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1、.2013高考卷英语作文点评 II.Guided Writing Directions:Write an English position in 120-150 words according to theinstructions given in Chinese.博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所博物馆还是社区图书馆征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；2.说明你的理由从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进展比照 Dear Sir/Madam,Ive just learned that Shanghai Mus

2、eum is to holda famous painting e*hibition and youre collecting public suggestions about which location to hold it.Im writing this letter to share with you my opinions.As far as Im concerned,it is more reasonable to hold the painting e*hibition in Shanghai Museum than in munity libraries.My reasons

3、are as follows.On the one hand,it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum,located in the center of the city.Visitors can go there by subway and bus and so on.Whats more,Shanghai Museumis much more e*tensive than munity libraries,providing visitors with a more fortable environment to a

4、ppreciatethe famous paintings.On the other hand,Shanghai Museum,a well-known and distinguished museum at home and abroad,is more professional in holding painting e*hibitions.Whats of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers profes

5、sional security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of e*hibition.Consequently,I strongly propose that the painting e*hibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.Yours,.Wang Min 赏析：今年市的高考英语作文话题贴近学生的生活实际，用书信的载体呈现，让考生对画展感觉到有话可以说，但是想要到达 A 类作文，不仅需要有扎实语言

6、功底，还需要对博物馆和社区图书馆及画展等生活类的语言应用娴熟，更需要学生从专业一点的角度，深入分析其选择的理由，这个层面很多学生很难用专业的语言区描述，学生平时学习时间紧，没有时间到社会上参加一些社会活动，而且在紧的时间里，更别提用一些复杂的语言构造区展示自己的理由，所以学生写到高分不是很容易，大局部学生得到 15/16 分是没有问题的。采取这样的命题思路对英语教学有较好的反应作用，学校和家庭不仅仅催促学生的学习更要提供时机让孩子走出课堂，走向社会，培养学生创造性和批判性思维。提示：生活类词汇:museum library painting e*hibition advanced facili

7、ty high-tech monitor security guard 分词的应用：located providing distinguished 句型：主语从句 标语从句 倒装等 2012 年高考英语作文 Directions:Write an English position in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩 Amy 所在班级的两堂绘画课如下图，回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，容包括：对两堂绘画课的具体描述；你从中获得的启发。2012 Shanghai E

8、nglish Test writing sample 3(for reference only)Today I had an unusual e*perience,which refreshed my mind.With pupils I spent two periods of time in a primary school,watching them learn how to paint.A little girl.named Amy,one student of the class,left me a deep impression with her unique painting.I

9、n the first lesson the teacher required the pupils to paint freely.Namely ,in any way they could draw whatever theyd like to.Amy was the first one to have a try.I saw her think for a little while,take off her shoes,then dip her feet slightly into the paint/ink.Much to my surprise,in a flash she mana

10、ged to make a nice design on a broad piece of white paper/blanket with both of her feet.What happened ne*t,various of types of works painted by other children appearing before my eyes one by one,kept me laughing with joy and amusement.Following a break,the second class began.smiling,the teacher made

11、 a brief ment,which was full of praise as well as appreciation.After that,she gave the students some guidance about the traditional way of painting.With her teachers words in mind,Amy practiced again.Painting-brush in hand,she sat a desk properly/straight,paying full attention to her work.This time，

12、with ease and e*citement she drew some birds flying high in the sky/sun.Looking back at the two ways of giving a class,I have to admit the teacher was well worth following in matters of cultivating“flowers in the spirit of originality.Given that children are of great imagination and elasticity in th

13、eir growth,they are supposed to be given as many chances and opportunities as possible in the course of being educated so as to develop their potential to the full.Were the young always confined to the established ways of doing things without a free world,one that is also longed for by the ambitious

14、 birds drawn by Amy,how can we e*pect the ne*t generation our civilized nation would be more innovative and creative“2012 Shanghai English Test writing sample 4(for reference only)Today I had an unusual e*perience,which refreshed my mind.With pupils I spent two periods of time in a primary school,wa

15、tching them learn how to paint.A little girl named Amy,one student of the class,left me a deep impression with her unique painting.In the first lesson the teacher required the pupils to paint freely.Namely ,in any way they could draw whatever theyd like to.Amy was the first one to have a try.I saw h

