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1、试卷第 1 页，共 71 页 中考英语作文写作专题训练 50 题含范文 一、电子邮件 1假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。内容包括接受邀请并询问至少三个相关细节（如具体地点）注意：1.词数 80 左右；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Li Ping,We would like to invite you to give us a talk on Chinese folk music.The talk will be on the evening of Friday,July 10th at 7:00.If youre able to come,please reply in wr

2、iting to this invitation by July 2nd.Hope you can make it!Larry Smith President of Foreign Students Club Dear Larry,_ Yours,Li Ping【答案】例文 Dear Larry,Thank you so much for your invitation.As a big fan of Chinese folk music,its my great honor to share something interesting with all of you.Im available

3、 on the Friday evening,July 10th and Ill be there on time.But I am still wondering more details about the talk.The 试卷第 2 页，共 71 页 first question I would like to know is where the talk will be held.Moreover,I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will last so that I can arrange the content

4、 of my talk.The last one is who will come to the talk.Thanks again for your invitation.Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Ping【详解】1.题干解读：本题为书信作文，要求根据已有的邮件进行回复，开头和结尾已经给出。人称用第一人称，时态应用现在时。2.例文点评：例文按照书信格式，采用“感谢并接受邀请询问细节再次感谢邀请”结构，其中对三点细节的询问（地点、时长、参与人员）是本文写作重点。例文书信格式标准，层次分明，思路清晰，达到了题目写作要求，是一篇优秀的例文。3.高

5、分亮点：短语：share with，on time，thanks for，look forward to。句型：（1）Thank you so much for your invitation.（thank you for 句型）（2）As a big fan of Chinese folk music,its my great honor to share something interesting with all of you.（it 作形式主语）（3）Moreover,I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will las

6、t so that I can arrange the content of my talk.（宾语从句）2假定你是李雷，请你对英国朋友 Bruce 的邮件进行同复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。To*Subject Exchange Visit!Hi there,Li Lei!Im really excited about going to be at your school for the exchange visit later this yearhope you are too!But the th

7、ing is,I really dont want to do the wrong thing while Im there and especially at the school,so Im wondering if you could tell me a bit about the rules,about phones,clothes,food.Could you send me a quick email?Id love to hear from you.Love,Bruce 试卷第 3 页，共 71 页 To*Subject Re:Exchange Visit!Hi,Bruce!Th

8、anks for your email.Im looking forward to the exchange too!Love,Li Lei 【答案】例文：Hi,Bruce!Thanks for your email.Im looking forward to the exchange too!You really dont have to worry a lot about the school rules here.But there are a few things you need to know.We usually wear uniforms on school days,but

9、you can wear what is suitable.And itll be kind of cold when you are here so youd better bring some warm clothes.We are not allowed to use mobile phones at school.Besides,if we bring food to school,we must eat it outside during the break.Hope this helps.Tell me if theres anything else you want to kno

10、w.Love,Li Lei【详解】题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。例文点评：例文采用五段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。高分亮点：短语：look forward to；worry about；need to do sth；kind of；be allowed to do sth 等。句型：And itll be kind of cold when you are here so you

11、d better bring some warm clothes.Besides,if we bring food to school,we must eat it outside during the break.3假定你是李华，你们学校六月一日将要组织学生去参观博物馆，你打算邀请你的朋友 Peter 参加。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：试卷第 4 页，共 71 页 1、集合地点：学校操场；2、出发时间：六月一日上午 7：00；3、准备工作：提前去网上搜索相关信息；带上笔记本、钢笔 注意：1、词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3、文中不

12、得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。Dear Peter,How is it going?Im writing to invite you to visit the museum with us._ Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文 Dear Peter,How is it going?Im writing to invite you to visit the museum with us.We will meet on the playground of my school at 7 a.m.on Jun

13、e 1.I think its a good idea to surf the Internet for same useful information before your visit.Dont forget to prepare a notebook and take a pen.During the visit,you can write down whatever you are interested in.And after that,you can share it with your parents and friends.Please come and join us.Im

