英语作文课件4月7日.ppt

《英语作文课件4月7日.ppt》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《英语作文课件4月7日.ppt（13页珍藏版）》请在淘文阁 - 分享文档赚钱的网站上搜索。

1、How to get high grades How to get high grades in the writing task?in the writing task?Guide for English writing英语作文写作指导谷城三中 帅德胜Review of the writing task in the 2012 College Review of the writing task in the 2012 College Entrance ExaminationEntrance Examinationv请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用

2、英语写一篇短文。vYou cannot choose what you are given,but you can choose how you make use of it.v注意：注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语;v除诗歌外，文体不限除诗歌外，文体不限;v文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;v词数为词数为120左右。左右。注意：第4条今年改为：不少于120个词A students writingA students writing I remember when my birthday,my mother buy me a pre

3、sent.It was a celphone.I was very happy,because I didnt think she would buy a celphone for me.When I was at school,I often sent messages to my classmates,sometimes I play games on it.My study fell down sharply.My teacher told my mother.My mother was angry and scold me.I realize my mistake.I should n

4、ot use celphone for playing.I should use it for good goal.From then on,I began to study hard.I will use the celphone well.I cant choose what is given,but I will make good use of it.10Conclusion of common mistakesConclusion of common mistakes and problems in the writingand problems in the writingv1.A

5、 whole passage,no paragraph dividedv2.Direct translation and Chinglish expressionv3.Verb tenses not in agreementv4.Improper sentence patternsv5.Drifting off the topic or leaving out some required informationv6.spelling mistakes without any advanced vocabulary or sentencesEnjoy and discussEnjoy and d

6、iscuss Seeing Seeing Seeing Seeing the the the the topic,topic,topic,topic,all all all all that that that that comes comes comes comes to to to to my my my my mind mind mind mind is is is is TIME.TIME.TIME.TIME.No No No No one one one one can can can can decide decide decide decide the the the the a

7、mount amount amount amount of of of of time time time time given given given given by by by by God,God,God,God,sosososo how how how how to to to to make make make make use use use use of of of of it it it it really really really really makes makes makes makes a a a a difference.difference.difference

8、.difference.Just Just Just Just as as as as the the the the saying saying saying saying goesgoesgoesgoes,time time time time is is is is limited limited limited limited and and and and lost lost lost lost time time time time is is is is never never never never found found found found again,again,aga

9、in,again,which which which which evidentlyevidentlyevidentlyevidently shows shows shows shows us us us us the the the the importance importance importance importance of of of of treasuring treasuring treasuring treasuring time.time.time.time.HoweverHoweverHoweverHowever,I,I,I,I didnt realize it unti

10、l didnt realize it until didnt realize it until didnt realize it until I I I I came acrosscame acrosscame acrosscame across a failure in a big exam.a failure in a big exam.a failure in a big exam.a failure in a big exam.It It It It was was was was in in in in Senior Senior Senior Senior 2 2 2 2 that

11、thatthatthat I I I I began began began began to to to to play play play play computer computer computer computer games.games.games.games.Soon Soon Soon Soon I I I I got got got got so so so so addicted addicted addicted addicted to toto to them them them them thatthatthatthat every every every every

12、 night night night night I I I I slipped slipped slipped slipped out out out out of of of of school school school school to to to to play play play play computer computer computer computer games.games.games.games.As As As As a a a a consequenceconsequenceconsequenceconsequence,I I I I slept slept sl

13、ept slept in in in in class class class class in in in in the the the the daytime daytime daytime daytime and and and and my my my my studies studies studies studies fell fell fell fell sharply sharply sharply sharply before before before before I I I I could could could could realize realize realiz

14、e realize my my my my mistake.mistake.mistake.mistake.Precious Precious Precious Precious time time time time slipped slipped slipped slipped away away away away in in in in my my my my dreams dreams dreams dreams and and and and computer computer computer computer games games games games and and an

15、d and therefore therefore therefore therefore I I I I failed failed failed failed in in in in the the the the final final final final exam.exam.exam.exam.Looking Looking Looking Looking at at at at the the the the poor poor poor poor marksmarksmarksmarks,how how how how I I I I wish wish wish wish I