16、er think for a little while,take off her shoes,then dip her feet slightly into the paint/ink.Much to my surprise,in a flash she managed to make a nice design on a broad piece of white paper/blanket with both of her feet.What happened ne*t,various of types of works painted by other children appearing

17、 before my eyes one by one,kept me laughing with joy and amusement.Following a break,the second class began.With a smile,the teacher made a brief ment,which was full of praise as well as appreciation.After that,she gave the students some guidance about the traditional way of painting.With her teache

18、rs words in mind,Amy practiced again.Painting-brush in hand,she sat a desk properly/straight,paying full attention to her work.This time，with ease and e*citement she drew some birds flying high in the sky/sun.Simple and amusing as it seemed,the two ways of painting are thought-provoking.As is genera

19、lly accepted,students,especially,children have great potential in their growth and development.As a matter of fact,whether their talents can be developed to the full,to a great degree,depends on how children are educated.While some valuable traditions are well worth cherishing,thinking in an origina

20、l way should be encouraged and emphasized among children when it es to teaching or education,who are supposed to be characterized by“innovation and creation.Only in this way,can they keep in pace with the fast-developing modern world.2011 年卷高考英语作文话题：向一个基金会申请 2000 元做个工程来支持贫困学生，需要包含以下的一些要点 1.介绍自己 2.工程

21、具体实施方案 3.2000 元如何利用 Dear foundation organizers,My name is Jerry Lu,a student currently studying at Shanghai*High school.I am writing,on behalf of my classmates,to apply for the 2000 yuan worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.Be

22、ing raised in families that dont have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers.On this account,we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor.The following is how we would go about using the money.We would spend 1500 yuan pu

23、rchasing some stationery for the needy students at our school.It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us“doling out the supplies so that we wouldnt embarrass those who we want to help.The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motiva

24、tional speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions.Modest as our efforts may sound,we believe they will warm some hearts.Much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience.Yours Sincerely,Jerry Lu 2010 年高考作文及例 下列图是小学新

25、生的课堂一脚，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比拟并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：描述图片里学生上课的场景 比拟你同时期的上课情况 简单谈谈你的感受 As is described in the picture,a group of foreign students are raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful and active way.The purpose of the picture is to show us how active the class performance is in the f

26、oreign country.Western students are more likely to be open-minded and willing to e*press their unique ideas in class.Just as the picture shows:When the teacher is asking a question,every child raises their hands and is eager to answer the question.They do not fear giving the in-class performance whi

27、le others are watching.This scene reminds me of my own class situation when I was at elementary school.As Chinese children are more often than not very conservative and modest,therefore,my teachers usually called a students name if nobody dared to answer the questions.Then the appointed child behave

28、d awkwardly and was reluctant to say just a few words.This recollection makes me feel rather disappointed.In fact,we should at least give a try,whether the answer is perfect or not.Its a chance of learning,more specifically,if we are well-done,we will gain confidence;if not,we will get informed of a

29、 better solution,which will provide us e*perience in the later situation.All in all,its more sensible to be active in class.图画式议论文 1.特点：是通过观察和分析单幅或一组画，把图画容转化成文 字信息。2.注意点：(1).要认真审图(2).需从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要容，处理好人物与时空的 关系及局部与整体的关系，找出文章的线索或主题。(3).“饱满的想象+变化的表达 3.构造：第一段 描述图画，一般不超过三分之一篇幅 第二段 提醒画旨 一般一言即可 第三段 发表感想

30、、评论或提出建议占主要篇幅 第四段 简单谈谈自己的感受 注意：二三两段可合成一段 2009 年高考作文及例*海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺gardening，烹饪cooking,防身术self-defence，护理nursing。假设你是王跃华不可以用自己的真实，写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的容必须包括：1、你感兴趣的课程 2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么 3、为什么想学这些容 It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to c

31、hoose from.I am interested in gardening,in that I believe it features my character and personal benefits.During the learning period,I e*pect to gain some une*pected knowledge.A radical technique Id like to obtain is to know how to tell different species of plants and flowers apart.This helps me to h

32、ave a clear outlook of those in my garden.Furthermore,the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn.A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or the reasonable planting positions will also be a good choice.The mani reason why I choose gardening is th

