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1、认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目IELTS WritingSunnyGao认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Chapter 1 预备知识Work in pairs to decide whether these statements about IELTS are true or false.1.Grammaristhemostimportantassessmentcriteriainwriting.2.IELTSExamin

2、erscantellwhensomeoneisgivingamemorizedanswer.3.IELTSandTOEFLbothuseexaminerstoassesswritingandspeaking.4.YourIELTSscoreinChinawillvarydependingonwhichcityyoutakethetest.5.IELTSscoresarecarefullymonitoredandmanyaredoublechecked.FTTFT认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Chapter

3、1 预备知识学术类雅思写作考试内容类别官方建官方建议时间字数字数题材材学术类Task120min150字以上图表作文学术类Task240min250字以上议论文或报告认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Task2议论文两种形式 Argumentation80%1.题目给出一方观点（反方观点隐含），问lDoyouagreeordisagree?lTowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?l例：Inordertolearnalanguagewell,weshouldlearnaboutthec

4、ountryaswellastheculturesandlifestylesofthepeoplewhospeakit.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2.题目中给出双方观点，要求分析正反方观点后做出结论SomesayOthersarguethatWhatisyouropinion?Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Expresssomereasonsforbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Doyouthinkitsadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?认识到了贫困户贫困

5、的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Task2中报告 Report，出现概率为20%题目中没有观点，只给出一种现象，让考生分析该现象的causes,solutions,effects.通常题目的标志词为Whatare？例子：Today,therearemoreimagesofdisastersandviolenceinthemedia.Whatarethecausesandwhatareyoursolutions?认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目

6、 雅思写作评分标准认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目TRTaskresponseTA-TaskachievementCCCoherenceandCohesionLRLexicalresourceGRGrammaticalrangeandaccuracy 雅思写作评分标准认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目IELTS TASK 2 Writing band descriptorsBand Task Achievement Coher

7、ence and Cohesion Lexical Resource Grammatical Range and Accuracy765认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Task Achievement认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Coherence and Cohesion 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Lexical Resource

8、 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Grammatical Range and Accuracy认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Comments on Sample Script 2(International Tourism)Band 7TA:Thecandidateaddressesbothaspectsofthetaskandpresentsaclearpositionthroughouttheresponse.Main

9、ideasaregenerallyclearandrelevant,althoughsomesupportingideaslackfocus(asintheopeningofparagraph2).CC:Ideasaregenerallywell-organised,andthereisaclearoverallprogressionwithonlyminorlapseswherepointsarenotwell-integratedintotheargument.Arangeofcohesivedevicesisusedeffectively,althoughthereissomeunder

10、-useofconnectivesandsubstitution,andsomelapsesintheuseofreferencing.LR:Agoodrangeofvocabularyisusedwithsomeflexibilityandprecision.Thecandidatehasagoodawarenessofstyleandcollocation,althoughoccasionalawkwardexpressionsorinappropriaciesinwordchoiceandwordformlimittherating.GRA:Likewise,agoodrangeofse

11、ntencestructuresisusedwithahighlevelofaccuracyresultinginfrequenterror-freesentences.Minorsystematicerrorspersist,however,andpunctuationisunhelpfulattimes认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Comments on Sample Script 3(International Tourism)Band5TA:Theinputmaterialisdirectlycop

12、iedasanintroductiontothisresponse,andoncethisisdeductedfromthewordcount,theresponseisunder-lengthat194wordsandsolosesmarks.Nevertheless,thetopicisaddressedandarelevantpositionisexpressed,althoughtherearepatches(asinthirdparagraph)wherethedevelopmentisunclear.Otherideasaremoreevidentlyrelevant,butare

13、sometimesinsufficientlydeveloped.Theseideasareclearlyorganisedandthereisanoverallprogressionwithintheresponse.CC:Thereissomeeffectiveuseofarangeofcohesivedevices,includingreferencing,butthereisalsosomemechanicalover-useoflinkersinplaces.Paragraphsaresometimesrathertooshortandinappropriate.LR:Arangeo

14、fvocabularyisattemptedandthisisadequateforagoodresponsetothetask.However,controlisweak,andtherearefrequentspellingerrorswhichcancausesomedifficultiesforthereader,thuskeepingtheratingdownforthelexicalcriterion.GRA:Thecandidateusesamixofsimpleandcomplexstructureswithfrequentsubordinateclauses.Controlo

