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1、书 面 表 达 专 练图表作文图表作文假如你叫李华，受某报社的委托，对你校高中一假如你叫李华，受某报社的委托，对你校高中一二三年级的近视情况作个调查，每个年级抽一个二三年级的近视情况作个调查，每个年级抽一个班。请根据下面的抽样调查信息写一篇短文，介班。请根据下面的抽样调查信息写一篇短文，介绍相关数据并分析其原因。绍相关数据并分析其原因。注意：注意：1.开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数;2.词数词数 120-150。思路构建思路构建 本篇书面表达的写作素材是一个曲线图，很明显体裁为本篇书面表达的写作素材是一个曲线图，很明显体裁为说明文说明文，时态用，时态用一般现在时一般现在时。本

2、篇书面表达的写作要点很清。本篇书面表达的写作要点很清楚：楚：1.介绍相关数据。介绍相关数据。高一学生的抽样近视学生是高一学生的抽样近视学生是15人，占人，占全班人数的全班人数的25%；高二是；高二是30人，占全班人数的人，占全班人数的50%；高三；高三是是60人，约占人，约占70%。2.分析原因。此时需要中学生根据结分析原因。此时需要中学生根据结合学习和生活实际进行适当的拓展，可以考虑下面的要点：合学习和生活实际进行适当的拓展，可以考虑下面的要点：1）学习任务繁重；）学习任务繁重；2）学生很少参加体育锻炼；）学生很少参加体育锻炼；3.提出自己提出自己的看法，就是我们应该如何改变这种局面。的看法

3、，就是我们应该如何改变这种局面。从前面的分析看，本文可以采用三段式作文的写作模式，从前面的分析看，本文可以采用三段式作文的写作模式，第一段介绍相关数据。在讲述了这些数据之后，第二段介绍第一段介绍相关数据。在讲述了这些数据之后，第二段介绍原因。第三段，也是最后一段，再来探讨如何改善这种局面。原因。第三段，也是最后一段，再来探讨如何改善这种局面。从前面的提示看，写作中要注意使用各种语法，如可以从前面的提示看，写作中要注意使用各种语法，如可以使用虚拟语气，被动语态等，让书面表达使你使用虚拟语气，被动语态等，让书面表达使你“英雄有用武英雄有用武之地之地”。【写作范例】Recently，a sample

4、 survey has been carried out in one class of each grade in our school about how serious the problem of short sight is in senior high students.The results are more than worrying.As can be seen from the graph,about 25%of the students in Senior 1 are suffering from short sight,while the number has clim

5、bed to 50%for Senior 2 students,with Senior 3 students at about 70%.Several reasons may account for the worsening situation.The main reason is that students,especially those in Senior 3,are faced with too much pressure,having no time for exercise.Besides,many of the students who are to blame dont at

6、tach great importance to how to protect their eyes.As to how to get this situation improved before it gets worse,there are many measures that can be taken.Most important of all,we must be fully aware of the importance of protecting our eyes and therefore have the correct way to use our eyes.Secondly

7、,we must spare some time every day to engage ourselves in exercise.If proper measures are taken,the situation will definitely get improved.【图表作文模板一】As is shown/illustrated by the figures/percentages in the table/pie chart,has been on rise/decrease significantly/dramatically from in to in .From the s

8、harp rise/decline in thechart,it goes without saying that .There are at least two good reasons accounting for .On one hand,.On the other hand,is due to the fact that .In addition,is responsible for .Maybe there are some other reasons to show .But it is generally believed that the above mentioned rea

9、sons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that .I am sure that my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.【图表作文模板二】The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题.The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点.This means that as （进一步说明).We can see from the statistics

10、 given that 图表细节一。细节一中变化。The figures also tell us that 图表细节二.In the column,we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).Judging from these figures,we can draw the conclusion that (结论).The reason for this,as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因)./It is high time that (发出倡议).书 面 表 达 专 练图画作文图画作文 最近，你和父母回到家乡。你看到

11、了家乡新建的一所学校，发现它与影集中父亲的母校的照片有很大差别。请你根据下面一组图画，描述这两所学校的不同情况，并谈谈你的想法。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以增加适当细节，以使行文连贯。【思路构建】【思路构建】通过仔细审读题目和写作要通过仔细审读题目和写作要求，可以确定要完成的写作任务求，可以确定要完成的写作任务是根据图画的内容对比两所是根据图画的内容对比两所学校的不同之处，并简要抒学校的不同之处，并简要抒发自己的感想。文章属于发自己的感想。文章属于说说明文。明文。由此，可确定全文应由此，可确定全文应一般现在时为主一般现在时为主、一般过去一般过去时为辅的时态进行写作时为辅的时态进行写作。由

