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3、k.In our life,we often express our feelings with In our life,we often express our feelings with the help of our eyes.the help of our eyes.Sometimes,we may feel uncomfortable when Sometimes,we may feel uncomfortable when someone looks at ussomeone looks at us.Eyes Can Speak People often say that eyes

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5、 people are talking,the listener often looks at the speaker,in order to show that he is interested in the speakers words.When a man says“I love you”to a woman,he may look at the womans eyes,in order to show that his feeling is true and deep.If we are looked at by a stranger for more than necessary,w

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7、es.sometimes,we may feel uneasy when someone looks sometimes,we may feel uneasy when someone looks at us.at us.When two people are talking,the listener often looks at the speaker,in order to show that he is interested in the speakers words.When a man says“I love you”to a woman,he may look at the wom

8、ans eyes,in order to show that his feeling is true and deep.If we are looked at by a stranger for more than necessary,we will look at ourselves up and down,to see if there is anything wrong with us.For example,For example,Also,Also,However,However,Do you have such kind of experience?Do you have such

9、 kind of experience?英语写作时常用的过渡语英语写作时常用的过渡语:表并列：表并列：and,_ 表转折：表转折：but,_表因果关系表因果关系：because,_ 表先后顺序表先后顺序：First,_ 表时间关系表时间关系：when,_ 表列举说明表列举说明：for example,_ 发表观点发表观点：in my opinion,_表总结陈词表总结陈词：in general,_ 英语写作时常用的过渡语英语写作时常用的过渡语:表并列：表并列：and,besides,in addition,whats more,表转折：表转折：but,yet,however,on the co

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11、ngEyes Can Speak People often say that eyes can speak.People often say that eyes can speak.In our life,we often express our feelings with the help of our eyes.In our life,we often express our feelings with the help of our eyes.sometimes,we may feel uneasy when someone looks at sometimes,we may feel

12、uneasy when someone looks at us.us.when two people are talking,the listener often looks at the speaker,in order to show that he is interested in the speakers words.when a man says“I love you”to a woman,he may look at the womans eyes,in order to show that his feeling is true and deep.If we are looked

13、 at by a stranger for more than necessary,we will look at ourselves up and down,to see if there is anything wrong with us.For example,For example,Also,Also,However,However,Do you have such kind of experience?Do you have such kind of experience?Generally speakingGenerally speaking,eye contact should

14、be done according to,eye contact should be done according to the relationship between two people and the place where we the relationship between two people and the place where we stay.stay.文文章章结结构构1.Heading1.Heading点题，概括性点题，概括性2.Body2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending3.Ending小结，呼应主题小结，呼应主题Eyes Can

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16、 someone looks at us.us.when two people are talking,the listener often looks at the speaker,in order to show that he is interested in the speakers words.when a man says“I love you”to a woman,he may look at the womans eyes,in order to show that his feeling is true and deep.If we are looked at by a st

17、ranger for more than necessary,we will look at ourselves up and down,to see if there is anything wrong with us.For example,For example,Also,Also,However,However,Do you have such kind of experience?Do you have such kind of experience?Generally speakingGenerally speaking,eye contact should be done acc

18、ording to,eye contact should be done according to the relationship between two people and the place where we the relationship between two people and the place where we stay.stay.eyes can help us express our feelings.Step by stepStep by step1.审审2.构构3.列列4.连连5.美美文体_ 时态_ 人称_连字成句，连句成段在有把握的情况下在有把握的情况下，变换句

19、型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，使文增色把握文章框架结构，必要时必要时适当增加细节列出要点Have a Try!Have a Try!网络已成为我们生活的一部分。请你根据以下要点以网络已成为我们生活的一部分。请你根据以下要点以“The Internet in Our Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文为题，用英语写一篇短文.1.好处：多彩、便捷的生活，如：交友、放松；好处：多彩、便捷的生活，如：交友、放松；（请再举一个例子）（请再举一个例子）2.坏处：沉溺于网络，影响身体、学业坏处：沉溺于网络，影响身体、学业3.你的观点你的观点 （考生自拟，至少一点）（考生自拟，至少一点）注意：注意：1 1词数词数9090左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数 2 2短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；通顺；3 3短文不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。短文不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。The Internet in Our LifeInternet plays a very important role in our life.Rome is not built in a day.Tips:1.卷面工整。2.规范写作过程。3.多背诵美文，积累素材。