trip to the mountains, I envisioned a log cabin with a crackling fireplace, hot cocoa, and bunk beds. Imagine how my

16、rustic, yet comfortable image of camping became a nightmare when Aiden and his older brother, Lebron, showed up with a truck filled with camping supplies-tents, rolled-up sleeping bags, and canteens! I did pack a backpack, as instructed, but I had no idea we were going on sunqval training!Lebron, ev

17、er so efficient, had a schedule to keep, and he hurried me to get in so we could leave the city hustle and bustle behind us. Ahead, the mountains loomed bigger than I had remembered them: the trees were larger, and (he environment was much more dangerous. At least the weather was amazing cotton-cand

18、y clouds dotted the deep blue sky.At the trailhead, Lebron strapped a sleeping bag onto my pack and lectured Aiden and me about hiking etiquette.The first part of the trail looked more like a wooded road that led up the mountains than a hiking path. Soon, the path became narrower and steeper, forcin

19、g me to focus on the task at hand and to talk less. As we gained elevation, we moved above the tree line, and I could see the trail zigzagging up the mountain.4tIt looks closer than it is,“ Lebron said, reading my facial cues. This is the most difficult part. watch the trail, not the view. Loose roc

20、ks and tree roots make the trail dangerous, and we have no shade.”Finally, we reached the summit. My legs aching, I dropped my pack and groaned.“No time to rest,“ Lebron said, looking up at the sky. The weather had been warm all day, and it felt good to relax in the cool breeze. The weather up here

21、changes quickly, and that cool air means a storm is brewing. Wc need to set up camp.” 注意：1 .词数150左右;.请按如下格式在答题纸上作答。I thought he was kidding, but Lebron was quite serious.Just as quickly as the storm came rushing in, it stopped, allowing us to exit the tent.【答案 J I thought he was kidding, but Lebron

22、was quite serious. He and Aiden worked expertly, while I stood around and pretended to help, thunder rumbling in the distance. We set up near a boulder outcropping, but the wind, thunder, and lightning were relentless. As the storm rolled in with a vengeance, we took cover inside. Lebron, sensing th

23、at I was scared, reached in his backpack for some crackers and peanut butter. Slowly, but methodically, he spread (he peanut butter and told stories about his camping adventures. Each time lightning lit up the tent and the thunder echoed, I cringed. uThis is just a typical summer storm theyre short

24、lived, but intense,Lebron stated. “The campsite might get a bit muddy, but whats the fun in camping if you cant get dirty! At least the rain will keep the bears away,“ he said with a smile.Just as quickly as the storm came rushing in. it stopped, allowing us to exit the tent. The view was stunning 一

25、 I could see fbr miles, and the rain left a fresh scent of pine and an earthy smell of soil. As darkness set in, 1 marveled at the multitude of stars in the night sky. I wont lie I was yearning fbr a hot shower and a soft bed, but as I gazed upward at the Milky Way, I knew this was an adventure I wo

26、uld never forget.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者跟着艾登和他的哥哥勒布朗一起去露营冒险，一路艰辛，最 终到达了山顶，就在作者想要放松休息一下时，勒布朗却告诉她冷空气意味着风暴正在酝酿。他们需要马 上搭帐篷。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我以为他在开玩笑，但勒布朗是认真的。”可知，第一段可描写他们开始搭帐篷和暴风 雨来临后的事情。由第二段首句内容“就像暴风雨来的一样快，它停了，让我们可以离开帐篷。”可知，第二段可描写暴风雨 停息后作者所见所想。2 .续写线索：开始搭帐篷帐篷里躲雨欣赏雨后美景感慨万千.词汇激活 行为类 认为，觉得：think/guess 帮助

27、：help/aid/giveahand躲藏，隐蔽：take cover/find shelter停止，结束：stop/cease情绪类认真的，严肃的：serious/solemn极有魅力的，绝妙的：stunning/wonderful/beautiful【点睛】高分句型1 I thought he was kidding, but Lebron was quite serious.（运用了省略连词that的宾语从句） 高分句型 2 He and Aiden worked expertly, while I stood around and pretended to help, thunder

28、rumbling in the distance4运用了 while引导时间状语从句和独立主格结构作伴随状语）高分句型 3 As darkness set in, 1 marveled at the multitude of stars in the night sky.（运用 了 as 引导时间状语从 句）6. （2023湖北校联考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的 短文。“Whal will we be singing for the contest this year? a student from my high school choir ask

29、ed eagerly.I worried about this moment. was thinking,M I said, “maybe we would skip the contest and just work hard on the concerts this year.”“NO!” the kids protested.“Wcvc got to go to the contest“Its a tradition!”Indeed, award plaques （牌匾）lined the front wall of the music room from the past succes

30、ses of large, talented classes. But a change in educational policies, with an emphasis on academics had reduced my choir to a mere thirty-two young, inexperienced kids who could sing only a simple melody.“Ill have to think about it,“ I said, hoping their enthusiasm would die ofTin a couple of weeks.