12、。由于要借助图画，对比昔日父于要借助图画，对比昔日父亲的母校与今日家乡新学校亲的母校与今日家乡新学校不同情况，考生应用第三人不同情况，考生应用第三人称来组织语言。称来组织语言。昔日父亲的学校昔日父亲的学校家家 乡乡 的的 新新 学学 校校 从结构看，文章应分为三个段落：第一段总体概括图画内容，为下一段详细对比两所学校作铺垫；第二段是文章的主体部分，主要描述两所学校的不同之处；第三段简要地抒发自己的感想。【写作范例】The two pictures show how greatly my fathers school has changed in the past twenty years.In

13、 the past,my father s school was a big yard with a row of old houses.There was a flag pole standing alone in the yard.Several trees were planted around the houses.There was little sports equipment in it.The new school in my fathers hometown consists of a tall building and a large playground.All kind

14、s of sports facilities can be seen on the playground.With trees and flowers in the school yard,it looks like a big garden.It is clear that the living conditions in ourcountry have changed greatly and so haschildrens learning environment.写作万能模板写作万能模板1.开头：开头：Look at this picture./The picture shows tha

15、t /From this picture,we can see/As is shown in the picture./As is seen in the picture2.衔接句：衔接句：As we all know,/As is known to all,/It is well known that/In my opinion,/As far as I am concerned,/This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.3.结尾句结尾句：In conclusion/In brief/On the whole/In short/

16、In a word/generally speaking/As has been stated书 面 表 达 专 练书书 信信调研1.假如你是李华，你的一位英国笔友Robert暑假将到你所在地上海游览参观。请根据 以下要点，些一封回信告诉他具体的安排1.住在你家;2.参加夏令营;3.参观上海世博会展馆;4.游览上海的名胜。注意：1.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，语句通顺；2.词数100-200.书信的开头已给出，不计入总次数。Dear Robert,Im glad to hear that you are coming to shanghai during the summer vacation

17、.思路构建：本文是封回信，开头已给出，学生应多关注正文，结束语，和落款。本题材决定了行文应以第1人称，用一般将来时1.第1段开门见山，开篇就说明此信是告诉Robert暑假到上海游览期间的安排。2.第2段详细介绍安排的具体内容，即提纲中的4项内容。3.第3段结尾段，询问对方对此安排的意见并表达真诚的祝福和热情，体现文明礼貌素养。Dear Robert,Im glad to hear that youre coming to shanghai during the summer vacation.Here is what I havearranged for you.First of all,Id

18、 like to share my room with you.Our home is located in the centre of the city,so transport is very convenient.In addition,were to attend a seven-day summer camp,where you can learn more about Chinese culture.As you know,the 2010 world expo will be held in shanghai.There is no doubt that we will visi

19、t the modern and attractive museums,more importantly,Ill show you around the tourist attractions in Shanghai.If you have any questions,please let me know.Ill try to make your stay here a pleasant experience.Best wishes.Yours truly,Li Hua 书面表达：阅读下面一则广告，按要求完书面表达：阅读下面一则广告，按要求完成写作成写作 任务。任务。EIL Internati

20、onal English Camp Volunteer Wanted EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding “learn to live together by living together“.Requirements:Over 16;a good knowledge of English;working well with children between 712.Activities:Language study;outdoor recreati

21、on and travel Campers:Students from different countries.Camp site:Mount Wuyi,Fujian Time:July 26August 9 Application deadline:July 15,2010 If interested,please e-mail to infoaeiluk.org 写作内容：假设李光，这则广告引起了你写作内容：假设李光，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要点如下：写一封自荐信。要点如下：对夏令营主题的理解；对夏令营主题的理解；根据招聘要求自我介绍；根据招聘要求自我

22、介绍；参加夏令营的目的。参加夏令营的目的。注意：注意：1 信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；总词数；2词数词数120 左右。左右。Dear Sir,I am LiHua from Fujian.Dear Sir,I am Li Guang from Fujian.When I was reading the advertisement,the aim of this activity impressed me greatly.I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together.It

23、 is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together.Therefore,I recommend myself to you without hesitation.As a boy of 18,I am outgoing,good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7-12.I think it is a kind of win-win activity.For one

