书面表达——写人记事系列3.ppt

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1、写作指导课写作指导课 3 3写人记事系列写人记事系列 郎郎是当今世界最杰出的（郎郎是当今世界最杰出的（outstandingoutstanding）钢琴家）钢琴家之一，被誉为（之一，被誉为（name asname as）“一位改变世界的青年一位改变世界的青年”。请根据下。请根据下表中的信息并以表中的信息并以“Lang Lang LangLangA Well-know PianistA Well-know Pianist”为题，为题，写一篇写一篇8080个词左右的简介。个词左右的简介。注意：表格中的时间、年龄或地点应根据需要灵活处理。注意：表格中的时间、年龄或地点应根据需要灵活处理。时间时间年年

2、龄龄地点地点主要事件主要事件19820沈阳沈阳出生（男）出生（男）19853沈阳沈阳开始开始弹钢弹钢琴琴19875沈阳沈阳参加参加钢钢琴比琴比赛赛，均，均获获第一名第一名19919中国中国199311德国德国199513日本日本199614美国美国继续继续(continue）深造）深造199918 显现显现非凡的理解音非凡的理解音乐乐的才的才华华（talent）200523美国美国应应邀在白邀在白宫宫（the White House）专场专场演奏演奏20102010中考湖北中考湖北【2011河南省河南省】刘刘伟伟，无臂，无臂钢钢琴演奏者。他十琴演奏者。他十岁时岁时在在一次意外中失去双臂，但他并

3、没有放弃成一次意外中失去双臂，但他并没有放弃成为为一名一名钢钢琴琴家的梦想。家的梦想。经过经过刻苦用脚刻苦用脚练习弹练习弹琴，他最琴，他最终终在在中国达中国达人秀人秀（Chinas Got Talent）的舞台上）的舞台上实现实现了自己的梦了自己的梦想。想。请请根据以上内容写一篇英根据以上内容写一篇英语语短文。短文。要求：要求：1.简简要描述刘要描述刘伟伟的的经历经历；2.谈谈谈谈从他的从他的经历经历中你得到的启示；中你得到的启示；3.词词数数80左右。开左右。开头头已已给给出，不出，不计计入入总词总词数。数。Liu Wei,an armless piano player,has a very

4、 special experience._1.通过浏览以上两篇中考书面表达，我们发现通过浏览以上两篇中考书面表达，我们发现这两篇都是写这两篇都是写_的记叙文。的记叙文。2.2.这两篇我们可以使用这两篇我们可以使用_时态。时态。3.3.这两篇我们可以按照这两篇我们可以按照_顺序进行描写。顺序进行描写。4.4.我们以往学过的哪一篇我们以往学过的哪一篇3a与这两篇类似？与这两篇类似？人人一般过去一般过去时间时间Li Yundi,a well-known Chinese pianist,always loved music.He was born in 1982 in Chongqing.When h

5、e was a small boy,he could hum songs and difficult pieces of music.He began to learn the accordion at the age of four,and he started to learn the piano when he was seven.In October 2000,Li Yundi took part in the 14th Chopin International Piano Competition in Poland.He won first prize in his group.He

6、 was also the first Chinese pianist in the 70-year history of the competition to win this prize.类似的类似的 3a 短文短文短文是按照短文是按照_顺序，使用顺序，使用_时态时态进行描写的。进行描写的。时间时间一般过去一般过去其它写人的其它写人的 3a短文短文Wang Le wants to do things that most teenagers do.For her,its important to have friends,and to spend time with them.But per

7、haps she hangs out with them a little too much.Wang Le likes to eat junk food,and she would rather drink coffee and cola than water.Her parents have asked her to try to eat more healthily,but she doesnt like to.However Wang Les parents trust her because she tells them her problems.They know she alwa

8、ys does her best at school,so they let her organize her own life.She is hardly ever stressed and she laughs a lot.本文使用的本文使用的_时态。时态。一般现在一般现在其它写人的其它写人的 3a短文短文Wang Le wants to do things that most teenagers do.For her,its important to have friends,and to spend time with them.But perhaps she hangs out wi

9、th them a little too much.Wang Le likes to eat junk food,and she would rather drink coffee and cola than water.Her parents have asked her to try to eat more healthily,but she doesnt like to.However Wang Les parents trust her because she tells them her problems.They know she always does her best at s

10、chool,so they let her organize her own life.She is hardly ever stressed and she laughs a lot.找出有用的句子找出有用的句子本文使用的本文使用的_时态。时态。一般现在一般现在Thank you for your last letter.Here are photos of me and my twin sister Liu Ying.As you can see,in some ways we look the same,and in some ways we look different.We both

11、 have black eyes and black hair,although my hair is shorter than hers.We both like sports,although Liu Ying is more athletic than me.Shes more outgoing,and Im quieter.I think Im smarter than her.My favorite subjects are physics and chemistry,and her favorite subject is P.E.However,we both enjoy goin

12、g to parties.Please visit us soon!其它写人的其它写人的 3a短文短文你能找出哪些关联词？你能找出哪些关联词？Thank you for your last letter.Here are photos of me and my twin sister Liu Ying.As you can see,in some ways we look the same,and in some ways we look different.We both have black eyes and black hair,although my hair is shorter t

13、han hers.We both like sports,although Liu Ying is more athletic than me.Shes more outgoing,and Im quieter.I think Im smarter than her.My favorite subjects are physics and chemistry,and her favorite subject is P.E.However,we both enjoy going to parties.Please visit us soon!其它写人的其它写人的 3a短文短文你能找出哪些关联词？