31、 Quite on the contrary, more determined, they begged and insisted every day. To protect their pride, I couldnt tell them they werent good enough. But I wasnt a miracle worker. And so I hesitated about this dilemma.Finally one morning I stepped into class. lkLook at the clock! I demanded. 4tWcvc wast

32、ed two fiill minutes because some of you dont have your music ready. If wc arc entering the contest” The rest of my sentence was lost in cheers of delight and applause.“From now on J I continued when the noise weakened, you will find the days lesson plan on the board.Make full preparations for each

33、class and follow my instructions absolutely. You will work much harder than youve ever worked in any class before. And if one of these nilcs is broken, we will not go to the contcst.I was certain they would fail to keep this contract, and no one would be embarrassed. But the kids remained focused, f

34、ollowing the rules strictly. Each morning witnessed their diligence: working on sight-reading, learning musical terms, rehearsing, etc. Their progress was so remarkable that even I began believing in their dream.When ihe contest day finally arrived, (he kids fell ready and confldenl to take on the w

35、orld! Their eyes, however, opened wide when the Madison choir inarched in seventy-five members strong. My kidsjaws dropped when 125 students from King School arrived. Two private schools came with fifty members each, and finally forty-five members from Milwaukee School of Art.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下

36、格式作答。Paragraph 1：Then came the turn for my choir.Paragraph 2：After all the choirs had performed, we waited in our assigned room for the results.【答案】One sample writing:Then came the turn for my choir. Extremely confident, they mounted on the stage as we rehearsed. uSmile!,I mouthed. I took a deep bre

37、ath and we began. Having performed masterfully, we finished our three songs, and I wanted to scream at the top of my lungs, UYOU DID IT!” What delighted me more was that they ftilly enjoyed their performance without getting panicked, winning storms of cheers and applause. My heart swelled with pride

38、 for this little group as they realized their dream with the same bravery they had shown from day one.After all the choirs had performed, we waited in our assigned room for the results. Sensing their worries about the group size. I reassured them: it was the performance rather than the size that mat

39、tered and most importantly, we enjoyed it. Time licking, kids waited anxiously. Eventually, there came the news that we got the highest marks of all. All kids were screaming and embracing. Warm tears wetting my cheeks, I stood frozen, staring at the list in disbelief. It was a blessing that I was su

40、rrounded by kids who had a dream, who refused to give up, who taught me never to doubt the possibility of success for any student ever again.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者带领的一个小合唱团经过坚持不懈地学习和苦练，最终在比 赛中脱颖而出，实现了梦想。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“然后轮到我的合唱团登场了。“可知，第一段可描写合唱团出色完成表演，赢得观众喜 爱和认可，以及作者对学生表演的感受。由第二段首句内容“所有合唱团表演后，我们在指

41、定房间等待结果”可知，第二段可描写学生等待结果过程 中的焦急和担忧，合唱团获得第一名后的反应以及作者对整个事件的感悟。2 .续写线索：学生登台一学生出色完成表演一赢得欢呼和掌声一等待比赛结果一等待过程中的焦急 和担忧合唱团实现梦想获得第一名作者的感悟.词汇激活 行为类 开始：began/start 保证：reassure/guarantee/ensure 拒绝：refuse/rejecl 情绪类感到恐慌：get panicked/feel scared焦急地：anxiously/worricdly点睛【高分句型 1 What delighted nic more was that they f

42、ully enjoyed their performance without getting panicked, winning storms of cheers and applause.（由连接词what引导主语从句，由连接词that引导表语从句） 高分句型 2 It was a blessing that I was surrounded by kids who had a dream, who refused to give up, who taught me never to doubt the possibility of success for any student ever

43、again.（运用 了 it 作形式主语，that 弓| 导从 句作真正的主语；由关系代词who引导定语从句）7. （2023河北唐山统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。Throughout life, we come across many people who impact us in a way. Their impact can be fbr a day or for a lifetime. Its common not to recognize the impact someone has left on you until a ce

44、rtain moment. The person who left a great impact on me is my dad.Three months after turning fourteen, my life was great. I was getting settled into a high school; my grades were already starting off greatly and I was making friends.One day as I came home from school, I walked into the living room, f

45、inding my mom and dad talking. My parents turned to me and told me to sit down because there was something important they had to tell me. I soon found out that my dads liver was failing and he needed an immediate transplant. I was shocked and confused because my dad seemed fine. He was working and n

46、ever looked sick. My parents told me not to worry because everything would be fine. Four months had passed and my dad still had not received a new liver ; he was progressively getting worse. His body seemed to be getting weaker, but he constantly said he was fine.It was getting hard for my family an

47、d me. My dad had to quit his job leaving my mom to be the only provider. I had to take on the responsibility of cleaning the house, cooking meals and checking on my dad while my mom was at work. I had to cut back on hanging with my friends because my dad was beginning to go in and out of the hospita

48、l. My focus fbr school was starting to slip. So were my grades. Two nights before my school spring break, my mom received a call from the hospital that my dad had been in a car accident and that he was in hospital. Surprisingly, my dad hadnt received a scratch on him. Then next night my mom received

49、 a call from the doctor stating （hat there was a liver that matched my dads body and that he needed to get to the hospital immediately. 注意： 1 .续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如卜.格式在相应位置作答。My parents and I rushed to the hospital.I had to take on so many responsibilities at home.【答案】 My parents and I rushed to the hospital. After various examina