公开课：应用文写作之建议信.ppt

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1、课程名称：课程名称：应用文写作之建议信应用文写作之建议信复习内容：建议信基础写作复习内容：建议信基础写作书面表达（满分书面表达（满分2525分分)假设你是李华，你的朋友假设你是李华，你的朋友MikeMike与父母一道来到中国。他与父母一道来到中国。他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：他回一封邮件。要点如下：1.1.邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。2.2.提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说

2、汉语，多注意电提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音等视节目主持人的发音等3 3祝愿他学习取得进步。祝愿他学习取得进步。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右左右2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。一、欣赏与学习（见巩固练习一、欣赏与学习（见巩固练习 第一题）第一题）Outline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:第一段：第二段：第三段：nDear Mike,nI am glad to receive your email asking for

3、my advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem.nHere is my advice for improving your Chinese.Firstly,it is important to speak Chinese more,both in and out of class.Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese.I think the more you speak,the better your Chinese

4、will be.Secondly,it should be a great idea to pay more attention to TV hosts when you are watching TV at home.Im sure you will make great progress sooner or later.nIn conclusion,I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you.Wish you every success with your studies.nYours Faithfully,nLi HuaA Letter of

5、 AdviceOutline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:第一段：第二段：第三段：Raise the problemAdviceWishesFirst personPresent tenseLetterDear Mike,I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem.Here is my advice for improving

6、 your Chinese.Firstly,it is important to speak Chinese more,both in and out of class.Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese.I think the more you speak,the better your Chinese will be.Secondly,it should be a great idea to pay more attention to TV hosts when you are watching TV a

7、t home.Im sure you will make great progress sooner or later.In conclusion,I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you.Wish you every success with your studies.Yours Faithfully,Li HuaA Letter of AdviceUseful expressions:n1.I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on.n2.Here is my advice

8、for n3.it is important to do sth.n4.the more,the better.n5.it should be a great idea to do sth.n6.Im sure you will make great progress.n7.I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you.n8.Firstly,.Secondly,.In conclusion,.Learn to make sentences.（见巩固练习（见巩固练习 第二题）第二题）n1.我收到你的来信询问我关于学习压力的问题，我深感遗憾。n（Iams

9、orryto.）n_n2.劳逸结合很重要。（combinewith）n_n3.强烈建议你保持均衡的饮食习惯。（keepabalanceddiet）n_n4.适当的户外运动是一个好主意。（outdooractivities）n_n5.你吃的健康食品越多，你的身体就会越好。n_Do you know any other useful expressions?I am sorry to receive your letter asking for my advice on pressure.It is important to combine study with play.I strongly a

10、dvise you to keep a balanced diet.It should be a great idea to do proper outdoor activities.The more healthy food you eat,the better health you will have.For the beginning1.I am writing to express my views concerning2.I am writing to share with you my opinion aboutFor the main body1.I strongly advis

11、e/suggest that you should because2.If I were you,I would For the ending1.I hope my advice can be of some help to you.2.I am looking forward to your good news.Useful Sentences 假假设设你你是是李李华华，你你的的笔笔友友TonyTony写写信信告告诉诉你你他他最最近近在在学学习习中中的的一一些些困困难难。他他感感到到学学习习压压力力大大，正正常常生生活活也也受受到到影影响响，如如睡睡眠眠不不足足，身身体体也也开开始始亮亮起起

12、了了红红灯灯。请请你你给给他他写写一一封封信信，给他提供帮助。给他提供帮助。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右左右2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。Learn write a letter of advice.（见巩固练习（见巩固练习 第三题）第三题）Outline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:第一段：第二段：第三段：Raise the problemAdviceWishesFirst personPresent tenseLetter Para 1.Rais

13、e the problem问题问题1：_问题问题2：_Para 2.Advice on how to deal with pressure.建议建议1：_建议建议2：_建议建议3：_ Para 3.Wishes_have some sleeping problems have a bad healthIt is important to combine study with play.I strongly advise you to keep a balanced diet.It should be a great idea to do proper outdoor activities.I

14、sincerely hope my suggestion will help you.别别忘了忘了连连接接词词：Firstly,.Secondly,.In conclusion,.参考范文：参考范文：Dear Tony,I am sorry to receive your letter asking for my advice on study pressure.You have some sleeping problems and a bad health,which have a bad effect on your study.Here is my advice.Firstly,it i

15、s important to combine study with play.Secondly,I strongly advise you to keep a balanced diet.The more healthy food you eat,the better your health you will have.Finally,it should be a great idea to do proper outdoor activities.I am sure you will improve your problems if you accept my advice.In conclusion,I hope my suggestions will help you.Wish you every success with your study.Yours,Li HuaThank you!