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1、The Price of a DreamI grew up poor in a family with little money and few worldly goods, but plenty of love and attention. I was happy and energetic. I understood that no matter how poor a person was, they could still afford a dream.My dream was sports. By the time I was sixteen, I could crush a base

2、ball, throw a ninety-mile-per-hour fastball and hit anything that moved on the football field. I was also lucky: My high-school coach was Ollie Jarvis, who taught me the difference between sticking to a dream and just showing determination. One particular incident with Coach Jarvis changed my life f

3、orever.It was the summer between my junior and senior years, and a friend recommended me for a summer job. This meant a chance for money in my pocket cash forhanging out with friends, certainly, money for a new bike and new clothes, and the start of savings for a house for my mother. The prospect of

4、 a summer job was appealing, and I wanted to jump at the opportunity.Then I realized I would have to give up summer baseball to handle the work schedule, and that meant I would have to tell Coach Jarvis I wouldnt be playing. I was fearing this, but I had to.When I told Coach Jarvis, he was as mad as

5、 I expected him to be. “You have your whole life to work,” he said. “Your playing days are limited. You cant afford to waste them.”I stood before him with my head hanging, trying to think of the words that would explain to him why my dream of buying my mom a house and having money in my pocket was w

6、orth facing his disappointment in me.“How much are you going to make at this job, son?” he demanded.“Three twenty-five an hour,” I replied.“Well,” he asked, “is $3.25 an hour the price of a dream?”注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。【阅读文本故事情节分析】1.文本大意：本文是篇记叙文，主题语境为人与自我中正确的人生态度。文章从一件改变“我”人生的小事出发，讲

7、述了“我”家境贫寒，但颇有体育天赋也志在追逐体育梦想，中学时期，曾想过放弃棒球练习打暑期工赚钱，却遭到了棒球教练Jarvis的反对，教练激励“我”思考梦想的真正价值的故事。2.段落大意： 第1段：“我”的成长背景，家境贫寒，但心态阳光，坚信贫困并不能阻止人们追逐梦想； 第2段：“我”的体育梦想及体育天赋。“我”很幸运，遇到棒球教练Jarvis，他教会“我”要相信自己，坚守梦想，“我”与他之间发生的一件小事彻底改变了我的人生； 第34段：在上高三前的暑假，“我”朋友给“我”介绍了一份暑假工，这份工作能够给“我”带来很多即时的享乐，但和练习棒球的时间冲突。尽管很害怕，“我”还是决定告诉Jarvis

8、教练； 第59段：“我”和教练Jarvis之间的对话，教练很生气，质问我梦想价值多少。故事主旨：本文旨在启发读者思考，厘清即时满足和长远目标之间的取舍关系，倡导延时享乐，坚守梦想。【写作指导】续写提示：本篇读后续写偏向于人生感悟类的描写。 由第一段首句内容“这个问题像闪电一样击中了我的心。”可知，第1段可描写“我”对于放弃棒球练习赚快钱的反思，以及接下来和教练的互动。此外，基于第2段首句明确讲明“我”获得了最佳棒球手的奖杯，第1段必须要写明“我”幡然醒悟，放弃暑假兼职，并投入到棒球训练之中。此段结尾还需铺垫“我”参加比赛、获奖的情节。 由第2段首句内容“我上台领取最佳棒球手的奖杯。”可知，“我

9、”的努力获得了回报，这一段可以描写我领奖的心理感受，以及对教练的感激。结合原文第1段结尾的“I understood that no matter how poor a person was, they could still afford a dream.”和第2段的“He taught me the difference between sticking to a dream and just showing determination.”，结尾最好写出“我”从中学习到了什么，呼应前文，升华主旨。续写线索：幡然醒悟作出抉择坚持努力获得回报感悟【基础版参考范文】赏析学悟，化为己用！That

10、question struck me like a flash of lightning.I stood there,staringat myfuriouscoach andnoticingthat the light in his eyes suddenly went out.Regret and shame overwhelmed meandI wishedI had not toldhim the stupid idea. At that moment, I decided not to give up my sports dream anddedicated myself toregu

11、lar training. That whole summer, I kept catching andpitchingthe ball on the court,participatingineverybaseball game. At the end of the summer season came thelong-awaitedaward ceremony.Finally, CoachJarvis announced that I was elected as the best baseball player.I went on the stage to collect the pri

12、ze for the best baseball player.My legs were trembling and my head was dizzy.Standingin the center of the stage, I heard the crowd was cheering and I saw Coach Jarvis was smiling. He passed the microphone to me and invited me tosay a few words. “My fellows! Never give up your dream!” Iexclaimedwith

13、tears shining in my eyes.“Devotion and persistence will help you realize your dream!”I added,grabbingmy trophy tightly. Coach Jarvis came close to me,throwinghis arms around me. “Thank you!It is you who let me understand the value of a dream.”Imurmuredby his ears, my eyesoverflowedwith tears.【进阶版参考范

14、文】赏析学悟，化为己用！That question struck me like a flash of lightning.Mixed feelings of guilt and inspiration surging through my whole body, my heart waspoundingviolently and I didnt dare to look at Coach Jarvis.“A real dream isimmeasurable, young man.”Hesighed,patted my shoulder andstrode away.With tears b

15、lurring my eyes,Iclenchedmy fists,determined to keep pursuing my dream.From that day on, I threw myself into the baseball court,where lay my real dream.Sweat soaked my shirts, and sunlight stung my skin, but I didnt care,for I understoodsuccess came at a price.Finally, that moment arrived.I heard my

16、 name called in the award ceremony.I went on the stage to collect the prize for the best baseball player.Thunderous applause erupting from the audience, Istaggered, took the shining trophy from the host, and searched for Coach Jarvis. When I saw hiswrinkledface radiant with smiles, thegentle, firmvo

17、ice seemed to ring in my ears again “A real dream is immeasurable, young man.”Standingin the limelight andholding the recognition for my dedication to sports, Ibowed low toCoach Jarvis for a long time. I was so grateful to him for helping me realize the price of a real dream. Coach Jarvis taught me a wonderful lesson aboutdelayed gratification.Only with determination and perseverance, can we fulfill our dream.学科网（北京）股份有限公司