15、fcomplexstructuresisvariable,andalthougherrorsarenoticeable,theyonlyrarelyimpedeunderstandingofthemessage,认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Practice 剑桥雅思7P169请判断考官是怎样给这份试卷打出5分的？评分分标准准考官考官评语对应评分分标准描述准描述得分得分评分标准TaskresponseCoherence&CohesionLexicalResourceGrammaticalRangeandAc

16、curacy其他Underlength/Off-topic/Illegible认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目评分分标准准考官考官评语对应评分分标准描述准描述得分得分评分标准TRItdoesnotaddressallpartsofthequestionAddressesthetaskonlypartially5C&C正评价(6分）+thereisalsoalotofrepetitionduetoinadequateuseofreferencingandsubstitutionmayberepetitivebe

17、causeoflackofreferencingandsubstitution5.5LRThehighlevelofrepetitionindicateslimitationsinrangeofvocabularyUsesalimitedrangeofvocabulary5GRATheanswerincludesattemptsatcomplexsentenceforms,but+正评价nevertheless,thereareexamplesofaccuratecomplexstructures（6分）Attemptscomplexsentencesbutthesetendtobelessa

18、ccurate5.5其他Lessthan250words扣0.5总分（5+5.5+5+5.5）/4=5.255.55.5-0.5=5认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目其他预备知识1.格式：不用抄题目，齐头格式2.缩写：不要使用were,cant,dont等缩写，应使用正式文体，可以使用全球通用首字母缩写，如NBA,KFC,WTO等，国内通用的不可以写，如CET-43.数字：十以下数字用英语单词表示4.标点符号：、“Avatar”,，andsoon5.I,My,We,You的使用认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能

19、开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目6.美式和英式拼写-re与ercentercentretheater-theatre-our与 orcolorfulcolourfullaborlabour-ise,-isation与 ize,-izationrealizerealiseorganizationorganisation-ce与-selicenselicencedefensedefence 英式在美式拼写中被简化programme-programtraveller-traveler其他预备知识认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药

20、到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目雅思写作流程5+33+25分钟构思，写提纲（写作观点，2个主要论据，1个例子）33分钟写作2分钟检查 语法：主谓一致，标点词汇：用同义词和代词（it,them)替换重复过多的单词逻辑：是否需要在句子中添加therefore,moreover,incontrast等linkingwords认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目练习：请利用在本节课学到的内容找出下面句子的错误。练习：请利用在本节课学到的内容找出下面句子的错误。1.下面的句子从写作风格看存在

21、什么问题？Mobilephonesaresoimportanttoourlives.Everyoneshouldusemobilephones!2.请在下面的两个句子中间加上一个恰当的连接词将其改写为复杂句：Airpollutionisincreasinglyserious.Measuresshouldbetakentotacklethisproblem.3.请迅速找出下面句子里的拼写错误：Thecolorschemeofthisdesignisnotveryorganised.4.请找出下面句子的非正式词汇并替换：Lotsofriversandlakeshavebeenseverelypol

22、luted.5.请改写下面句子中的词汇使其用词更正式：Thecrimerateincitiesishigherandhigher,sotheadvantagesofthesesecuritymeasuresaremorethandisadvantages.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Chapter 2 语法与从句 考官最敏感的三大语法错误 可数名词单数孤立出现。请判断下列翻译是否正确：“狗是朋友。”Dogisfriend.Dogsarefriends.Adogisafriend.Thedogisafrie

23、nd.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目 主谓不一致Thegrowinguseofcomputers_causingenormouschangesinwork.(be)WatchingTVandplayingcomputergames_oneofthemostimportantchildrensleisureactivities.(be)Howwecancopewiththeseproblems_aninterestingissue.(be)逗号不能连接两个独立的句子。isisare认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因

24、，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目练习：请找出下列句子的语法错误（每句仅有一个错误）1.Allowemployeestoworkfromhomecanhelpemployerstoreducecosts.2.Becausemanyparentsdonotspendenoughtimewiththeirchildren.3.Somecompanieshaveplanstoreplacefortheirhumanworkerswithrobots.4.TheInternetisausefuleducationaltool,spendingto

