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1、雅思写作大作文话题思路指导：犯罪类 每到接近雅思索试前一天，考生们就起先焦虑，写作总计1小时，时间转瞬即逝，留给考生规划写作思路的时间不多，想要快速进入笔落惊风雨下笔如有神的境界?台前幕后功夫少不了，最重要的还是提前打算好写作思路。本期我就为大家带来雅思写作大作文犯罪类话题的相关写作思路指导。 雅思写作大作文话题思路指导：犯罪类 首先我们来看一下关于犯罪类写作话题有哪些，主要有分析犯罪的缘由，青少年犯罪问题以及如何降低犯罪。话题题目如下： The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage t

2、hem to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extend do you agree or disagree? In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be puni

3、shed? In many countries crime is increasing. What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation? 下面我们就一一分析一下。 首先：关于犯罪的成因。 无论是青少年犯罪或者成年人犯罪，首先应当想到的是经济问题，经济问题会影响社会的稳定，如失业率的提升，失学、食物匮乏、家庭负担加重甚至破产，这时就会滋生犯罪。而贫困落后地区的儿童往往面临失学问题，也是造成青少年犯罪的重要缘由。 由经济层面进入教化层面，大部分暴力犯罪者的受教化程度比较低，他们因为贫困过早

4、的进入社会，或者失业导致流落街头，这类人群冲动易怒，易发生冲突。 心理健康问题，这是比较简单忽视的问题。校内暴力者本身会存在心理问题，甚至场景是校内暴力，家庭暴力的受害者。 这里有一些特别的犯罪比如网络诈骗、经济犯罪这些则是其他缘由，要单独说。由于信息技术发达，个人信息平安遭到窃取，给网络诈骗可乘之机。还有就是一些机构腐败滋生。高科技犯罪者本身的受教化程度可能很高，智商也高，这时候我们要转换思路，这类高科技犯罪背后的缘由是法律意识淡薄。 犯罪情节由轻到重包括：校内暴力、盗窃、杀人，经济犯罪、网络诈骗等。近年来青少年犯罪的相关新闻比较多见，建议考生多关注相关报道，新闻中会给出相关的事务分析。 分

5、析完成因，后面就要考虑如何降低犯罪，根据情节的严峻程度做不同的处理。 情节稍微的，小惩小戒，情节严峻者就要毫不留情的惩罚，甚至拘禁。 面对青少年犯罪，对于情节较轻的一般实行订正引导。情节严峻的如盗窃、伤人，那么就须要实行肯定惩罚措施，情节严峻到伤人的，则应当依法实行措施。有严峻暴力倾向，反人类的行为的青少年，建议实行心理治理和法律约束。同时对被害人也须要进行心理治疗。 然而预防青少年犯罪才是从根本上削减或降低犯罪损害的有效措施。来自学校，管教所和家庭的教化很重要。最终，为了避开再次误入歧途，视状况为青少年罪犯供应必要的帮助和就业指导等。 最终，如何有效地降低犯罪或抑制犯罪，当然是提高就业率和加

6、强国家的平安意识。 关于反复犯罪，并不能完全依靠监狱解决，监狱能关住的只有严峻暴力倾向的罪犯，而大部分初犯者，他们的人生还很长，须要社会的重新接纳。 雅思写作素材之犯罪类 1. 先来说说犯罪份子该如何表达 criminals 名词，罪犯(值得留意的是，该词有形容词性)。 offenders 名词，罪犯，违法者。 convicts 名词，罪犯，囚徒(前段时间很红的一套书囚徒健身，"Convict Conditioning")。 culprits 名词，犯人。同时，本词可以指的是被指控犯罪的人。 outlaws 名词，罪犯。也有动词词性，并且为及物动词，译为宣布某事为不合法。

7、suspect (criminal suspect)名词，犯罪嫌疑人。其实，在法庭最终宣判之前，我们口中的罪犯多数状况下应当用这个词表达，更为严谨。 prisoner 名词，犯人，囚犯。 juvenile criminals 名词，青少年罪犯。 minor criminals 名词，未成年罪犯。 juvenile delinquent / juvenile offender 名词，少年犯，或行为不端的青少年 值得留意的是，其实在雅思写作犯罪类的话题中，未成年人犯罪往往是常见话题。因此后面几个词汇，须要大家重点驾驭。 2. 来说说犯罪这件事该如何表达，要留意词性标注 commit a crime