14、你能找出哪些关联词？找出有用的句子找出有用的句子Thank you for your last letter.Here are photos of me and my twin sister Liu Ying.As you can see,in some ways we look the same,and in some ways we look different.We both have black eyes and black hair,although my hair is shorter than hers.We both like sports,although Liu Ying

15、is more athletic than me.Shes more outgoing,and Im quieter.I think Im smarter than her.My favorite subjects are physics and chemistry,and her favorite subject is P.E.However,we both enjoy going to parties.Please visit us soon!其它写人的其它写人的 3a短文短文找出有用的句子找出有用的句子1.通过以上学习，我们发现介绍名人的记叙文通通过以上学习，我们发现介绍名人的记叙文通常

16、使用常使用一般过去时态一般过去时态，按照，按照时间顺序时间顺序介绍他介绍他/她的事迹或成就。她的事迹或成就。2.介绍身边的普通人时通常使用一般现在时态，介绍身边的普通人时通常使用一般现在时态，从从外貌外貌、性格性格、爱好爱好或或特长特长等方面进行描写。等方面进行描写。针对第二种情况，我们可总结哪些有用的句子呢？针对第二种情况，我们可总结哪些有用的句子呢？描写外貌的句子：描写外貌的句子：1.My best friend has long/short black hair.2.He/She wears glasses.3.He/She is short and thin/tall and a li

17、ttle heavy.描写性格的句子：描写性格的句子：1.He/She is outgoing/friendly/quiet/shy/funny 2.He/She is hardly ever stressed and laughs a lot.3.He/She is always ready to help others.描写爱好的句子：描写爱好的句子：1.He/She likes/enjoys playing sports.2.He/She is good at 3.He/She is interested in4.His/Her hobby is playing basketball.U

18、seful sentences【2011安徽安徽芜芜湖湖】亲爱亲爱的的同学，你即将初中的的同学，你即将初中毕业毕业。在在这这三年的学三年的学习习生活中，你一定生活中，你一定结结交了交了许许多的好友。多的好友。请请写一篇短文，介写一篇短文，介绍绍一位你的好友一位你的好友Li Lei。要点如下：。要点如下：1.他他乐乐于助人，性格外向，于助人，性格外向，兴兴趣广泛；趣广泛；2.他成他成绩优绩优秀，秀，经经常在学常在学习习上帮助我；上帮助我；3.我准我准备备送他一个送他一个以表达感以表达感谢谢；4.我我对对他的祝福和希望；他的祝福和希望；注意：注意：1.词词数数80-100；开；开头头已已给给出，不

19、出，不计计入入总词总词数；数；2.需包括所有要点，不要逐需包括所有要点，不要逐词词翻翻译译，可适当，可适当发挥发挥，文中不得出文中不得出现现真真实实的人名、学校等相关信息。的人名、学校等相关信息。We are graduating from school soon.I miss so many good friends,especially my best friends Li Lei._1.be always ready to help others1.be outgoing/be interested in everything1.have lots of interests 2.help

20、 sb.with sth2.be good at schoolwork3.send sb.sth3.decide to do sth.3.to thank him/to show my thanks4.expect him to do Step 1 将要点转化成短语将要点转化成短语要点如下：要点如下：1.他乐于助人，性格外向，兴趣广泛；他乐于助人，性格外向，兴趣广泛；2.他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我；他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我；3.我准备送他一个我准备送他一个以表达感谢；以表达感谢；4.我对他的祝福和希望；我对他的祝福和希望；4.hope that 要点如下：要点如下：1.他乐于助人，性

21、格外向，兴趣广泛；他乐于助人，性格外向，兴趣广泛；2.他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我；他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我；3.我准备送他一个我准备送他一个以表达感谢；以表达感谢；4.我对他的祝福和希望；我对他的祝福和希望；Step 2 可使用的关联词可使用的关联词First of all,Also,For example,Besides,Whats more,.In a word,In my opinion,/I think个人展示个人展示We are graduating from school soon.I miss so many good friends,especially my bes

22、t friendsLi Lei.Li Lei is a top student.He is good at all his subjects.Also,he is outgoing,so he has many friends.And he is always ready to help others.For example,he always helps me with my schoolwork.With his help,I can get good grades in the school tests.Besides,he has lots of interests.He enjoys

23、 reading,singing and playing sports and so on.Im so proud of him.In order to thank him,I decide to send him a card made by myself before leaving school.I expect him to have a bright future.I hope that our friendship will last forever.范范 文文 1复习巩固3a中对写作有 用的话题句及功能句。2整理书面表达。Homework【2011湖北湖北武汉武汉】假设你是假设你

24、是Li Ming，目前在英国参，目前在英国参加加Homestay夏令营，住在夏令营，住在Mrs.William家。现在，你家。现在，你需要完成培训老师布置的作业：用英语描述你的房东或需要完成培训老师布置的作业：用英语描述你的房东或房东太太。房东太太。要点如下：要点如下：1.外貌特征（自己发挥）；外貌特征（自己发挥）；2.和蔼友善，与你相处融洽；和蔼友善，与你相处融洽；3.经常照顾你的日常生活，如：洗衣等；经常照顾你的日常生活，如：洗衣等；4.对中国的历史文化很感兴趣；对中国的历史文化很感兴趣；5.补充一至两点其他的看法。补充一至两点其他的看法。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数60-8060-80，开头已给出，不记入总词数；，开头已给出，不记入总词数；2.2.文中不要提及你真实的校名和人名。文中不要提及你真实的校名和人名。参考词汇：参考词汇：friendly adj.友善的友善的 culture n.文化文化 get along with 与与相处相处