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1、金太阳新课标资源网金太阳新课标资源网金太阳新课标资源网金太阳新课标资源网 高州一中高州一中 梁琼凤梁琼凤教学教学目标目标：1.了解书面表达的重要性：了解书面表达的重要性：中考取胜之关键，中考取胜之关键，继续学习之所需；继续学习之所需；2.领会书面表达的步骤。领会书面表达的步骤。教学教学重点、难点重点、难点：掌握书面表达发散思维的方法掌握书面表达发散思维的方法议一议议一议假如今年暑假你在乡下度过了一个有意义的假期，假如今年暑假你在乡下度过了一个有意义的假期，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，介绍你的暑假生活。请根据以下要点写一篇短文，介绍你的暑假生活。1.帮助祖父母干农活；帮助祖父母干农活；2.有时去村

2、西的小河游泳；有时去村西的小河游泳；3.帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。词数词数100左右；可适当补充细节以使行文连贯。左右；可适当补充细节以使行文连贯。作品作品 1 I had an unforgettable holiday this summer.First,I helped my grandparents with work in the field.It left a deep impression on me.At the same time,I realized that the farmers are hard.Sometimes,we went swimmin

3、g in the river of the west of the village,and we caught a lot of fish.Suddenly,the dark clouds gathered and it rained heavily.We hurriedly ran up to our house.Although we were wet through,we still enjoyed ourselves.Then,I also helped neighbors children with English.I believe this is the best holiday

4、 of mine.I had an unforgettable holiday this summer.First,I helped my grandparents with work in the field.It left a deep impression on me.At the same time,I realized that the farmers are hard.Sometimes,we went swimming in the river to the west of the village,and we caught a lot of fish.Suddenly,the

5、dark clouds gathered and it rained heavily.We hurriedly ran up to our house.Although we were wet through,we still enjoyed ourselves.Then,I also helped neighbors children with English.I believe this is the best holiday of mine.要点齐全，语言基本正确，要点齐全，语言基本正确，105字，但偏离要点。字，但偏离要点。作品作品2 This summer holiday,I hel

6、ped my grandparents to do farm work.Sometimes,I went swimming in the river of the west of the village.I also spent some time helping neighbors children learn English.要点齐全，语言正确，要点齐全，语言正确，但过于简单，只有但过于简单，只有35个字。个字。书面表达六步法：书面表达六步法：1 1、认真认真审审题，看好提示；题，看好提示；2 2、抓抓内容要点；内容要点；3 3、连连词成句；词成句；4 4、适当适当发散思维发散思维：5 5

7、、连连接成文；接成文；6 6、抄抄写。写。增加时间增加时间 增加地点增加地点 增加细节增加细节想一想想一想文章开头：开门见山，直奔主题文章开头：开门见山，直奔主题1)介绍我的家庭，就可以这样开头：Ihaveaveryhappyfamily.或Ihaveaveryspecialfamily.2)以健康为主题，我们就可能这样开头：Healthisveryimportanttoallofus或Everyonehopestohaveahealthybody等3)e-mail的回信，可礼貌地写一句：Imverygladtoreceiveyoure-mail.或Happytogetthee-mailfro

8、myou!学一学学一学如何发散思维如何发散思维?1)1)围绕要点，围绕要点，增加时间增加时间e.g.外出购物外出购物 Im going out shopping.Im going out shopping,and wont be back until about 5:00 pm.2）围绕要点，）围绕要点，增加地点增加地点e.g.替小米还书替小米还书 I have taken the books Xiaomi asked me to return.I have taken me the books Xiaomi asked me to return to the City Library.3）围

9、绕要点，）围绕要点，增加增加细节细节I like sports very much,A:我喜欢体育运动我喜欢体育运动such as basketball and football.B:青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,refuse to use single-use produ

10、cts,plant more trees and save water and energy.列举具体的实例来补充说明列举具体的实例来补充说明总结方法一总结方法一:A:有时去村西的小河游泳有时去村西的小河游泳拓展：河水非常清澈拓展：河水非常清澈 背景渲染背景渲染 I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.The water in the river was very clear.I found some bad behavior.B:我看到了一些不良行为。我看到了一些不良行为。I felt sad,

11、I found some bad behavior.心理心理添加与所给信息有关的动作、心理描写及添加与所给信息有关的动作、心理描写及背景渲染等内容背景渲染等内容方法二：方法二：A:Tracy 来电话留言：咖啡屋（来电话留言：咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消）见面取消。拓展：因为她有重要的事情处理。拓展：因为她有重要的事情处理。原因原因 as she has something important to do with.B:帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。拓展：孩子们进步很快，我也受到他们父母的称赞拓展：孩子们进步很快，我也受到他们父母的称赞。结果结果 To my j

12、oy,they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me.Tracy called,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee.I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.方法三：方法三：添加与所给信息有关的原因，结果，添加与所给信息有关的原因，结果，条件，让步，手段，目的等内容条件，让步，手段，目的等内容Although I was very tired this s

13、ummer holiday,I felt very happy for what I did.As a student,its our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.In a word,if she would like to learn Chinese,I hope she will do it well.结尾发挥：写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等。结尾发挥：写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等。链接中考：链接中

14、考：假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1 年龄；年龄；2 性别；性别；3 爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。练一练练一练Task 1 爱好运动爱好运动Task 2 爱好旅游爱好旅游Task 3 喜欢养宠物喜欢养宠物 Improve it!爱好运动爱好运动I am a healthy boy full of energy so I like sp

15、orts very much,especially outdoor activities.Whenever I have time,Ill go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates.So I hope my pen friend like sports too.Improve it!I like to seek a pen pal who is interested in travelling just like me.If possible,we can travel together or share traveling exper

16、iences in our e-mails.I will tell her something interesting about the places that she wants to travel.爱好旅游爱好旅游 Improve it!I have another hobby that is keeping pets.I have kept a lovely dog named Beibei for 3 years.I often play with her,I love her very much.I hope I can share the happiness with my pe

17、n friend.喜欢养宠物喜欢养宠物参考范文参考范文Dear Peter,Im writing to ask whether you can do me a favour.I want to have a girl pen friend about 15 years old,I will be happier if she has the same interests as mine.I like traveling very much.So I hope she is interested in traveling,too.If possible,we can travel togethe

18、r or share traveling experiences in our e-mails.I will tell her something interesting about the places that she wants to travel to.I believe I will improve my English by making such a good pen friend.I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours，Li Hua（2013年中考）假设你是Tony Li,在英国一所中学就读已大约一年，需要找一位家庭教师，条件

19、要求如下表所示，请你向你的老师Mr.RogerFike 写一封邮件，请他帮忙。性别，年龄，外貌 女，20-25，漂亮职业中小学英语老师或大学生性格热心助人，有耐心爱好读书，旅游特长说标准英语，熟悉英国历史、地理品一品品一品金太阳新课标资源网金太阳新课标资源网金太阳新课标资源网金太阳新课标资源网 25能力提升能力提升请适当增加细节请适当增加细节 Yesterday I went to the Friendship Store.I saw a foreigner buying clothes.He spoke English.The shop assistant couldnt understand him.I translated for them.They said thanks to me.I think the shop assistant should know foreign language.