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1、试卷第 1 页，共 47 页 高三英语作文模拟训练 20 题(含例文解析)学校:_姓名：_班级：_考号：_ 一、读后续写 1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was a cold winter night in New York.I was a little scared because I had just moved into a new house;I had seen a mouse.Im scared of mice.However,the really bad thing about shifting was that I didnt

2、have even one friend.There was something good,though.In the former house,I had to share a bathroom with other people,which I didnt like.In this house,I have my own bathroom.Today was my first day of school,and the streets to school were very nice;they were like ice rinks(溜冰场)covered with snow.When I

3、 reached school,I felt nervous as I was entering middle school without a friend.At first there was a history class in which I knew a girl named Alice.Alice had yellow hair,skin which was as white as milk,and eyes as blue as the sky.She looked at me and asked me if I would like to be her friend.She l

4、ooked sweet and friendly,so I said“yes”.I was enthusiastic,but when we left for break,I saw something that I did not likesome guys were threatening and bullying(欺负)Alice.On seeing this,I told the guys,“Dont say that to her.”“Who are you to tell me what to say?”one of the guys said.Alice felt extreme

5、ly bad and went running and crying.When she ran away,I tried to follow her,but I could not catch up and lost her.She disappeared into one of the many rooms.After a while of searching,I thought to look in the cafeteria and saw her sitting and crying.Just when I was going to try to calm her,the bell r

6、ang,and she hurried away.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The next day when I arrived at school,I didnt find Alice._ When the police arrived,the guys who were bulling Alice were caught.试卷第 2 页，共 47 页 _【答案】The next day when I arrived at school,I didnt find Alice.I felt everything was very dark.

7、Yesterday had been pink;today was black.I felt a knot in my throat.I had a bad feeling when I was looking for her.Finally,I found her in a secluded corner of the school.Those guys that were threatening Alice were there，too.This time they were pushing her and pulling her hair.I did not know what to d

8、o.I had three choices:stopping them with my own hands,calling the police,or asking for help from a teacher.I was afraid and worried,so I decided to call the police.“Hello,I need your help.Some people are hitting my friend.Can you please come and help us?”I said.When the police arrived,the guys who w

9、ere bulling Alice were caught.Alice was thankful and kept thanking me.My teachers and parents were proud of me.From that day,I got a best friend for life,and Alice learned how to protect herself.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者搬家之后看见了老鼠，没有朋友，所以有点担心。第一天上学，在一堂历史课上遇到了一个叫 Alice 的女孩，但是她却被一群男生欺负。作者打了电话报警了，在警察的帮助下

10、，救出了 Alice,并且两人成了好朋友的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“第二天，当我到达学校的时候，我找不到爱丽丝。”可知，第一段可描写爱丽丝再次被欺负，作者如何帮助爱丽丝的。由第二段首句内容“当警察到达时，那些欺负爱丽丝的人被抓了。”可知，第二段可描写作者的父母还有老师们对他的行为的评价以及他和爱丽丝从此成了好朋友。2.续写线索：Alice 再次被欺负纠结该怎么做报警坏人被抓走感激并成为好朋友 3.词汇激活 行为类 试卷第 3 页，共 47 页 发现：found/spot 到达：reached/entered 向某人求助：turn to sb.for help/ask for

11、 help from sb 情绪类.感谢：was thankful/kept thanking me.对感到骄傲：be proud of/take pride in【点睛】高分句型 1.Those guys that were threatening Alice were there，too.（由关系代词 that 引导限制性定语从句）高分句型 2.When the police arrived,the guys who were bulling Alice were caught.（while引导的时间状语从句，who 引导定语从句修饰 the guys）2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落

12、开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。As 17-year-old Torriell Norwood drove through St.Peters-burg,Florida last February with her friends to pay a visit to the great park as scheduled.Norwood shared her first aid courses and her dream of becoming a doctor and other girls shared their precious experiences about the na

13、tural adventures with each other.The laughter and chatter from the four teenage girls inside her car quickly gave way to screams.As they approached an intersection,another car T-boned them,sending their black car sailing into the yard of a nearby home,coming to a stop only when it crashed into a tre

14、e.All of them were in panic instantly,totally at a loss!As smoke waved from the car,a bystander shouted,“Its about to blow up!Get out!”The impact had caved in Norwoods drivers side door,jamming it shut.The bystander seized the front door handle of the car,summoned all his strength to pull it open bu

15、t failed.Shaken,but otherwise OK,Norwood crawled out through the window.She had a cut on the right side of her face.Originally her lovely face became very pale.Along with two of her friends,whod also managed to free themselves,she ran for her life.But halfway down the street,she realized that her be

16、st friend,Azarria Simmons,was not with them.Norwood ran back to the wreck and found Simmons slumped in the back seat.“She was not moving,”Norwood shouted with her heart tightened.She threw open the back door and pulled her friend out,avoiding the broken glass as best she could.She dragged Simmons a

17、few feet to safety and laid her on the ground.She checked her pulse.Nothing!She put her head against Simmonss chest.No sign of life!试卷第 4 页，共 47 页 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。If the accident had happened a few weeks earlier,she might not have known what to do._ After awhile,the CPR worked

