专题09 读后续写（患病男孩的赛跑） -备战2023年高考英语母题题源解密（新高考）.pptx

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1、专题09 患病男孩的赛跑读后续写备战2023年高考英语母题题源解密（新高考）CONTENT1.母题呈现2.母题解密题源删减母题分析语言优化范文赏析外刊赏析备战2023年高考英语母题题源解密01母题呈现阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was the day of the big cross-country run.Students from sevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute（路线）throughthickevergre

2、enforest.2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新高考卷）I looked around and finally spotted David,who was standing byhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasntwiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试

3、（新高考卷）Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschoolscoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,heexplaineduncomfortably.Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新高考卷）Ibitbackmyfrustration（懊恼）.Iknewthecoac

4、hmeantwellhethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新高考卷）Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmates

5、thoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlongerthatsall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,

6、hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新高考卷）Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldntlookatme.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the otherrunners.2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新高考卷

7、）备战2023年高考英语母题题源解密02母题解密题源删减母题原文信息解密母题分析母题原文信息梳理语言优化母题试题命题规律范文及外刊赏析母题试题命题规律题源删减DavidsRunItwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentelementaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownof100-MileHouse,BritishColumbia,werewarmingupandwalkingtheroutethroughthickevergreenforest.InthefiveyearsIhadb

8、eenteachingatHorseLakeElementarySchool,Ihadcometorespectthetoughpioneerspiritofthelocalpeople.Namedforitslocation100milesfromLillooet,(milezeroontheoldCariboo Gold Rush Trail),and dotted with active cattle ranches,100-Mile Housesometimesseemedlikeaplaceoutoftime,withitshorses,cowboysandcattledrives.

9、Atanelevationof930metres,100-MileHouseisacommunityinwhichspringcomeslate,snowcomesearlyandwintersportsarealocalpassion.试 题 删 减ItwasnowlateMayandthegroundhadonlyjustdriedenoughfromthemeltingsnowtoholdtherace.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfor

10、tenyearsold,withfrecklesandunrulyredhair.ButhisHisusualbigtoothygrinsmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasntwiththeotherchildren.TheonlyresponsehegavemewasHehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!试 题 删 减Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschoolscoa

11、chphysicaleducationteacherandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatworriedtheotherkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Ithoughttheremightbeafightifourkidstriedtodefendhim.Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration.Iknewthecoachmeantwellandsincerelyh

12、ethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatbeingassuredDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward,awkwardlywalkingonhistoes.试 题 删 减DavidscerebralpalsyDavidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchild

13、ren,butatschoolhispeersclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.WhichisThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-country team.It just took him longer,thats all.David had not missed a singlepractice,andalth

14、oughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildrenhedidalwaysfinish.Hehadstubbornlyrunatotaloftwenty-threekilometresinpracticerunstoprepareforthatdaystwo-and-a-half-kilometre(1.5-mile)run,andhehadaskedmetocomeandwatch.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandw

15、asproudofhisstrongdeterminationdoggeddetermination.试 题 删 减Wesatdownnexttoeachothertogetheronsomesteps,butDavidwouldntlookatme.Iquietlysaid,“David,ifyoudontwanttoruntoday,nooneisgoingtomakeyou.Butifyourenotrunningbecauseyoureafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,thatsnotagoodenoughreason.Therewillalwaysbesomeo

16、newhowilllaughandsaymeanthings.Therearepeoplelikethat,andthatsjustthewayitis.Therealquestioniswhetheryouaregoingtoletthosefewpeoplestopyoufromdoingsomethingyoureallywanttodo.Areyougoingtoletthemgetinyourway?Ifyoureallywanttorun,David,thenyourun!”试 题 删 减IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeo

17、therrunners.IheldmybreathasDavidtookthisin.Thenhelookedatthefieldandsaidwithafiercebutquietdetermination,“Imgonnarun.”IwatchedstoodonthesidelineswiththeexcitedcrowdasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Thestartersgunsounded,andDavidlurchedforwardwiththeotherchildren.Buthehadonlygoneafew

18、metresbeforehetrippedandfellflatontheground.Myheartsank.AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,othervoicesaroundmetookupthecall.“ComeonDavid,youcandoit!”Iknewwithoutevenlookingthatthesevoiceswerenotjustthoseofhisschoolmates.Theycamefromparents,teachersandkidsfromotherschools,whoquicklyunderstoodthecourageit

