读后续写一学习.pptx

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1、 读后续写读后续写:提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）新高考考试说明第1页/共13页评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档第五档(21-25)与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理衔接合理。内内容丰富，容丰富，应用了应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词个以上短文中标出的关键词语。语。所所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能可能有些有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所有效地使

2、用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短续写短文结构紧凑文结构紧凑。第2页/共13页高高融洽度融洽度 tone(情节基调情节基调)language characteristics(语言特征语言特征)content(内容内容:plot development-“W&H”)第3页/共13页Step 1.Read for basic information1.tone(情节基调情节基调):?Then I realized something terrible would happen.He took out a knife nd forced me to.I managned to teach my bro

3、ther could untie the rope on his hands.dangeroussafea happy ending第4页/共13页Step 1.Read for basic information2.Language characteristics(语言特征语言特征):?One day,my brother and I were alone in our apartment.Ding-Dong!Ding-Dong!Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat and black rubber boots.

4、Without any thinking，my brother said:“No.”Story narration(故事旁白故事旁白)simple(简单简单)vivid(生动生动)第5页/共13页 Step 1.Read for basic informationone dayin our apartmentI,my brother and a robber My brother opened the door for a robber and we were caught by him.3.content(内容内容:plot development-“W&H”)How will the st

5、ory develop?When:Where:Who:What:How:Passage A mainly tells:One day,my brother opened the door of our house for a robber,and we were caught by him.第6页/共13页Step 2.Read for plot development clues(情节发展线索情节发展线索情节发展线索情节发展线索)Find out the key clues(线索)based on the beginnings:Para1:The door of the kitchen wa

6、s locked and whats worse,I did not have the key.Para2 Just at the same time our parents came back home.Escape or not?第7页/共13页Step 3.Predict possible plot development(tone:dangerous safe a happy ending)The underlined words:in our apartment,parents,the dooe,unlocked,comic books,terrible,tie up,the man

7、,the kitchen,the policethe brothersthe robberescape?not escape?caught?not caught?parents?the police?第8页/共13页 Language characteristics:Tips for drafting a continuation(起草续篇起草续篇起草续篇起草续篇)simple(简单简单)vivid (生动生动)Polish and cohere(润色衔接润色衔接):discourse marks(衔接语衔接语)Content:include the underlined words(5)第9

8、页/共13页Para.1:The door of the kitchen was locked and whats worse,I did not have the key.Para.2:Just at the same time our parents came back home.Step 4.Draft a continuation(起草续篇起草续篇)第10页/共13页融洽度高融洽度高 tone(情节基调情节基调)language characteristics(语言特征语言特征)content(内容内容:plot development-“W&H”)第11页/共13页Step 5.Check and copy your version(检查誊写检查誊写检查誊写检查誊写)第12页/共13页感谢您的观看！第13页/共13页