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1、Continuation WritingTeachinggoals：1.Studentslearntoinferplotdevelopmentcluesbasedonreading.2.Studentslearntopredictthelogicofthestorybasedonreadingandthegivensentences.3.Studentslearntowritewell4.Studentslearntoappreciateandevaluatethewritings.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHallow

2、eenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage-Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonech

3、osenbymy14-year.Oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgot to weigh them before taking out their insides,but I wasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchen table,withmymomfilming theannualevent.ImunsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitsee

4、medtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit，likeacork（软木塞）forcedintoabottle.Iwasab

5、letostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy.Imgoingtosetitdown,now,Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightf

6、orwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.Icantgetitout!Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.Para.1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger._Para.2Thatv

7、ideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween._Read the storyStoryGet the main idea(把握故事梗概)at Halloweenin the kitchenJasondadmomII got my head stuck in a pumpkinto prove my point as a winner of the biggest pumpkin?whatwhyhowwhowherewhenRead the charactersdadIJasonmomlmakesita_tobringhomethebiggestpump

8、kinatHalloween.Know the main characters(明确主要人物)lthe_childlhavean_-Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyearl_toquitthechancetowinthisyear.lmy14-year-old_l_theannualeventunwillingadvantageeldestbrotherrulefilmingExposition(情节交代)Rising action(conflict激化)Climax(conflict最大化/turningpoint转折点)Falling action(conflic

9、t缓延)Resolution(conflict解开)Denouement(结尾).rulestuckwinnergetoutWhat is the conflict？I got my head stuck in the pumkin.BecauseofDads_,we_petedToprovethatthe_wasMenotJason,Imanagedtoputmy_intomypumpkin.headUnexpectedly,Igotmyhead_inthepumpkin.Iattemptedseveraltimesto_petitiveexcitedpanickedPara1：I was

10、stuck five or six minutes though it felt much longer.Para 2：The video was posted the Monday before Halloween.How to get out?KeyWords:Para1:Iwasstuckfiveorsixthoughitfeltmuchlonger.P:ara1：I was stuck five or six minutes though it felt much longer.(1)承上结尾句KeyWords:两句定方向Para2:Thatvideowaspostedonlineth

11、eMondaybeforeHalloween.(1)承上My feelings?reactions?My familys feeling?reactions?Who help me?How to help?What was the result?Who filmed the video?My reaction?(video)What was the netizens response?My feelings?Analyzethe2givensentencesandtheoriginalpassageAnalyzethe2givensentencesandtheoriginalpassageMy

12、excitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.Imgoingtosetitdown,now,Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.Igotintoa

13、panicasIpressedfirmly againstthetableandmoved my headaround trying to find therightangle,but it was no use.I cant get it out!I shouted,my voice soundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.Para.1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger._Para.2ThatvideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween._

14、writingparagraph1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger._读后续写评价原则：应主要从以下五个方面考虑读后续写评价原则：应主要从以下五个方面考虑:(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度(2)上下文的连贯性上下文的连贯性(3)内容的丰富性内容的丰富性(4)情节情节的合理性的合理性(5)语言的丰富性的丰富性和准确性语言的丰富性的丰富性和准确性1.Finishthesecondparagraph2.Exchangeyourideaswithyourclassmates.HomeworkThe

15、 end关于视频拍摄和上传关于视频拍摄和上传视频n.(short)video拍摄v.shoot(shot shot)/film发送上传v.post/uploadsth.sth.bepostedonline分享v.share.with.走红goviral/immediatelybecomeahit关注v.followsb.转发v.repost/retweet点赞n.like(s)/thumb-up(s)give/receive浏览消息browseonesmessages评论ment(s)leave/ment(on)浏览量n.view(s)/浏览最多的adj.most-viewed社交工具Face

16、book/TuTube关于视频拍摄和上传关于视频拍摄和上传视频n._拍摄v._发送上传v._分享v_.走红_关注v._转发v._点赞n._浏览消息_评论n._浏览量n._浏览最多的adj._社交工具_eg1:Unabletogetoutofthepumkin,Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.Thehardpumpkinweighedstubbornlyuponmyshoulder,notwantingtomoveatall.Totaldarknessdisorientatingme(独立主格),Irotatedonthe

17、spotandfinallyspunmyselfontothefloor.eg2:Trappedinthepumpkin,Igulpedforair,mythroatdryandfaceburningup(独立主格).Itwasatormentforme.Iwrestledwiththeproblem,attemptingtosqueezemyheadoutofit(非谓语作状语),butinvain.SofrightenedwasIthatIpulled,andbangedthepumpkinfrantically.eg3:humorousIattemptedtheartfulremoval

18、ofpumpkinheadcallingoutallofmyhiddengymnasticabilitiesinwaysthatIknewInevercouldhavemoved.Toputitsimply,mybodywaslikeanoctopuscrawlingoutofaborrowedconchshell.(修辞:明喻simile)我的我的痛苦感受和徒劳痛苦感受和徒劳努力努力：第1段承上句承上启下句的衔接第1段启下句eg1:JustwhenIfeltrelievedtobefreedfromthepumpkin,Isuddenlyfoundthatmomshouldbeshootin

19、gallthathappenedtomeandwoulduploaditonline.eg2:MyheadwasfinallyreleasedanditwasthenthatIrealizedmymomhadbeenfilmingthewholetime.eg3:Iliftedmypumpkin-pulp-coveredeyelids,scannedtheroomandsawthreefacescontortedbyguffawandmumstillholdingthecamera,which,unfortunately,hadrecordedeverything.第2段承上句承上启下句的衔接

20、第2段承上句eg1:WhenIloggedinmyFacebookIfoundmyselfdumbfoundedbytheabundantlikesIreceivedfromthosewhohadseenmyvideo.Browsingtheirmessages,Ifeltawaveofwarmth.eg2:Itwentviralinstantly.Justwithinhours,hundredsoflikesandfunnycommentsappeared,showingtheirenthusiasm.Constantsstreamsofcuriouspeopleevencamebytota

21、kephotoswithusandmyprizedpumpkin.eg3:Notlongafteritwasuploaded,itsoaredtothetopof“most-watched”shortvideos.Thousandsleftcomments,sharingtheirownstoriesoftheirbodypartsbeingcaughtinsmallundesiredplaces.Thenextday,whenIwaswalkingaroundthecampus,Iwassoonrecognizedandaskedtotakeselfies.我的视频被传到网上的尴尬、我的视频

22、被传到网上的尴尬、懊恼懊恼等复杂心情等复杂心情eg1:Iwastooembarrassedtoseewatchthevideo,letaloneseeingmyfriendscomments!eg2:SoembarrassedwasshethatIsatthererestlessly,feelingthebloodrushtoherface.(部分部分倒装句倒装句)eg3:Myfaceflushed/burnedscarletwithembarrassment/shame.eg4:HowIwishedIhadnotactedsofoolishly,makingmyselfalaughingst

23、ockofmyfamily!(虚拟语气虚拟语气)eg4:Whilestuckinthepumpkin,Icouldwellimaginehowtheywouldlookwhenmyheadcameout.eg5:NeverhadIeverfeltsoembarrassedbutneverhadIeverbeensofamous!(部分倒装句部分倒装句)MyemotionsweresoconflictedbetweenwhetherIshouldbehappyorsad.点题收尾句eg1:叙事式 Iwentaroundmycommunitywithmyfriends,trick-or-treat

24、ingwithmyheadinanotherpumpkinthatmomanddadhadfoundforme.Thistime,Imadesuretocutabigenoughhole.eg2:感悟式 Thoughfeelingabitembarrassed,Ifeltastrongerfamilybond-afamilysurroundedbyloveandfun.eg3:感悟式 Untiltoday,IamstillunsurewhattomakeofthatunforgettableHalloweenandsuperthankfulformydadsrescue.eg4:评价式 Tha

25、nkstomom,thevideoturnedouttobeareminder,acapturedmemorablemoment,arecollectionoffestivalhappiness,coloredbyheartyhumaninteractions.eg5:评价式 Thenextday,whenIwalkedaroundthecampus,Icouldfeelfingerspointedatmydirection,gigglesbehindsleevesandwhispersinsmallgroups.ItslikeIsuddenlyshottostardom!Ifthisinci

26、dentwasaTRICKGodplayedonme,ImightaswellregarditasmyTREATforeveryonetohaveanunforgettableHalloween.eg4:多元化（感悟+叙事+评价）Bathedinthefestiveatmosphere,Itotallyforgotthe“unforgettable”incidentandsetoutforthetrick-or-treating.IwouldtakeitasatreattoaddjoyandfuntothisfestiveHalloweenforeveryone.我的视频被传到网上的尴尬、我的

27、视频被传到网上的尴尬、懊恼懊恼等复杂心情等复杂心情eg1:Iwastooembarrassedtoseewatchthevideo,letaloneseeingmyfriendscomments!eg2:SoembarrassedwasshethatIsatthererestlessly,feelingthebloodrushtoherface.(部分部分倒装句倒装句)eg3:Myfaceflushed/burnedscarletwithembarrassment/shame.eg4:HowIwishedIhadnotactedsofoolishly,makingmyselfalaughing

28、stockofmyfamily!(虚拟语气虚拟语气)eg4:Whilestuckinthepumpkin,Icouldwellimaginehowtheywouldlookwhenmyheadcameout.eg5:NeverhadIeverfeltsoembarrassedbutneverhadIeverbeensofamous!(部分倒装句部分倒装句)MyemotionsweresoconflictedbetweenwhetherIshouldbehappyorsad.Read the given sentencesPara.1Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfe

29、ltmuchlongerPara.2ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween._AdilemmaAdelightPredict the ending(预测故事结尾)1.HowdidIfeel?2.WhatfurthereffortsdidImake?3.Whatdidmyfamilydotohelp?4.Whatwastheresult?1.WhatresponsedidIgetonline?2.HowdidIfeel?3.WhatdidIlearn?Para.1plotemotionsPara.2plotemotionslist the