25、omuchtimeonlineisharmfultochildren.Allowing-Allowing删掉 Because删掉 forAlthoughthe认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目5.Theresultsofspaceresearchhasalsoincreasedourknowledgeaboutourownplanet.6.Anageingpopulationmeansanincreasedtaxburdenforworkedadults.7.Studentsareexpectedtositqu

26、ietlyandpayattentionontheirteacher.8.Theyarguethat,largecitiesofferahigherstandardofliving.9.Theseactivitiescanimprovestudentsforeignlanguageskills.has-haveworked-workingon-to删掉，studentsstudents认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目复合句的写作1.什么是复合句？Iloveyou.Iloveyou,andyouloveme.I

27、loveyouthatyouloveme.简单句并列句 and/or/but复合句认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目复合句是不是越多越好？剑桥雅思考官范文平均每篇12句话简单句 2句并列句 2句从句 8句平平实通通顺简单句、并列句和基句、并列句和基础的复的复杂句句易懂把意思表达清楚不长也不难不要让考官数词数到手软认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目高分复合句1.宾语从句宾语从句Manypeoplebelievethatwehave

28、developedintoa“throw-awaysociety”.Thismeansthatchangeisnotalwaysapersonaloption,butaninescapablefactoflife.Whiletherearebothbenefitsanddrawbackstoamulticulturalsociety,itissafetosaythattheprosoutweighthecons.Traditionally,theapproachhasbeentopunishcriminalsbyplacingtheminprisonstopayforwhattheyhaved

29、one.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目2.状语从句状语从句If 引导的条件状语从句引导的条件状语从句如果学生想知道具体的职业信息，他们无需坐在教室里就可以得到。如果一个人失去工作仍能获得帮助，或者一个少数民族仍能够获得和其他人一样的成功机会，那我们才可以说这个国家是进步的。Ifastudentwantstolearnaboutjob-specificinformation,theydonotneedtositinaclassroomtogetit.Ifapersonlosesajobbutgetassist

30、ance,oraminoritystillhasanequalopportunityofsuccess,thenwecansaythiscountryisadvanced.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目While 引导的让步状语从句引导的让步状语从句尽管经济的进步使我们的生活变得舒适，但同时也使社会在财富分配中产生了两极分化。尽管传统建筑外观美观，但通常内部使用起来却并不是很方便。Whiletheeconomicdevelopmenthasmadeourlifemorecomfortable,ithasal

31、sopolarizedthesocietyinthedistributionofwealth.Whiletraditionalbuildingsmightlooknicefromtheoutside,theyareoftennotveryuser-friendly.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目3.定语从句定语从句who 引导，修饰引导，修饰“人人”Thosewhofeelthatsportsstarssalariesarejustifiedmightarguethattheprofessionalswit

32、hrealtalentareveryfew.Studentwithoutteacherswillsurelybelost;butstudentswhosimplyrelyonteachersforknowledgearenotreallylearning.Childrenwhoenterschoolatanearlyagearegenerallymoreconfidentandindependentthanchildrenwhostayathomewiththeirparents.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”

33、项目 that 引导，修饰引导，修饰“物物”如何处置罪犯是所有国家和社会都需要面临的问题。原本需要人工花费数月时间完成的工作现在可以由机器人在几分钟内毫无瑕疵的完成。Howtohandlecriminalsisaproblemthatallcountriesandsocietiesface.Theworkloadthatcouldtakemonthstofinishbymanuallabornowcouldbedoneflawlesslybyrobotsinminutes.逗号加逗号加which引导非限制性定语从句引导非限制性定语从句Iffuelpricesgoup,eitherfewerpe

34、oplewilldriveorpeoplewilldriveless,whichmakessenseforreducingpollution.Demandforvariouscommoditiescreatesahugemarketforthelocalandinternationalbusinesses,whichinturnincreasesdemandforthelabormarket.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目4.主语从句主语从句 whether引导的主语从句Whetherisacontrove

35、rsialissue/hascausedaheateddebate.it引导的主语从句Itisobviousthat what引导主语从句+notbutWhatmostcompaniesandworkforcesneedarenotrobots,butcreativepeoplewhocancontributeideas.Whatthepoorcountriesneedmostisnotmoney,butadvancedtechnologiesandtalentinsomekeyareas.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“

