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1、对比议论文写作 Still waters run deep.流静水深流静水深,人静心深人静心深 Where there is life,there is hope。有生命必有希望。有生命必有希望对比议论类作文题目题目最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，客观地介绍讨论情况，并谈谈你的看法。注意：1、词数：100左右。2、门票：entrance fee60%的同学认为的同学认为40%的同学认为的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购

2、新花木Introduction(background)a list of arguments“for”a list of arguments“against”Conclusion(your personal opinion)Discursive Essay(For And Against)文章结构文章结构审审 题题 文文 体：体：时时 态：态：内容要点：内容要点：客观介绍客观介绍 个人观点个人观点 议论文议论文一般现在时（第一段一般过去时）一般现在时（第一段一般过去时）第一段第一段 IntroductionIntroduction（陈述问题或现象）（陈述问题或现象）-简单解释要讨论简单解释要讨

3、论的问题的问题句型：句型：第一句第一句：1.NowadaysNowadays,many people prefer to,while other people would rather.2.Today we had a hot/heated/heated discussion about whether.第二句（第二句（过渡句）过渡句）1.Opinions vary from person to vary from person to personperson./Different people hold different opinions./Different people hold di

4、fferent opinions.2.They have different reasons for 3.Different students take different attitudes to this ifferent students take different attitudes to this issue.issue./Opinions are divided on this question.Opinions are divided on this question.现如今，一些人现如今，一些人另一些人另一些人。（一般过去时态）今天关于（一般过去时态）今天关于有了一个非常激烈

5、的讨论。有了一个非常激烈的讨论。然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。介绍正方观点（第二段）：介绍正方观点（第二段）：60%of the students are for the idea.60%of the students think it necessary toA majority of students,60%to be exact,support the idea.According to them,all of us should.60%的同学认为的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象To

6、begin with;First of all;First(ly);second(ly);third(ly);finally;last but not least;besides;in addition;furthermore;Whats more介绍反方观点（第三段）介绍反方观点（第三段）However,40%of the students hold different opinions.On the other hand,40%of the students thinkOn the contrary,others hold a different view.However,others h

7、ave different opinions.Others argue/object that In their opinions,40%的同学认为的同学认为1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木To begin with;First of all;First(ly);second(ly);third(ly);finally;last but not least;besides;in addition;furthermore;Whats more最后一段第一句：最后一段第一句：总结句总结句(未达成一致未达成一致)In short,no agreement has been

8、reached yet.So far,no agreement has been reached.In short,the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.个个人观点（最后一段）人观点（最后一段）As far as I am concerned,.(In my opinion/view,.;Its my opinion that)For one reason/thing,.For another reason/thing In a word,.Therefore/consequently/In conclusion/To sum u

9、p/In a word/In brief/All in all/In short/Generally speaking细节的合理添加(表现、结果、原因）A park is a place where people relax and entertain themselves freely.If the fee is charged,it will lose its functions.结果、影响The garden workers need to be paid.Without them,we would not have such a beautiful park.原因The expense

10、 on public service should be paid by taxit should be our welfare.-说明自己的原因 Introduction Introduction 第第1 1段段:Today,we have a hot discussion about whether.Different people hold different opinions.Main body Main body 第第2 2段：段：Sixty percent of the students are for the idea.Firstly,.Secondly,In addition/

11、Whats Firstly,.Secondly,In addition/Whats more more 第第3 3段段:However,40%of the students hold different opinions.The negative aspects/disadvantages are negative aspects/disadvantages are also apparent/obvious.To begin with;also apparent/obvious.To begin with;Firstly;To make matters worseTo make matter

12、s worse Conclusion Conclusion 第第4 4段段:In short,the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.In my point of view/From my point of view,I appreciate doing.For one reason,For another reason.Therefore,.Today we had a hot discussion about whether people in comas should be kept on life support machi

13、nes.Opinions are varied.Terris parents are in favor of the idea of keeping her in comas on life support machines.They believe that her coma was only temporary.Whats more,they insist that life is sacred so no one has the right to end it.However,some people are against it.They think that although the

14、patient may seem to be“awake”at times,their brain remains unconscious and cant be woken up.On top of this,they are not able to form a connection with other people or the world around them.In addition,it is generally agreed that a patients chances of recovery decline the longer they stay in a coma.Th

15、erefore,after 15 years it was very unlikely that Eerri would ever recover.In my opinion,I agree with the decision that in the case of long-term coma states,close family members should be allowed to take their loved one off life support machines.However,in all cases,patients should receive the best t

16、reatment possible for as long as there is hope of recovery before such a decision is considered.赞成不赞成你的看法复习巩固所学内容 影响课堂听讲效果感受不同老师的教学风格增加家庭经济负担发展多方面兴趣父母需花时间接送在今天的班会课上，学生们就“在周末学生是否应该参加课外补习班”这一话题进行了激烈的讨论。请你根据所给信息写一篇英文报道，客观介绍讨论情况，并简单陈述你自己的观点。Discursive essay(议论文）common mistakes 1.人称一致2.Be against Be in f

