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1、记叙文写作指导记叙文写作指导解佳琦4/24/10假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin文体：故事时态：过去人称：第一人称段落 第一段：几句话概括文章大体意思第二段：每幅图分别用几个句子细致描写、扩充。（简单句的堆砌 句型打造）第三段：总结概括注意时间：太阳 月亮 时钟地点泡泡：想法 场景人物动作：主配角 动作 心理Withspringcoming,theweatherb

2、ecomeswarmerandwarmer,andtreesandgrassturngreen.Whatasplendidspring!What a+Adj+n.=How+Adj+a+n.（多么.！）What an important thing it is to keep our promise!How important a thing it is to keep our promise!With 伴随With the increase/growth of With the advance of(science and technology),Wecameupwithseveralchoi

3、cessuchasgoingboating,climbingamountain,andgoingtoanamusementpark.Eventually,wereachedanagreementofmountainclimbing.Come up with:想出 赶上I had to run to come up with her.He could not come up with a proper answer.Reach an agreement 达成共识 取得一致意见过渡词AndEventually finally/at last/in the end/as a result then/

4、afterwards后来/thereafter在那以后Havingpreparedforthehiking,wesetoffthenextday.Therefore,wedevotedourselvestopickingthelitter,puttingthemawayintheplasticbags.非谓语we prepared for the hiking.we set off the next day.we devoted ourselves to picking the litter.we put them away in the plastic bags.Devote to 奉献给

5、投身于 致力于devote oneself heart and soul to ones workSet off 出发 动身过渡词Therefore所以 因此 thus/thereby/hence Butyet,westillfelthappyowingtooureffortstoprotectourenvironmentcleanandtidy,whichwasmuchmoreimportantthanenjoyingourselves.过渡词But yet但是 however/on the contrary/despite/whereas/instead/nevertheless/Owin

6、gto由于因为He is ill owing to excessive work.定语从句we still felt happy owing to our efforts to protect our environment clean and tidy.To protect our environment clean and tidy was much more important than enjoying ourselves.奥运会即将到来，你班组织了一次活动，查找街头拼写或翻译错误的英文标识。请将此次活动情况写信告诉给你的外国朋友Peter。Dearpeter，Howarethings

7、going？WehavebeenbusypreparingforthecomingOlympicsrecently.LastSundayYours,LiHuaBrainstormingBrainstorming拼写错误：translating/spellingmistakesmistranslatedorincorrectlyspeltEnglish第一幅图：泡泡Withacamera，notebooksandbottlesofwaterinourbackpacks，wesoonsetoutonourdetectivetripbybike.第二幅图：putitdownInthenotebook

8、；takeapictureofit第三幅图：地点 intheEnglishclass内容 handin/presentin“wellcometoBeijing”&”TakeNoticeofSafe”correcttranslation/version第四幅图：wrotetothenewspapercalltheirattentionto/bringtotheattention首首段段/句：句：概括总体信息概括总体信息 LastSundaywehadanactivitytosearchformistranslatedorincorrectlyspeltEnglishonstreetsignsWi

9、thspringcoming,theweatherbecomeswarmerandwarmer,andtreesandgrassturngreen.Whatasplendidspring!中心段中心段：细节Earlyinthemorningwegettogetherattheschoolgate.Withacamera，notebooksandbottlesofwaterinourbackpacks，wesoonsetoutonourdetectivetripbybike.Inthestreet,wewereallbusysearchingourtarget.Oncewefoundatarge

10、t,someofuswouldwriteitdowninthenotebookwhileotherswouldtakeapictureofit.Abusy，butwonderfulmorningsoonpassedIntheEnglishclassnextmorning，wepresentedinclassallthemistakescollected,including“WellcometoBeijing”and“TakeNoticeofSafe”WiththehelpofourEnglishteacherwediscussedandfinallycameupwiththecorrecttr

11、anslation“WelcometoBeijing”and“Caution！”andsoon.Thenwewrotetothenewspaperandtoldtheeditorsaboutourfindingsassembledassemblednosingaboutnosingaboutdelightfuldelightful总结 （期望（期望 建建议）WehopeoureffortwillbeofsomehelptotheBeijingOlympics.有所帮助 Wewrotetothenewspaperandtoldtheeditorsaboutourfindingswhichwebe

