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1、读后续写：助人型Part1：经典例文（披萨店员工救人）1Part2：助人类故事构造三部曲4第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）4第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）5第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）6Part3：助人场景描写7一、帮助他人之后7二、发生水灾之后8三、发生误解之后9四、发生火灾之后10五、感受善良之后11六、感受幸福之后11七、发生误解之后12八、获得勇气13九、获得自信14十、接收礼物之后15十一、老师的帮助16十二、陌生人的帮助17Part4：灵活应用18例1：老夫妇帮助我18例2：帮助老妇人20Part5：高考真题再现23真题1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八

2、省联考】23真题2：买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】25Part1：经典例文（披萨店员工救人）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。When the employees at the Dominos pizza place in Salem, Oregon, hadnt received any order from Kirk Alexander for more than 2 weeks, they knew something wasnt right. Kirk was a loyal customer and the s

3、taff all knew him. So it was natural that they got worried when they had no news about him. Their concern saved his life.Sarah Fuller, the general manager at the Dominos branch, said that Kirk, who was 48 years old, had been a loyal customer since 2009. “He orders every day, or every other day,” Sar

4、ah said.Normally, his order came up on the screen because he ordered online. So we saw it came across the screen and we were thinking, “Oh, Kirks order.” After a few days without a single order, Sarah and the staff started to worry.A few Dominos drivers had mentioned that they hadnt seen his order c

5、ome across their screen in a while. Sarah checked the system and saw that no order had come in 11 days. So they decided to investigate.Sarah decided to send Tracy Hamblen, a deliver driver, to Kirks place. When he got there, he immediately knew something was wrong. While the lights and TV were on, K

6、irk did not come to the door. Additionally, his phone went directly to voicemail. So Tracy immediately called 911.Para.1:When the police arrived at the place,_Para.2:A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital._【答案】Para1: When the police arrived at the place, they heard a cry for help from

7、 the inside of the house. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help. Due to the quick actions of Tracy, Kirk is in stable condition at the Salem Hospital. The Dominos employees received a lot of praise online for their unbelievable thoughtfulness. But they said that it was j

8、ust part of their job and they were just doing their job.当警察到达现场时，他们听到了来自房子内部的呼救声。在里面，他们发现了需要立即得到医疗帮助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行动，柯克在塞勒姆医院的情况很稳定。多米美乐的员工令人难以置信的体贴在网上得到了很多赞扬。但他们说，这只是他们工作的一部分，他们只是在做他们的工作。Para2: A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital. He came to the Dominos personally with some homemad

9、e cookies to say thank-you to Sarah and the Dominos staff. The Dominos mentioned that “Caring for customers should not be taken at face value. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.” Kirks story

10、has made this pizza shop even more popular in the community, and it has received more orders ever since.几天后，柯克出院了。他亲自带着一些自制的饼干来到多米诺餐厅，对莎拉和多米诺餐厅的工作人员说声谢谢。多米美乐提到“照顾客户不应该是表面价值。”我们应该记住，客户决定了我们公司的成功，反过来我们也可以对他们的生活产生影响，无论大小。柯克的故事让这家披萨店在社区中更受欢迎，此后它收到了更多的订单。【解析】【分析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个披萨店的员工，细心地发现近期没有收到来自老顾客Kir

11、k的订单，于是派人前去查看，发现Kirk生病并及时报警就医，确保了Kirk的安全。员工的善举为披萨店赢得了更多的称赞和订单。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当警察赶到现场时，”可知，第一段可描写警察将Kirk送到医院的经过。由第二段首句内容“几天后，Kirk出院了。”可知，第二段可描写Kirk出院后去披萨店感谢员工们拯救了他的生命以及该披萨店因为善意举动而为自己赢得更多的订单和顾客。2. 续写线索：呼救成功被救助感谢店员表达观点披萨店更受欢迎3.词汇激活行为类大声求救：cry for help /shout for help /scream for help受到赞扬：received

12、a lot of praise / be praised greatly照顾，护理： caring for/taking care of/情绪类.感谢：say thank-you / express appreciation / show appreciation /show his gratitude/be grateful.体贴：thoughtfulness /being considerate【点睛】高分句型1. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help.(由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句，

13、修饰先行词Kirk。)高分句型2. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.(that引导宾语从句作remember的宾语。)Part2：助人类故事构造三部曲第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）（1）消极情绪典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)

14、=a wave of.=a feeling/sense of.一阵.2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame.)3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb因.颤抖tremble/shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage.)（2）进一步细节描写典型是：流泪；心里想流泪：1. Tears blurred ones eyes.2. One

15、s eyes got misty.3. Ones eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊4. .be close to tears几乎要哭了5. tears (roll down ones eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下困难处境1. As the economy was in decline(经济衰退), some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet (使收支平衡). （2020.7高考山东卷）2

16、. There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. （2020.7高考山东卷）3. But one day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he lived, completely destroying his home (完全摧毁他的家) . （2021广州2月联考）第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法典型：某人想到

17、/明白.;有了主意1. It suddenly occurred to sb that从句=It hit sb that从句=It struck me that从句=It dawned on sb that从句2. (idea, thought.) occurred/came to sb.=.came/flashed into ones mind=.crowded in ones mind3. Ones mind began to race（2）动作链 Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big lo

18、g on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折过了一段时间1. not long after that,.=shortly afterwards, .=before long, .=It didnt take long before从句

19、=It took some time before从句不久, .2. for an instant/moment一瞬间（2）有了结果1. To ones surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that从句2. But on second thoughts, .但是转而一想，.3. But what happened next was pure magic.接下来发生的非常奇妙（3）感谢1. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手)

20、.（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三）2. Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldnt thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her. （2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题）（4）感动1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make

21、money for his family. （2020.7高考山东卷）2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.（2021广州2月联考）3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest.

