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1、01两 “情”相悦话题：探险救援情节线：遭遇危险（恶劣环境&危险描写&情感描写）出现转机（想到办法&呼救求助）-救援脱险（救援描述&情感描写）-感悟升华（历险者&救援者）情感线：焦急紧张/恐惧无助筋疲力尽-欣喜/欣慰（relieved）感动&感谢02语料积累理清情节线，搭建语言支架一.遭遇危险1.恶劣环境TheSkyisovercastwith clouds.（天空）天空乌云密布。The icy windwashowling, stinging my face.寒风呼啸，我的脸如针刺。（狂风&寒冷）A flash oflightninglit upthe wholesky, followed

2、byacrash of thunder.一道闪电照亮天空，接着一声巨雷。（雷电）Minutes later,there came adownpour/Itbegan torain cats and dogs，and itwas violentlybeating aginstthe window.几分钟之后，大雨倾盆而下，大雨猛烈地打在窗户上。(暴雨)My teeth werechattering with cold.我的牙齿冷地直打颤。（寒冷）The waterkept rising,as ifitwouldengulfme.水不断上涨，仿佛要把我淹没。（洪水）2.危险描述The bear s

3、eemed muchfiercerthis timeandviolentlypushedthe fencelike mad.这只熊这次看上去更加凶猛，疯狂地使劲推栅栏。（人熊大战）A thickburningsmellfilled the air.空气中弥漫着浓浓的烧焦味。（火灾：危险描述）Both of themwerecoughingand their eyeswerestingingfromthe smoke, sheclung tohim,terrifiedby theleapingflames.他们两个都在咳嗽，烟熏得他们眼睛疼，她紧紧抓住他，被熊熊的火焰吓坏了。（火灾：危险描述）H

4、equicklysoaked hisclothes, for theapproachingsmokecouldchokethem.他迅速把衣服浸湿，因为这即将到来的烟雾可能会使他们窒息.（火灾：自救）Suddenly, hewasstuck inthe mud and couldnt getout.Hestruggledhardbuthewas stilltrapped. Hescreamedfor help, butall in vain.突然，他陷到淤泥里出不来了。他拼命挣扎，但还是被困住了。他大声呼救，但都是徒劳。（落水）Hewas sitting on the ground, bloo

5、drunning downhis face.(独立主格）他坐在地上，血顺着脸流下来。（受伤）It wasgettingdark/night wasapproaching，wewere stuckinthe middle of nowhere.夜幕降临，我们被困在一个荒无人烟的地方。（迷路）Aftera series offruitlessattemptsto find a way out, we felthungry andtired.经过一系列寻找出路的徒劳尝试后，我们感到又累又饿。The wallcavingin, anddeep cracksopeningupin the streets

6、,huge buidlingscollapsedsendingclouds ofdust into theair. （动作三连）墙塌了下来，街道上出现了深深的裂缝，大楼倒塌，空气中扬起一片尘土。（地震）3.情感描写:害怕无助/紧张焦虑/筋疲力尽Iwas seized/ overcome bya strong sense ofhorror. Itrembledall over andmy palmsweresweating.我害怕极了，浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。（恐惧）Hepanicked, covered his eyes with his hands and screamed loudlyin

7、 fright/fear/ terror.他惊慌失措，用手蒙住眼睛，吓得双手颤抖。（恐惧）My brainwas blank,I just want to leave this horrible place.我大脑一片空白，只想离开这个恐怖的地方。（恐惧）A flood oftensionoverwhelmed/ swallowed/ flooded over/welled up inme,she could feel her heartracing/pounding/beatingwildly.她紧张极了，觉得心跳加速。（紧张焦虑）Itrembledat the thought ofhavi

8、ngto make a speech.一想到要发表演讲，我就发抖。（紧张焦虑）Exhausted and hungryaswe were,we didnt stop.Gritting our teeth, we keptswimming.尽管我们又累又饿，我们没有停下来，咬紧牙关继续游。（筋疲力尽）二.出现转机1.呼叫求助Theywaved the flagandscreamed for help.他们挥舞旗帜，大声呼救。Hesaw an planeflying overhead. Butwith no flashlights, he wasinvisiblein thevast ocean.