8、 ( commit crimes ) 动宾，犯罪 violate the law / break the law 动宾，犯罪，违法 offend against the law 动宾，违法 violent crimes / non-violent crimes 形容词 + 名词，暴力犯罪 / 非暴力犯罪 delinquent behaviors / illegal acts / lawless behaviors 形容词 + 名词，不法的行为 juvenile delinquency 名词，特指青少年的不法行为 illegality 名词，泛指全部违法行为。此外，immorality 名词，指

9、的是不道德的行为，其实近似于违法行为，但是略有区分。同理，副词 illegally 和 immorally 也是类似的区分 wrongdoing / misconduct / delinquency 名词，都是指的是行为不端 请见如下例文：(青少年违法之后应当如何被惩处恒久是雅思索试的常见话题) There is no denying that everyone should be punished due to his/her illegality, no matter how old he/she is. Notwithstanding, this does not imply that

10、juvenile culprits should be treated as equally as adult prisoners. Juvenile detentions ought to be the place for those minor offenders instead of common jails, and besides juvenile suspects should be on trial in juvenile court where their right can be protected much better. Juvenile convicts with vi

11、olent crimes should be detained in juvenile detentions as they might be potential threats to our society, and on the other hand minor culprits with non-violent crimes can be punished with more flexibility such as being forced to do social work. PS: Juvenile detentions 名词，少管所 juvenile court 名词，未成年人法庭

12、 detain 及物动词，羁押 3. 犯罪率的表达方式 Crime rate / incident of crime 如何降低犯罪率，是常常在雅思写作中被探讨的话题。 Unbelievably high juvenile crime rate is plaguing many countries all over the world, and how to reduce it has become prime task for those governments for a long time. 4.rehabilitate criminals / reform criminals 动宾，改造

13、罪犯 Main function of prisons is not only punishing culprits with locking them up but also rehabilitating them as everyone no matter what he/she has done deserves a second chance. 监狱的功能不仅是限制犯人的自由，还要给这些犯人供应一个改过自新的机会。 5. 几个导致青少年犯罪的缘由如下： Lack of moral education 名词性，缺少德育教化(lack 一词在实际写作中是考生们常犯错误的地方，请看后面的注解

14、。) Inappropriate parenting 名词性，不恰当的家庭教化 Being exposed to misleading information from media 动名词性质，暴露于媒体的诱导性信息 Lack of ability of telling right from wrong 名词性，缺少辨别是非的实力 Blindly imitate what they often see or read in media 动宾结构，盲目仿照在媒体中看到的或者听到的事物 PS： 关于 lack 首先，可以是及物动词。例如：With stress from exams, studen

15、ts lack enthusiasm on learning any kind of art. 其次，名词，多用于词组 be lack of / be lack in = be short of 例如：Generally speaking, high crime rate, to a great extent, can be attributed to lack of law enforcement capacity of police. 再次，lacking 形容词，常用词组 be lacking of / be lacking in 例如： Fresh graduates are usua

16、lly lacking in working experience that is required badly on majority of job positions. 雅思写作：犯罪审判该不该在电视上播放 雅思写作范文：犯罪审判该不该在电视上播放。In some countries, some criminal trials are shown on the television and the general public can watch them. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Give reaso

17、ns for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. 雅思写作题目类型：利弊分析 话题：犯罪 大纲： 优点：1. 公众教化(降低犯罪率);2.法制监督(公正，用语);3. 司法公信力(信任与平安感;激励法律途径) 缺点：1. 嫌疑人平安;2. 隐私; 范文： The mass media of some nations including mine has entitled to access some court

18、 trials so that the public can watch and review law suits on TV, internet and newspaper. Although the privacy or even security of suspects may be invaded or threatened in certain cases, this progressive policy definitively benefits more not only for the persons on trial but for normal ones in the na

