读后续写：走出火山谷讲义-高三英语写作专项.docx

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1、南通一模读后续写下水文指导：走出火山谷【试卷原题】 On a steamy morning in July, Clay and Acaimie Chastain arrived at the base of Mount Liamuiga on the Caribbean island of St. Kitts, ready to spend a day of their honeymoon climbing Mount Liamuiga. The highest point on St. Kitts, Liamuiga is also a dormant (休眠的) volcano that

2、starts in the clouds and plunges down to meet the sea. They couldnt find a visitor centre or hire a guide, so they set off on their own. They reached the peak around noon and ate their sandwiches looking out over the ocean and surrounding islands. Thats when Clay saw it: a small trail that led into

3、the volcanos crater(坑), a bowl of green with cloud forest giving way to green grass. A series of screw eyes(螺钉孔) had been drilled into the rocks, with ropes that led down. Clay wanted to go down and take some pictures. Acaimie followed him a little way, but she was very cautious and quite scared of

4、heights; so Clay went on alone. A few minutes later, she heard a crasha noise that sounded like a large branch snapping，followed by the sound of something big rolling downhill. “Clay?” she called. Silence. Uneasy, she waited a minute and shouted againstill nothing. And then, from somewhere much furt

5、her down, she heard a weak cry for help. This time she was certain: It was Clay calling for help from deep within the crater. As she looked over the lip of the volcano, she tried to stop some of her worst worries. Her phone wasnt getting a signal, and her cries for help were met with only silence. “

6、Clay! she shouted as loud as she could. Clay, are you OK?” Acaimie grasped the rope and began climbing down the trail. When the path became too steep, she slid on her butt, her legs and arms getting bruised and scraped in the process. Then, just off the trail, she saw a flash of red. It was Clays sc

7、arf. And next to it was his cell phone. She grabbed both and continued down, screaming for Clay all the way. “Help, he said in that strange voice. Im coming! Stay where you are,” she said.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Finally, she spotted Clay_Acaimie had to push those thoughts away and foc

8、us on what could do._【下水文写作指导】一、提炼基本信息when:on a steamy morning in Julywhere:a dormant volcanowho:Clay and Acaimie Chastain(a newly-married couple)what:spent a day of their honeymoon climbing Mount Liamuiga二、理清文章思路Para 1&2.On a stormy July morning a newly-married couple made a tour of a dormant volca

9、no on their own.伏笔: a dormant (休眠的) volcano that starts in the clouds and plunges down to meet the sea.山高水深 地势险峻，为后来女主人公带着丈夫逃生增加了难度，如果她能成功脱险更能彰显“爱”的力量。Para 3.The hero Clay decided to take pictures in the volcanos crater(坑),伏笔: Frightened, the heroine Acaimie Chastain followed a little 女主人公胆小晕高，为以后她带

10、丈夫脱险的勇气魄力形成强烈对比，更能体现夫妻之间深深的爱Para4-5.possible danger/accident of Clay and the heroinessearch of ClayPara6-7.confirmation of Clays accident三、读后续写思路：第一段根据首段首句，Finally, she spotted Clay.下面应该写男主人公跌到火山坑后的状况，女主人公的心疼和护理，同时根据前面文本中提供的“Acaimie was very cautious and quite scared of heights”写爱人受伤后的恐惧和无助，以和第二段的首句

11、Acaimie had to push those thoughts away照应。第二段 紧紧围绕“what could do”展开，积极寻找逃生线索，最后成功获救。这段可以把前面段落的伏笔作为线索。由于爱情的力量和对美好生活的向往，女主人公一下子变得坚强，完成了在难以想象的困难下带领丈夫逃生的使命。总之，整篇文章由“爱”贯穿始终，彰显爱情的力量。四、范文 Finally, she spotted Clay.Heartbreaking! Clay was huddling there in great pain, blood streaming from his leg, face pale

12、. Without any delay she raced to bend over to stop the bleeding. Then cautiously and tenderly she brought some water to his mouth to relieve his thirst under the blazing sun. Overwhelmed with panic, she felt dreadful thoughts flashacross her mind,”would we end up here when our happy life had just be

13、gun?” Acaimie had to push those thoughts away and focus on what could do.She had to push thoughts away and focus on what could do. Looking around, she realized she had no substitutions to rely on but the rope. Taking a deep breath, she set off on her journey upwards determinedly with Clay on her bac

14、k. Oddly, all her panic was gone and she seemed to be full of strength. She rock-climbed carefully and confidently, sweat streaming and clothes drenched .After what seemed ages, they eventually made it to the peak. Suddenly she heard the sound of text messages. What a pleasant surprise! She dialed 911 and was assured that rescue would arrive in 5 minutes as a helicopter happened to be close by. They smiled in relief and gave each other the biggest hug ever.学科网（北京）股份有限公司