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1、Continuation WritingContent?Language?What difficulties are you faced with in continuation writing?评分时，应主要从内容、词汇和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：（1）续写内容的完整性,以及与原文情境的融洽度；（2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性；What makes a good continuation writing?What makes a good continuation writing?What makes a good continuati

2、on writing?What makes a good continuation writing?AssessmentAssessmentAssessmentAssessment Criteria Criteria Criteria Criteria coherent(well connected)accurate/rich/vivid logical and reasonableStep1 Analyze the storyHow to plot?How to plot?Analysis of Teac hoW hen What W Read for the elements and ma

3、in ideaThe feeling of the main character.BeginningClimaxEndingPara1:Maria knew her neighbor,Mrs.Hernandez s routine and they are good friends.Para2:Maria did not see Mrs.Hernandez as usualPara3:Maria told that to her family.Para4:The next Moring,Maria still didnt see Mrs.Hernandez.Para1:Marias mothe

4、r agreed to go with worried daughter to their neighbors houseworriedfriendlya little worried more worried1.Read for the plot&emotional changePara2:Then,Maria and her mother waited there anxiously.Main idea of the story a（n）_,_,school girlMMMMariaMrs.Hernandez a _neighborneighbor&good friends 2.Read

5、for Charactersalways enjoy their small talks and specially-made cookies from her neighbor.Always smiled and stopped to chat,and gave Maira a box of her specially-made cookies with a note.warm-heartedcaringkindQuestion:Why did Mrs.Hernandez and her dog fail to show up at the regular time?Step1 Analyz

6、e the story Step2 Frame your essay with 2 given sentences How to plot?How to plot?Para.1:Marias mother agreed to go with her worried daughter to their neighbors house.How did Maria make sure whether Mrs.Hernandez was at home or not?How was Mrs.Hernandez and her dog?What happened to them?what did Mar

7、ia and her mother do?Para.2:Then,Maria and her mother waited there anxiously.Moments later,some doctors arrived in an ambulance.What did the doctors do?What did the doctors say?Whats the reaction of Maria、her mother and the neighbor?The ending.(They phoned the hospital)(details)knock the door but no

8、body anwsered(maybe something terrible happened to her)(expressing her concern for Mrs.Hernandez)any details can be reused to the textSince Mrs.Hernandez was asleep,Maria left her some cookies with a note that read:“To my good friend Mrs.Hernandez:Feel better,Ill look after Marisol,and I miss youMar

9、ia.”CoherenceBy writing the article,the writer intends to _ describe a terrible experience of Mrs.Hernandez highlight an act of kindness and the friendship between neighbors Its wise and necessary to share a story with a bright and positive theme.3.Read for the theme the themePrinciple:Positive1.Car

10、e is just like the quilt(被子)in the cold night that can give warmth.2.People come to their neighbors in trouble.人到难处邻里来。3.Love and kindness can work wonders.Continuation WritingPara.1:Marias mother agreed to go with her worried daughter to their neighbors house.Maria came to the house and rang the be

11、ll to find_ out whether Mrs.Hernandez was at home.Maria saw the dog Marisol and Mrs.Hernandez lying on the_ floor.She and her mother rang the hospital._ _ Organize language with EASELinguistic description:Emotion,Action,Speech,EnvironmentHow to How to write?write?(EASE:emotion +actions +speech+envir

12、onment)Maria come to the house and rang the bell to find out whether Mrs.Hernandez was at home.Peer：to look closely or carefully at sth,especially when you cannot see it clearlyUneasy,fearful,nervous,anxious,concerned,Maria saw the dog Marisol，and Mrs.Hernandez lying on the floor.She and her mother

13、rang the hospital.Jumpleap to its feetwag the taillean against the floorSprawl on the bedlie flat on ones back As they approached Mrs.Hernandezs house,Maria felt uneasy,She rang the doorbell several times.Marias mother repeatedly called out to Mrs.Hernandez.Inside,Marisol began to bark.“something te

14、rrible must happen to Mrs.Hernandez”,Maria spoke to her mother.Feeling extremely fearful,Maria pushed aside the bushes by the front window and peered inside.Para.1:Marias mother agreed to go with her worried daughter to their neighbors house.2.Maria saw the dog Marisol and Mrs.Hernandez lying on the

15、 floor.She and her mother rang the hospital.The first thing she saw was Marisol,jumping excitedly and barking desperately.Then she saw Mrs.Hernandezs motionless body sprawled on the floor.Maria felt helpless.“Mom,”she screamed,“get help!”Marias mother rushed to a neighbors house and telephoned the h

16、ospital.1.Use environmental descriptions to impress readers.2.Use actions to develop the story and show feelings.4.Use rich/accurate language to make it vivid and authentic.Writing guidelines3.Use inner speech and dialogues to illustrate feelings and thread eventHomework:Finish Para 2.Para.2:3.Mrs.H

17、ernandez fell over herself and hurt herself.Maria an her mother visited her in the hospital.They discovered that Mrs.Hernandez had slipped and broken her hip,and they took her to hospital at once.That afternoon,Maria and her mother dropped by the hospital.A nurse said Marias concern for her neighbor