18、 and Simmons regained her consciousness._【答案】If the accident happened a few weeks earlier,she might not have known what to do.But Norwood,who wanted to pursue a career in medicine,had earned her CPR certificate just the day before.Kneeling on the ground and looking down at her dying friend,Norwood k

19、new she had precious little time to practise what shed learned.She started pumping Simmonss chest with her interlocked fingers and breathing into her friends mouth in hopes of filling her lungs with the kiss of life.The other two girls ran back and called 911.After a while,the CPR worked and Simmons

20、 regained her consciousness.Simmons began coughing and gasping for air but she was still weak.Norwood breathed a sigh of relief knowing her friend out of danger.Soon the emergency car arrived and rushed Simmons to the hospital,where she received the comprehensive medical examination.Then after she h

21、eard how her best friend had saved her life,Simmons said gratefully,I am so blessed to have her by my side.Such as she is,always ready for helping others in any way she can.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Torriell Norwood 和她的朋友开车穿过佛罗里达州的圣试卷第 5 页，共 47 页 彼得堡，却被另外一辆车撞了，Norwood 从车里逃了出来，尝试着救她的朋友。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句

22、内容“如果事故发生在几周前，她可能不知道该怎么办。”可知，第一段可描写 Norwood 用心肺复苏术救她的朋友。由第二段首句内容“过了一段时间，心肺复苏起了作用，西蒙斯恢复了她的意识。”可知，第二段可描写西蒙斯醒来被送到医院。2.续写线索：跪按压脱离危险接受检查 3.词汇激活 行为类 跪：kneel/fall on ones knees 按压：pump/press 脱离危险：out of danger/out of the wood 接受检查：receive medical examination/undergo medical examination 情绪类 松了一口气：breathe a

23、sigh of relief/be relieved 感激地：gratefully/thankfully【点睛】高分句型 1But Norwood,who wanted to pursue a career in medicine,had earned her CPR certificate just the day before.（由关系代词 who 引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2Soon the emergency car arrived and rushed Simmons to the hospital,where she received the comprehensive m

24、edical examination.（由关系副词 where 引导的非限制性定语从句）3阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。My mother eyed me with suspicion.I dared not look at her.Knowing that I was late from school five days continuously,I could not offer an acceptable explanation.I knew she did not believe that I had extra

25、 classes every day and arrived home after 5 pm.However,realizing she had little choice but to believe in me,she told me that dinner was in the refrigerator.She had to rush for her night shift at the local clinic.Ever since we lost our dad in an accident,my mother became the breadwinner.I was the eld

26、est among the four siblings and it fell upon my shoulder to ensure that they could become 试卷第 6 页，共 47 页 responsible adults.Besides helping mother with the housework,I regularly coached them in their studies.Thankfully,never once had I had to raise my voice or force them to complete their homework.B

27、ut all of us missed dad very much.He was a model father and husband.Life was cruelly taken away from him at a very young age of 42.However,my mother managed to pull through and found a job at the clinic.It was very tough on someone like her who had never worked before in her life.But money was scarc

28、e and there were five mouths to feed.Dad did not leave much behind.He never suspected he would die so young.We stopped dining out and had our meals mostly at home.We basically lived from hand to mouth.Thats when it dawned on me that I had to do my part for the family.I knew mother would not agree bu

29、t I threw caution out of the window and managed to get a part-time job at a fast-food restaurant.I worked three hours a day and managed to bring home money so that my siblings and I could go out for occasional movies or meals.I was sure that mother suspected something.But she could not quite point t

30、he figure to the source of her suspicion.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One day,while I was busy serving the customers,I was shocked to see mother standing opposite the counter._ Mother made me sit down.She was already crying,so were my siblings._【答案】Para 1:One day,while I was busy serving t

31、he customers,I was shocked to see mother standing opposite the counter.So surprised was I that I dared not look into her eyes.She appeared shocked at the same time.I clumsily took her orders and saw her staggering to a table 试卷第 7 页，共 47 页 occupied by my siblings!My supervisor who saw my worried exp

32、ression and who knew about my family situation quickly volunteered to take over my duties.Slowly,I removed my apron and joined my family.Para 2:Mother made me sit down.She was already crying,so were my siblings.She covered my hands with hers and told me that she was grateful for my help.I could not

33、hold back my tears and hugged her.How guilt-ridden I was!I told mother that contributing financially to the family was the least I could to relieve her burden.To my great relief,my beloved mother understood my situation and reassured me everything would be alright.It was then that I came to realize

34、that I should not have hidden such a big secret from her.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为了帮母亲分担家里的经济负担，开始瞒着母亲放学后在一家快餐店找了份兼职工作，结果这天被母亲遇到了在店里工作的作者，母亲对作者的行为感动而感激。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“有一天，当我忙着为顾客服务时，我震惊地看到母亲站在柜台对面。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到母亲之后的反应。由第二段首句内容“母亲让我坐下。她已经哭了，我的兄弟姐妹也哭了。”可知，第二段可描写母亲对作者行为的态度和做法。2.续写线索：看见母亲替母亲点菜上司接替

