读后续写：勤劳的Henry 学案-高三英语写作专项.docx

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1、读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。There is a farm not far from the coastline.It belongs to a man called Tom.Tom couldnt do everything by himself on the farm.Thus,he needed to hire one man to help him run the farm.However,no one worked on his farm for long.Why？Because the work wa

2、s too tiring.Since the farm is near the sea,there are often storms from the sea that strike his farm.When a storm comes,Tom and the man he hired have to get up quickly and try to reduce the lossescaused by the storm.Therefore,no one liked working there.Tom had to look for people to work for him all

3、the time.One day,a man called Henry read the poster that Tom had put up and then came to his farm.“Sir,I can work for you,”said Henry.Tom looked at Henry.This young man was neither strong nor tall.“Are you sure?”asked Tom.“Yes,sir.I can do the work well.But you must pay me twice what you paid others

4、 before,”said that young man.Tom was surprised.He didnt really believe such a man could do the work well.But it was really hard for himto find someone else to work for him.At last,he decided to give Henry a try.However,before hiring him,he said,“Can you really be a good helper？The work on the farm i

5、s hard and tiring.And there are often storms.”Henry smiled and said,“Dont worry.I can be a good helper.Youll see.And storms wont be a problem.They wont even disturb our sleep.We can sleep very well even on stormy nights.”And then Henry stayed on the farm.To Toms joy,Henry worked hard and did his wor

6、k well.It was obvious that he hadnt lied.However,one night,there was a big storm.Tom was woken up by the strong wind.He was worried that the storm would cause great losses for his farm.And he saw his helper nowhere.Paragraph 1Tom thought Henry must still be sleeping._Paragraph 2Tom thought he had hi

7、red the wrong man._文章分析和写作指导1.主旨大意。这篇文章主要说的是主人公Tom在靠近海边的地方有一个农场。因为海边暴风雨比较多，当暴风雨来的时候，需要巨大的工作量。Tom雇佣的工人因为受不了繁重的劳动而辞职。后来，Henry来应聘，他提出双倍工资，但是，他很能干，是个好助手。2.续写思路。一个风雨交加的晚上，Tom需要Henry一起去防护农场，但是看不到Henry的人影。段首指导语第一段Tom以为Henry在睡觉，第二段Tom认为自己雇佣错了人。这两句话基本设定了故事发展的主题。我们可以大胆的想象出：当Tom去Henry房间找他的时候，他的确在睡觉，而且拒绝和Tom一起去

8、抵御暴风雨。而当Tom对Henry很失望，正准备自己去工作时，发现Henry早在暴风雨来之前已经做好了准备工作。农场上的东西井然有序，他们不需要在暴风雨中再做什么了。其实，他找到的是一个很好的员工。3.写作风格。注意语言、动作、心理、情感等细节描绘。尝试使用动词、形容词、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、非谓语动词以及被动语态来刻画人物的语言、动作、心理、神态以及环境氛围。注意运用恰当的代词、逻辑衔接词把句子连接成文。重点词汇：anxious adj.焦急的 violently adv.暴力地rage n.狂怒 calm adj.镇静的 peaceful adj.平静的respond v.回复

9、disappointment n.失望 nevertheless adv.然而unexpected adj.意外的 seize v.抓住重点短语：1.take hold of 抓住2.filled with sth. 充满3.in advance 提前重点句型：1. so.that. 结果状语从句的倒装结构。2.It be extremely evident that. that引导的主语从句。3.no sooner.than. 时间状语从句的倒装。4.It be.that. 强调句。Paragraph 1Tom thought Henry must still be sleeping.Soa

10、nxiouswas he thathe knocked at the door of Henrys roomviolently.（描写Tom 在暴风雨来临的时候，找不到帮手那种焦急的情绪。）To Toms astonishment,Henry was still lying in his bed.（令人意外的情况，与Tom的极其焦虑相比较，Henry好像没事一样。）It wasextremely evidentthat Henry didnt realize how serious the situation was.（Henry在这样严重的暴风雨天气还在坦然的睡觉，很明显他没有意识到情况有多

11、么糟糕。）Filled withrage,Tom shouted,“Get up!There is a big storm.We must work right now.”（看到这个场景，Tom更加愤怒）Calm and peaceful,Henryresponded,“Sir,have you forgotten I told you that storms wouldnt disturb our sleep?Why not just go back to sleep?”（然而，Henry却异常平静，无动于衷。）Hearing the words,a widedisappointmentto

12、ok hold ofTom.(此情此景，留给Tom的只有失望。)Paragraph 2Tom thought he had hired the wrong man.Feelinghelpless,he rushed out to work on his own.（孤身作战，Tom感到很无力。）Nevertheless,no sooner had hegoneoutside than anunexpected scenecame into his sight,all the roofs covered and all his chicken,horses and cows settled.（然而

13、，当他到室外正准备干活时，看到了意外的场景，一切都井然有序。）Tom wasseizedby a strong sense of relief,tears streamingdownhis cheeks.（这种强烈的转折令他如释重负。）It was Henry that did all the work wellin advancebefore the storm came.（此时此刻金他才明白，原来是Henry 早在暴风雨来之前就把农场整理好了。）He realized he had hired the best man.（结局皆大欢喜，Tom找到了最好的员工。）学 案Tom thought

14、 Henry must still be sleeping._（Tom非常着急，使劲地敲Henry的门）。_（令他感到吃惊的是),Henry was still lying in his bed. _（很明显,Henry没有意识到情况多么严重）。_（Tom生气地喊道）“Get up!There is a big storm.We must work right now.”_(Henry平静地回答)“Sir,have you forgotten I told you that storms wouldnt disturb our sleep?Whynot just go back to slee

15、p?”_（听到这些话，Tom感到很失望)。Tom thought he had hired the wrong man._(感到无助)，he rushed out to work on his own._（然而，他刚到户外就看到意外的场景，房顶都被遮盖好了，所有的鸡，马和牛都被安置妥当。）_(Tom松了一口气，眼泪流下来)_（是Henry提前把所有的工作都做好了）He realized he had hired the best man.优秀范文Paragraph 1Tom thought Henry must still be sleeping.So anxious was he that

16、he knocked at the door of Henrys room violently.To Toms astonishment,Henry was still lying in his bed.It was extremely evident that Henry didnt realize how serious the situation was.Filled with rage,Tom shouted,“Get up!There is a big storm.We must work right now.”Calm and peaceful,Henry responded,“S

17、ir,have you forgotten I told you that storms wouldnt disturb our sleep?Why not just go back to sleep?”Hearing the words,a widedisappointmenttook hold ofTom.Paragraph 2Tom thought he had hired the wrong man.Feelinghelpless,he rushed out to work on his own.Nevertheless,no sooner had he goneoutside tha

18、n an unexpected scene came into his sight,all the roofs covered and all his chicken,horses and cows settled.Tom was seized by a strong sense of relief,tears streaming down his cheeks.It was Henry that did all the work well in advance before the storm came.He realized he had hired the best man.学科网（北京）股份有限公司