14、sure you will enjoy the trip and benefit a lot.Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本题属于书信作文，题目的开头已给出。根据题目要求写一下活动的时间、地点、安排等情况，时态是一般将来时。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行试卷第 5 页，共 71 页 适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。2.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，介绍了集合地点，出发时间，准备工作等信息，并发出邀请。例文结构清晰，行

15、文连贯。3.高分亮点：词组：on the playground；surf the Internet；useful information；write down；are interested in；share it with your parents and friends；句型：We will meet on the playground of my school at 7 a.m.on June 1./I think its a good idea to surf the Internet for same useful information before your visit./Dont

16、 forget to prepare a notebook and take a pen./During the visit,you can write down whatever you are interested in./Im sure you will enjoy the trip and benefit a lot.【点睛】书面表达：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如 on the playground；surf the Internet；useful information；write down；are inter

17、ested in 等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。4假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Amy 发邮件来询问有关新型冠状病毒（novel coronavirus）以及你最近的情况。请根据 Amy 的邮件进行回复，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；词数 100 左右，开头和结尾都已给出，不计入总数。Dear Li HuaHow are you doin

18、g these days?Recently I have read a lot about the epidemic situation(疫情)on the Internet.It seems very serious.Could you tell me more about the new virus?What do you do with it?Do you think you can beat the virus?I know you are in Grade Nine,and you must be busy with your studies now.How do you deal

19、with studies while you cant be back to school.I hope to hear from you soon.Take care!Yours,Amy Dear Amy,Im really happy to have your email.Thanks for your care.试卷第 6 页，共 71 页 _ Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文 Dear Amy,Im really happy to have your email.Thanks for your care.The epidemic situation is really seriou

20、s.I havent been out for days.Ive been staying at home because its the safest way.So have other people.If we go out,we must wear a mask,and when we come back,we must take our temperature at the gate of the communities.All the doctors and nurses are fighting with the novel coronavirus all day and all

21、night on the front lines.And I believe we can defeat it in the near future.Because I believe that as long as we work together,nothing is impossible.Although the school has not started yet,we have been studying at home all the time.The teachers give us lessons online and help us solve problems.This w

22、ay is more convenient for me,because I dont have to waste time on my way to school,and I can have more time to study.I have been reviewing all the lessons carefully every day,preparing for the entrance examination of my senior high school.I hope you can also take care of your health and keep healthy

23、.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：文章是一篇书信文章。主要是给朋友讲述在疫情期间，作者是如何应对的以及医护人员在抗击疫情期间的举措，以及在学习方面的情况等。把来信中的问题描述清楚即可。试卷第 7 页，共 71 页 2.例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段主要描述疫情的严重性以及在抗击疫情期间做的一些事情；第二段主要描写自己在疫情期间的学习情况；第三段是希望朋友也能够保重身体。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确通顺，意思明确易懂，用词比较恰当。3.高分亮点：短语：go out；come back；at the gate of；fight with；prepare for；take

24、care of。句型：because 引导的原因状语从句；if 引导的条件状语从句；when 引导的时间状语从句；although 引导的让步状语从句。5最近，你美国的笔友 Tony 在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件提出你的一些建议。建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，诚实守信 要求：l词数 60-80，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。3文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。参考词汇:share solve respect friendly be honest to Dear Tony,Im

25、 sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates:Im glad to help you._ I hope everything will go well with you soon.yours,Li Hua【答案】例文 Dear Tony,Im sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates.Im glad to help you.Here are some suggestions for you.First,when you have difficulties,you sho

26、uld talk to your parents,your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them.They will help you solve the problem.试卷第 8 页，共 71 页 Second,when you get along with your friends,you are supposed to respect them.Third,you should be friendly to people around you.You can help each o

27、ther.Last but not least,you have to be honest to your friends.Then you will make more friends.I hope everything will go well with you soon.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文的写作要求是一封电子邮件。首先，对于朋友在交友过程中遇到难题表示歉意。用情态动词提建议，最后希望能交到跟多朋友。然后，分步骤给出另外四个建议处理和同学们的关系。最后希望一切会好起来。【详解】本文对于在和同学们交往中遇到的问题提出建议，分四步给出合理建议，最后指出对朋友要诚实，并希望能够