12、lievedwouldbeofhelptotheBeijingOlympicstoacertainextent.在某种程度上HopeyoucometoBeijingatthattime,andIwillbehappytogiveyouaguide.Imlookingforwardtoyourkindreply.假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。(2009 北京)注意：词数不少于60 提示词

13、：郊区 suburbs开篇：April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In order to beautifying our motherland,our class made a meaningful tree-planting activity in the suburbs on the 12,April.描图：In the morning,we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,talking and laughing all

14、the way.It was a sunny day.All the students in our class got together in the morning and set out to the destination by bike.significativesignificativeUponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Arrivingthesuburbs,everybodyimm

15、ediatelybegantowork.Duringthetime,Somestudentsdugholes,andsomestudentscarriedyoungtreeseedlings,whenotherstudentswateredtheplantedyoungtrees.量量词+名名词+努力努力动词+动作作+(状状语)agroupofboys/abunchofboys;workhard/putgreateffortinabunchofboysputgreateffortindiggingholes,carryingandplantingyoungtreesinasweat.puton

16、eshandtoputoneshandtoinabadwayinabadway病情病情严严重重inafamilywayinafamilyway不拘礼不拘礼节节的的inafoginafog困惑的困惑的inagoodhumorinagoodhumor心情好心情好inapassioninapassion在盛怒之下在盛怒之下in(high)gleein(high)glee欢欢天喜地的天喜地的Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Afterplantingalltrees,webuiltupapostw

17、iththewords:lovingtrees,whichwemeanttosetasareminderforeducatingpeople.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.结尾：Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelitsourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.WearesoproudofourgreatworkandwehavedecidedthatwewillcarryouttheGreenActio

18、neveryyear.Wearefullyconvincedthatonlyinthisway,canwecontributetobuildupamoreharmoniousrelationshipbetweenhumanbeingsandnature.常用介词词组ATBYAt present 现在At work 在工作Learn sth by heart 牢记At the moment 当时At the foot of 在脚下By chance 偶然At once 马上At the starting line在起跑线处By all means 无论如何At one time 曾经At thi

19、s time of year 在一年的这个时候At that time在那时Aim at 瞄准Look at 看Above all 最重要的是，尤其是Rush at 冲向Smile at sb 对sb笑Throw at 朝.扔At a loss 不知所措,困惑ONTOWITHon a trip/journey/tour 在旅途中Prefer A to B 比起B来更喜欢A Deal with 处理on vacation 在假期Add to 加上，添加Provide sb with sth 为谁提供on the phone/radio 在电话里/收音机里The answer to 的答案Supp

20、ly sb with sth 为谁提供depend on 依赖Explain to sb 对解释Equip with 装备.配备on purpose 故意的Refer to 提到，涉及，参考Be Strict with sb 对很严格on the following day 第二天Apologize to sb for sth 因某事向某人道歉on time 准时Add up to总计为on fire 着火，在燃烧INFORABOUTBelieve in 相信Respect(n)for sb 对某人的尊敬Talk about sth 谈论某事Lie in 存在于 Theanswerliesin

21、thesmallcluesinthestory.Thank sb for sth 因为某事感谢某人Wonder about sth 想知道某事Have trouble in doing sth 做有困难For a moment 暂时Worry about sth 担心某事Take a pleasure in doing sth 乐于做事Ask for 要求得到，要求见某人Complain about 抱怨Keep/bear sth in mind 记住Be strict in sth 对某事严格ONIn the name of 以的名义On ones own 凭自己.In no time 马上

22、In a moment 马上In the day在白天FromINTOOFPrevent/keep/stop sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事Change/turn/translateinto.改变/转变/翻译.成.Remind sb of sth 提醒某人某事Suffer from 遭受Run into 向.跑去warn sb of sth 警告某人某事Tell A from B 把A从B中辨认出来cutinto halves(cut.in half)把.切成两半be tired of sth 厌倦做某事Far from 远离Divide.into 把分成.Protect/save sb from.在某环境下保护/拯救某人OFFDifferent from 和.不同take off 脱下，起飞Apart from除外还tear off 把.撕掉/扯掉Break away from 从.挣脱，脱离