17、avor of(be for)3.should doing-the most stupid mistake 4.Attending extra classes is 5.大小写 6.spelling 花费（时间，金钱）Parents spend a large amount of money on extra classes.Extra classes cost parents a large amount of money.Parents spend their spare time in driving us to and from the classes.It takes parents

18、 a lot of spare time to drive us to and from the classes.1.After-school classes can review your lessons,feel different teaching styles and develop various interests.2.on the top of this 3.themself 4.have learned5.Does it worth?The ending(结尾）1.add one more argument 史文思 independent learner/learning ab

19、ility2.paraphrase the old idea(express the same idea in a different way)秦涯 I think it is important to study during school with undivided attention because it is the best way to save time and money.孙同欣However,being moderate in attending lessons at weekends is important.(过犹不及）Yes review and consolidat

20、e what I have learnt at schoolhave a taste of different teaching stylesdevelop my interest in different aspectsNo Students feel much more tired and have no efficiency in class It usually lays a heavy financial burden on my parentsIt usually takes my parents much time to take me to and from the lesso

21、ns at weekends.Progress may feel more a loss than gain.(张雪儿）Attending lessons at weekends can not only lay a solid foundation for further study,but also offer us access to different teaching styles.(雷丝雨）Everything has pros and cons.You have to weigh its pros and cons before making any decision.Every

22、 coin has two sides.As far as I am concerned,the acquirements outweigh the money they spend.(张雪儿）Extra lessons at weekends have(produce)full bad effects on school day learning.细节添加If you have learned the knowledge in advance(ahead of school time),it is possible you do not take school lessons serious

23、ly and find it hard to focus in class.The courses add financial burden to their parents.（杨诗遥）On todays class meeting,we had a heated discussion about whether students should attend lessons at weekends or not.Opinions are divided on this question.A number of students are for the idea.Firstly,they thi

24、nk attending lessons at weekends can review and consolidate the knowledge they had learned so that they can get a satisfied grade.Secondly,tasting about different teachers teaching ways can help them understand the knowledge thoroughly.In addition,they are able to develop diverse hobbies.Therefore,t

25、hey support the idea that students should attend lessons at weekends.In contrast with this view,the rest of students hold a different opinion.At first,they believe that the weekend lessons may have an effect on the study in school.Whats more,it can also increase the economy burden to families.Furthe

26、rmore,it has to spend parents time on sending and picking them up.So they object to attending lessons at weekends.In short,no agreement has been reached yet.As far as I concerned,I agreed with the view of attending lessons at weekends.However,being moderate in attending lessons at weekends is import

27、ant.-sun tongxinToday,majority of the students make a choice of attending extra classes on weekends to improve their study,and various opinions about whether we should do so were discussed at the class meeting.A part of students take optimistic view of weekend classes,because they could perfectly re

28、view and consolidate what theyve learned in a week.Another essential reason is that they can have a chance to try different and fresh teaching styles through the lessons from the various teachers.They think that they are able to experience more and lots of new interests might be inspired according t

29、o that.Therere also some students who find the disadvantages of extra classes.According to their statements,the efficiency of class learning will slow down as they focus on much work.And their families financial burden must relatively rise up.After that it brings another problem of time arrangement

30、as the parents have to spend much time fetching their children between classroom and home.From my point of view,taking extra lesson is one of a good way to help us study better.There will surely be a breakthrough if we take much more efforts on our spare time.The more useful and necessary things wil

31、l be done instead of playing computer or watching TV.Apart from the advantages in our study,our weekend time can be enriched.Well get more experiences,more thoughts and more friends.It is valuable.In brief,extra classes make us busy,but well have more harvest correspondingly,which is really importan

32、t to us.-zhang xuer A discursive essayToday we had a class meeting at which we had a hot discussion about whether students should attend lessons at weekends.Opinions are varied among the students.Some students are in favor of attending such lessons.They hold the opinion that they can review and cons

33、olidate what they have learnt at school,which as a result,makes their study much better.What more,attending lessons at weekends offers them a good opportunity to taste different teaching styles so that they can always remain interested in the subjects.In addition,It is also a good way for them to de

34、velop their interest in different aspects to make their life more colorful and interesting.However,some students are against it.They think that after having taken lessons at school for a week,such lessons can only make them feel much more tired and have no efficiency on their study.They also point o

35、ut that it usually adds the economy burden to their parents if their families are not rich enough,because the fees for such lessons are often high.Besides,it usually takes their parents much time to take them to and from the lessons.In my opinion,it is not necessary for us to take such lessons.If we can make full use of the time we spend on our own school lessons,it is enough for us to grasp the things we are taught.At weekends,we can relax ourselves and refresh our minds to make good preparations for the study next week.