18、s safety had saved Mrs.Hernandezs life.She said Mrs.Hernandez would recover completely.Since Mrs.Hernandez was asleep,Maria left her some cookies with a note that read:“To my good friend Mrs.Hernandez:Feel better,Ill look after Marisol,and I miss youMaria.”Slip，fall over oneselfhave a fall Coherence

19、AppreciationMarias mother agreed to go with her worried daughter to their neighbors house.As they approached Mrs.Hernandezs house,Maria felt uneasy.She rang the doorbell several times.Marias mother repeatedly called out to Mrs.Hernandez.Inside,Marisol began to bark.Now extremely fearful,Maria pushed

20、 aside the bushes by the front window and peered inside.The first thing she saw was Marisol,jumping excitedly and barking desperately.Then she saw Mrs.Hernandezs motionless body sprawled on the floor.Maria felt helpless.“Mom,”she screamed,“get help!”Marias mother rushed to a neighbors house and tele

21、phoned the hospital.Then,Maria and her mother waited there anxiously.Moments later,some doctors arrived in an ambulance.They discovered that Mrs.Hernandez had slipped and broken her hip,and they took her to hospital at once.That afternoon,Maria and her mother dropped by the hospital.A nurse said Mar

22、ias concern for her neighbors safety had saved Mrs.Hernandezs life.She said Mrs.Hernandez would recover completely.Since Mrs.Hernandez was asleep,Maria left her some cookies with a note that read:“To my good friend Mrs.Hernandez:Feel better,Ill look after Marisol,and I miss youMaria.”评分细则评分细则维度序号评价项

23、目立意1紧扣主题、弘扬正能量2结尾、完整逻辑3逻辑清晰、顺承上文4与段首句衔接合理内容5适当的有效对话6场景描写7修辞手法8人物塑造外貌9心理10动作维度序号评价项目语言11时态正确12词汇准确、丰富、地道13有多种高级句式14有效使用语句连接15拼写、大小写、标点16150词17书写干净、整洁、美观7 7个不：个不：一不增加新人物；二不增加旁支情节；三不用过多对话；四不能负能量结局；五不在文末设置悬念；六不偏高原文主题；七不违背逻辑常理Thanks for your listening！Maria knew her neighbors routine.Every day,Mrs.Hernan

24、dez walked her dog Marisol past Marias house,usually Just as Maria was hurrying for school in the morning and again when Maria was returning in the afternoon.Mrs.Hernandez,always smiling,always stopped to chat.Maria enjoyed their small talks.Then one day Mrs.Hernandez discovered that Maria like home

25、made cookies.From then on,she gave Maria a box of her specially-made cookies with a note that read,”To Maria-my good friend!”One cold November morning when Maria left for school,she didnt see Mrs.Hernandez and Marisol.Maria didnt know why.That afternoon her neighbor again failed to appear at the reg

26、ular time.Maria became a little worried.As she walked by Mrs.Hernandezs house,she looked at the house carefully and saw nothing unusual.Mrs.Hernandez just isnt home today,I guess,she spoke to herself.Later that night,Maria told her parents and her brother Ramon about not seeing Mrs.Hernandez.She ask

27、ed them if they knew where their neighbor had gone.While Maria was worried Ramon thought that nothing was wrong.Marias mother also tried to make Maria feel better:She probably went to see a doctor.Or maybe shes in another city visiting her daughter Still,Maria was not satisfied.She asked her parents

28、 if perhaps she should knock on Mrs.Hernandezs door.Marias father was not worried either.He thought that they shouldnt bother Mrs.Hernandez.“Maria,honey,Im certain shes just fine.We neednt spend time worrying about her.The next morning,Maria still didnt see Mrs.Hernandez.Maria became even more worri

29、ed Instead of waiting for the school bus,she rushed back home.Marias mother was washing the breakfast dishes.I didnt see Mrs.Hernandez again this morning,and now Im terribly worried about her.Maria said.She didnt talk about going away,so I want to check on her before going to school.I hope youll com

30、e with me.Paragraph 1:Marias mother agreed to go with her worried daughter to their neighbors house.Paragraph 2:Then,Maria and her mother waited there anxiously.Moments later,some doctors arrived in an ambulance.5 Rs3 PrinciplesCEASERead for the _/_/_/_/_1.Action-_2.Conflict-_3.Negative-_Coherence（衔

31、接）Linguistic（语言）description:_,_,_,_ 53 C with EASE（你的53很简单）plotemotional change characterconflictthemeResponseSolutionPositiveEmotionActionSpeechEnvironment 2.Read for the Conflict One cold November morning when Maria.she didnt see Mrs.Hernandez.Maria became a little worried “Mrs.Hernandez just isnt

32、 home today,I guess”That afternoon her neighbor again failed to appear at the regular time.The next morning,Maria still didnt see Mrs.Hernandez Maria become even more worried.“she didnt talk about going away”Conflict 1:Why did Mrs.Hernandez fail to show up at the regular time?Principle:Conflict-SolutionConflict2:Where did Mrs.Hernandez go?