30、writing pointsList the outline(罗列写作要点)myattempttopullmyheadoutmyfamilyofferedhelpmyheadwasreleasedmymumcapturedthewholeeventanxiousrelievedhopelessreactionsfromnetizensmyreflectionsontheeventsurpriseddelightedPara.1Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger._pItugged(猛拉)/banged(敲)/punchedthepumpkin

31、furiously/franticallyl呼救pIexclaimed(由于痛苦呼喊)/yelled/screamed/cried/shrieked(尖叫)/bellowed(大喊)/bawled(大喊)forhelp.p“Helpme!”Ipleaded(乞求)l摇/挤脑袋pIstruggledtosqueeze/pullmyheadoutofit.pIbobbedmyhead(上下摆动)likecrazy.l扯/敲/转南瓜Plot-my attemptemotionsanxiousfrustratedrelievedanxious:Severalfruitlessattemptsmadem

32、eedgy/upset(烦躁不安的).Iwasgettingmorenervouseveryminute.Ilostmycool.(失去冷静)/Ibegantopanic.Seizedbyastrongsenseofanxiety,I.physicalreaction:心跳加快Myheartwaspounding/thudding.Mystomachfluttered(快速跳动).Withheartinmymouth,I.Myheartbeatinmythroat.Mystomachfeelsupset-likeitsfullofknots.Myheartbeatsoviolentlythat

33、Ifeltalmostsuffocated(窒息)/fainted.呼吸不畅：Igulped(因担忧倒吸气)forair;/Isniffed(吸气).口干脸烫：Mythroatwasdry,faceburningup.Frustrated:Iwasfuriousatmystupidattempt.“Stupid!Yourestupid！”Iscreamedatmyselfinsidemyhead.Icouldntbeartoseethemstandbyandlaughatme.Theirgigglesmademybloodboil.(生气)Frustrated/Infrustration,Iw

34、asontheedgeofgivingupstruggling.Ifeltmyspiritssinkevenlower.Iwaswonderingwhattodonext.Ifeltsorestless.Exhausted,hefloppeddownintoachair.（一屁股坐下）relieved:Iheavedasighofrelief.Iletoutalongsigh.Icheered/sighedwithrelief.Iburstoutcheering.Igaspedforfreshair;Itookaminutetocatchmybreathandsteadymyself.Ifel

35、tawaveofrelief.Plot-efforts from my familyPara.1Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger._1.围拢探情况2.安慰3.出主意4.拉/拽/举起pDadrushedtoliftittoreduceitsweightonmyhead.pJumpingtotheirfeet,theyhuddled(聚/挤)aroundme.pAfteracarefulstudy,theybegantoworkonit.pJasonsteppedforward,pattedmeontheshouldertoeaseme.pSe

36、nsingmymountinganxiety,Jasonputonesarmsaroundonesnecktooffercomfort.p“Letstug(拉)itdowntogether,”theychirped.pTheydragged/pulled/yankedatthepumpkinwithalltheirstrength.pJasonproposedcallingthefiredepartment.Para.2ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween._Plot-netizens reactionemotionsThevideo_

37、.pprovokedabundantattentionpcausedquiteastirpraisedwideattentionThey_.pshowedtheirsympathy.pgaveloadsoflikes(点赞).psharedtheirownmomentsofdilemma.p.Theymentionedthatonseeingthevideothey_ucriedoutindelight.uTheychuckled(咯咯笑)/giggled/sniggered(窃笑).uroaredwithlaughter.(放声大笑)Gettingsomanyresponsesfromstr

38、angers,I_uwasdumbfounded(目瞪口呆的)ucouldntdampenmyexcitementu.Para.1Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Trappedinthepumpkin,Igulpedforair,mythroatdryandfaceburningup.Itwasatormentforme.Iwrestledwiththeproblem,attemptingtosqueezemyheadoutofit,butinvain.SofrightenedwasIthatIpulled,andbangedthepum

39、pkinfrantically.Noticingmymountingfear,Jasonproposedcallingthefiredepartment,whileothersroaredwithlaughterwhichmademybloodboil.Ingreatagony,Iletoutaloudcrywhichawakenedmydadupstairs.Downdashedmydadwhogotmetopushmyheadfartherintothepumpkinsothatmomshandcouldreachinandloosenmyponytail.Myheadwasfinally

40、releasedanditwasthenthatIrealizedmymomhadbeenfilmingthewholetime.Para.2ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween.WhenIloggedinmyFacebookIfoundmyselfdumbfoundedbytheabundantlikesIreceivedfromthosewhohadseenmyvideo.Browsingtheirmessages,Ifeltawaveofwarmth.ThenastydilemmawhereIgotthepulp-pluggednose,thesorechinbythestubbornpumpkinwasmeltedinthepositiveresponses,theheartfeltcomfortaswellasthecountlesssimilarstoriessharedbythosestrangers.Thankstomom,thevideoturnedouttobeareminder,acapturedmemorablemoment,arecollectionoffestivalhappiness,coloredbyheartyhumaninteractions.