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1、英语书面表达之漫画写作英语书面表达之漫画写作2010年江苏高考作文新增图画型作年江苏高考作文新增图画型作文，这种题型更能考查学生的分析问题文，这种题型更能考查学生的分析问题的能力，因此深受命题者的青睐。考生的能力，因此深受命题者的青睐。考生应注意认真审题，一旦审题有所偏颇，应注意认真审题，一旦审题有所偏颇，不容易得到高分。此类作文首先要描述不容易得到高分。此类作文首先要描述图画，然后介绍图画背后所反映的问题，图画，然后介绍图画背后所反映的问题，最后联系实际发表自己的观点。最后联系实际发表自己的观点。漫画作文（议论类）漫画作文（议论类）攻略：读图，解意，谋篇攻略：读图，解意，谋篇1.读图读图1）

2、.漫画的题目漫画的题目眼睛眼睛2）.漫画的画面漫画的画面细节细节3）.漫画的文字漫画的文字观点观点4）.漫画的夸张漫画的夸张寓意寓意2.解意解意1）.辨明褒贬，找准角度辨明褒贬，找准角度）.联系生活，明晰主旨联系生活，明晰主旨注意注意:文字说明部分往往含有重文字说明部分往往含有重要信息要信息(clues)，切记要认真阅读！，切记要认真阅读！3.谋篇（谋篇（3parts:）1)describethepicture2)interpretitsmeaning3)giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenonSome usefull sentence structures:Par

3、t 1 Describe the pictureThe picture is talking about/showsThe picture shows a common phenomenon.The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.In the picture,there are/is(are)doingThe picture above is about Lets look at the picture above/first.Part 2 Interpret the pictureIt seems very ridiculous th

4、atHowever,this kind of story is performed everywhere.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection ofThe picture indicate that weNowadays,it is a common phenomenon thatThis is a satirical(讽刺的讽刺的)cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon amongPart 3 Give your opinionsI think/beli

5、eve thatAs far as Im concerned,In my opinion,From my point of view,shouldIt is better/advisable toI consider it necessaryPartCPolishupyourarticle!1.Touselinkingwordsifnecessary表示平行、对等或选择关系表示平行、对等或选择关系and,aswellas,togetherwith,notonlybutalso.表示转折关系表示转折关系but,however,inspiteof,although,otherwise,while表

6、示对比关系表示对比关系onthecontrary,insteadof,ononehandontheotherhand.表示因果关系表示因果关系so,therefore,asaresult(of),because,owingto,dueto,thanksto.表示时间顺序关系表示时间顺序关系first,second,then,next,finally,foronething.foranother,intheend,表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关系besides,whatsmore,inaddition,worsestill,aboveall表示解释、说明关系表示解释、说明关系suchas,f

7、orexample,forinstance,inotherwords,andsoon表示结论表示结论inshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,onthewhole,inconclusion2.Tousecomplicatedstructuresifpossible PartD注意注意1.保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确体裁：议论文体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称人称：第三人称.避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误1)误解图意误解图意大忌！大忌！2)企图幽默企图幽默可笑！可笑！3)不明寓意不明寓意

8、白写！白写！4)中心不明中心不明混乱！混乱！.控制字数（没话说控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）太啰唆）.结尾要精辟！结尾要精辟！Conclusion:一篇好的英语漫画作文一篇好的英语漫画作文:仔细审题仔细审题,准确立义准确立义,规范行文规范行文,整洁书写整洁书写注意：注意：1）仔细品味图中文字的幽默、）仔细品味图中文字的幽默、无奈，要适当发挥想象，不要做简单无奈，要适当发挥想象，不要做简单描述。描述。2）词数）词数150左右。左右。To most of the parents,it is no easy job to keep their children away from the person

9、al computer.Nearly all parents are thinking of the most effective ways to make the Internet safer for their children.Their solutions are as follows.Some of them think advanced hardware can be equipped into computers for network security while some parents prefer security software available on the In

10、ternetIf these dont work,they will cover the screen with underwear to protect their children from harmful information.Nowadays it is well known that teenager network security has become so serious that the whole society focuses on it.In my opinion，much attention should be paid to this issue.As paren

11、ts,they are supposed to communicate with their children to help them make good use of the Internet with their study.Additionally,it is our governments responsibilities to take actions to create a greener Internet environment.As for ourselves,we should build up strong self-awareness.It is important f

12、or us to concentrate on the useful information rather than computer games and so on.If only I could keep a real bird!下图描绘的是现在人类面临的窘境。请你根据对下图描绘的是现在人类面临的窘境。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述这下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述这种现象，说明其产生的原因及后果，并发表你的种现象，说明其产生的原因及后果，并发表你的看法。看法。Nowadays,human beings are faced with an embarrassin

13、g situation.In the cartoon,we can see a man talking to a paper bird kept in his cage and beside him is a vast desert dotted with endless tree roots.Obviously,birds have lost their homes as people have cut down all the trees.As a result,humans have lost their animal friends.The scene may seem ridicul

14、ous and unbelievable to us,but it may become a reality in the future if we go on developing economy regardless of thedamage caused to the environment.Now in some places,trees have been cut down without limits.Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years and many species w

15、ill die out.It is really a terrible thing.Therefore,we should realize the importance of environmental protection and live in harmony with our animal friends.随着人民生活水平的提高，人们愈发关注食品质量安全。随着人民生活水平的提高，人们愈发关注食品质量安全。“三鹿三鹿”奶粉事件引起人们广泛关注：商家的社会责任感奶粉事件引起人们广泛关注：商家的社会责任感与企业道德，人们健康的相关法律保证。与企业道德，人们健康的相关法律保证。根据下图写一篇根据

