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1、AsmilehelpsJennyfrowned(皱眉)asshehelpedhermotherandfathersetoutthecookingsuppliesintheshinysteelkitchen.HerfamilyhadjustmovedherefromSanFrancisco,havingboughtasmallrestaurant,whichwassettoopeninthenextfewdays.“Movingherewasadumbidea,JennycomplainedmostlytoherselfWhatsthat?”Hermotherasked,openingaboxa

2、ndliftingoutseveralpots.Nothing,Jennymumbled（咕哝）.Thegirlhadbeenangryaboutthemove,butherparentshadmadethedecisionandwerenowtoobusygettingreadyforthegrandopeningtolistentohercomplaints.Thefirstfewdaysathernewschoolhadntbeeneasy,either.Shefoundithardtotalktopeopleshedidntknow,anditseemedlikethestudents

3、hadntevennoticedher.Jennysighedandgotbacktowashingdishes.Onthedayofthegrandopening,Jennysparentswereallsmiles,welcomingcustomersintotherestaurant,brightlydecoratedingoldandred.EvenJennywasinagoodmoodassherushedaround,seatingguests,handingoutmenus,andpouringtallglassesofwater.Thiswasabigdayforherfami

4、ly.AtoneofthetablessatafamilywithtwodaughterswhowereaboutJennysage.Asshefilledtheirglasses,Jennyrealizedthetwinswereinherclass.Jennyduckedherheaddownsoherlonghaircoveredherface,andsheturnedawayfromthetable.Jennysmotherfoundhersoonafter,inthekitchenloadingthedishwasher.Honey,whatareyoudoingbackhere?W

5、eneedyououtfrontwiththecustomers.Mom,Idontwanttobeoutthere.Therearekidsfromschool!So?hermotherasked.Thatsgood!Gototakethemsomefortunecookiesandsayhello!ShesaidtoJenny,pointingatthefortunecookiespaperwhichread:“Manyfriendsarefoundwithasinglesmile.”Para1：Jennyabsentlyreadthefortunecookiepaper.Para2：Sh

6、eplacedthecookiesdown,andbravelylookedthegirlsintheeyes.两两节：情：情节+细节两情：情两情：情节+情感情感内心纠结去不去内心纠结去不去 -幡然醒悟幡然醒悟 -开始行动开始行动somethingchanged微笑面对打招呼微笑面对打招呼 -对方的反应对方的反应 -Jenny的反应的反应 -点明主旨点明主旨,提升立意提升立意Para1：Jennyabsentlyreadthefortunecookiepaper.Para2：Sheplacedthecookiesdown,andbravelylookedthegirlsintheeyes.纠结

7、去不去纠结去不去幡然醒悟幡然醒悟 开始行动开始行动The thought of saying hellomadeherfeel uneasy.Alternating between hiding in the kitchenandwalking out tobreak the ice,shewas in a panic,face written with worry,blushing.Shereachedout for a cookie,unwrappeditandputitintohermouth.Asthesweetnessdissolvedonhertongue,shenoticedth

8、esewordsagain,“Manyfriendsarefoundwithasinglesmile.”Sheseemedtohavegatheredsomecourage.Takingadeepbreath,shewalkedout.Para1：Jennyabsentlyreadthefortunecookiepaper.Para2：Sheplacedthecookiesdown,andbravelylookedthegirlsintheeyes.纠结去不去纠结去不去幡然醒悟幡然醒悟 开始行动开始行动The thought of saying hellomadeherfeel uneasy.

9、Alternating between hiding in the kitchenandwalking out tobreak the ice,shewas in a panic,face written with worry,blushing.Shereachedout for a cookie,unwrappeditandputitintohermouth.Asthesweetnessdissolvedonhertongue,shenoticedthesewordsagain,“Manyfriendsarefoundwithasinglesmile.”Sheseemedtohavegath

10、eredsomecourage.Takingadeepbreath,shewalkedout.Para1：Jennyabsentlyreadthefortunecookiepaper.Para2：Sheplacedthecookiesdown,andbravelylookedthegirlsintheeyes.纠结去不去纠结去不去幡然醒悟幡然醒悟 开始行动开始行动The thought of saying hellomadeherfeel uneasy.Alternating between hiding in the kitchenandwalking out tobreak the ice