36、精准扶贫”项目5.同位语从句同位语从句Thefactthatwehavedifferentlanguagesdemonstratesthatwehavedifferentcultures.Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutthephenomenonthatourkidsarespendingmoretimewatchingTV.6.表语从句表语从句Thisisbecauseitistherichandpowerfulpeopleinoursocietywhoareabletoimposechanges.Anotherreas

37、onforthisisthatoldbuildings,likenativelanguages,formaculturalidentityandkeepauniquerecordofacountry.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目作业：语法改错练习易错词选择练习判断练习定语从句练习宾语从句练习认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Chapter 3 写作思路哪里来？无话可说没有思想1.具体分类法2.举反例法3.关键词法认识到了贫

38、困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1.具体分类法-it dependsManypeopleusedistance-learningprograms(studymaterialpost,TV,Internet,etc.)tostudyathome,butsomepeoplethinkthatitcannotbringthesamebenefitsofattendingcollegeoruniversity.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?Individuals

39、candonothingtoimprovetheenvironment;onlygovernmentsandlargecompaniescanmakeadifference.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目2.举反例法only/-est/always/never/ban/stopTheonlywaytoimprovesafetyontheroadistoimposeseverepunishmentondrivingoffenders.Towha

40、textentdoyouagreeordisagree?Somepeoplesaythatthebestwaytoimprovepublichealthisbyincreasingthenumberofsportsfacilities.Others,however,saythatthiswouldhavelittleeffectonpublichealthandthatothermeasuresarerequired.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，

41、已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目3.关键词法身体（健康）VS.心理（安全，求知，自信，被尊重）物质上（经济基础）VS.精神上（文化娱乐）Internationaltravelisbecomingcheaper,andcountriesareopeningtheirdoorstomoreandmoretourists.Dotheadvantagesofincreasedtourismoutweighitsdisadvantages?Skill&EfficiencyTechnology&SafetyRight&ResponsibilityEnvironment&HealthEmployment&Mone

42、yCulture&Fun认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目PracticePleasewritedownyourmainideasorargumentsforthefollowingtwowritingtasks.1.Somepeoplethinkthatstudentsshouldfocusonafewsubjectswhileothersthinktheyshouldstudyawiderangeofsubjects.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2.

43、Somepeoplethinkthemediashouldstopreportingondetailsofcrime.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1.Somepeoplethinkthatstudentsshouldfocusonafewsubjectswhileothersthinktheyshouldstudyawiderangeofsubjects.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

44、Skill&Efficiency:coresubjectshelpstudentstodevelopimportantskillsFocusingonthesesubjectshelpsthemtogainknowledgequicklyEmployment&Money:studentswhohaveagoodunderstandingofawiderangeofsubjectscanfindjobsmoreeasilyaftergraduationCulture&Fun:artsubjects,suchaspaintingandphotography,developtheirinterest

45、inart.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目2.Somepeoplethinkthemediashouldstopreportingondetailsofcrime.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Safety:Peoplearebetterinformedaboutcriminalactivities,whichhelpsthemtoprotectthemselvesandtheircommunitiesagainstcrime.Health:Detailedmediare

46、portsoncrimemayincreasepeoplesfearofcrime.Right&Responsibility:Thesereportsmayviolatethevictimsprivacy.Mediacrimereportsarelikelytomisleadthepublic.Money:Suchreportscanattractmoreviewers,listenersorreadersandincreaseadvertisingrevenueformediacompanies.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经

47、展开了“精准扶贫”项目Chapter 4 最简化15句框架模板 到底要不要模板？模板的好处：操作简单见效快分数高模板的缺点：结构死板千篇一律有被判定“Memorized”的可能性认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目最简化15句框架模板脱胎于官方7分以上评分标准结构固话但句子自由规范文章的逻辑简化思维和写作难度低碳环保，无毒，无副作用认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目A 15-Sentence Solution to IELTS W

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49、句8For example,_举例，越具体越好例，越具体越好9_例例证解解释说明明第四段第四段（让步）步）10That is not to say that_not _并不完全否定反方并不完全否定反方观点点11Of course,_承承认反方反方观点的合理性点的合理性12But_驳斥反方斥反方观点不合理性点不合理性第五段第五段（结尾）尾）13In sum,_重申重申观点点14Meanwhile,_不能忽不能忽视反方反方观点点15By doing so we can make sure that_思想升思想升华认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度

50、重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目实战练习Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace.Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake,regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.