19、tional context. The drawbacks of the enforcement mainly focus on men in court. Apparently, suspects privacy is to be respected before the sentence which means the deprivation of its political rights and even some victims are unwilling to expose their tragedy to the public, toughening the aftermath a

20、nd rehabilitation. What is more, it is easy to assume that the vindicated sometimes get hurt out of court when he or she is innocent but the public believe him or her guilty. Despite the previous two factors, the progress this decision has made is prominent in three aspects. The first comes from the

21、 easier access of law issues and the public learn the principle and details about laws and decrees, knowing the legal limits and thus bringing down the crime rate. Another profit for both the public and suspects is that this performance online is a kind of supervision in a much larger scale incompar

22、ison with the jury, which enhance judges level like expertise and language. Last but not least, this implement gain much public trust so citizens feel secured and would turn to lawyers and courts for help when necessary. In conclusion, this action educates the public, monitor the legal system and wi

23、n the trust. The merits obviously outweigh the demerits and it could be better when the will and privacy of interested parties like juveniles can be considered and protected. 雅思写作大作文范文：犯罪的缘由及针对性方法 剑10G类testA雅思写作大作文范文 Writing Task 2 In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you th

24、ink are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? 参考范文犯罪的缘由及针对性方法 In this essay, I will explore the causes of crime and how we can go about eliminating crime from our society by tackling the causes. As we know, crime has become a hot issue in todays society. It seems that not a da

25、y goes by without newspaper headlines such as “15 dead in gangland murder spree” and “Bankers steal 90 million from childrens charity” . The question is why? What drives people to do such I terrible things? I believe the cause of most, if not all, crime comes down to opportunity and education. Simpl

26、y put, if a person has few options in life, he may become desperate for the things most of us take for granted (food, clothing etc) and steal them. On the other hand, if a I person has the opportunity to break the law for his own benefit and figures that the odds are I against them being caught, he

27、is fairly likely to do so (banking fraud, confidence schemes and I such). In terms of education, either a person is unaware of the damage he causes, or he simply sees no other way to get what he wants. Both of these causes must be tackled if we wish to reduce crime in our societies. I would recommen

28、d improving basic living standards to solve the problem of opportunistic crime. If the government provides all citizens with a house, food, clothing and health care, then there should be no reason for a person to steal. Further, an ethic of hard work should also be instilled in the citizenry - the i

29、dea that some people get more because they deserve it, either they work harder or are simply better at their job than other people, and therefore they should be rewarded for this. This should be indoctrinated in a person from birth. In this way, we would see people become more productive and less wi

30、lling to cheat their way to their goals. (328 words) 在这篇文章中，我将阐释犯罪的缘由，以及我们如何能够针对这些缘由削减社会中的犯罪。 正如我们所知，犯罪已经成为当今社会的热点问题。几乎每天的报纸头条上都会有诸如此类的标题“15人死于黑社会谋杀混战”或“银行家从儿童基金会挪用9000万”。问题是为什么?是什么驱使人们做出如此恶劣的事情?我认为大部分即使不是全部犯罪都是源于机会主义和教化缺失。简洁来说，假如某人在生活中别无选择，他便会极其渴望得到大部分人都习以为常的东西(如食物、衣物等)，并盗取它们。从另一方面来说，假如某人有机会为个人利益而违

31、反法律，并且认为被抓住的可能性不大，那么他极有可能会以身试法(如银行诈骗、信用欺诈等)。至于教化缺失，则指的是某人意识不到自身引起的损害，或者是他找不到其他方式获得他想要的。假如我们希望削减社会中的犯罪，那么这两方面的问题必需得到解决。 我建议通过提高基本生活水准来解决机会主义犯罪问题。假如政府赐予全部公民房子、食物、衣物和医保，那么人们就没有理由去偷盗。另外，还应当向全部公民灌输辛勤工作的道德观，即多劳者多得他们或是工作更努力，或只是工作实力比他人更好，因此他们应当有所收获。这样的意识应当从一个人诞生时就被灌输。这样一来，我们就能看到人们变得更有效率，而不再想用欺诈的手段达到目的。 雅思写作大作文话题思路指导：犯罪类本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第15页 共15页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页