24、thing,I can help take care of children.For another thing,I can improve my English,make more friends,and enrich my life during the summer vacation.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Guang 发发 言言 稿稿 假设你是李华，将到英国伦敦参加“International English Learning Camp”。参加的学生必须在会上交流自己的英语学习体会。请你根据

25、以下提示写一篇英语发言稿。1.学习方法:多记有用句型，多阅读英文报刊；2.学习收获:了解异国文化，能与外国人直接交 流；3.学习困难：经常那个遗忘所学词汇。思路构建：发言稿的特定形式决定了其语言口语性强，因此应少用复杂句，多用简单句，同时发言稿必须具有感染力，因此还可以使用祈使句，感叹句，强调句，省略句等。如：“Now let s warmly welcome Prof.Smith to give us a speech/Wish you a pleasant trip home./Good luck to you.”等。为了引起对方注意，发言稿必须使用呼语和结束语。发言稿第一段侧重介绍事情的

26、发生，发展和结局。就本文来说，应侧重介绍自己的学习方法和学习收获。第二段应紧扣主题标识欢迎，欢送，号召，建议个人看法等，就本文还说应表达自己的学习困难，希望得到其他英语学习者的帮助和支持。结合“在会上交流自己的英语学习体会”可确定，本文应用第一人称。由于是介绍客观情况，故应用一般现在时。范文Good morning,everyone!In todays world,being able to master a foreign language will be helpful in our life.Here Id like to share my learning method.First,I

27、 think it useful to learn some grammar and remember as many useful sentence patterns as I can.I believe the more we read,the better our English will be.So I spend much time reading English newspapers and magazines after class,which helps to improve my English.Besides,TV and programms are of great he

28、lp.Learning English not only increases my awareness of foreign cultures but also helps me to communicate with English-speaking people and to make more new friends.However,sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have just learned.Could you give me some practical advice?Thank you

29、!正反论点式议论文学生考入大学后，是否要立即为其配备笔记本电脑，对此，有人赞同，有人反对。请你根据下列内容，写一篇英语短文，并发表自己的看法。支持者：1.是对子女奋发努力取得好成绩的肯定和奖励；2.方便今后的学习，可随时随地上网查资料。反对者：1.势必会给有些家庭增加经济负担；2.大学里有足够的计算机供学生使用。注意:1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2.词数120左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Is it necessary for freshmen to have a Is it necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to

30、 university?laptop when they go to university?写作思路这类题型的基本写作模式是四段式：第一段引出一个讨论的主题学生考入大学后，是否要立即配备笔记本电脑；第二段列举第一种观点“有人支持为大学新生配备笔记本电脑”；第三段论述另一对立观点“有人反对为大学新生配备笔记本电脑”；第四段按照题目要求，表明自己的观点，是赞成还是反对。这样，整篇文章的结构一目了然，容易让阅卷老师产生好感，进而赢得高分。Is it necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university?Different

31、 people have different ideas.Most people are in favor of it.First of all,freshmen deserve a laptop as an award for their great efforts and achievements.In addition,having a laptop in hand will bring more convenience to their studies and they can have easier access to the Internet,which will in turn

32、benefit them.However,some people hold opposite opinions.Their reasons are as follows.First,it will add the financial burden to some families.Besides,many universities are equipped with adequate computers for use.Personally speaking,it is unnecessary to buy a laptop for freshmen.They may be addicted

33、to computer games,which will have bad effects on their studies.书面表达书面表达 最近，你们班上将组织一场以最近，你们班上将组织一场以“To be self-confident”为题的主题班会。你是为题的主题班会。你是英语科代表，请根据以下内容准备英语科代表，请根据以下内容准备 一篇不少于一篇不少于120词的文章作为发言稿。开词的文章作为发言稿。开头已写好（不计入总词数）。头已写好（不计入总词数）。提示提示:1 简述自信的重要性。简述自信的重要性。2 假设你以前缺乏信心假设你以前缺乏信心 (1)谁给了你鼓励？（谁给了你鼓励？（2）什

34、么事让你改变）什么事让你改变了一切？了一切？可适当加入自己的评论。可适当加入自己的评论。Girls and boys,Life is but a hard and bitter journey.Therefore,I would like to say,no matter what happens,be self-confident.When I was 13 years old,I suffered from a lack of confidence.I was so timid that I didnt dare to answer questions in class and was a