16、 I I I hadnt hadnt hadnt hadnt wastedwastedwastedwasted so so so so much much much much time time time time playingplayingplayingplaying computer games computer games computer games computer games when I should have studied hardwhen I should have studied hardwhen I should have studied hardwhen I sho

17、uld have studied hard.A A A A fall fall fall fall into into into into the the the the pit,pit,pit,pit,a a a a gain gain gain gain in in in in your your your your witwitwitwit.Every Every Every Every minute minute minute minute countscountscountscounts.Now Now Now Now I I I I completely completely co

18、mpletely completely understand understand understand understand the the the the importance importance importance importance of of of of treasuring treasuring treasuring treasuring time.time.time.time.From From From From my my my my perspectiveperspectiveperspectiveperspective,time time time time mea

19、ns means means means life.life.life.life.Only Only Only Only by by by by seizing seizing seizing seizing every every every every second,second,second,second,can can can can we we we we have have have have a a a a bright future.bright future.bright future.bright future.how how toto get high grades?ge

20、t high grades?vadvanced vocabulary.vcolourful sentences,especially including some clauses(从句），从句），the inverted and emphasized(倒装和强调）倒装和强调）.vNon-predicate verbs(非谓语动词）非谓语动词）.vwith structure and so on.vproper conjunction（连词）（连词）.vProper proverbs(谚语谚语)quoted if possible.vBeautiful handwriting.How to ma

21、ke these sentences attractive?How to make these sentences attractive?1.Lisa is born into a poor family.She is my best friend.She often shares happiness and sorrow with me.2.In the picture,we can see a boy.He is reading a book.Born into a poor family,Lisa is my best friend,who often shares happiness

22、and sorrow with me.As is shown/described/illustrated in the picture,(As can be seen in the picture,)a boy is absorbed in reading.3.In my opinion,we need a positive attitude towards life.As far as Im concerned/From my perspective,what we need is a positive towards life.4.I began to know it when I fai

23、led the final exam.It was not until I failed the final exam that I began to know it.5.We can make our bodies strong by taking excise.Only by taking excise,can we build up a strong body.6.The drawing is simple,but it is meaningful.Simple as the drawing is,the implication it reveals is profound.7.The

24、college entrance examination is drawing near,everyone is busy studying hardWith the college entrance examination drawing near,everyone is occupied in studying hard.常用的常用的连接词连接词(common conjuctionscommon conjuctions)表并列补充关系的:what is more,besides,also,as well,in addition,additionallyv表转折对比关系的:but,howev

25、er,instead,despite,in spite of,unlike,the formerthe latter,on the one handon the other hand,v表因果关系的:since,because(of),thanks to,therefore,as a result,so that,v表条件关系的:if,on the condition(that),as long as,unless,v表时间关系的:when,after,before,until,as soon as,later,afterwards,recently,since,from then on,ev

26、entually,in the meantime,at the same time,afterward,finally,v特定的顺序关系:above all,first of all,firstly,secondly,in the end,at last,v表换一种方式表达:in other words,that is to say,v表进行举例说明:for instance,for example,like,such as,v表陈述事实:in fact,actually,as a matter of fact,to tell you the truthv表总结:on the whole,in

27、 short,all in all,in a word,in conclusion,实战演练实战演练实战演练实战演练Look at the following drawing,describe it briefly,Look at the following drawing,describe it briefly,and write out how you understand it in 120 words and write out how you understand it in 120 words or so.or so.As is shown in the picture above

28、,the blooming plant is being destroyed by over-watering,though people do it for a good purpose.Simple as it is,the picture is really thought-provoking,for it vividly describes a common phenomenon that parents nowadays care too much about their children who are just like the blooming plant.Often peop

29、le do things with good intentions,but the result may be quite different from expected.Too much care spoils their children,even destroys their children.For instance,our parents tend to do everything that we should do,making beds,washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us,in order to make us

30、 concentrate on study.As a consequence,many of us are becoming more and more independent,which will do no good to our future.From my perspective,I can understand parents love and intention.But as children,what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent.Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities.Possible versionThank you for attending.