11、,shewas in a panic,face written with worry,blushing.Shereachedout for a cookie,unwrappeditandputitintohermouth.Asthesweetnessdissolvedonhertongue,shenoticedthesewordsagain,“Manyfriendsarefoundwithasinglesmile.”Sheseemedtohavegatheredsomecourage.Takingadeepbreath,shewalkedout.Para1：Jennyabsentlyreadt

12、hefortunecookiepaper.Para2：Sheplacedthecookiesdown,andbravelylookedthegirlsintheeyes.微笑面对微笑面对打招呼打招呼 对方的对方的反应反应 Jenny的反应反应点明主旨点明主旨,提升立意提升立意“Welcome to our restaurant!”Jenny said confidentlywith asmilespreadingonherface.“Oh,fortunecookies,Ilovethese!”criedoneofthegirls,reachingforthetray.Theothersiste

13、rlookedatJennycarefullyandhereyeslitupwithrecognition.“Youarethenewstudent.”Uponhearingthis,Jennyflushedandnoddedwith an awkward smile,“Hi,I am Jenny.”Then they introducedeach other.Everyone was so happy and talked a lot about theirschoolandclassmates.Sowithasinglesmile,onthatspecialday,Jenny not on

14、ly gained her confidencebut alsogained two bestfriends.Para1：Jennyabsentlyreadthefortunecookiepaper.Para2：Sheplacedthecookiesdown,andbravelylookedthegirlsintheeyes.微笑面对微笑面对打招呼打招呼 对方的对方的反应反应 Jenny的反应反应点明主旨点明主旨,提升立意提升立意“Welcome to our restaurant!”Jenny said confidentlywith asmilespreadingonherface.“Oh

15、,fortunecookies,Ilovethese!”criedoneofthegirls,reachingforthetray.TheothersisterlookedatJennycarefullyandhereyeslitupwithrecognition.“Youarethenewstudent.”Uponhearingthis,Jennyflushedandnoddedwith an awkward smile,“Hi,I am Jenny.”Then they introducedeach other.Everyone was so happy and talked a lot

16、about theirschoolandclassmates.Sowithasinglesmile,onthatspecialday,Jenny not only gained her confidencebut alsogained two bestfriends.Para1：Jennyabsentlyreadthefortunecookiepaper.Para2：Sheplacedthecookiesdown,andbravelylookedthegirlsintheeyes.微笑面对微笑面对打招呼打招呼 对方的对方的反应反应 Jenny的反应反应点明主旨点明主旨,提升立意提升立意“Wel

17、come to our restaurant!”Jenny said confidentlywith asmilespreadingonherface.“Oh,fortunecookies,Ilovethese!”criedoneofthegirls,reachingforthetray.TheothersisterlookedatJennycarefullyandhereyeslitupwithrecognition.“Youarethenewstudent.”Uponhearingthis,Jennyflushedandnoddedwith an awkward smile,“Hi,I a

18、m Jenny.”Then they introducedeach other.Everyone was so happy and talked a lot about theirschoolandclassmates.Sowithasinglesmile,onthatspecialday,Jenny not only gained her confidencebut alsogained two bestfriends.Para1：Jennyabsentlyreadthefortunecookiepaper.Para2：Sheplacedthecookiesdown,andbravelylo

19、okedthegirlsintheeyes.微笑面对微笑面对打招呼打招呼 对方的对方的反应反应 Jenny的反应反应点明主旨点明主旨,提升立意提升立意“Welcome to our restaurant!”Jenny said confidentlywith asmilespreadingonherface.“Oh,fortunecookies,Ilovethese!”criedoneofthegirls,reachingforthetray.TheothersisterlookedatJennycarefullyandhereyeslitupwithrecognition.“Youarethenewstudent.”Uponhearingthis,Jennyflushedandnoddedwith an awkward smile,“Hi,I am Jenny.”Then they introducedeach other.Everyone was so happy and talked a lot about theirschoolandclassmates.Sowithasinglesmile,onthatspecialday,Jenny not only gained her confidencebut alsogained two bestfriends.