28、交到更多朋友。用到的短语有：share sth.with sb.；get along with 和相处；be supposed to do 应该做某事和 Last but not least 等，使得文章丰富多彩；长短句搭配合理。6首都北京有很多蕴含历史和文化的旅游景点，如故宫(the Palace Museum)、长城(the Great Wall)、老舍茶馆(Lao She Teahouse)等。它们吸引了众多外国游客。假如你是李华，你的外国笔友 Peter 即将到北京旅游。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个能了解中国历史和文化的景点，告诉他在这个景点可以看到什么或者做些什么，以及他需

29、要做什么准备。提示词语:ancient buildings,art works,handcrafts(手工艺品),book a ticket 提示问题:Which place do you advise Peter to visit?What can he see or do there?What preparations does Peter need to do?Dear Henry,How is it going?Im glad you will come to Beijing.I advise you to visit _ _ _ _ _ 试卷第 9 页，共 71 页 If you n

30、eed any help,please let me know.Yours,Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?Im glad you will come to Beijing.I advise you to visit the Palace Museum.It is the largest museum in China.There you can see not only Chinese ancient buildings but also Chinese art works.You can learn to make Chinese traditi

31、onal handcrafts in the learning center.Its a good idea to get more information about the museum before your visit,and dont forget to book your ticket on the Internet.If you need any help,please let me know.Yours,Li Hua【详解】首都北京有很多蕴含历史和文化的旅游景点，如故宫(the Palace Museum)、长城(the Great Wall)、老舍茶馆(Lao She Tea

32、house)等。它们吸引了众多外国游客。假如你是李华，你的外国笔友 Peter 即将到北京旅游。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个能了解中国历史和文化的景点，告诉他在这个景点可以看到什么或者做些什么，以及他需要做什么准备。这是一篇应用文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。主要是介绍中国的名胜古迹。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如：It is the largest museum in China.There you can s

33、ee not only Chinese ancient buildings but also Chinese art works.二、材料作文 7有人说:人在生活中有烦恼常常是因为想得太多而读书太少。的确,没有一种苦恼是读书所不能驱散的。我们每个人都清楚阅读的重要性,它可以帮助我们完成对知识的积累,同时促进我们自身素质的提升。21 世纪中学生英语报向广大同学征稿,请你试卷第 10 页，共 71 页 分享一本你心目中的好书。要求:1.80-120 词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息:1.介绍你分享的书籍 2.这本书好在哪里 3.这本书带给你的改变。

34、As one saying goes,“Reading a book is like having a conversation with the finest men of past centuries.”_【答案】例文 As one saying goes,“Reading a book is like having a conversation with the finest men of past centuries.”Now I would like to share the book I like best with you.It is called The Old Man and

35、 the Sea,written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway.The book tells about an old fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea,but finds it hard to take it home.On the way back,he has to fight against the fish,and the sea as well.This book brings me a lot.What I like most about the bo

36、ok is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting difficulties.I still remember the well-known sentence from the book:Man is not made for defeat.After reading,I really realize that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.试卷第 11 页，共 71 页【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。题目要求考生通

37、过作文分享一本心中的好书，则作文应用一般现在时和第一人称进行写作。2.例文点评：例文按要求先介绍了书籍的基本信息及故事梗概；其次，介绍书籍的引人之处；最后，介绍书籍带给作者的改变。例文采用经典的“三段式”写作，段落分明，可读性强。3.高分亮点：短语：would like to do sth.，written by，on the way back，fight against，as well，brings sb.a lot.，as long as。句型：It is called The Old Man and the Sea.but finds it hard to take it home.Wh

38、at I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting difficulties.8在你校劳动教育月期间,校英语报发起了A Helper at Home主题征文活动。请结合自身情况,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。内容要点提示如下:What you often do at home What you have learned water flowers cook meals wash the dishes look after pets take out the r