9、他看见一架飞机从头顶飞过。但是没有手电筒，在浩瀚的海洋中是看不到他的。2.想到办法Suddenly, itoccurred to us thatwe could keep to the track to guide us back.突然想到我们可以沿着这条路回去。At this criticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpieces ofgarlicbread andthrew themoverthe fence.It worked.在这个关键时刻，Elli抓起几片蒜蓉面包，扔过栅栏。这个方法起了作用。3.出现转机Insheer desperation,I finall

10、ycaught sight ofsome boatswith lifeguards on themheadingtowardsusin the distance.在极度的绝望中，我终于看到远处有几艘载有救生员的船朝我们驶来。After what seemed a centuty, a light spotappearedin the distance! We wavedour hands andyelledoutfor help.过了很长时间，远处出现了一个光点，我们挥着手，大声呼救。When we wereat a losswhat to do next,there wereshoutsri

11、singfrom thedistance.当我们不知道下一步该怎么办时，远处传来喊叫声。To her great joy,the helicopterdidntmiss usthis time anditlandednear thebig rockslowly.令她十分欣喜的是，直升机这次没有错过我们，它缓缓地降落在大石头附近。Looking up quickly, wefoundtheseclear marks easily.It waswith the help ofthese marksthatwe quicklyfound theexit.我们迅速抬头看，很容易找到这些清晰的标记，正是

12、在这些标记的帮助下，我们很快找到了出口。三.救援脱险1.雪山脱险尽管我们筋疲力尽，但是我们没有停下来，我们咬紧牙关继续挖沟槽。Exhaustedaswewere, we didnt stop.Grittingourteeth, we kept digging the trench.我们一点一点的把雪挖出来，在经历了似乎一个世纪之后（夸张手法），我们终于成功了。Inchbyinch,we dug thesnow out.Afterwhatseemedacentury, we made it.2.冰上救援他把树枝推向我。我立刻抓住它，最终被哈利从冰冷的水中拖了出来。真是死里逃生。Hepushedt

13、he branch toward me. Igrabbedimmediately andwasdragged out ofthe icy water byHarry.Whata narrow escape!3.洞穴救援No soonerhad we arrived where the childwas trappedthantheman started toscan the surroundings.Then heinched towardthe hole andstretched out to seizethe childs hands,pulling him outwithoutreser

14、ve.(动作链）我们一到孩子被困的地方，那个男人就开始观察周国的环境，然后慢慢向洞口走去，仲手抓住孩子的手，把他完全拉了出来。Slowly and cautiously, moving forward,weheld our hands tightlyin order not to be seperated.慢慢且小心翼翼地往前走，我们紧紧地握着手，不让彼此分开。4.情感描写: 宽慰&感谢令我欣喜的是，在大家的帮助下，我们成功挖好了沟槽，马儿被带到山下。Tomydelight,we managed to dig out the trench and took these horses down

15、the mountainwiththehelpofothers.我如释重负的松了口气，伸出双臂紧紧地保住了他。Ibreathedasighofrelief,throwingmyarmsaroundhim andhugged him tightly.(动作双连）我如释重负的笑了笑，心里涌起一阵感恩。Smilinginrelief,I felta rush ofgratitude.“如果没有得到大家的帮助，我的马儿已经死了。”我感激地对大家说。“是你们来帮助我们，救了我们一命。”IfIhadnt beengiven the first aid,I would havebeen dead.” I s

16、aid to everyonegratefully.”it isyouwhocametomyaidand saved my life.(if I hadnt done sth, I would.虚拟语气）四.感悟升华天气虽然很冷，但是我的心里却感受到前所未有的温暖。Coldastheweatherwas（as表示尽管，形容词提前倒装）,great warmth filled myheartlikeneverbefore.直到那时，我才意识到团结可以战胜任何困难。Onlythendid（倒装）Irealizethatitwasunitythat（强调句）canconquerwhateverdif

17、ficultyyoumeet./ came in the way.正是这种独特的经历，让我明白，无论我们面临什么困难，主要团结一致，就能战胜它。It isthisunique experiencethat(it is.that强调句）made meunderstand whatever difficultiesweare faced with,as long as wework together/ stay united, we can conquer it.我永远忘不了那种帮助需要帮助的人的好感觉。I would never forget the good feeling ofhelping someonein need.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。It occurred to me thathelping others was pricelessand everyoneshould be a lifeguard.学科网（北京）股份有限公司