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1、2021年1月浙江高考目录The Given TextSampleConceptionComprehensionAccumulationThe Given Text01“No!Not my precious pumpkin!”I protested.Trying new things brings us joy and knowledge.Object:final given placeWhen I pulled hard,my noseThe air inside the _(中空的蔬菜)was full of my anxious breath.It was five or six min

2、utes though it felt much longer.pumpkin,dad,Jason,mom,head,I tried to get my head out of the pumpkin.pumpkin,dad,Jason,mom,head,What was the video about?Paragraph 2:The video was posted the Monday before Halloween.In the pumpkin field,I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the bigge

3、st pumpkin.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；“You havent read the comments yet.It was about us carving our pumpkins.I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family.My excitement was short-lived.Paragraph 1:Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides,but I was determined to pr

4、ove my point.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Key Elements From the Given Text(1)It was about how I got my head out of the pumpkin.Hair in knots,nose and chain covered in pumpkin flesh,I let out a sigh of relief.Im unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seem

5、ed to make perfect sense at the time.StuckStuckStuckStuck in a in a in a in a PumpkinPumpkinPumpkinPumpkin Pumpkin（南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition.We visit a local farm every October.In the pumpkin field,I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.My dad

6、 has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home,and as the eldest child I have an advantage I carried an 85-pounder back last year.This year,it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother,Jason,was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before tak

7、ing out their insides,but I was determined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table,with my mom filming the annual event.Im unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin r

8、esting on the table,hole uppermost,I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then,as I went on with my task,unwilling to quit,my nose briefly prevented entry.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it,like a cork（软木塞）forced into a bottle.I w

9、as able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy.“Im going to set it down,now,”I said,and with Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was only when I tried to remove my h

10、ead that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard,my noseParagraph 1:It was about us carving our pumpkins.Family traditions leave wonderful memories for the children._ a chill to the pit of her stomach,almost striking her down with the harsh real

11、ity.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；When I pulled hard,my noseThe Given TextIm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.This year,it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother,Jason,was the

12、winner.Object:Thinking back to my action,I felt I was a bit out of my head.Hair in knots,nose and chain covered in pumpkin flesh,I let out a sigh of relief.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；My excitement was short-lived.Paragraph 1:Key Elements From the Given Text(1)_ a chill to the pit of her stomach,almost striking

13、 her down with the harsh reality.after I failed to pull my head out of the pumpkin续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.ComprehensionObject:From this experience,we learned that.“Im going to set it down,now,”I said,and with Jason helping to support its weight,I be

14、nt back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was about us carving our pumpkins.got in the way.I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle,but it was no use.“I cant get it out!”I shouted,my voice sounding unnaturally loud

15、in the enclosed space.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.Paragraph 2:The video was posted the Monday before Halloween.Comprehension02Key Elements From the Given Text(1)major char

16、acters personalitiesappearances relationshipI IJasonJasondad,momdad,momcurious and boldcurious and boldhelpfulhelpfulno descriptionno descriptionhead stuck in a head stuck in a pumpkinpumpkinyoungyoungmom:holding mom:holding a cameraa camerahelp-receiverhelp-receiverhelp-giverhelp-giveradviseradvise

17、r;videographervideographerKey Elements From the Given Text(2)timeplacefinal given timefinal given placeThis year.This year.before Halloweenbefore Halloween.at the kitchen table(at our home)at the kitchen table(at our home)after I failed to pull my head out of the pumpkinafter I failed to pull my hea

18、d out of the pumpkinat the kitchen tableat the kitchen tablecuriousWhile we were carving pumpkins at the kitchen table,I decided to force my head into the pumpkin.excitedWith some effort,I succeeded,and straightened up with the pumpkin resting on my shoulders.anxious got in a panicI pulled hard,and

19、tried to find the right angle,but it was no use.I decided to put the pumpkin down,but then I realized I got stuck.relative emotions with the development of the storylinerelative emotions with the development of the storyline(1)Im unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would sett

20、le the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.Thinking back to my action,I felt I was a bit out of my head.(2)All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table,with my mom filming the annual event.(3)“Im going to set it down,now,”I said,and with Jason helping to support its weight,I b

21、ent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.The process of me sticking my head in the pumpkin was probably recorded.The pumpkin on my head was quite heavy,and I needed help to place it.More Hidden More Hidden InformationInformationConception03Try to figure out a logical sequence with Try to

22、 figure out a logical sequence with the 10 the 10 underlined words.pumpkin,dad,Jason,mom,head,nose,managed,support,rest,pulled Characters:Act:Appearance:Condition:Object:dad,Jason,momsupport,rest,pulledhead,nosemanagedpumpkin1.What happened in the five or six minutes?I tried to get my head out of th

23、e pumpkin.My family members helped me.2.What was the video about?It was about how I stuck my head in the pumpkin.It was about how I got my head out of the pumpkin.It was about us carving our pumpkins.Paragraph 1:It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.Paragraph 2:The video was posted o

24、nline the Monday before Halloween.3.What might happen after the video was posted?A lot of viewers watched it and left comments People visited our home to look at the pumpkinParagraph 2:The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.4.What might be the ending of this story?We enjoyed the Hal

25、loween celebration.I became famous for sticking my head inside a pumpkin.We made up a new plan for next years celebration.The possible lessons or conclusionsFrom this experience,we learned that.Trying new things brings us joy and knowledge.Family traditions leave wonderful memories for the children.

26、We should stay calm and act effectively when facing trouble.Sample04Paragraph 1:It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.The air inside the hollow vegetable was full of my anxious breath.I could hear my sisters laughter and Jasons muffled voice talking about cutting the giant thing open

27、.“No!Not my precious pumpkin!”I protested.Eventually,Dad helped me adjust my body to a more relaxed position,and pulled the pumpkin gently off my head.Hair in knots,nose and chain covered in pumpkin flesh,I let out a sigh of relief.Thats when I realized the camera had been rolling the whole time!Rea

28、d one possible version and make sure you know how the plot develops.动作替换动作肖像动作环境替换Read one possible version and make sure you know how the plot develops.Paragraph 2:The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.I looked just like a pumpkin head in it.Embarrassed and a little annoyed,I fled

29、 to my room like a flash of light,but Mom stopped me.“You havent read the comments yet.”I scrolled down the screen and marveled at the stories the viewers shared about Halloween.One girl recalled celebrating it with her brothers and sisters,and thanked us for“bringing her home”.The words brought war

30、mth to my heart and tears to my eyes.I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family.(176 words)神态出彩结尾动作动作比喻Accumulation051.I could hear my sisters _(laugh)and Jasons _(muffle)voice talking about cutting the giant thing open.2.The words brought _(warm)to my heart and tears to my eyes

31、.3.I felt lucky to be a part of this _(mischief)yet _(love)family.laughterwarmthmischievouslovingReview and Practicemuffled4.The air inside the _(中空的蔬菜)was full of my anxious breath.5.Hair in knots,nose and chain covered in pumpkin flesh,I let out _(松了一口气).6.I _(向下滚动)the screen and _(惊叹于)the stories

32、 the viewers shared about Halloween.hollow vegetablea sigh of reliefscrolled downmarveled at7.Eventually,Dad helped me adjust my body to a more relaxed position,and pulled the pumpkin gently off my head.（仿写）我的滑雪教练帮我把身体调整到了正确的姿势，以便我能在赛道上保持平衡。My ski instructor helped me _ _ so that I could keep balance on the ski runs.adjust my body to a correctposition8.The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes.（仿写）这句话令她心寒，残酷的现实几乎把她击垮了。_ a chill to the pit of her stomach,almost striking her down with the harsh reality.The words brought