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1、叙事专题叙事专题 读后续写训练读后续写训练Continuation WritingLead-in：Share a moving storyTherewasayoungcouple,JimandDella,wholedapoorlife,buttheylovedeachotherverymuch.WiththeapproachingofChristmas,TheywantedtobuyaspecialgiftforeachothersecretlyCan you guess the Can you guess the ending of the story?ending of the story

2、?Lead-in：Share a moving story gold watch long blond hair Lead-in：Share a moving story watch chain hairpinLead-in：Share a moving storyInordertomatchJimspreciousgoldwatchwithaperfectwatchchain,DellacutoffandsoldherlongblondhairtobuyagoldenchainasaChristmasgifttoJim.Inthemeanwhile,Jimsoldhisbelovedgold

3、watchtobuyajewelhairpin(发夹)todressuphiswifesbeautifulhair.OnChristmasDay,whentheymeteachotherinapark,theywerebothsurprisedtoknowthetruth.Itseemedthatthewatchchainandthehairpinwereuseless.Buttheyweretrulythemostpricelessgiftsforthepoorcouple,becausetheybothgaveuptheirmostpreciousthingstoloveeachother

4、.The Gift of the MagiLead-in：Share a moving storyTime for practice阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Lucywastheonlychildinherfamily.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldnthelpweepingsorrowfullywhenshethoughtofthescold-ingfromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthes

5、treetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shegaveasighandhadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,youwanttohavethenoodles?”“Oh,yes,butIdonthavemo

6、neyonme,”shereplied.“Thatsnothing.Illtreatyoutoday,”saidtheman.“Comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,thesmellsoattractive.Asshewaseating,Lucycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthemankindly.Writing Practice:“Nothing.ActuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidLucyasshewipedhertears.Evenastrangeronthes

7、treetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymotherdrovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomercilesscomparedtoastranger!”Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimessheco

8、okedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”Lucysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;sherememberedhermothersfamiliarfaceandweatheredhands.“WhydidntIthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelgrateful.WhyhaventIthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme?”Onthewayhome,Lucymadeuphermindtomakeanapologyt

9、ohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph1:Approachingthedoorway,._Paragraph2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback._when:Where(place):Who(character):What(event)in the street Lucy,her mother,a strangerafternoon quarrel Step 1:Read for main

10、idea-6WH questions ran out of the housea strangermade an apology.How:strangers words,kind adviceStep 1:Read for main idea-6WH questions angry sorrowful/sad touchedgrateful and regretfulspeechless and numb with shock why:Step 2 Make predictions 推测故事续写发展(Mind Map)Background for Para1：Approaching the d

11、oorway,doorLucyHow did she feel?what did she do?Lucys motherPara1：Lucy felt _ when she was in the doorway.2.What did Lucy think about?1.How did Lucy feel and what did she do when she was in the doorway?Lucy was so _ that she _ in front of the door.Lucy thought of _./It hit/occurred to Lucy that Appr

12、oaching the doorway,.Step 3:Gather ideas for writing(Group Work)3.What did Lucy do next?Lucy_.A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.Step 2 Make predictions 推测故事续写发展(Mind Map)doorLucyLucys motherBackground for Para2：A gentle touch on her hair called her mind backat homeHow did she feel?What

13、 did she say?What did she say?What did she do?Step 3:Gather ideas for writing 顺延故事续写1.How did Lucy feel when she saw her mother?Para2：Lucy was _ when she saw her mother.2.What did Lucy say or do?3.What did Lucys mother say or do?Lucys mother _Lucy _.Step 3:Gather ideas for writing(Group Work)A gentl

14、e touch on her hair called her mind back.lupset/worried/nervous/不安的不安的/担心的担心的/紧张的紧张的ltake a deep breath 深呼吸深呼吸lbe angry with 对对.生气生气lcare about 关心关心 lbe/felt ashamed of 感到羞愧感到羞愧 lgather ones courage 鼓起勇气鼓起勇气ltears roll down her cheeks 眼泪从脸上滑下眼泪从脸上滑下lcouldnt help doing 情不自禁做情不自禁做.lhug sb.拥抱拥抱lthrowin

15、g oneself into sbs arms 投入某人的怀抱投入某人的怀抱 lexpress great gratitude to 对对表表达感激达感激 Step 4:Draft a continuation(起草起草续篇篇)Time for PresentationHomework1.Finish your writing and polish it.2.Sum the skills for continuation writing.Thank You!写作提示本文是一篇充满教育意义的故事。Lucy因和母亲争吵而负气离家,在街上得到陌生的面店老板赠予的面条而心生感激,在面店老板的提醒下,她

16、终于认识到了母亲的伟大。原文最后一段提到Lucy决定回家向母亲道歉,那么后文的续写一定要围绕这一线索展开。续写第一段的提示句告诉我们这一段是Lucy到家门口后的情景,而又根据第二段的提示句“一个在她头发上的温柔的抚摸拉回了她的思绪”可知上一段最后一定要出现Lucy沉思的语境。充分利用这些信息并结合自己的想象应该可以构思出合理的结尾。本文原文的基调暗示整个故事是一个内容健康向上,具有很好的教育意义的故事。所以续写一定要延续这个主题。Approachingthedoorway,Lucywasverynervousandtookadeepbreath.Standinginfrontofthedoor

17、,shewasafraidwhetherhermotherwouldforgiveherforherrudeness.ButwhenShethoughtofhermothersfamiliarfaceandthenoodlesellerskindadvice,shedecidedtoknockonthedoorbravely.HermotheropenedthedoorbutLucywassoashamedthatshedidntknowwhattosay.Possible Version version1：Paragraph2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermi

18、ndback.Lucycouldnthelpcryingandsaid“Sorry,mom,IknowIhavemadeabigmistake.Ishouldnthavequarreledwithyou.Ishouldnthaverunawayfromhome.Couldyouforgiveme?”Lucysmotherwasmoved,saying“Goodgirl,nevermind,Ialsoshouldmakeanapologytoyouforscoldingatyouangrily.Iamveryworriedaboutyou.”Tearsrolleddownfrombothofth

19、eirfacesandtheyhuggedeachothertightly.version2：Paragraph 1 Approaching the doorway,Lucy took a deep breath.When she knocked at the door,she found the door was locked and her mother was not in.Tired and sad,she sat down in front of the house.“Where could my mother be?”she wondered,“Was she still angr

20、y with me?”Again,the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind.She remembered her rudeness to her mother.Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her,she felt rather ashamed,and tears began to roll down her cheeks.Paragraph 2 A gent

21、le touch on her hair called her mind back.She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother.“Here you come!Ive been looking for you,”she said,tired and relieved.Jenny couldnt help throwing herself into her mothers arms.“Mum,Im so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.”She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude.Hearing this,her mother smiled,patting her back gently.