19、tookDavidtoattemptthisrun.试 题 删 减Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagain.Alltheotherrunnershaddisappearedoverthehill.Butitdidntmatter.ThiswasDavidsrun.Hehadworkedforit,andhewouldntgiveup!Aslongashewasinsight,Davidheardpeoplecallinghisname.Iwaitedanxiouslybythefinishlineasthefirstrunnerscompletedthetwo-a

20、nd-a-halfkilometresofforesttrails.Soonalloftheotherrunnershadcomeinandanotherracehadbegun.Still no David!I started to feel sick.Had I done the wrong thing?He hadntcheckedoutthetrailwiththeotherrunners.Couldhehavebecomelost?Finally,asmallfigureemergedfromtheforest.Withheelskickingouttothesideandhisbo

21、dyrockingwiththerhythmofhisrun,Davidploddedtowardthehomestretch.Heraisedhisarmsintriumphashecrossedthefinishlinetowildcheersandapplause.试 题 删 减Then,whenDavidscoachslappedhimonthebackandsaidproudly,“Goodjob,David!”hecaughtmyeye,flashedmeatoothygrinandsaid,“Thatwaseasy!”At the end of the year,the trac

22、k coach asked the class to nominate one of theirclassmatesfortheathleticawardfortheirgrade.WithouthesitationthewholeclassvotedforDavid,sayingthatnoonehadworkedharderforthatawardthanhe.Itwasanamazingmomentatouryear-endassembly.TheauditoriumresoundedwithcheeringandapplausewhenDavidcameforwardandreceiv

23、edhisawardforoutstandingathleticachievementfromhisbeamingcoach.试 题 删 减母题分析Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute（路线）throughthickevergreenforest.母 题 分 析Allthestudentswerepreparingfortherunonthedayofthebigcross

24、-countryrun.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasntwiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.母 题 分 析IfoundDavidwasaloneandhedecidednottorun.(Da

25、vid:sad)Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschoolscoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,heexplaineduncomfortably.Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.母 题 分 析I asked the schools coach for the reason and knew that

26、 David wasinfluencedbythecoachswords.(I:frustrated)Ibitbackmyfrustration（懊恼）.Iknewthecoachmeantwellhethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.母 题 分 析IdecidedtohaveatalkwithDavid.

27、Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid.He alwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjustto

28、okhimlongerthatsall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.母 题 分 析Davidhadabraindiseasebuthehadastrongdetermination.

29、续写思路分析Paragraph1:Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldntlookatme.续 写 思 路 分 析Itoldhimhewasexcellent.Hecouldntbelieveit.Icontinuedtosay.HeknewwhatImeananddecidedtorunforhimself.Paragraph2:IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.续 写 思 路 分 析Hebegantorun.Herunslowerthanotherkids.Hefin

30、allymadeitandbecameconfident.续 写 思 路 分 析由第二段续写开头语中“Davidmoveduptothestartingline”可知，第一段“我”和David谈话之后，他决定参加赛跑。由第一段开头语中“Davidwouldntlookatme”可知，结尾David应该是自信的，而不是不敢看别人。语言优化我轻轻地把他抱进我的怀里，看着他的眼睛，泪水涌了出来。语 言 优 化Gentlyguidinghimintomyarms,Ilookedrightintohiseyes,wheretearswelledup.（动作的细致表达）我用手指把它们擦干，安慰性地说。语

31、言 优 化Idriedthemupwithmyfingers,sayingcomfortingly.大卫僵硬地盯着他的鞋子，静静地坐着，一只手摩擦着另一只。语 言 优 化Staringathisshoesstiffly,Davidsatsilentlywithhisonehandrubbingtheother.我把手放在他的背上，耐心地拍了拍，说服了他。语 言 优 化Iputmypalmonhisback,pattedwithpatienceandpersuadedhim.他默默地盯着其他正在热身的参与者，什么也没说。语 言 优 化Silently,hejuststaredattheother

