读后续写一个丢失的螺栓学案-高三英语二轮复习.docx

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1、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Youd think that after hearing Mom and Dad talk about The Trip for a year, Id be eager to go. But l didnt even want to think about it. Arent you excited? asked Dad, looking up from his laptop. This is the trip of lifetime. Ill bet none of your friends will be driving acr

2、oss the United States this summer?Exactly, I thought. Nobody I knew was going to pile into an old van, and drive from California to New York and back in 8 days. Fifty-eight days! That was practically my whole summer! But I knew it was useless to protest (抗议).When Dad was offered a summer off for the

3、 first time in his career, he said that hed always dreamed of driving across the country. So we were going. This was Dads chance.I picked up my cat, Max, and buried my face in his fur. He pawed at my ears playfully. Good-bye.summer vacation. Good-bye, diving at the lake. Good-bye to hanging out and

4、doing absolutely nothing Good-bye, Max. I was going to miss this ball of fur. I put him down and laughed as he batted a button across the floor like a soccer player. He was interested in all small objects.The closer The Trip got, the harder it was to ignore. Thick envelopes arrived from places like

5、Indiana. Tennessee. and Arkansas. Night after night, Mom and Dad huddled around the computer plotting every inch of our 8,000-mile journey.Three days after school got out, The Trip was finally here. Everything was packed and ready to go Mom said that we were supposed to leave at 9 a.m. But when Dad

6、noticed a wet spot under the van, l realized we wouldnt be going anywhere for a while. Dad crawled under the van. Car parts sprang uparound the van like mushrooms.Minutes turned into hours. By the time Dad gave Mom the news. it was late. afternoon. I fixed the eak. said Dad. But now I cant find one

7、of the fan bolts (螺栓) Mom organized a search, but in vain.Paragraph l :Dad called the stores but none carried the bolt that fitted this old van.Paragraph2:Then it hit me.Max! I shouted.Find Max!文章大意：爸妈准备暑假坐着我们家的货车去横跨整个美国，我很不情愿。出发的日子到了，货车上的一个螺栓却找不到了。情节安排：第一段主要描写父母没找到螺栓的沮丧和难过；我虽暗自窃喜，但看到爸爸的沮丧和难过，决定要帮忙找

8、到螺栓。第二段主要写找到Max和螺栓后的开心和激动，修好车子，我们出发旅行。伏笔与续写时的照应：But l didnt even want to think about it. Fifty-eight days! That was practically my whole summer! But I knew it was useless to protest (抗议).-伏笔：我不想去照应：My soul silently rejoyed.When Dad was offered a summer off for the first time in his career, he said t

9、hat hed always dreamed of driving across the country.-伏笔：这是爸爸的梦想 照应：His dream-The Trip of a Lifetime -was vanishing before his eyes. Good-bye.summer vacation. Good-bye, diving at the lake. Good-bye to hanging out and doing absolutely nothing Good-bye, Max. I was going to miss this ball of fur. -伏笔：得

10、知旅行，无法开心照应：My summer vacation will come back undoubtedly with the thought of diving at the lake and hanging out floating in my mind.Then it hit me.Max! I shouted.Find Max!-伏笔：猫拿走了螺栓。照应：What appeared in its mouth was the lost bolt.语言积累我的失望Seized by a flush of relief, I could even see my colorful summ

11、er vacation open arms to me. However, what came into my sight made my mind complicated. 爸爸的沮丧There my dad was, leaning against the car, face clouded with gloom. His loneliness figure pierced my heart and reminded me of the painstaking effort he had made to prepare for the trip. 思想的转变How could I be s

12、o selfish? I couldnt help wondering where the bolt could be.找到螺栓Hardly had I entered my room when the small bolt rolled to my feet, chased by Max. Without delay, i picked up the bolt and dashed out, waving the tiny object,“I found it!”yelled I. Floating on an ocean of happiness, we hugged and cheere

13、d.结尾句Dad quickly fixed the van and we started our journey in the soft breeze and warm sunshine. This time, the long road ahead seemed to be attractive for me.参考答案：Dad called the stores but none carried the bolt that fitted this old van. He tried starting the car without the bolt. No miracle. Gears r

14、attled, the engine roared and a choking gust of coal black smoke flooded from its pipes, swallowing all three of us. I had to confess that moment, a slight touch of relief came creeping on my mind. Out of an impulse of curiosity, I glimpsed at dad one time or two. His head ducked, his gaze rested st

15、eadily on the rusty van, beads of sweat swelling upon his forehead, and I could see clearly the light in his eyes had fainted. A mixed sentiment of restlessness and sourness clung upon my heart, where is the bolt? A desiring voice lingered from my inner side.爸爸打电话给商店，但没有人有这辆旧货车的螺栓。他试图在没有螺栓的情况下启动汽车。没

16、有奇迹。齿轮嘎嘎作响，发动机咆哮着，一阵呛人的煤黑烟从它的管道中涌出，吞没了我们三个人。我不得不承认，那一刻，我的脑海里浮现出一丝轻松。出于好奇的冲动，我瞥了爸爸一两眼。他低着头，目光呆呆地落在那辆生锈的面包车上，汗珠在他的额头上冒，我能清楚地看到他眼睛里的光已经暗淡起来。一阵不安和酸涩的情绪粘在我的心上，“螺栓在哪里？”一个渴望的声音从我的内心徘徊。Then it hit me. Max! I shouted, Find Max! Yeah, Max. dad sprang to his feet, murmuring to himself with shivering lips. We c

17、ast glances all around the house. Never in my wildest dream had I dreamed that Max would be so smart and naughty. We searched every corner of every room but Max was nowhere to be found. It was when we were about to give up that a ripple of mews stirred up our nerves. Aha, got it! Dad paced cautiousl

18、y toward the van, stretched out his arm and reached for the handle. The door was slammed open and Max, full of elegance, was leaning against the back of the seat, and licking the bolt. The leak was fixed and soon we were on the trip of lifetime in delight as expected.“麦克斯！”我喊道：“找到麦克斯!”“是的，麦克斯.”爸爸跳起来，颤抖的嘴唇自言自语。我们环顾四周。哪怕最疯狂的梦中，我从来没有梦想过麦克斯会如此聪明和淘气。我们搜查了每个房间的每个角落，但麦克斯无处可寻。就在我们即将放弃的时候，一阵猫叫撩拨了我们的神经。“啊哈，明白了！” 爸爸小心翼翼地朝面包车踱去，伸出手臂，伸手握住车把。门被砰的一声打开，马克斯优雅地靠在座位后面，舔着螺栓。漏油很快就修好了，几分钟后，我们如期愉快出发。学科网（北京）股份有限公司