【读后续写】高考英语复习读后续写 A Mother’s Day Supprise 练习 课件（共17张PPT）.pptx

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1、高考英语复习读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The twins were filled withexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprise they were planning forMothers Day.How pleased andproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyha

2、dwatched their mother in thekitchen.There was nothing to it.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgef

3、irst.Theyputsomericeintoapotofwaterand left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafound the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfrying

4、thebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingt

5、oshake.Thenextminute,theporridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinueto cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs handtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhi

6、shandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.语篇分析语篇分析主题语境：人与自我主题语境：人与自我生活生活WhatWhyHow双胞

7、胎Jeff和Jenna在母亲节的清晨想偷偷地给妈妈做爱心早餐，作为惊喜送给妈妈，结果事与愿违，不是面包片糊了，就是粥溢出了锅，甚至Jeff的手也烫伤了，现场一片狼藉，就在两人不知所措的时候，爸爸出现了本文选材非常贴近日常生活，通过讲述一对双胞胎在母亲节给母亲偷偷做早餐的故事，启发学生要通过实际行动来表达对母亲的爱。本文是记叙文。文章按照时间和事件发展的顺序展开。首先在第一段交代了事情发生的原因和背景，紧接着在第二段讲述了做早餐的整个过程，最后在第三段讲述了故事发展的高潮事与愿违、厨房一团糟。接下来是需要续写的两段，通过给出的首句可以看出，需要续写的是两部分：一、爸爸的出现，事情出现转机；二、早

8、餐顺利做好，孩子们端着早餐去叫妈妈，妈妈会有何种反应？文本结构文本结构What:*JennaandJeffplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.*Boiledporridgeputoutthefireandthestovewasamess.*Jeffshandwashurtwhentouchingthehotburner.*Thebreadinthepanturnedblack.A Mothers Day SurpriseWhen:MothersDayWho:Jeff,Jenna,FatherandMotherWhy:Makingbreakfas

9、tasasurpriseforMotherHow:Fatherappeared.Where:Inthekitchen语言知识语言知识地道地道表达表达1.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.(para.1)本句是简单句，plan to do sth.意为“计划去做某事”。French toast法式吐司，法国吐司（用面包片蘸蛋奶油炸而成）句意当他们把早餐端到妈妈的床上时，妈妈得有多么高兴和自豪。2.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.(para.1

10、)本句是一个主从复合句。句子的主干是How引导的感叹句。when引导时间状语从句。句意他们计划做法式吐司和鸡肉粥。语言知识语言知识地道地道表达表达3.Therewasnothingtoit.(para.1)本句是简单句。shooting out of the pot和starting to shake分别是动词-ing形式短语作noticed的宾语补足语。shoot一词形象生动，非常具有画面感。句意不是什么了不起的事。4.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.(para.3)句意然后Jeff注意到蒸汽从锅

11、里喷出来，锅盖开始晃动。语言知识语言知识语块积累语块积累与主题相关与主题相关：be filled with excitement 充满兴奋at last 最后，终于go down the stairs 下楼put into 把放入turn on 打开heat up 给加热go smoothly 进行顺利fry the bread 煎面包turn down 调低shoot out of 从喷出put out the fire 把火扑灭stay calm 保持冷静turn off 关闭give a cry of pain 发出痛苦的叫声catch the smell of burning 闻到糊味

12、故事脉络故事脉络OpeningBuild-upClimax双胞胎Jenna和Jeff筹划在母亲节那天为妈妈做早餐（法式吐司和鸡肉粥）。ResolutionEnding刚开始一切进展顺利，但随后Jeff煎糊了第一片面包，于是Jenna往锅中放入了另一片面包。Jeff发现溢出的粥把火扑灭了，在清理煤气灶时又不小心烫伤了手，与此同时Jenna发现另一片面包也糊了。这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了根据续写第二段提示句可知，早餐最终做好了，因此本段可围绕“爸爸出现”后给予双胞胎的帮助展开故事情节，可以是爸爸给他们指出补救办法，或者爸爸直接帮忙。不管是哪

13、种构思，双胞胎做早餐的困难在本段最好能得到解决。谋篇布局谋篇布局续写第一段续写第一段Para 1As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Howdidtheirfatherreacttothemess?Whatdidhedotohelpthetwins?Whatdidthetwinsdo?Q1Howdidthebreakfastturnout?Wheredidtheirfathergoafterhelpingthetwins?Q2根据提示句可知，双胞胎已经端着早餐上楼并叫醒妈妈，因此本段可围绕

14、双胞胎见到妈妈后的故事展开，可以穿插双胞胎和妈妈之间的对话，还可以提到爸爸佯装睡觉，最后可以自然式结尾，给故事画上句号，或者主题式结尾，突出“亲情”、“劳动”、“克服困难、解决问题”等主题。谋篇布局谋篇布局续写续写第二段第二段Para 2The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Whatdidthetwinssaytotheirmother?Q3Howdidtheirmotherfeelandreact?Didsheeatthebreakfast?Whatwastheirfatherdoingatthat

15、time?Q4Whatmighthappenbetweenthetwinsandtheirfather?Whatcanbeaproperending?Q51.续写第一段写第一段应注意父注意父亲的意外出的意外出现与出手相助是否会打乱双胞胎的与出手相助是否会打乱双胞胎的计划，划，此此处应如何如何设置情置情节才能才能让“母母亲节惊喜惊喜”如期如期发生呢？可以按常理思考，生呢？可以按常理思考，这是父是父亲和孩子和孩子们之之间的一个小秘密的一个小秘密。2.续写第一段最好不要写具体的做写第一段最好不要写具体的做饭过程，避免与材料中关于做程，避免与材料中关于做饭过程程的的 描述描述重复重复。3.续写第二段可

16、以重点描写写第二段可以重点描写“惊喜惊喜”，与文章，与文章标题及首段相呼及首段相呼应。Tips拓展练习拓展练习假定你是李华，你参加的英语社团即将举办“母亲节的惊喜”分享会。请你就此写一篇小短文和大家分享，内容包括：1.准备的惊喜；2.遇到的问题；3.你的感受。注意：注意：词数100左右。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Onelookandheknewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheirdiscouragedfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthek

17、itchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.Thetwinscheeredupanddidastold.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadmadesomeeggsandwichesandcookedsomeoatporridge.Thenhewentbacktobedsecretly.Thetwinsputacardtheyhadmadebesidethebreakfast.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mo

18、ther up.Theyhuggedherandsaid“HappyMothersDay,dearMummy!”Motherhuggedthetwins,too.Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfast.SheshookFatherwhowaspretendingtosleep.Hepretendedastonishmentwhenhesawthebreakfast.Motherbitintoasandwichandsaiditwasthebestshehadevertasted.Jeffimmediatelywantedtohaveabite.Jennac

19、aughtherfatherseyeandtheylookedateachothersmilingly.One One possible versionpossible version:拓展练习拓展练习OnMothersDaylastyear,Idecidedtofryaneggformymotherbeforeshewenthomeatnoon.Thoughfriedeggsareusuallyservedinthemorning,IdidntthinkIhadanyotherbetterideastoshowmylovetoher.Fryingeggsseemseasy,butabithardforagreenhand.AfterIpouredoilandbrokeaneggintothefryingpan,Iforgottoturndownthefiresothatafewtinydropsofoilsuddenly“flew”outofthepanontomyhandandface.Theburnswerepainful.ButwhenIfinallyservedtheeggtomymother,shewasmovedtotears.Ithoughtitwasworthit.One One possible version:possible version: