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1、中考作文指导NK English Magazine书面表达书面表达 时时光光荏荏苒苒，初初中中三三年年转转瞬瞬即即逝逝，跟跟三三年年前前的的自自己己相相比比较较，你你会会有有很很多多变变化化。你你的的改改变变或或许许是是因因为为一一个个人人、一一本本书书、一一堂堂课课、一一件件事事 为为了了记记录录同同学学们们三三年年来来的的成成长长变变化化过过程程，南南开开英英语语杂杂志志社社正正在在开开展展以以“How Ive changed!”为为主主题题的的征征文文活活动动。请请你你写写一一篇篇征征文文，讲讲述述生生活活中中亲亲历历的的一次改变。一次改变。参考信息：参考信息：1.1.描述你描述你三年来

2、最大三年来最大的一次改变；的一次改变；2.2.描述这次改变是如何发生的；描述这次改变是如何发生的；3.3.英语书面表达评分参考意见（理解版）英语书面表达评分参考意见（理解版）1本题总分为20分，按各档次打分。2评分时，先根据文章的逻辑逻辑和内容和内容初步确定所属档次，再根据语语言准确言准确打分。第五档（优秀）（1920分）高水平完成了试题规定的任务逻辑严密、条理清晰、结构完整、过渡自然内容充实、中心突出、符合题意、思想健康语言流畅、词汇丰富、感情真挚、富有创意第四档（良好）（1618分）较好完成了试题规定的任务逻辑清晰、条理分明、结构完整、过渡自然内容详实，中心明确、符合题意、思想健康语言较流

3、畅、词汇较丰富、感情真实第三档（中等）（1315分）基本完成了试题规定的任务有一定逻辑性、结构明确内容较为充实，符合题意、思想健康较合理地使用词汇、能比较清楚表达意思第二档（较差）（812分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务文章结构能够基本符合试题写作要求词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求、思想健康语言不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解第一档（差）（07分）未完成试题规定的任务结构混乱内容严重缺失、思想健康词汇和语言不能满足写作任务的要求，语言错漏太多，无法传达有效信息。（与规定内容无关的抄袭或思想不健康，均为0分。）第一档（差）（07分）第二档（较差）（812分）第三档（中等）（1315分）第四档

4、（良好）（1618分）第五档（优秀）（1920分）Which level do you want to reach?有一定逻辑性、结构明确有一定逻辑性、结构明确内容较为充实，符合题意、思想健康内容较为充实，符合题意、思想健康较合理地使用词汇、能比较清楚表达意思较合理地使用词汇、能比较清楚表达意思逻辑清晰、条理分明、结构完整、过渡自然逻辑清晰、条理分明、结构完整、过渡自然内容详实，中心明确、符合题意、思想健康内容详实，中心明确、符合题意、思想健康语言较流畅、词汇较丰富、感情真实语言较流畅、词汇较丰富、感情真实逻辑严密、条理清晰、结构完整、过渡自然逻辑严密、条理清晰、结构完整、过渡自然内容充实、中

5、心突出、符合题意、思想健康内容充实、中心突出、符合题意、思想健康语言流畅、词汇丰富、感情真挚、富有创意语言流畅、词汇丰富、感情真挚、富有创意英语书面表达评分参考意见（理解版）英语书面表达评分参考意见（理解版）BrainstormBrainstormWhat do they have in common?How to mark(评分)?第三档第三档(中等中等):1315):1315分分 基本完成了试题规定的任务基本完成了试题规定的任务有一定逻辑性、结构明确有一定逻辑性、结构明确内容较为充实，符合题意、思想健康内容较为充实，符合题意、思想健康较合理地使用词汇、能比较清楚表达意思较合理地使用词汇、能

6、比较清楚表达意思第四档第四档(良好良好):1618):1618分分 较好完成了试题规定的任务较好完成了试题规定的任务逻辑清晰、条理分明、结构完整、过渡自然逻辑清晰、条理分明、结构完整、过渡自然内容详实，中心明确、符合题意、思想健康内容详实，中心明确、符合题意、思想健康语言较流畅、词汇较丰富、感情真实语言较流畅、词汇较丰富、感情真实第五档第五档(优秀优秀):1920):1920分分 高水平完成了试题规定的任务高水平完成了试题规定的任务逻辑严密、条理清晰、结构完整、过渡自然逻辑严密、条理清晰、结构完整、过渡自然内容充实、中心突出、符合题意、思想健康内容充实、中心突出、符合题意、思想健康语言流畅、词

7、汇丰富、感情真挚、富有创意语言流畅、词汇丰富、感情真挚、富有创意内容内容 题意题意内容内容 中心中心 题意题意内容内容 中心中心 题意题意逻辑逻辑逻辑逻辑逻辑逻辑Logic(Content)LanguageCulture英语书面表达评分英语书面表达评分参考意见参考意见（理解版）（理解版）思想思想思想思想思想思想Logic(Content)LanguageCultureHow Ive changed!书面表达书面表达 时时光光荏荏苒苒，初初中中三三年年转转瞬瞬即即逝逝，跟跟三三年年前前的的自自己己相相比比较较，你你会会有有很很多多变变化化。你你的的改改变变或或许许是是因因为为一一个个人人、一一本

8、本书书、一一堂堂课课、一一件件事事 为为了了记记录录同同学学们们三三年年来来的的成成长长与与变变化化，南南开开英英语语杂杂志志社社正正在在开开展展以以“How Ive changed!”为为主主题题的的征征文文活活动动。请请你你写写一一篇篇征征文文，讲讲述述生生活活中中亲亲历历的的一一次次改变。改变。参考信息：参考信息：1.1.描述你三年来最大的一次改变；描述你三年来最大的一次改变；2.2.描述这次改变是如何发生的；描述这次改变是如何发生的；3.3.审：BrainstormBrainstormWhat to write?Topic:Purpose:Tense(时态):书面表达书面表达 时时光光

9、荏荏苒苒，初初中中三三年年转转瞬瞬即即逝逝，跟跟三三年年前前的的自自己己相相比比较较，你你会会有有很很多多变变化化。你你的的改改变变或或许许是是因因为为一一个个人人、一一本本书书、一一堂堂课课、一一件件事事 为为了了记记录录同同学学们们三三年年来来的的变变化化与与成成长长，南南开开英英语语杂杂志志社社正正在在开开展展以以“How Ive changed!”为为主主题题的的征征文文活活动动。请请你你写写一一篇篇征征文文，讲讲述述生生活活中中亲亲历历的的一一次次改变。改变。参考信息：参考信息：1.1.描述你三年来最大的一次改变；描述你三年来最大的一次改变；2.2.描述这次改变是如何发生的；描述这次

10、改变是如何发生的；3.3.What to write?Logic(Content)LanguageCulture多变化多变化跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很变化与成变化与成长长你三年来最大的一次改变你三年来最大的一次改变这次改变是如何发生的这次改变是如何发生的pastnowchange&growthyour biggest changechange&growthchanging process How Ive changed!your biggest changechange&growthpastchanging processnow一般过去时一般过去时一般过去时一

11、般过去时一般现在时一般现在时现在完成时现在完成时一般将来时一般将来时BrainstormBrainstorm列：a change or changes一次改变一次改变What to write?Logic(Content)LanguageCulturepastnowchange&growthyour biggest changechanging processPart 1Part 2Part 3your biggest changepastnowchanging processchange&growth Make a good comparison (past&now).Have a clea

12、r changing process.Logic(Content)Why to write?Introduce your topic.Make a conclusion.策略策略:精读题目，细谋详略精读题目，细谋详略Points:_Logic(Content)LanguageCultureWhat he wrote?How to mark?第三档第三档(中等中等):1315):1315分分 基本完成了试题规定的任务基本完成了试题规定的任务有一定逻辑性、结构明确有一定逻辑性、结构明确内容较为充实，符合题意、思想健康内容较为充实，符合题意、思想健康较合理地使用词汇、能比较清楚表达意思较合理地使用词

13、汇、能比较清楚表达意思第四档第四档(良好良好):1618):1618分分 较好完成了试题规定的任务较好完成了试题规定的任务逻辑清晰、条理分明、结构完整、过渡自然逻辑清晰、条理分明、结构完整、过渡自然内容详实，中心明确、符合题意、思想健康内容详实，中心明确、符合题意、思想健康语言较流畅、词汇较丰富、感情真实语言较流畅、词汇较丰富、感情真实第五档第五档(优秀优秀):1920):1920分分 高水平完成了试题规定的任务高水平完成了试题规定的任务逻辑严密、条理清晰、结构完整、过渡自然逻辑严密、条理清晰、结构完整、过渡自然内容充实、中心突出、符合题意、思想健康内容充实、中心突出、符合题意、思想健康语言流

14、畅、词汇丰富、感情真挚、富有创意语言流畅、词汇丰富、感情真挚、富有创意内容内容 题意题意内容内容 中心中心 题意题意内容内容 中心中心 题意题意逻辑逻辑逻辑逻辑逻辑逻辑思想思想20222022年重庆英语书面表达评分标准年重庆英语书面表达评分标准Logic(Content)LanguageCultureLogic(Content)CultureLanguage思想思想思想思想较为充实较为充实 符合符合清晰清晰详实详实明确明确 符合符合严密严密充实充实突出突出 符合符合健康健康健康健康健康健康 How Ive changed!Time is always moving and as time mo

15、ves,people change.I have changed a lot in my study since I got into my new school two years ago.I was poor at English.I was afraid of speaking English in class.I was afraid of taking English exams.How upset I was!One day I told my parents I wanted to give up.My parents were worried about me and they

16、 asked Miss He for help.Miss He had a long talk with me.I knew she cared about me.I began to learn English harder.Now my English improves a lot.I changed a lot.I really want to say thanks to Miss He.-a boy from Class 14 Points:_Logic(Content)LanguageCultureWhat he wrote?Part 1Part 2Part 3Logic(Conte

17、nt)14 Have a clear changing process.Make a good comparison (past&now).Introduce your topic.Make a conclusion.？Better Logic(Content)I was poor at English.I was afraid of speaking English in class.I was afraid of taking English exams.How upset I was!One day I told my parents I wanted to give up.My par

18、ents were worried about me and they asked Miss He for help.Miss He had a long talk with me.I knew she cared about me.I began to learn English harder.Now my English improves a lot.Part 2PastNowHow to write?Make a good comparison(past&now).Logic(Content)LanguageCultureBetter Logic(Content)PastNowbe po

19、or at EnglishMy English improves a lot.be afraid of speaking English in classbe afraid of taking English examsbe brave enough to give a speech in Englishregard tests as perfect chances to find problems and get solutionsmake efforts to learn English better Make a good comparison(past&now).How to writ

20、e?Logic(Content)LanguageCultureBetter Logic(Content)I was poor at English.I was afraid of speaking English in class.I was afraid of taking English exam.How upset I was.One day I told my parents I wanted to give up.My parents were worried about me and they asked Miss He for help.Miss He had a long ta

21、lk with me.I knew she cared about me.I didnt want to let her down.Now my English improves a lot.Im brave enough to give a speech in English.I also regard tests as perfect chances to improve myself.Most importantly,I will try my best to learn English better.Part 2How to write?Make a good comparison(p

22、ast&now).Logic(Content)LanguageCultureBetter Logic(Content)Make a conclusion.How Ive changed!Time is always moving and as time moves,people change.I have changed a lot in my study since I got into my new school two years ago.I was poor at English.I was afraid of speaking English in class.I was afrai

23、d of taking English exams.How upset I was!One day I told my parents I wanted to give up.My parents were worried about me and they asked Miss He for help.Miss He had a long talk with me.I knew she cared about me.I began to learn English harder.Now my English improves a lot.Im brave enough to give a s

24、peech in English.I also regard tests as perfect chances to improve myself.Most importantly,I will try my best to learn English better.I changed a lot.I really want to say thanks to Miss He.-a boy from Class 14 Points:_How to write?15 Have a clear changing process.Make a good comparison (past&now).Pa

25、rt 1BeginningPart 2BodyPart 3Ending？Introduce your topic.Logic(Content)LanguageCultureBetter Logic(Content)14Part 2 Have a clear changing process.Changing processHow to write?Logic(Content)LanguageCultureBetter Logic(Content)I was poor at English.I was afraid of speaking English in class.I was afrai

26、d of taking English exam.How upset I was.One day I told my parents I wanted to give up.My parents were worried about me and they asked Miss He for help.Miss He had a long talk with me.I knew she cared about me.I didnt want to let her down.Now my English improves a lot.Im brave enough to give a speec

27、h in English.I also regard tests as perfect chances to improve myself.Most importantly,I will try my best to learn English better.What might Miss He say?Tip 2：Add supporting details.PastWhat might Miss He say?be afraid of taking English exambe poor at Englishbe afraid of speaking English in classShe

28、 told me _She told me _She told me _ English was not that hard and she believed I could learn it well.it was common to make mistakes when speaking English.there was no need to focus on the scores.Talk?How to write?Logic(Content)LanguageCultureBetter Logic(Content)One day I told my parents I wanted t

29、o give up.Miss He had a long talk with me.She told me English was not that hard and she believed I could learn it well.She told me it was common to make mistakes when speaking English.She told me there was no need to focus on the scores.I knew she cared about me.I began to learn English harder.Now m

30、y English improves a lot BodyTip：Add supporting details.Changing process Have a clear changing process.How to write?Logic(Content)LanguageCultureBetter Logic(Content)Make a conclusion.How Ive changed!Time is always moving and as time moves,people change.I have changed a lot in my study since I got i

31、nto my new school two years ago.I was poor at English.I was afraid of speaking English in class.I was afraid of taking English exams.How upset I was!One day I told my parents I wanted to give up.Miss He had a long talk with me.She told me English was not that hard and she believed I could learn it w

32、ell.She told me it was common to make mistakes when speaking English.She told me there was no need to focus on the scores.I knew she cared about me.I began to learn English harder.Now my English improves a lot.Im brave enough to give a speech in English.I also regard tests as perfect chances to impr

33、ove myself.Most importantly,I will try my best to learn English better.I changed a lot.I really want to say thanks to Miss He.-a boy from Class 14 Points:_How to write?15 Have a clear changing process.Make a good comparison (past&now).Part 1BeginningPart 2BodyPart 3Ending？Introduce your topic.Logic(

34、Content)LanguageCultureBetter Logic(Content)16How to write?Time is always moving and as time moves,people change.I have changed a lot in my study since I got into my new school two years ago.I was poor at English.I was afraid of speaking English in class.I was afraid of taking English exam.How upset

35、 I was!One day I told my parents I wanted to give up.My parents were worried about me and they asked Miss He for help.Miss He had a long talk with me.She told me English was not that hard and she believed I could learn it well.She told me its common to make mistakes when speaking English.She told me

36、 there was no need to focus on the scores.I knew she cared about me.I began to learn English harder.Now my English improves a lot.Im brave enough to give a speech in English.I also regard tests as perfect chances to improve myself.Most importantly,I will make efforts to learn English better.I change

37、d a lot.I really want to say thanks to Miss He.Logic(Content)LanguageCultureBetter LanguagePoints:_16Logic(Content)I was afraid of speaking English in class.I was _ of taking English exams.I was afraid of speaking English _ taking English exams.I was poor at English,afraid of speaking English and ta

38、king English exams._ I was poor at English,it was a big challenge for me to _ and English exams always _ me.scaredI was poor at English.I was afraid of speaking English in class.I was afraid of taking English exams.How to write?Logic(Content)LanguageCultureBetter LanguageandSince speak in classworri

39、edTip：Avoid many short sentences.Tip：Avoid repeating words.Better language in the rest part.Time is always moving and as time moves,people change.I have changed a lot in my study since I got into my new school two years ago.Since I was poor at English,it was a big challenge for me to speak in class

40、and English exams always worried me.How upset I was!One day I told my parents I wanted to give up.My parents were worried about me and they asked Miss He for help.Miss He had a long talk with me.She told me English was not that hard and she believed I could learn it well.She encouraged me it was com

41、mon to make mistakes when speaking English.She advised me there was no need to focus on the scores.I knew she cared about me.I began to learn English harder.Now my English improves a lot.Im brave enough to give a speech in English.I also regard tests as perfect chances to improve myself.Most importa

42、ntly,I will try my best to learn English better.Thanks to Miss He,I changed a lot.Points:_16Logic(Content)LanguageCultureLogic(Content)LanguageTip：Add your opinions.17Better CultureOpinions_ from the changeGain(收获)You will never know what will happen unless you try._ of the changeMeaningHope my expe

43、rience can inspire you!Thanks to Miss He,I changed a lot.How to write?Thanks to Miss He,I changed a lot.Thanks to Miss He,I changed a lot.She helped me get out of the darkness.I am not afraid of changes anymore.Thanks to Miss He,I changed a lot.She helped me get out of the darkness.After that,I am n

44、ot afraid of changes anymore,because you will never know what will happen unless you try.Hope my experience can inspire you!Logic(Content)LanguageCultureBetter CultureTip：Add your opinions.Time is always moving and as time moves,people change.I have changed a lot in my study since I got into my new

45、school two years ago.Since I was poor at English,it was a big challenge for me to speak in class and English exams always worried me.How upset I was!One day I told my parents I wanted to give up.My parents were worried about me and they asked Miss He for help.Miss He had a long talk with me.She told

46、 me English was not that hard and she believed I could learn it well.She encouraged me it was common to make mistakes when speaking English.She advised me there was no need to focus on the scores.I knew she cared about me.I began to learn English harder.Now my English improves a lot.Im brave enough

47、to give a speech in English.I also regard tests as perfect chances to improve myself.Most importantly,I will try my best to learn English better.Thanks to Miss He,I changed a lot.She helped me get out of the darkness.After that,I am not afraid of changes anymore,because you will never know what will

48、 happen unless you try.Hope my experience can inspire you!Points:_17Logic(Content)LanguageCultureLogic(Content)LanguageCulture18Summary第三档第三档(中等中等):1315):1315分分 基本完成了试题规定的任务基本完成了试题规定的任务有一定逻辑性、结构明确有一定逻辑性、结构明确内容较为充实，符合题意、思想健康内容较为充实，符合题意、思想健康较合理地使用词汇、能比较清楚表达意思较合理地使用词汇、能比较清楚表达意思第四档第四档(良好良好):1618):1618分分

49、 较好完成了试题规定的任务较好完成了试题规定的任务逻辑清晰、条理分明、结构完整、过渡自然逻辑清晰、条理分明、结构完整、过渡自然内容详实，中心明确、符合题意、思想健康内容详实，中心明确、符合题意、思想健康语言较流畅、词汇较丰富、感情真实语言较流畅、词汇较丰富、感情真实第五档第五档(优秀优秀):1920):1920分分 高水平完成了试题规定的任务高水平完成了试题规定的任务逻辑严密、条理清晰、结构完整、过渡自然逻辑严密、条理清晰、结构完整、过渡自然内容充实、中心突出、符合题意、思想健康内容充实、中心突出、符合题意、思想健康语言流畅、词汇丰富、感情真挚、富有创意语言流畅、词汇丰富、感情真挚、富有创意内

50、容内容较为充实较为充实 符合符合题意题意内容内容详实详实 中心中心明确明确 符合符合题意题意内容内容充实充实 中心中心突出突出 符合符合题意题意逻辑逻辑逻辑逻辑清晰清晰逻辑逻辑严密严密思想思想健康健康思想思想健康健康思想思想健康健康How to get higher scores?Points:_18Logic(Content)LanguageCultureLogic(Content)LanguageCultureWNK magazineNever stop seeking a better version of your writing.Never stop seeking a better