39、ubbish life skills responsibility（责任）注意:(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用,可适当发挥。(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。(3)词数:80100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。短文首句:I have always been a good helper at home._试卷第 12 页，共 71 页 _【答案】例文 A Helper at Home I have always been a good helper at home.As we all know,its important to help parents do housework du

40、ring our daily life.I often help them to do housework.Last Sunday，after breakfast，I began to help my parents wash clothes.Though washing clothes isnt difficult,it took me a long time.After that,I tried to tidy my bedroom.I first made the bed and then put away my clothes and school things.Looking at

41、the tidy room,I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework for my parents,but also learn life skills.I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work.In a word,the more housework I do,the happier my parents will be.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，在你校“劳动教育月”期间,校英语报发起了“A Helper

42、at Home”主题征文活动。要求结合自身情况，根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈自己经常做的两项家务以及收获。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。2.例文点评：本文按照题目的要求，介绍了自己所做的两项家务，结构清晰，要点全面；文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。3.高分亮点：短语：help sb to do sth，try to do，put away，not onlybut also。句型：I think it can make my parents feel more enjoya

43、ble after work.我认为能让我的父母工作后感到开心。I think 后加省略了 that 的宾语从句。In a word,the more housework I do,the happier my parents will be.总之，我的家务活做的越多，我的父母就会越快乐。the+比较级，the+比较级：越就越。9犯错误是我们生活中的一部分。很多时候如果没有犯错，我们就不可能找到合适和正确的方法，然而，很多人害怕犯错误。请你用英语写一篇文章讲述一件你曾经亲身经历过的犯错误的事情，并表达你对犯错误的观点。试卷第 13 页，共 71 页 要求：1.条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写

44、工整；2.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校；3.不少于 80 字。_【答案】例文：It is common that everyone may make mistakes.Some people are afraid of making mistakes.But it is helpful to us.I tell you my experience.I met with some problems about how to make sentences with some words.I tried them some times,but I still made wrong sentence

45、s.When my teacher told us the correct sentences,I had a good understanding of the uses of the words immediately.Whats more,I remember the sentences till now.So some mistakes can have a great effect on you.It is a good sign that you can try new things and grasp it better.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙

46、文格式写。开头介绍一些人害怕犯错；接下来介绍我的一次犯错的经历；最后总结犯错带来的好处。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一或第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时，在介绍我犯错的过程时，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。3.高分亮点：短语：be afraid of；meet with；whats more；have a great effect on。句型：主语从句 that everyone may make mistakes；时间状语从句 When my teacher told 试卷第 14 页，共 71 页 us the correct sente

47、nces。10开学一个月了，你认识班级里的同学了吗，你何他们相处的如何？你觉得你的老师们怎么样呢？以“My Class”为题，写一篇 40 词以上的短文。My Class Class On the floor students(girls and boys)Classmates Friendly,clever,helpful Teachers Kind,strict My feeling I study in Gongyi middle school._【答案】例文：I study in Gongyi middle school.My class is on the first floor.T

48、here are 50 students in my class30 boys and 20 girls.My classmates are friendly,clever and helpful.They often help me with my subjects.My teachers are strict with us,but they are very kind.If I have any problems,I can ask them for help.I think that its lucky for me to have so many nice teachers and

49、classmates.I love my class very much.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是材料类书面表达，要求以“My Class”为题，结合表格中所给信息，介绍自己的班级情况。2.例文点评：例文采用一段式结构，详细介绍了作者所在学校、作者所在班级的地理位置、学生数量以及老师们和同学们的情况，最后表达自己的感受；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。3.高分亮点：试卷第 15 页，共 71 页 短语：on the first floor；the others；help sb.with sth.；be strict with sb.；ask sb

50、.for help；very much。句型：There are 50 students in my class.there be 句型；If I have any problems,I can ask them for help.if 引导的条件状语从句；I think that its lucky for me to have so many nice teachers and classmates.I love my class very much.that 引导的宾语从句和 its adj.for sb.to do sth.句型。11假如你叫李军，你家于 2017 年被列为“精准扶贫”