16、下图写一篇150词左右的短文。可以切合题意有所发词左右的短文。可以切合题意有所发挥。短文首句已给出，不记入总词数。挥。短文首句已给出，不记入总词数。As we can see from the cartoon,manufacturers,milk stations,milk cows and even grass are trying in vain to make excuses for the misconduct.After careful consideration,we come to realize that the drawer wishes to call our attent

17、ion to the lack of social responsibility and business ethics.With the change of peoples ideology,people take it for granted that we make a fortune.Driven by the pursuit of profit,some manufacturers go to extremes to make money by providingthe customers with fake or inferior products.A case in point

18、is“Sanlu milk powder”,which is confirmed to contain a poisonous chemical.As a result,numerous innocent infants become the victims of the milk food.In the long run,such illegal acts not only damage the dairy industry,but the credibility of the social mechanism.To my mind,it is high time we took effec

19、tive measures to prevent such crime from happening again.It is advisable to pass related laws to punishwhoever produces poisonous food.Only in this way can we establish a harmonious society where manufactures take up more social responsibility and credibility and people enjoy healthy food.2010年年1月份，

20、上海同济、华师大、华东理工、上外和东华月份，上海同济、华师大、华东理工、上外和东华等等6所高校，在自主招生的理科考试中无一例外地选择了放所高校，在自主招生的理科考试中无一例外地选择了放弃考语文。根据这一现象结合下图谈谈你的看法。弃考语文。根据这一现象结合下图谈谈你的看法。提示：提示：1)英语是国际交流的工具英语是国际交流的工具2）世界上学汉语的的人越）世界上学汉语的的人越来越多来越多3）母语的重要）母语的重要Recently,six universities in Shanghai made English language compulsory in their joint exams,an

21、d left out Chinese.There is no doubt that the English language is a very important medium of education.But that is no reason why we should forget the importance of our mother tongue and traditions and culture.It is the Chinese language that makes China a nation.Once we have a thought that our mother

22、 tongue is not important,ournation will be in danger.With the development of China,Chinese has become a worldwide language.Many people in the world start to learn Chinese.Being the Chinese,we should feel proud of our mother tongue.Chinese is one of the oldest languages in the world.You should love y

23、our mother language if you want to love your nation.Therefore,we should view our mother tongue as a necessity.Only through our own language can our culture find glory it truly deserves.下下图图反映的是网反映的是网络时络时代所出代所出现现的一种的一种问题问题，有些孩子沉溺，有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽于网上交流而忽视视了与父母的沟通。了与父母的沟通。请请你根据你根据对该对该漫画的漫画的理解用英理解用英语语写一篇短文

24、。写一篇短文。该该文文应应包含以下要点：包含以下要点：1该漫画告该漫画告诉了我们什么；诉了我们什么；2你对此现你对此现象的看法象的看法3我们该如何主我们该如何主动和父母亲沟动和父母亲沟通。通。漫画漫画caricatureModern technology has many advantages.While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet,we also experience some new problems.This caricature describes one of them.It shows that the teen

25、age boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his parent.I think it might be common,but it is totally unacceptable.Nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how easy or interesting it is for us to chat with people from across the world on the Internet.In most

26、Chinese families,there is only one child.Obviously,we are the centre of our parents attention.Many parents are willing to do anything to make sure that we live a good life.It is understandable that they want to know whats happening to us,what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with ou

27、r studies.I think we should let them know us well.For example,we can tell them whats going on in school when we have dinner or turn to them for advice when we have problems.In that way,Im sure the relationship between us and our parents will become better and better.请请根据下列表格中所提供的材料，根据下列表格中所提供的材料，结结合

28、你的生活合你的生活经历经历，展开想，展开想象，以学生的身份用英象，以学生的身份用英语语写一篇短文。写一篇短文。有形的有形的钥钥匙匙无形的无形的钥钥匙匙生活中必生活中必不可少，不可少，拥拥有它方便、有它方便、快捷，快捷，丢丢失失了会增加了会增加烦烦恼恼。学学习习、成、成长长中中同同样样重要，比重要，比如如（至少三点）（至少三点）In a word,（至少两点）（至少两点）We all have some keys in life,some visible and others invisible.Visible keys play an important part in our life,ma

29、king our life convenient and comfortable.If we lose them by accident,we tend to get into a mess.The same is true of invisible keys in the course of our study and growth.Teachers guidance is of great benefit to our gaining knowledge.Parents words of comfort and encouragement help us build up confiden

30、ce.With the help of our friends,were likely to overcome difficulty and succeed.We feel greatly honored to have access to these invisible keys,which are priceless gifts in our daily life.In a word,a key is to a man what water is to fish.Whether the keys are visible or invisible,they are well worth tr

31、easuring.Only by making full use of them can we open the door of success and make great contributions to our society.左图描绘的是某家心理诊疗所医生正向病人介绍治左图描绘的是某家心理诊疗所医生正向病人介绍治病良方的漫画。请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语病良方的漫画。请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。“In just six hours you will be cured of your fear of snakes,heights

32、,small spaces and commitment.”As we can see from the picture,a person was persuaded into a small cage by the two men down.The cage,with some snakes inside,was high up on four columns.He was told that he would be cured of his fear of snakes,heights,small spaces and commitment in just six hours in tha

33、t way.According to my understanding,the picture is describing a person with some mental disability.He prefers to stay in large spaces with others company.The two men down are verygood doctors,trying to help cure the person of his illnesses.Instead of giving him some medicine,they had their own way o

34、f treating this patient,having him face his mental problems directly.The doctors think it more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them.I think life is full of ups and downs.One cant step away from challenges or avoid responsibility.On the contrary,we should face them with courage and wisdom.