32、participantswhowerewarmingupwithoutsayinganything.你总是一个勇敢、勤奋的男孩，我们都为你感到骄傲。跟着你的心走。语 言 优 化Youarealwaysabraveanddiligentboyandweareallproudofyou.Justfollowyourheart.大卫，你为这次活动付出了很大的努力，而且练习得很好，所以我相信你能实现这个雄心壮志。语 言 优 化David,youhaveworkedhardfortheeventandyoupractisedreallywell,soIbelieveyoucanfulfillthisam

33、bition.所以是时候证明自己了。只要你坚持不懈的练习，你就能成功！语 言 优 化Soitstimetoproveyourself.Withyourpersistentpractice,youcanmakeit!听到我的话，他点了点头，看起来像是被信任了。语 言 优 化Hearingmywords,henoddedhishead,lookingrebornwithbeingtrusted.听到我的肯定，大卫高兴地笑了，跌跌撞撞地走向起跑线。语 言 优 化Hearingmyconfirmation,Davidbeamedwithpleasureandstumbledtowardsthestar

34、tingline.最后，他转过头来看着我，眼神里充满了决心。语 言 优 化Finally,heturnedhisheadtomewithdeterminationinhiseyes.对于他的年龄来说，他的体型确实太小了。语 言 优 化Hissizewasindeedcomparativelytoosmallforhisage.Butstrangeenough,helookedlikeagreatherowithendlesspower.(利用原文细节)我的沮丧被满足所取代。语 言 优 化Myfrustrationwasreplacedbysatisfaction.一听到枪声，包括大卫在内的所有

35、人都加快了步伐。语 言 优 化Atthesoundofthesignalgunshot,everyoneincludingDavidspedforward.每个跑步者都站在自己的位置上，然后在听到发令枪的声音后像闪电一样向前冲去。语 言 优 化Everyrunnerwasinhispositionandthenrushedforwardlikeaflashafterhearingthestartingpistol.在第一轮比赛中，大卫落后于其他人约5米。但在一个充满竞争的氛围中，他情绪高涨，突然感觉到内心的力量。语 言 优 化Inthefirstround,Davidfellbehindoth

36、ersabout5meters.Butbathedinacompetitiveatmosphere,hewasinhighspiritsandfeltasuddenstrengthinsidehim.虽然过了一会儿，他落后于其他人，但他从未停止过坚定而坚定的步伐。语 言 优 化Thoughafteramoment,helaggedbehindothers,heneverstoppedhisfirmanddeterminedpace.（符合原文人物形象）然而，他不遗余力地追赶着其他人，汗珠顺着脸颊流下来，丝毫没有放弃的迹象。语 言 优 化However,hesparednoefforttocat

37、chupwiththeothers,dropsofsweatstreamingdownhischeeksshowingnosignofgivingup.跟随他的队员，大卫完成了整个跑步，并取得了良好的排名，这让我们所有人都感到惊讶，包括他的教练和其他学校的跑步者。语 言 优 化Followinghisteammembers,Davidfinishedthewholerunandgotagoodranking,whichsurprisedallofusincludinghiscoachandtherunnersfromtheotherschools.更糟糕的是，他突然摔倒了。大多数观众都大声喊着

38、“加油”，这给了他很大的力量。他立即站起来继续跑。语 言 优 化Worsestill,hefelloveroutofasudden.Aloudcryof“comeon”camefrommostaudiences,whichgavehimgreatstrength.Heimmediatelyjumpedtohisfeettocontinuetherun.在冲刺的时候，大卫被脚绊倒了，突然摔倒在地。幸运的是，大卫很快站了起来，不仅在同学们的欢呼声中，而且在其他同学的鼓励声中。语 言 优 化Atthesprintmoment,trippedbyhisfeet,Davidsuddenlyfelldow

39、nontotheground.Fortunately,Davidstooduponhisfeetquicklywiththecheersofencouragementnotonlyfromhisschoolmatesbutfromotherschoolkids.微风和鸣的鸟儿似乎在为他欢呼。不幸的是，大卫被一块石头绊倒了。语 言 优 化Thegentlebreezeandsingingbirdsseemtocheerforhim.Unfortunately,Davidtrippedoverbyastone.众人都被大卫的灵感动，聚集在大卫周围，把他抛在空中。语 言 优 化Everyonewas