35、fraid to speak in public.Whats worse,I failed to say a single word in a speech contest in the town in the face of so large an audience.Later,something happened and changed my life.It was a speech contest held at our school.My mother persuaded me to participate it and said that she had great confiden

36、ce in me.I chose a topic most appropriate to me-Self-confident and Success.I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 50 times before a mirror.With my mothers love and encouragement,I won the first prize in the contest.Since then,I feel strongly that self-confidence is the

37、first step towards success.So,dear friends,be self-confident and have a brighter future.Thank you.假如你是例华，针对社会上的“二手短信”拜年的问题，给报社写一封信，谈谈你对这个问题的看法要点提示：要点提示：很多很多“二手短信二手短信”很精彩，既把好东很精彩，既把好东西与人共享，又能传递自己的祝福，一举西与人共享，又能传递自己的祝福，一举两得；两得；短信虽然是短信虽然是“二手二手”，但祝福却不是，但祝福却不是“二手二手”，它一样真诚；，它一样真诚；相信别人的真诚，有时比对别人真诚相信别人的真诚，有时

38、比对别人真诚更为重要更为重要解题指导：本文说明的是有关情感方面的，文章的时态应为一般现在时写作时，先说明问题，然后结合所给的提示逐条进行分析，最后对所阐述的观点进行总结Dear editor:Many people are greeting others with the second-hand instant message,especially when people celebrate New Year.Some people think it is not sincere for people to send second-hand instant messages to greet

39、people in New Year.But I disagree.In my opinion,the words of many second-hand instant messages are beautiful,and it is good to share them with others and meantime send our greetings.Besides,although the messages are second-hand,the greetings are not second-hand,which have the same sincere meanings.T

40、herefore,sometimes,it is more important to believe the sincerity of others than to treat others sincerely.In society,everyone should treat others with sincereness,that is,to treat others honestly and genuinely.If so,our society will become a more beautiful one.Sincere yours Li Hua 怎样度周末 自从实施新课改以来，有些

41、同学在周末上网或看电视。很多父母对这种情况表示担忧。写一篇短文谈谈我们该怎样度周末。要点；1 周末的时间安排；2 这样安排的好处。要求；1 字数120左右；2 可适当增加细节使行文连贯。Since the education reformPolicy was adopted,some studentsdont know how to spend theirweekends.They are alwayssleeping late,surfing the internetor watching TV as they like.Whatthey do has caused their parent

42、sto be worried.In my opinion,weekend is a good time for us to have a rest.But as students,we should set aside some time to review what we have learned in school.I would like to arrange time like this.In the morning,we should do our homework.In theafternoon.we should have sports orgo shopping With ou

43、r parents.In the evening,we watch TV or surf the internet.Only In this way can we laya solid foundation for ourfuture development and enjoyourselves.作文模板作文模板1地理介绍类说明文常见句型写作模板地理介绍类说明文常见句型写作模板:2 is located in,covering an area of,It has a population ofIt grows,and is rich in.3 There are a large number

44、of4scenic spots and historical sites5 In a word,is a fascinating6place with fascinating people.7Welcome to请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文刊登在某网站，介绍三清山国家公园的基本情况。1 位于江西省东北部，是国家级风景名胜区，总面积达756余平方公里。2 最高峰海拔高度(the highest mountain peak)1187米，游览区包括七个景区。3 三清山以峰险(perilous peaks)、石奇、水秀等自然景观闻名。4 景区森林覆盖面积达80%以上，交通便利，居住方便，每年吸引大

45、量国内外游客。提纲式作文说明原因行模板之一；Nowadays,there are more and moreinbig cities.It is estimated that Why are There so many?Maybe the reasoncan be listed as follows.The first one is thatBesides,TheThird reason isTo sum up,the main cause of is due to It is time to do sth about it.For one thing,For another.All thes

46、e measureswill certainly reduce the number of 留言条留言条 假如你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括:1 外出购物 2 替房东还书 3 Tracy 来电话留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消；2)此事已告知Susan.3)尽快回电。注意:1 词数100左右；2 可以适当增加细节，可以使行文连贯。Mrs Wilson,I am going out shopping,and wontbe back until 5:00pm

47、.I have taken withme the two books you asked me toreturned to the City Library.At about 1oclock this afternoon,Tracy called,saying that she couldnt meet you atBolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has some something Important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that ,but said that you could set other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are at home.She has already told Susan about this change.