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1、雅思哥写作干货:7分范文赏析 雅思7分写作是怎么样的?下面给大家共享雅思哥的写作干货:7分范文赏析,希望大家学习别人写作的优点,取长补短,提高自己的雅思作文成果。 雅思哥写作干货:7分范文篇1 Nowadays some people have the anti-social behavior and are lack of respect to others. What are the reasons? What are the solutions? Today there is a large increase in anti-social behavior, such as steali
2、ng, robbery and bullying, in almost every country. Also, irresponsibility and disrespect to others are common. The reason for the anti-social behavior are both complicated and varied. One possible reason for people to show anti-social behavior is that they may be dissatisfied with certain policies m
3、ade by the government, so they choose an extreme way to express their dissatisfaction. For example, a local government does not punish the businesses that cause pollution to the environment just because these companies pay a large sum of tax every year. As a result, some people intentionally hurt em
4、ployees working for these companies as a warning. Another reason is that some people lack education in learning how to respect and how law works when they were young, so they fail to realize what harm their behavior would cause to others. I think this explains why they appear harmful to the society.
5、 To address this problem, the government should listen to public opinions with an open mind, taking the benefit of all parties into consideration before making policy, and make every effort to meet peoples demand in fields like living environment, price index and working benefits. Public media shoul
6、d broadcast noncommercial advertisements to convey the importance of showing respect to others and obeying the law. Also, schools and parents ought to put emphasis on cultivating law-abiding consciousness and let youngsters know that only respecting others can obtain others respect. In sum, any anti
7、-social behavior is regarded as a threat to social order. Mostly , the ones that misbehave lack a good understanding in manners and law. So the government media and education institutions need to join hands to solve this problem. 雅思哥写作干货:7分范文篇2 In recent years, young people in many countries choose
8、to live by themselves. What are the reasons and is it positive or negative for the development of the society? Traditionally , young people often lived with other people. Now , more young people are choosing to live by themselves. Some people question whether this trend will have a negative or posit
9、ive impact on the development of society. Some people are choosing to live by themselves for convenience purposes. Maybe they have a lengthy commute back and forth to work and it is no longer reasonable to live such a distance away. They want to live close to where they work and a roommate or someon
10、e to live with is not an option. Some people choose to live alone because they dislike the inconveniences of cohabiting with someone who has different living habits. Other people choose to live alone simply because they are introverts and they do not enjoy social contact. Although a person should ce
11、rtainly have the right to determine whether they live alone or not, it is important to note that human contact and social interaction remain important to a persons development and well-being. Human beings are social creatures and studies have shown that we can all benefit from social interaction. Ma
12、ny of us think that we can enhance our lives with computer time, television time, or smartphone time, but face-to-face interaction can still be beneficial and enriching. It remains to be seen if there will be any long-term effects from the current trend of people living alone, but there is a possibi
13、lity that this trend may have a negative impact on peoples ability or interest in social interaction. 雅思哥写作干货:7分范文篇3 An increasing number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think it is positive or negative? Some people wonder why career changes are becoming more preva
14、lent and whether those more frequent changes are having a positive or a negative effect. Although one can certainly argue about the positive or negative effects, I believe that these changes can be positive, if the person making the career change is doing so for the right reasons. Admittedly, compan
15、ies come and go in our fast-paced world economy. So it is probably no longer realistic for a person to think that they will be able to start and finish working with the same company. Along the same lines, it should be noted that many companies and employers do not value loyalty as much as their coun
16、terparts from previous generations. This trend can be positive if people change jobs for the following purposes. First, they make career changes in an attempt to find more satisfaction or fulfillment with their new career. Second, they made a mistake in the previous career they chose for themselves
17、but it is no late to pursue a more suitable one. Lastly, some people make career changes in search of a more desirable lifestyle, more career advancement or a higher income. If people choose a different career path so they can be happier or more fulfilled in their career. I support them to do so. Ha
18、ppy and fulfilled employees are more productive and their employers will be benefited. Everyone deserves the chance to have a better career development. If career change is the key to their future success, they should not hesitate to make the change. 雅思哥写作干货:7分范文篇4 Some people say that governments s
19、hould focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some people maintain that their governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and dise
20、ase. It is obvious that environment pollution can create widespread illness. Studies have shown that poor air quality can create illness, including cancer, and those illnesses can reduce our quality of life and our lifespan. The same can be said for water pollution, as many disease and illnesses are
21、 a direct result of poor water quality. Unfortunately, in many countries the water and air quality is already poor due to years of abuse or negligence. Government efforts to ensure air and water quality can be quite expensive, as a lot of cleanup is required. In regards to a lack of quality housing,
22、 that can result in similar health problems and concerns, as people who are homeless or living in the street are certainly more prone to disease and illness. That being said, a government cannot spend all of its financial resources in curbing pollution or creating affordable housing. The government
23、has other priorities and problems to consider, including transportation, education, employment and health care. If these priorities are ignored, other problems will arise. Bad roads or bad bridges may impact the economy. Uneducated and unemployed citizens are also sure to have a negative impact on t
24、he economy. If a society is unable to care for its sick population, the society will also suffer. With this in mind, it seems that the government is best served in establishing a balance in determining which problems and areas to focus on. Although they may never be able to solve all of those proble
25、ms at ones, maybe they can make enough progress so that someday those problems will be in the past. 雅思哥写作干货:7分范文篇5 Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get the latest information because it has more influence that other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some peo
26、ple claim that the latest information is mostly from newspapers, but I would say television is a better way to get news and other information. 立场:不赞成 纸媒体不能刚好把新闻信息第一时间传播出去 纸媒体好处:更多细微环节,读者可以反复阅读 电子类媒体:更新刚好,视频的方式报道,让人们更直观的了解到事务的进展 On behalf of newspapers, newspaper stories are generally more detailed a
27、nd more in-depth than other media accounts of the same stories. A television or radio newscast has limited time in which to tell a news story. If the television news is only 30 minutes or 60 minutes in length, the television network can use only a limited amount of time for each story. Newspapers, o
28、n the other hand, often have more time and space to offer for a specific story. Also, newspaper stories are written instead of spoken like television or radio stories. If a person is reading a newspaper story and they are unclear about some of the facts in the story, they can go back and read the st
29、ory again. On behalf of other forms of media, it is important to point out that printed newspapers are usually printed only once a day. Although some newspapers now have internet sites where they can disseminate news as fast as other forms of electronic media. Electronic media such as television, ra
30、dio and internet news sources have the ability to deliver news much more quickly than newspapers. As a medium, television and radio offer unlimited video and audio accounts of news stones, but printed newspapers lack these forms of accounts. Although newspapers have traditionally been a main source
31、for information. Other electronic media, especially television, are now challenging newspapers in this role. Television can provide news immediately while it is happening. Besides, television can do so with video and audio presentations that are not available in newspaper. 雅思哥写作干货:7分范文赏析本文来源:网络收集与整理,如有侵权,请联系作者删除,谢谢!第12页 共12页第 12 页 共 12 页第 12 页 共 12 页第 12 页 共 12 页第 12 页 共 12 页第 12 页 共 12 页第 12 页 共 12 页第 12 页 共 12 页第 12 页 共 12 页第 12 页 共 12 页第 12 页 共 12 页
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