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1、How to improve your writing2021/8/9 星期一1时时 间间分分 值值词词 数数题题 材材 内内 容容NMET2000记叙文记叙文100左右左右看图目击交通事故，警察局里写报告看图目击交通事故，警察局里写报告NMET2001说明文说明文100左右左右根据表格提供的信息写减负回信根据表格提供的信息写减负回信NMET2002说明文说明文100左右左右根据表格提供的信息写回信介绍讨论情况根据表格提供的信息写回信介绍讨论情况NMET2003应用文应用文100左右左右看图写回信说明找房情况看图写回信说明找房情况NMET2004记叙文记叙文80-120看图记述与邻居交涉过程看

2、图记述与邻居交涉过程2005广东卷广东卷记叙文记叙文80-120 把漫画所表达的故事和寓意写成一段短文把漫画所表达的故事和寓意写成一段短文高考书面表达题2021/8/9 星期一2主要特点记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明2021/8/9 星期一3空间顺序时间顺序逻辑顺序能力要求2021/8/9 星期一4主要问题要点不全线索不清原因：步骤不对2021/8/9 星期一5书面表达六 步 法2021/8/9 星期一6书面表达六步法书面表达六步法幻灯片幻灯片 23抄改连扩抓审书面表达2021/8/9 星期一7书面表达六步法一、审题认真读题然后找出基本要素:5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何

3、事2021/8/9 星期一8书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为，配动词，注意时态、语态及搭配的副词、介词等What happened?2021/8/9 星期一9书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位，把要点变成完整的句子，注意连词Who did what?2021/8/9 星期一10书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应词与词搭配 句与句相连2021/8/9 星期一11书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？2021/8/9 星期一12书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！2021/8/9 星期一1

4、3逻辑角度逻辑角度 合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序时间顺序 first,second,then,finally/at last,soon immediately,suddenly空间顺序空间顺序here,there,on one sideon the other side,in front of,at the back of,next to 对称顺序对称顺序for one thing,for the other thing,on one hand,on the other hand转折顺序转折顺序but,however,while,though,otherwise因果顺序因果顺序be

5、cause,since,as,thanks to,as a result(of)条件顺序条件顺序as long as,so long as,on condition that,if,unless让步顺序让步顺序though,as,even if/though,whether,who (what,when,where)ever递进顺序递进顺序whats more,besides,to make matters worse,whats worse过渡性插入语过渡性插入语I think,Im afraid,you know,As we all know如何使用恰当的连接词2021/8/9 星期一14

6、May 25,Sunday CloudyThis morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday.The salesgirl treated me coldly.She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop.She said that I made it dirty.She gave various excuses to refuse my request.I quarreled with her.The manager turned up.He asked what

7、 was the matter.He knew all about this,he apologized to me and criticized(批批评评)the salesgirl.They changed another coat for me.I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.2021/8/9 星期一15May 25,Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday._The salesgirl treate

8、d me coldly._She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop._She said that I made it dirty._She gave various excuses to refuse my request._I quarreled with her._The manager turned up.He asked what was the matter._He knew all about this,he apologized to me and criticized(批批评评)the salesgirl.They change

9、d another coat for me.I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.However,At the beginningLaterIn a wordI got so angry thatAfter that/As soon as/The momentJust at that moment2021/8/9 星期一16Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This village is very s

10、mall.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has ch

11、anged a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast.People here live a much better life than before.书面表达书面表达：例 1Now it is taking on a new look.2021/8/9 星期一17 In the past,the school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautif

12、ul building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.In the past,the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school.But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.All

13、 the school-age children can study here.Whats more,they enjoy free education.May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/May you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.2021/8/9 星期一18返回返回How to enrich your writing2021/8/9 星期一191.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名

14、词性从句）（使用名词性从句）2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)3.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型)4.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚用虚拟语气）拟语气）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Have a tryHave a

15、tryWeak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.2021/8/9 星期一205.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词使用过去分词)6.They sang and laughed as they we

16、nt back to school.(使用使用V-ing形式形式)7.I wont believe what he says.（使用状语从句）（使用状语从句）8.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（用并列句）（用并列句）9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many st

17、udents,she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.2021/8/9 星期一21看图作文举例2021/8/9 星期一22Picture 1go overgo to bed nine oclockstay upwake up get up 2021/8/9 星期一23Picture 2get dressedwash oneselfrus

18、h into get my schoolbag preparego to school breakfastbrush teeth wash face2021/8/9 星期一24Picture 3ran outget on my bikeride to school as fast as2021/8/9 星期一25Picture 4get toto my surpriseclose realizeSundayfindthe school gate2021/8/9 星期一26Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.I

19、 often stay up late.I often stay up late to go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations.I go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations.to2021/8/9 星期一27Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.Last night I went to bed at 12 oclock.Last night I didnt go to

20、bed until 12 oclock.2021/8/9 星期一28Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.I woke up at 9 oclock this morning.When I woke up this morning,it was already 9 oclock.WhenalreadyitWhenitalready2021/8/9 星期一29Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.I rushed into the

21、 living room.I rushed into the living room,where Mother was preparing breakfast.whereMother was preparing breakfast in the living room.the living roomthe living roomthe living room2021/8/9 星期一30Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.Mother couldnt say anything.Before she could

22、say anything,I got my schoolbag,ran out and got on my bike.I got my schoolbag.I ran out.I got on my bike.1 4 2 3 2021/8/9 星期一31Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.I realized it was Sunday today.It was then that I realized it was Sunday today.2021/8/9 星期一32Possible version:Ju

23、ne 17,SundayI often stay up late to go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations.Last night I didnt go to bed until 12 oclock.When I woke up this morning,it was already 9 oclock.I got dressed and washed myself quickly.Then I rushed into the living room,where Mother was preparing breakfas

24、t.Before she could say anything,I got my schoolbag,ran out and got on my bike.I rode as fast as I could.It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school gate.To my surprise,it was closed.It was then that I realized it was Sunday today.2021/8/9 星期一33结 论审题，抓点审题，抓点造句，成文造句，成文改错，誉写改错，誉写背诵精彩范文背诵精彩范

25、文2021/8/9 星期一34 练习：练习：认真阅读所给提示或图画，抓住所有细节，找出认真阅读所给提示或图画，抓住所有细节，找出每幅图画或每个句子的中心词。每幅图画或每个句子的中心词。为了配合国际动物周活动，一家英文杂志邀请各国为了配合国际动物周活动，一家英文杂志邀请各国 学生提供有关动物的故事。请根据下列六幅图画，用英学生提供有关动物的故事。请根据下列六幅图画，用英语为该杂志写一篇故事。语为该杂志写一篇故事。bark:vi.&n.吠叫吠叫注意：注意：1、故事必须包括所有图画的内、故事必须包括所有图画的内 容，可以适当增加细节，使容，可以适当增加细节，使 故事连贯。故事连贯。2、词数、词数100左右。左右。2021/8/9 星期一352021/8/9 星期一36