【课件】高考新题型读后续写：母爱读后续写.ppt

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1、高考新题型读后续写 Continuation Writing Leading-inJenny her motherhave a quarrelDo you know how to fix a broken relationship caused by a quarrel?Their relationship is _.broken1.Reading(读取信息)2.Predicting（预测发展）3.Writing（续写故事）4.Polishing（润色定稿）Continuation writing 1.Whats the style of the given text?A.Exposition

2、(说明文)B.Argumentation（议论文）C.Narration（记叙文）Step1.Reading(读取信息)2.Read for basic information Read for elementsRead for elementswhowho whenwhen wherewhere whatwhat whywhyHowHowJenny mother sellerthat afternoonthe house,in the streetran out of the househad a quarrel with her mother?3.Read for plots A.A se

3、ller gave her a bowl of noodles when Jenny was hungry.B.One afternoon,Jenny quarreled with her mother and left home.C.Finally,Jenny felt regretful and decided to make an apology.D.The seller reminded Jenny of what her mother had done for her.BDevelopmentClimaxLater DevelopmentEndingADC?Story Mountai

4、n After quarreling with her mother,Jenny ran out of the house angrily and then with the help of a kind seller,she realized mistakes and decided to go home to make an apology.Main idea:4.Read for language styles语言特色包括：语言特色包括：非谓语动词“V-ing/V-ed/todo”，with的复合结构，倒装句，三大从句，强调句it的形式主语/宾语，虚拟语气，对话，独白等等。4.Read

5、for language styles1.非谓语动词V-ing3处、V-ed1处2.with的复合结构1处3.从句6处4.强调句1处5.形容词作状语1处6.对话5.Read for feelings Storyline How did Jenny feel about her mother?BeginningDevelopmentClimaxLater DevelopmentEndingquarreled,ran out(para1)a seller,a bowl of noodles(para2)angry/annoyedmean and cruelregretful and gratefu

6、l?sorrythe sellers words,mothers love(para3&4)decided to make an apology and went home(para5)Tip1:紧扣紧扣原文最后一段以及原文最后一段以及给定的两首给定的两首句提示，预测故事结局句提示，预测故事结局On the way home Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.Paragraph 1Approaching the doorway,

7、Jenny took a deep breath.Paragraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.？EndingJenny apologized to her mother and her mother forgave her.1.Predict the ending of the story Step2.Predicting（预测发展）positive para.2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.The ending of Para1？Jenny was i

8、n thought.para.1 Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.Jennys mother was not at home.Jennys psychological movement Predict the plots of Para1main plots Tip2 Two given sentences infers the plots of Para.1 (即：两即：两段首句定段首句定一框一框)Tip3:Ask 3 questions and write down 5 action verbs Predict the pl

9、ots of Para1What did Jenny do/feel before her mother came back?What was Jenny thinking about?Why did Jenny take a deep breath？para.1 Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.Questionsaction verbs1.push/knock at the door2.enter3.sink down onto the sofa /sit on the sofa 4.remember/look back on

10、 5.feel ashamed 6.roll down para.2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.Predict the plots of Para2main plots Jenny apologized to her mother and her mother forgave her.harmonious interactions between Jenny and her mother Tip4：The 2nd beginning and a positive ending infers the plots of Para

11、.2 (即：二即：二框二首正框二首正能量能量)para.2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.How did Jennys mother feel when she saw Jenny come back home?What would Jenny say when apologizing to her mother?How did her mother respond to her apology?Predict the plots of Para2QuestionsAction verbs1.raise head and see

12、2.feel tired and relieved3.hug/throw oneself into sbs arm 4.apologize/express thanks5.smileTip3:Ask 3 questions and write down 5 action verbsWhat message do we need to convey through the story?love understanding theme:a mother-daughter relationshippositiveTip5:If you like,make a simple commment on t

13、he theme of the story at the end of your writing.（升华主题）（升华主题）Love is understanding.Love based on mutual understanding is the most touching.True love is based on mutual understanding.Nothing approaches the love of a mother for her child.Do you know how to fix a broken relationship caused by a quarrel

14、?Jenny her mother lovestand in the others shoesmutual understanding Paragraph 1Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath _Paragraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._Tip6:续写两段字数应为150词左右 应遵循七八原则（即每段保持在70-80词之间）Step3.Writing(续写故事)Step3.Writing(续写故事)Useful phrases and sentences t

15、o describe emotions:1.a flash of grief came upon sb.2.a satisfied look 3.tears of happiness flowing down 4.Her heart was pumping.5.Her heart was brimming over with happiness.6.The last word went like a bullet to my heart.7.A ripple of sadness welled up inside her.8.She felt like she was floating in

16、an ocean of sadness/happiness.9.So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.10.So many thoughts crowded into her mind,all at once.Tip7:Vivid writing:use different structures（结构）（结构）use transitional words（过渡）（过渡）add some details（细节）（细节）Appreciate your classmates articles and lea

17、rn from each other.ApproachApproaching the doorwaying the doorway,Jenny took a deep breathJenny took a deep breath.When she pushed the door open and entered the house,she found her mother was not in.Tired and sad,she sank down onto the sofa.“Where could my mother be?”she wondered.“Was she still angr

18、y with me?”Again,the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind.She remembered her rudeness to her mother.Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her.She rather felt ashamed and tears began to roll down her cheeks.A gentle touch on

19、her hair called her mind back.she raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother.“Here you come!Ive been looking for you.”she said,tired and relieved.Jenny couldnt help throwing herself into her mothers arms.“Mum,Im so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.”She expressed her sinc

20、ere apology and great gratitude.Hearing this,her mother smiled,patting her back gently.possible version：Is there anything in common with the given text for the language style?形容词短语作状语分词短语作状语.对话从句从句Writing Criteria(评价标准评价标准):1.Your story should be well connected to the given passage and the beginning

21、s of the two paragraphs.2.Your writing should be rich in vocabulary,grammar items and sentence patterns.3.Your story should be coherent(连贯连贯)，logical and reasonable.连贯性连贯性逻辑性逻辑性合理性合理性丰富性丰富性融合性融合性准确性准确性 What makes a good continuation writing?Step1:Reading style/basic information/plots/language styles

22、/feelingsStep 2:Predicting the given two sentences,reasonable and positive endingStep 3:Writing transitional words,details,sentence structures and language stylesStep 4:Polishing refer to the Writing CriteriaSteps to continue a storyto continue a storyTip：两：两段首句定段首句定一框，二框二首正能量一框，二框二首正能量Practice makes perfect!Practice makes perfect!You do,you get!You do,you get!Wish you a pleasant journey Wish you a pleasant journey of learning English!of learning English!AssignmentPolish your writing after class.