22、 （2021年1月八省联考）4. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀). （2021年1月八省联考）5. Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.（2021年1月八省联考）（5）升华1. It is love that makes the world go round

23、（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.（2020.7高考山东卷）2. Everyone was happy and sweet, exposing their sets of white teeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东卷）3. I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”（2021年1月八省联考

24、）4. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me.（2021年1月八省联考）5. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（会有很大不同）.Part3：助人场景描写一、帮助他人之后I just loo

25、ked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met.Kyle had planned to kill himself over the weekend. He talked of how he had cleaned out his locker so his Mom wouldnt have to do it later and was carrying his stuff home. Meanwhile,I found he looked hard at me and gave me a

26、little smile.Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable,I heard the gasp go through the crowd as this handsome, popular boy told us all about his weakest moment. When his eyes caught mine,I was able to see tears shimmered in his smiling eyes.我只是难以置信地看着我的朋友，他讲述了我们第一天见面的故事。

27、 凯尔计划周末消遣。 他谈到了他是如何清理他的储物柜的，这样他的妈妈就不用再做了，然后把他的东西带回家了。 同时，我发现他狠狠地看着我，给了我一个小小的微笑。 “谢天谢地，我得救了。 我的朋友不让我做那些无法形容的事，我听到人群中的喘息声，就像这个英俊、受欢迎的男孩告诉我们他最脆弱的时刻一样。 当他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛时，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里闪烁着泪水。I smiled back in tears. Not until that moment did I realize what big difference one small gesture had made to him. I even

28、saw his Mom and Dad looking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions. With one small gesture we can change a persons life. For better or for worse.我笑着。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的手势对他产生了多么大的不同。我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，也带着同样感激的微笑。我意识到，我们永远不应该低估

29、我们行动的力量。只要用一个小小的手势，我们就可以改变一个人的生活。为好或坏。二、发生水灾之后The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didnt dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while,one of them turned on his headlamp to check the wat

30、er level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过

31、来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water

32、. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walkupright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance.Lights! I see lights! Jason shouted out.For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jasons emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.水不断上涨，没有了救援的

33、希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。三、发生误解之后As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had beenjust bought by her

34、, unopened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.A sudden rush of shy blood filling the face, she instinctively look around with the hope of findin

35、g the very man to make an apology.当她伸手拿行李时，她惊讶地喘了一口气。就在这时，她看到了她刚买的一包饼干，根本没有打开。她感到羞愧，感觉自己像个小偷，终于明白了这些饼干不是她的，而是属于坐在她旁边的男人，他平静地提出和她分享他的最后一块饼干。脸上突然涌满了害羞的鲜血，她本能地环顾四周，希望能找到那个男人来道歉。Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. He was just looking up and met her eyes,also with a smile on his face

36、.The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return. Witha quite open mouth, she was unable to say any apology to him. Murmuring Sorry, sorry.It was I myself who was the real cookie thief. After a while, she fell asleep on her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next d

37、ay, when she arrived at her new company, the biggest surprise was waiting for her.令人惊讶的是，她发现那个男人就坐在她身后。 他只是抬头看了看她的眼睛，脸上也带着微笑。 女人完全不知所措，但却给了男人一声紧张的笑声作为回报。 她张开嘴，不能向他道歉。 “对不起，对不起。 真正偷饼的是我自己。” 过了一会儿，她在座位上睡着了，飞机平稳地飞着。 第二天，当她来到她的新公司时，最大的惊喜就是在等她。四、发生火灾之后Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fe

38、ar, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Janes hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as

39、 quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。 他吓得僵住了，站在原地。 他明白形势的严重性，紧紧地握住简的手。 到那时，他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。 时间似乎静止不动，虽然他们可能只在那里两三分钟。 汤姆恳求简尽快跑过去寻求安全。 简想保护她的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾，摇了摇头。 她不停地敲门。 汤姆突然哭了起来。Lucki

40、ly, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Janes mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious. She was c

41、arried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Toms joy was immense.幸运的是，一些邻居路过时停下来，并提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻取代了简心中日益增加的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克奇克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，终于苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆非

42、常高兴。五、感受善良之后Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said,Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket. The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going o

43、n,he looked straight into my dads eyes, took my dads hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied,Thank you, thankyou, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌

44、睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。That day my father andI went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.We didnt go to the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did so, Dad said,My child, it was a desperate, he

45、artbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasnt begging fora handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young. He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory.We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others.We didnt

46、go to the circus tonight, but we didnt go without. Now, who wants an ice cream?。那天，我和我父亲回到我们的车里，没有任何票就开车回家了。 那天晚上我们没有去马戏团，当我问爸爸为什么这么做时，爸爸说：“我的孩子，对一个父亲来说，这是一个绝望、令人心碎和尴尬的情况。 他当然不是乞求施舍，但他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。” 他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在记忆中徘徊。 我们应该珍惜从生活中获得的东西，抓住一切机会帮助别人。 我们今晚没有去马戏团，但我们没有去。 谁要冰淇淋？。六、感受幸福之后The driver responded,

47、It must feel good to be taken care of and protected like you are every day.Confused by what the driver talked about,she asked, What do you mean? The driver answered, Every morning in the past week,a fine looking gentleman ina military uniform has been standing across the street watching you getting off the bus.He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches until you enter y