33、at I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden.In addition,I find that we students generally lack the knolwdge of gardening,missing a chance to have a word with nature,so that knowing the surroundings is imperitave.Last but not least,by attending the course,I will have a meaning

34、ful summer vacation,and drowning myself bewteen plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life.2008 年高考作文及例 你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛group dancing cooipetition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下容：你是否会参加比赛 你做出该决定的具体理由 Version 1:A group dancing petition will be held in our school and the monitor calls

35、 on everybody to take an active part in it.While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate,I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.Generally speaking,there are two reasons for my decision.First,it is a good opportunity for me to rela*myself,which will enable me to

36、study more efficiently.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,so goes the saying,which clearly shows.us the importance of rela*ation.Besides,I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years.Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing ski

37、lls and make some contributions to the class.For the two reasons mentioned above,it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing petition.Version 2:Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing petition which will be held in a couple of

38、days in our school.But after some careful consideration,I have decided not to participate.There are a number of reasons for my decision.First and foremost,as the College Entrance E*am is just around the corner,study is the top priority for me.Participating in the group dancing petition has to give w

39、ay because it might take me too much time.Whats more,without any e*perience of dancing,I dont think I can be a good dancing partner.I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class.In this case,its better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.Fo

40、r these reasons,it seems more appropriate for me to watch the petition than to dance myself.2007 年高考作文及例 以“礼物为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下容：你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物；该礼物对他她可能产生的影响或带来的变化。A Present for Fathers Day The Fathers Day will e soon.and I want to give my Dad a present.That is a VIP card of a health club.When I was

41、a little boy,Dad worked hard as a teacher.During term,Mother and I sometimes acpanied Dad in his office till a late hour.From then on,I understood that Dad worked with great effort.There are still too many precious memories which Ill cherish in my heart.And I want to give this present to e*press my

42、thanks to him.Time flies and Im 18 now.As I grow up,Father is getting older.He is now still diving into piles of books.With the health club membership,I hope that he will make time to do more e*ercises.I think that he will rela*in the health club and make more friends.2006 年高考作文及例 下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的

43、招生信息。通过比拟作出选择，并结合个人情况说明理由。南方大学 北方大学 学费 8000 元/年 5000 元/年 招生人数 20 人 10 人 优惠政策 无 加 20 分 Version A Of the two universities listed above,I prefer the one in the north.The main reason is that the tuition is only 5,000 RMB for the university a year,pared with 8,000 RMB for the university in the south.This

44、 makes a big difference for a family like a mine,because my father is peasant and the only breadwinner in the family.Studying at the northern university can save my father big money.Another reason I take into consideration is the preference policy the northern university offers.Any candidate who cho

45、oses to study there may gain an e*tra 20 points,which greatly raises the possibility of my being admitted to this university.Of course,it doesnt mean that it will be quite easy to pass the entrance e*am because.this university has limited the number of qualified candidates to 10 only.However,I have

46、been doing quite well in school,so I believe I can pass the entrance e*am with flying colors.Version B pared with the northern university,the southern one is more to my liking.It is true that in terms of tuition the former is 3,000 RMB cheaper than the latter.However,thats not a problem to me becaus

47、e I can work my way through college once I get admitted.What counts is the reputation it has.Once I enter this school,my future career is guaranteed.Also,the university in the south recruits 20 new students instead of 10,which means that I will stand a better chance of getting admitted.The petition

48、is very keen,though,as you can see because this university doesnt give candidates any e*tra points.So all I can do now is study hard,pass the tough entrance e*am,and qualify as a student of the university of my choice.2005 年高考作文及例 古人云：“天生我材必有用 请你描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。Many people,especial

49、ly those who think they are not as talented as others,tend to give up in their undertakings and thus plain about life.Such people will certainly end up getting nowhere.Notice that most successful people are not unlike us.What makes them stand out is their devotedness to the job they are doing,which

50、is typical of the story of Li Dahua,a neighbor of mine.Dahua was brought up in a poor family.Since he didnt do well in school,he joined his father in collecting garbage for a living soon after he graduated from elementary school.His neighbors shook their heads whenever they saw him,thinking that thi