40、somovedbyDavidsspiritthattheygatheredaroundDavidandthrowhimintheair.这一次，我看着他的眼睛，骄傲和荣誉闪闪发光。语 言 优 化Thistime,Ilookedintohiseyes,whereprideandhonorshonebrightly.大卫露出了他惯常的露齿笑。语 言 优 化Davidshowedhisusualbigtoothysmile.照应原文那一刻，我看到一只勇敢的蝴蝶在他身上飞翔。语 言 优 化Atthatmoment,Isawabravebutterflyflyinginhim.范文赏析范文01Wesat

41、downnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldntlookatme.Gentlyguidinghimintomyarms,Ilookedrightintohiseyes,wheretearswelledup.Idriedthemupwithmyfingers,sayingcomfortingly.“Dontgiveup.Believeinyourself.Youhavebeenpractisingsomuchandsowell.Andtheschoolscoachdoesntmeananythingbad.Hesjustwaitingforyoutomakeachoice.

42、Actually,wereproudofyourdeterminationandnowitstimetoshowittoall.”Hearingmywords,henoddedhishead,lookingrebornwithbeingtrusted.“Iwontletyoudown!”hesaidclearly.范文01IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Hissizewasindeedcomparativelytoosmallforhisage.Butstrangeenough,helookedlikeagr

43、eatherowithendlesspower.Atthesoundofthesignalgunshot,everyoneincludingDavidspedforward.Thoughafteramoment,helaggedbehindothers,heneverstoppedhisfirmanddeterminedpace.Hewasneverlaughedatbyrunnersfromtheotherschools.Instead,whenDavidfinallycrossedthefinishline,manystrangersgatheredaroundhimandcheeredf

44、orhim,“Welldone,David!”Thistime,Ilookedintohiseyes,whereprideandhonorshonebrightly.范文02WesatdownnexttoeachotherbutDavidwouldntlookatme.Staringathisshoesstiffly,Davidsatsilentlywithhisonehandrubbingtheother.“IknowyouwanttherunIputmypalmonhisback,pattedwithpatienceandpersuadedhim.“Isaw you practice so

45、 hard for it and I believe you could do it!”Hearing myconfirmation,Davidbeamedwithpleasureandstumbledtowardsthestartingline.范文02I watchedas David moved up to the starting linewith the other runners.Myfrustrationwasreplacedbysatisfaction.“Onyourmark!”Everyrunnerwasinhis position and then rushed forwa

46、rd like a flash after hearing the startingpistol.OnlyDavidwasleftfarbehind.However,hesparednoefforttocatchupwiththeothersdropsofsweatstreamingdownhischeeksshowingnosignofgivingup.TenminuteslaterthanthelastrunnerDavidreachedthefinishinglineandallthestudentscheeredupforhim“Thatsmyboy!Thecoachcameclose

47、randproudlyclaimed.Davidshowedhisusualbigtoothysmile.范文03Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldntlookatme.Silently,hejuststaredattheotherparticipantswhowerewarmingupwithoutsayinganything.Idecidedtoinfusesomecourageintothistoughboy,butIcouldntfindawayout.WhenIsawacocoononthetreebesideus,abrilliantide

48、aoccurredtome.Ipointedthecocoontohimandaskedhimsoftly,doyouknowwhatitwouldbelikeinthefuture?No.heansweredcasually.Iguess nobodywouldknow ifthecaterpillarisnotwillingtogiveashotonitself.Finally,heturnedhisheadtomewithdeterminationinhiseyes.范文03IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunner

49、s.IwassodelightedthatmywordsworkedandIprayedforthisboyfromthebottomofmyheart.Withthestartinggunsounding,therunnerswereoff.Followinghisteammembers,David finished the whole run and got a good ranking,whichsurprisedallofusincludinghiscoachandtherunnersfromtheotherschools.EveryonewassomovedbyDavidsspiri

50、tthattheygatheredaroundDavidandthrowhimintheair.Atthatmoment,Isawabravebutterflyflyinginhim.范文04WesatdownnexttoeachotherbutDavidwouldntlookatme.Worriedabouthim,Icouldnotrestrainmyselffromthinkingwhydidhenotchoosetorun.Whatifotherslookdownuponhimbecauseheisanexception?Atthattime,IknewIhadbettercheerh