35、作者工作母亲和兄弟姐妹哭泣母亲表示理解作者感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 看到：see/spot 接替：take over/replace 减轻：relieve/ease 情绪类 惊讶：surprised/shocked/amazed 担忧：worried/concerned【点睛】试卷第 8 页，共 47 页 高分句型 1 So surprised was I that I dared not look into her eyes.(运用了部分倒装)高分句型 2 My supervisor who saw my worried expression and who knew about my f

36、amily situation quickly volunteered to take over my duties.(运用了 who 引导定语从句)4阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Ive taken up quilting,”my mother announced proudly over the phone one day.“Thats great,Mom,”I said.My 70-year-old mother was undergoing chemotherapy for her cancer.It is a battle that I

37、knew she would someday lose.Maybe soon.It broke my heart for more reasons than one.“Im working on a quilt for your sister now,”she said.“Once Im done,Ill make one for you.”“Thank you.”She asked about the kids.We chatted about the weather.Then we said our goodbyes.The conversation was short,polite an

38、d surface level,as always.Mom and I had never had what you would call a warm relationship.We never hugged.Never said“I love you”.I didnt know why.Nothing bad had ever come between us.We just werent close the way I was with my kids.For years,Id longed to break down that wall and to hear those three w

39、ords.I just didnt know how to start.Wed been this way for as long as I could remember.Finally,I came up with the idea to schedule regular lunch dates together.Maybe by sharing a meal we might share more of ourselves.Then the pandemic hit.Suddenly I was on the front line of the COVID-19 battle.No way

40、 could I risk infecting Mom,especially with her weak immune system.I settled for daily phone calls instead.It wasnt quite the bonding experience Id hoped for.She promised she was working on that quilt for me,though.My quilt was Moms last one.On a Thursday in June,I got the call from my dad.He was so

41、 upset that all I could understand were the words“Shes gone”.In the weeks that followed,I was torn between thankfulness that she was no longer suffering and an overwhelming desire to see her again,to connect,as if the pandemic had robbed me of that chance.If wed only had more time.If shed only said,

42、“I love you.”1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。试卷第 9 页，共 47 页 A few months later,I thought of the quilt Mom made for me,and decided to give quilting a try myself._ But Moms help could never come,and then Dad offered me Moms quilting bag,filled with the spare fabric._【答案】Para 1:A few months later,I

43、 thought of the quilt Mom made for me,and decided to give quilting a try myself.Who knows?Maybe I was still trying to connect with Mom.I drove to the store to pick out all the things I needed to make a quilt.I quickly learned that quilting was harder than it looked.I hurt my fingers more than once.S

44、lowly,I got the hang of it,and eventually I completed several squares.I thought about Mom a lot while I worked.How I wish I could ask her some tips!Para 2:But Moms help could never come,and then Dad offered me Moms quilting bag,filled with the spare fabric.One night,I noticed I was running low on fa

45、bric.I hadnt had a chance to go through Moms quilting bag yet,but maybe there was something that I could use.I reached in and pulled out six perfectly sewn blocks.It was the exact same fabric I had chosen.试卷第 10 页，共 47 页 It seemed that Mom had known long ago that I would need these fabric.Mom,in her

46、 own way,had finally said those three beautiful words Id longed to hear.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的妈妈因为癌症去世了，去世前为作者缝制了最后一床被子。母亲去世几个月后，作者决定自己尝试缝制被子，在翻找材料时发现妈妈早为作者准备好了材料。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几个月后，我想起了妈妈给我做的被子，决定自己试一试。”可知，第一段可描写作者缝制被子的经过以及感受。由第二段首句内容“但妈妈的帮助从来没有出现，然后爸爸给了我妈妈的绗缝袋，装满了多余的布料。”可知，第二段可描写作者发现妈妈提前给

47、自己准备好的东西，以及感受。2.续写线索：决定尝试做被子购买材料想起妈妈发现母亲准备好的材料作者感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 决定：decide to/determine to 完成：complete/finish 提供：offer/provide 情绪类 困难的：hard/difficult 美妙：beautiful/wonderful【点睛】高分句型 1 I thought about Mom a lot while I worked.(运用了 while 引导时间状语从句)高分句型 2 I hadnt had a chance to go through Moms quilting bag

48、 yet,but maybe there was something that I could use.(运用了 that 引导定语从句)5阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Meal with a Smile At eleven years old,my main concern was money.Where could I get it?What would I 试卷第 11 页，共 47 页 spend it on?How much did I need to buy the new must-have thing my classmates

49、either had or wanted just as badly as I did?I went to my mom.“Mom,I need more money,”I said,leaning against the kitchen counter while she cooked dinner.“What else can kids do for a job around here?”“You think you need a job?”Mom asked with a smile.“You could just enjoy the summer like the other kids

50、,you know?”“Ill still have time for that,but I want to work.”I shrugged.“Okay,let me ask around.”Mom finally agreed.The next day,she had an answer.“Your grandmother will pay you to help her deliver lunch each day to the elderly.”I couldnt wait to start my new job on Monday after school dismissed for